need some suggestions about my intro

[GTRufus]

well guys on my next video there is a intro. (a rolling wheel) I am not 100% sure if it has something missing. Could someone give me any suggestions/critics to make the next one better? I would be apprechiated thx

 

[01GTP]

I don't have a suggestion to improve it because I like it already.

Criticism would be that is really close to NFS Shift's intro wheel.

I still like it though, choreography and all. 👍

 

[G.T.Ace]

Its cool, looks like a loading screen from a game which fits perfectly.
Maybe it is a bit too long.