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Hey guys! This is my first fan-fiction story. I hope you guys will like it. Feel free to correct any grammatical errors.

KANSEI-INTRO​

Shiro: FD, ever since I had you, you’ve never failed to disappoint me. Let’s hope that both of us can accomplish anything they throw at us.

Daisuke suddenly comes out from nowhere and puts his hands on the hood.

Daisuke: SHIRO!!!
Shiro: Holy **** Daisuke! What are you doing here!?
Daisuke: I believe the question should be what are YOU doing talking to cars?
Shiro: Huh?
Daisuke: Don’t dodge the question!
Shiro: Whatever man! If you haven’t showed up from under there, I probably would have run you over by now.
Daisuke: At least you would have brought me to a hospital, right?
Shiro: Nah, I’m broke. I don’t have the money to pay for you.
Daisuke: You're sick!
Shiro: Just get it!

Daisuke gets in the FD

Daisuke: Where did you get this car anyway?
Shiro: Unlike you, you lazy ****, I have a job.
Daisuke: You never answer my questions seriously.
Shiro: You’re starting to act like my ex.

Shiro starts up the engine and drives...


Character Biographies
Chapter 1

Shiro Watanabe


Age: 23
Car: Mazda RX-7 Spirit R type A
Likes: Racing, his RX-7, someone who can give him a challenge
Dislikes: Being understimated, slow cars
Related to: Daisuke Watanabe

Daisuke Watanabe



Age: 18
Car: What car?
Likes: Eating, bothering his brother
Dislikes: Not having a car
Related to: You already know who.

Masao Yamada



Age: 42
Car: Whatever he wants
Likes: Tuning, and talking to Shiro. (Shhh!)
Dislikes: Ricers.

i like the intro, and nice info in the bio

"Uhh... Time to wake up already?"
Daisuke: Yeah man.
Shiro: Alright, if you need me I'll be outside.


"Ahh, my beautiful FD. Did you sleep well last night?"

"By the way! What time is it?
Daisuke: Seven Forty. Why'd you ask?

“Oh ****! I’m gonna be late for work!”

Shiro gets back inside the apartment, and gets ready dressed.

He backs up the car out of driveway, while everyone in the neighbourhood admires the beautiful sound of the Rotary Engine.
After backing out of the place, he mashes the throttle like there’s no tomorrow!

Later...


“I never realized how smooth this car drives. Those guys at RKM sure did a good job!”

He then arrives at work, with his boss out in front of the shop.

“Oh man, he’s so gonna kill me.”

Boss: Shiro! How are you?
Shiro: Umm, fine. I guess? So, you’re not mad with me being late?
Boss: Nah, it’s no problem, really.
Shiro: Okay. Anyway, is there anything you need me to do, Masao?
Masao: Actually, yes. There’s an Evo at the back of the shop. I need you to give it a test drive. Oh, and stop calling me by my name. I’m your boss!

Shiro walks to the Evo IV

Shiro: What the?


Masao: It’s an Evo IV.
Shiro: I know that. What I meant was what’s up with the faded paint, and also, it looks like the previous owner rear ended someone. Anyway, where did you find this? It looks like it's in such horrible condition.


Masao: Ryo found it. He dropped it off last night.
Shiro: Alright, I’ll test it out.

Shiro gets in the Evo

“Whoa! This sounds great!”

Minutes later...


“I’m enjoying this car so far. Very responsive too.”


“Oh man! It’s getting dark out. Better get you back to the shop.”

Later, Shiro arrives at the shop.

Masao: So, how was it?
Shiro: Pretty good. Better than that piece of junk I drove last week.
Masao: Alright, park it back inside then I’ll see you again.
Shiro: Okay, see you boss.

Shiro drives off in the FD
“That Evo, it felt really great! I could hardly imagine how it would perform if it were tuned.”

As Shiro drives on, he sees something rather... Frightening.


“That 350Z, it looks familiar. Wait a minute... No! It can’t be! Not after that accident!”

I'm sorry if my chapters are terribly short. I'm trying my best, it's just that I couldn't think of anything else.

awsome chapter

The chapters are short, but I'd say that if you get enough of them together and did a motion comic type thing on youtube using your story and pictures, I know for a FACT that it would be liked by anyone who can be entertained by non-A-list features. I am sure that most of the initial D fans would immediately become fans. Keep it up. I had wanted to try something similar to what you're doing, but I couldn't ever think of a way to piece it all up.