Heavy Rotation Ch. 6 - Haruna Takedown

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Ch. 1 - The S2000 Driver
Ch. 2 - Progression
Ch. 3 - Cat and Mouse
Ch. 4 - Suzuka
Ch. 5 - Z
Ch. 6 - Haruna Takedown

Heavy Rotation

Chapter 1 - The S2000 Driver

Mt. Haruna

*High-revving noise*




Echoing through the mountain pass, a black Honda S2000 speeds through the night, running at full speed.











Blissfully drifting through the corner, the S2000 continues its journey, leaving a high-revving sound, echoing through the mountains.

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*sigh* Here I am again at school, or as everyone calls it, "Hell"

"Daisuke!"

Eh? Who could that be?

Daisuke: "Oh, it's you. What's up Keiichiro?"

Keiichiro: "We were dismissed about a half-hour ago! You fell asleep again!"

Daisuke: "How?- Ah, nevermind."

Keiichiro: "Let's go!"

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Keiichiro: "You seem a bit strange today. Something wrong?"

Is he saying something? I feel like my mind is out of place or something.

Keiichiro: "Hmm. It's a good thing today's the last day of school. I'll be off now. See ya!"

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Campus Parking Area

Daisuke: "Eh? Where is he?" <--- Idiot

Ah well, I continued to walk towards my S2000.

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Daisuke's Apartment Complex

*ring, ring*

Daisuke: "Hello?"

Keiichiro: "Daisuke! There's a track day at Tsukuba Circuit tomorrow! You interested?"

Daisuke: "Eh?... Sure. When does it start?"

Keiichiro: "In the morning. So you better get up early."

Daisuke: "Alright. I'm in."

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Tsukuba Circuit, Ibaraki Prefecture

So, this is Tsukuba Circuit? It sure is much different from what I've seen.

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Having just finished our qualifying laps, I'd say I did pretty good getting 7th place with a minor engine failure. Thankfully, the engine is being inspected right now... Keiichiro is pretty lucky getting 4th place in his 350Z.

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Keiichiro: "How you doing back there?"



Daisuke: "Haha! Don't get too cocky!"



And... GO!



Crap! I didn't realize how soft the suspension of this thing is!



Daisuke: "Haha!"



Now, on to the Impreza!



Whoa!... The rear end is lifting?

Perhaps I should have strengthened the suspension.



Keiichiro: "What the-! Daisuke!? That was fast!"

I'm out to get you!



Keiichiro: "NOOO!"



Yeah! Two in one corner!



Keiichiro: "I won't let you get away that easily!"



Keiichiro: "Haha!"



Whoa! Is that even allowed?



Alright, S2000! Let's go!



All that's left are two more cars!



Daisuke: "Gotcha!"

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Unfortunately, I was not able to catch the rabbit. I was stuck in second for the whole race, while Keiichiro finished in third, right behind me by a few seconds. Still, it was quite a day!

END OF CHAPTER

CHARACTERS INTRODUCED:

-Daisuke Onoda
-Keiichiro Watanabe
 
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Chapter 2 - Progression

Ughh... Wait! Where am I?!

"You're in the hospital."

Daisuke: "Wait... Miyuki-chan!? I'm so glad to see you! Why am I here?"

Miyuki: "You were in an accident. I happened to be walking by when it happened."

Daisuke: "Oh... Thanks for helping me."

She suddenly looks away from me. Was it something I did?

Oh well, she's probably not as cheerful as she was before.


"Daisuke!"

Someone's calling me?

*door opens*

Daisuke: "Keiichiro!"

Keiichiro: "Yo! You alri-... I'll step outside for a bit."

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I'm finally good to go. No broken bones, only minor bruises... I'm pretty worried about my S2000 though...

Miyuki: "I called a tow truck. The car's in repair now."

Daisuke: "That's really kind of you... Thanks."

Miyuki: "I'll be going now. Bye."

Keiichiro: "Yeesh! How unfriendly. I've known her since we were little! She's usually not like that. What gives?"

I simply shrugged my shoulders and headed my way...

Keiichiro: "Where you going?"

Daisuke: "Home."

Keiichiro: "You don't have a car, remember?"

Right in the head! Did the accident really make me that forgetful?

Daisuke: "Looks like I'm going with you then."

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So we both got into the 350Z and headed for the C1 Expressway.

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Miyuki's Household

Miyuki: *sigh* "Why hasn't he realized it?"

Upon lying in her bed, she takes out an old photo album. Scanning the pictures one by one, she finds one with Daisuke and her in it.

Miyuki: "..."

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Daisuke: "Say, how did you know I was in the hospital?"



Keiichiro: "Miyuki-chan called."



Daisuke: "I don't know what was up with her attitude earlier... She's usually not like that..."



Keiichiro: "You were close friends back then... but that was back then. How long have you not seen each other?"



Daisuke: "It's been a long time, actually... and I think I remember now!... It was my fault!"

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Three years ago

Miyuki: "Daisuke-kun!"

Daisuke: "Hmm?"

Miyuki: "After class, do you want to eat together?"

Daisuke: "Sure. How are your lessons going, by the way?"

Miyuki: "Confusing... but I'll get it someday."

Daisuke: "I don't mind tutoring. I'll see you then!"

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Miyuki: "Where is he? It's been an hour already."

All the customers have gone. All except Miyuki. A waitress then approaches her.

Waitress: "Excuse me, ma'am, but are you waiting for someone?"

Miyuki: "No... Nevermind."

Miyuki gets up from her table and heads out. There, she sees Daisuke walking alongside a girl, with his arms around her.

Daisuke: "Miyuki-chan?"

Miyuki looks up at Daisuke and runs away crying.

Miyuki: "Daisuke-kun..."

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Keiichiro: "We're here."

Daisuke: "Thanks."

Keiichiro: "So, when do you plan on showing back up?"

Daisuke: "When the S2000 is back."

Keiichiro: "Also, make sure you apologize to her."

Daisuke: "I will..."

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END OF CHAPTER

CHARACTERS INTRODUCED:

-Miyuki Takeuchi
 
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Good start, though not much seems to have unfolded. If you scroll down quick, it doesn't seem like there's much actual text. I know it's early in the story, but more narration or storytelling would go down a treat. Keep it up.
 
You're getting too excited. :lol:

But anyways, in response to that, I have already written at least 10 chapters.

I'm certain that the action starts in the next chapter, which won't be posted yet, since I'm quite busy.

Lastly, I guess having short text is just my writing style. :indiff:
 
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Chapter 3 - Cat and Mouse

Daisuke's Apartment Complex

I was on the phone, talking with Keiichiro.

Keiichiro: "Looks like there’s an S2000 that's tearing up Haruna, huh?"

Daisuke: "Hehe."

Keiichiro: "Well, if it's as good as they say it is... I challenge you to a duel!"

Daisuke: "I've already beaten you at Tsukuba."

Keiichiro: "The touge is different compared to the track. Anything can happen! Anyways, if later afternoon is good, then let's go!"

Daisuke: "Okay then, I'll see you there."

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I made my way to Mount Haruna and decided to get a meal, as Keiichiro hasn't arrived yet. What's taking him so long?

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Finally! A few minutes after, he finally arrives in his newly tuned 350Z. Let's get this show on the road!

I went outside to have a small chat before we commence.

Daisuke: "So, you ready?"

Keiichiro: "Of course! Usual Cat and Mouse rules?"

Daisuke: "Yeah. You lead first."

*Author's note: Cat and Mouse rules

Both cars start bumper to bumper. (One in front of the other.)

The lead car wins if the gap is spread.

The following car wins if the gap is decreased.

If the gap remains the same, the race is rerun, with the positions switched.

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Daisuke: "Alright, Keiichiro! Let's go!"

Keiichiro: "Roger!"



I'll admit. He's pretty good.



He manages to hold his pace very well.



Keiichiro: "His S2000 is in top-notch condition today, as it seems.



Keiichiro: "Let's see how long I can hold him up."



Whoa! He launched right away from that corner!



But that won't be the end of it... Hehe



Remember just what you've said. Anything can happen!



Though I still gotta hand it to you. You've earned all my respect.



Keiichiro: "Passing so soon?"



Keiichiro: "You're gonna have to try harder!"





Keiichiro: "Powerslide!"



Keiichiro: "He fell behind?"



He's going too fast. Time to make my move!





Keiichiro: "I'm running wide!"



Daisuke: "Yosshha!"



Keiichiro: "Damn, you're good!"







Keiichiro: "Can I keep up?"



"Hmm, falling back now, huh?"

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Keiichiro: "I really didn't think that would happen. Well, good run anyways."

Daisuke: "Heh, you too. Anyways, I'll be off. I have a busy day ahead of me. I'll be attending a race in Suzuka Prefecture.

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Suzuka Circuit, Mie Prefecture



Suzuka Circuit is a pretty tricky course. Which is why I've decided to go for some practice runs before the race.



The S2000 is in top condition, today!



Acceleration, check!



Handling, check!



But somehow...



I feel like I'm forgetting something...

What the- Am I hearing voices?!

"Make sure you apologize to her."




Daisuke: "Miyuki-chan!"



I'm sorry...

END OF CHAPTER
 
Chapter 4 - Suzuka



Alright, get ready S2000!



So far, so good.



Let's see if I can take him on the outside.



Heh, you are no match for the S2000's cornering prowess!



Get ready, Evo! The S-curves are approaching!









Alright! Just two more cars to go!



Late braking!



Yeah!



Now, time to take the lead!



I've got you in my sights, FD!



Almost!



Whoa! I immediately lost control when I saw his brake lights flash in an instant.



S***! I've lost my concentration! I'm understeering!



The tires are slipping!



Completely surrounded by blankness...



I can't think straight...





I can see cars coming my way... Could they see me in this thick cloud of smoke? Or...



Is this the end?

END OF CHAPTER
 
Chapter 5 - Z



Spinning for life, seeing that the oncoming cars are about to crash into me, I could no longer think...

Is this the end?...

NO! I need to speak with her!



I quickly switched into reverse and performed a J-turn maneuver.



Whoa! He dodged me!



I’m back! *pant* *pant*



Alright!



The second lap has started, and I’m back at the S-turns.



Okay, I can do this!





I can do this...





I’ve got you in my sights, FD... for real!



You won’t get away...



I won’t make the same mistake again.







Final lap! I’ve overtaken him before the first corner!



I’ve passed you, and I’ll make sure I can keep this lead!


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After the race, I’ve had a chance to speak with the other drivers and had nice chat. It seems they’ve praised me for my determination, or something. Honestly, I just did what I could.

I claimed my cash prize and trophy, and thought about what I’m doing next.


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With the recent events happening with Daisuke over, it’s time to take a look on what’s happening with Keiichiro.

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It’s been half a month since I’ve seen Daisuke. I need to at least congratulate him for his win at Suzuka.

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No way! Daisuke upgraded his car again! It now has a front lip and a GT Wing! I need to step up my game!



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I decided to cruise down the C1 expressway, and maybe get a meal while I’m at it.









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As I walk in, I immediately see Daisuke with Miyuki. Hmm, must be going well, I suppose.

The moment I received my food, I look back at them... They’re kissing?! Well, that escalated quickly!

I exit the restaurant, and get back in my car. It’s a good thing they didn’t see me! Haha!


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Back home, I’ve browsed some racing events I could possibly attend, and how lucky I was! I’ve found an event in Tsukuba!

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Well, here I am. Another Z, huh?



Dammit. I’m getting understeer. I’m buying a new suspension kit after this.





I passed him!



Oh, wait... He mis-shifted. Haha!





Time to take on these guys, next!



Outside pass!





Full speed!

Second lap.



Another Z?!



Late braking!





Third lap! So far, everything’s going well.





Just two more!



Now, time to catch first place!





I’m getting closer!



I just need a spot to pass.



Full throttle!



Final corner approaching! Can I out-brake him?



Yeah!



And he takes the win!


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An awesome day, it sure was! I’ve gained some money, got a job at the local tuning shop, and I’ve upgraded the suspension of my Z!

I wonder how Daisuke is doing... Probably with Miyuki-chan in a love hotel! Hahaha! I guess things are going pretty well, eh?


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Chapter 6 - Haruna Takedown

Daisuke: &#8220;They&#8217;re looking for me?&#8221;

Keiichiro: &#8220;Yeah! Hurry up!&#8221;

Daisuke: &#8220;Eh? Why me?- Ah, whatever! I&#8217;m on my way!&#8221;

I ended the call and proceeded to head to Mount Haruna&#8217;s peak.

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Daisuke: &#8220;So, why am I here again?&#8221;

Keiichiro: &#8220;You&#8217;ve gained some popularity around here lately. Anyways, the challenger will be here in a bit. You&#8217;ll win. No worries. Just drive like you&#8217;d usually do and you can&#8217;t lose. Also, do you have a plan?&#8221;

Daisuke: &#8220;No. Not really.&#8221;

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So, here I am, sitting in my car, lined up at the start, waiting for my first challenger. Who could it possibly be?



I&#8217;m hearing some engine noises far back there. Could it be him?




Keiichiro: &#8220;He&#8217;s here!&#8221;





Bystander: &#8220;A purple RX-8!&#8221;

I got out of my car and politely greeted my opponent.

Daisuke: &#8220;Onoda, Daisuke.&#8221;

Hitoshi: &#8220;Aizawa, Hitoshi. Good to meet you.&#8221;

Keiichiro: &#8220;I&#8217;ll start the countdown! Get ready!&#8221;

I got back in my car and waited for the signal.

Keiichiro: &#8220;Ready?&#8221;

I started revving my engine, and so did my opponent.



5!



4!



3!



2!



1!

I gripped the wheel as tightly as I could, ready for battle!

GO!



Bystander: &#8220;They&#8217;re off! The RX-8 is in the lead!&#8221;



Keiichiro: &#8220;Hmm... That was fairly unusual. The S2000 has the higher advantage in that aspect. I wonder...&#8221;



No bad...



You braked too early though.




Bystander #1: &#8220;They&#8217;re moving at such high speed!&#8221;



Bystander #2: &#8220;They&#8217;re gonna crash if they keep that up!&#8221;



I need to think of a plan...



My opponent is pretty skilled, especially for a first one. Unlike a video game, where your first battle is always the easiest, this is different.




Informant #1: &#8220;This is sector 1! The RX-8 is pulling away!&#8221;



Keiichiro: &#8220;Roger that. Sector 2, they&#8217;re coming your way!&#8221;

Informant #2: &#8220;Got it!&#8221;

Hitoshi: &#8220;I honestly thought you could do bet-&#8220;



Hitoshi: &#8220;Already behind me?! Looks like I should keep my mouth shut.&#8221;



Bystander: &#8220;They&#8217;re right next to each other!&#8221;



I think I&#8217;ve got it.



I should pressure him a bit more.




Informant #2: &#8220;This is sector 2! Both cars are bumper to bumper! I repeat! Both cars are bumper to bumper!&#8221;



Keiichiro: &#8220;Okay, thanks.&#8221;



Keiichiro: &#8220;What are you planning, Daisuke?&#8221;

CHARACTERS INTRODUCED:

-Hitoshi Aizawa

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