Drinking & Driving Poster

[Slicks]

Just a little thing I did as an assignment in class at school.
Feedback?

[Apparently every image hosting site I can find hates me for the original file size (3.15 megs), so here's a smaller version. The original was 3150x4950 pixels].

 

[GilesGuthrie]

I like the concept very much. However, the varying height of the bars takes away from the symmetry that the rest of the poster has and shows. I would lie to see it with each of the bars the same height.

 

[BMWteamPTG]

i like...gets the point across

 

[Slicks]

I like the concept very much. However, the varying height of the bars takes away from the symmetry that the rest of the poster has and shows. I would lie to see it with each of the bars the same height.

Good point, Giles. That didn't even cross my mind, as I was concerned with centering everything.
A little update - In the next couple weeks, there will be a competition at my school for this poster and a couple dozen others, with 1st place getting $300, 2nd place getting $200, and 3rd getting $100. Everyone in my class did them, but my hopes are high that I'll win enough to get myself a decent digital camera.

 

[Jondot]

I like the concept too, but i'd change the font. Also, i'd make the final font different to that used in the rest of it - it needs to stand out more

 

[Foamy]

it's cool but i from australia the steering wheel is on the right