Poetry

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Hey, poetry is cool so post any you have here..

I did a few poems:

Inferno

An inferno is whipping back and forth,
The flames dance wildly in the wind,
Fire bursts into the sky,
The air is filled with lights.


Shadows

The shadows fill the night,
All the corners are covered,
Darkness settles in the city,
They creep through the world, silently.


Graffiti Soul

The colors are spread all over,
Words express their meanings,
Art, it is, all over the buildings,
It is not a hobby, but a soul.
 
Originally posted by Super-Supra
I hate poetry, that's what were studying in our English at the moment.
Well you suck then. . . .

Poetry is the shiz. . . I'll post up some of mine at a later point since it is not at my finger tips. . .
 
I've got a poem I've been writing in my head for years, about going goose hunting when I was younger. It's kind of the sequel to one I actually wrote on paper about finding an abandoned treehouse I had built in the woods when I was a kid. I've long since lost the original, but maybe I'll actually write down the goosehunting one and post it.

Just like anything else, some poetry's great, some sucks.
 
Good poetry doesn't need a title.

I gave up on poetry around the time I gave up on pot.
 
Originally posted by pupik
Good poetry doesn't need a title.

I gave up on the stuff arround the time I gave up pot.
you know I gave up pot recently and still am writing a ton. . . : )
 
Maybe I don't have enough problems. That's one thing I noticed...never wrote anything good since I met my wife.

It was pretty horible stuff, looking back on it now, but the chicks at the local coffeehouse loved it for some freaking reason.
 
Originally posted by pupik
Maybe I don't have enough problems. That's one thing I noticed...never wrote anything good since I met my wife.
I put down the pad when I met Kristen for a bit, but ever since what is going on, I have found myself at nights picking it up along with my guitar and just starting to write stuff. . . Funny, ever seen the movie "Rock Star"? I feel like Mark Hamill at the end of the movie. . . Playing the Verve Pipe song called 'Colorful'

It was pretty horible stuff, looking back on it now, but the chicks at the local coffeehouse loved it for some freaking reason.
Most people I have noticed in this happens a lot. I found in high school I got a lot of numbers just by sitting there and letting women read my writing. . . :lol:
 
Well, I just read through the copies of the poetry I have on the computer. I typed it in Notepad all those years ago.

They are really bad, and influenced more by the amount of sake I started to drink, not the pot.

I tried to read them, and they make no damn sense. Maybe they wil make sence in a few years more.
 
I think writings mean different things at different points in your life to tell the truth no matter what influence had driven one to write it. . .

ie. I wrote something when I broke up with my first love. . . probably once a year I read it and it means something different everytime. . . Kinda like the scene in Pulp Fiction when Samuel Jackson is telling his quitting story to the two diner robbers. . .
 
I don't know what this means, and I don't even know if it's poetry. Haha.

Perfection;
Change of direction, point of intersection;
Intraveneous injection, urinary tract infection;
Offering protection, garbage collection;
Socialist election, tax collection;
Rhythm section, sound reflection;
Natural selection, Caesarean section;
Imperfection
 
Most women are more interested in the expression than the quality of poetry. Poetry verifies an artistic aspect in a man, which is something many women connect with. Unless the poetry is demented, you could write nonsense about cats and only the poetry obsessed and very critical among women would give a man greif.
 
Here I wrote this a while ago and got me $500 in a scholarship.

Mini-Truckin’

A Mini-Trucker is in a class of all their own
They love to have their GMs, Fords, and Toyotas be shown
Their admiration for their trucks is always true
What most think is foolish they do

They lay their trucks low with spindles and bags
Only hoping that a picture can grace a mag
They just hope for that one day to be on the cover
To grace the pages with their Mini-Truckin’ brothers

Mini-truckers never want respect for the ride
Even though they hope someone is as they rock from side to side
All they need is a look on someone face
And they know their truck is not a disgrace

The truck that has stood the test of Mini-Truckin’ time
Is the faithful Chevy S-Dime
The S-Truck has always been the king
Its praises many trucker tend to sing

Mini-Truckin’ is and always will be here to stay
By no means disappear and go a stray
This is the truth be told this is not a lie
Mini-Truckin’ will not die
 
I have a couple milk crates filled with notebooks from the ages of 18 to about 27 or so. There's some good stuff and some crap. I doubt I'll be posting any anthing any time soon because I don't feel like climbing into the attic.

I did do a fair amount of writing after my son was born, and again more recently, while reflecting on his 1st birthday and our relationship.

I started off with straight poems, but that evolved into prose poetry, or straight prose interspersed with short poems to take one central thought and hold it out off the page. Very good prose is poetry. Read Rilke, Neitzsche (Kaufman translations), Burroughs, Kerouac, or Joyce for exquisite examples.
 
I'm a bit like Homer Simpson in my poetry tastes - it must rhyme or be funny or both. My favourite poem is probably The Raven by Edgar Allen Poe.
 
Classics

ROAD LESS TRAVELED

Two roads diverged in a yellow wood
And sorry I could not travel both
And be one traveler, long I stood
And looked down one as far as I could
To where it bent in the undergrowth

Then took the other as just as fair
And having perhaps the better claim
Because it was grassy and wanted wear
Though as for that, the passing there
Had worn them really about the same

And both that morning equally lay
In leaves no step had trodden black
Oh, I kept the first for another day!
Yet, knowing how way leads onto way
I doubted if I should ever come back

I shall be telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages and ages hence
Two roads diverged in a wood
And I took the one less traveled by
And that has made all the difference

Robert Frost

The Tiger
William Blake

Tiger, tiger, burning bright,
In the forest of the night,
What immortal hand or eye
Could frame thy fearful symmetry?

In what distant deeps or skies
Burnt the fire of thine eyes?
On what wings dare he aspire?
What the hand dare seize the fire?

And what shoulder, and what art,
Could twist the sinews of thy heart?
When thy heart began to beat,
What dread hand forged thy dread feet?

What the hammer? What the chain?
In what furnace was thy brain?
What the anvil? What dread grasp
Dared its deadly terrors clasp?

When the stars threw down their spears
And watered heaven with their tears,
Did He smile his work to see?
Did He who made the lamb make thee?

Tiger, tiger, burning bright,
In the forest of the night,
What immortal hand or eye
Dare frame thy fearful symmetry?
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Not a poem but heard I heard it in a movie adaptation of Henry V

SCENE I. France. Before Harfleur.

Alarum. Enter KING HENRY, EXETER, BEDFORD, GLOUCESTER, and Soldiers, with scaling-ladders
KING HENRY V
Once more unto the breach, dear friends, once more;
Or close the wall up with our English dead.
In peace there's nothing so becomes a man
As modest stillness and humility:
But when the blast of war blows in our ears,
Then imitate the action of the tiger;
Stiffen the sinews, summon up the blood,
Disguise fair nature with hard-favour'd rage;
Then lend the eye a terrible aspect;
Let pry through the portage of the head
Like the brass cannon; let the brow o'erwhelm it
As fearfully as doth a galled rock
O'erhang and jutty his confounded base,
Swill'd with the wild and wasteful ocean.
Now set the teeth and stretch the nostril wide,
Hold hard the breath and bend up every spirit
To his full height. On, on, you noblest English.
Whose blood is fet from fathers of war-proof!
Fathers that, like so many Alexanders,
Have in these parts from morn till even fought
And sheathed their swords for lack of argument:
Dishonour not your mothers; now attest
That those whom you call'd fathers did beget you.
Be copy now to men of grosser blood,
And teach them how to war. And you, good yeoman,
Whose limbs were made in England, show us here
The mettle of your pasture; let us swear
That you are worth your breeding; which I doubt not;
For there is none of you so mean and base,
That hath not noble lustre in your eyes.
I see you stand like greyhounds in the slips,
Straining upon the start. The game's afoot:
Follow your spirit, and upon this charge
Cry 'God for Harry, England, and Saint George!'

Exeunt. Alarum, and chambers go off
 
Suicide in the Trenches

I knew a simple soldier boy
Who grinned at life in empty joy,
Slept soundly through the lonesome dark,
And whistled early with the lark.

In winter trenches, cowed and glum
With crumps and lice and lack of rum,
He put a bullet through his brain.
No one spoke of him again.

You smug-faced crowds with kindling eye
Who cheer when soldier lads march by,
Sneak home and pray you'll never know
The hell where youth and laughter go

-Siegfried Sassoon


Everybody Sang

EVERYONE suddenly burst out singing;
And I was filled with such delight
As prisoned birds must find in freedom,
Winging wildly across the white
Orchards and dark-green fields; on—on—and out of sight.

Everyone’s voice was suddenly lifted;
And beauty came like the setting sun:
My heart was shaken with tears; and horror
Drifted away ... O, but Everyone
Was a bird; and the song was wordless; the singing will never be done.

-Siegfried Sassoon

The Death of the Ball Turret Gunner

From my mother's sleep I fell into the State,
And I hunched in its belly till my wet fur froze.
Six miles from earth, loosed from its dream of life,
I woke to black flak and the nightmare fighters.
When I died they washed me out of the turret with a hose

Randall Jarrell

Dulce Et Decorum Est

Bent double, like old beggars under sacks,
Knock-kneed, coughing like hags, we cursed through sludge,
Till on the haunting flares we turned our backs
And towards our distant rest began to trudge.
Men marched asleep. Many had lost their boots
But limped on, blood-shod. All went lame; all blind;
Drunk with fatigue; deaf even to the hoots
Of disappointed shells that dropped behind.

GAS! Gas! Quick, boys!-- An ecstasy of fumbling,
Fitting the clumsy helmets just in time;
But someone still was yelling out and stumbling
And floundering like a man in fire or lime.--
Dim, through the misty panes and thick green light
As under a green sea, I saw him drowning.

In all my dreams, before my helpless sight,
He plunges at me, guttering, choking, drowning.

If in some smothering dreams you too could pace
Behind the wagon that we flung him in,
And watch the white eyes writhing in his face,
His hanging face, like a devil's sick of sin;
If you could hear, at every jolt, the blood
Come gargling from the froth-corrupted lungs,
Obscene as cancer, bitter as the cud
Of vile, incurable sores on innocent tongues,--
My friend, you would not tell with such high zest
To children ardent for some desperate glory,
The old Lie: Dulce et decorum est
Pro patria mori.

- Wilfred Owen
 
Evening, by Rainer Maria Rilke... maybe my favorite poem.

Slowly the evening changes into the clothes
held for it by a row of ancient trees;
you look: and two worlds grow separate from you,
one ascending to heaven, another, that falls;

and leave you, belonging not wholly to either one,
not quite as dark as the house that remains silent,
not quite as certainly sworn to eternity
as that which becomes star each night and rises—

and leave you (unspeakably to disentangle) your life
with all its immensity and fear and great ripening,
so that, all but bounded, all but understood,
it is by turns stone in you and star.
 
Heres an old one for you all, from WWI. General Shute arrived in the camp on October the 17th
and he wasn't liked very much by anyone so one of the soldiers wrote this poem, theres some info here http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/British_63rd_(Royal_Naval)_Division

The General inspecting the trenches
Exclaimed with a horrified shout
'I refuse to command a division
Which leaves its excreta about.'

But nobody took any notice
No one was prepared to refute,
That the presence of **** was congenial
Compared to the presence of Shute.

And certain responsible critics
Made haste to reply to his words
Observing that his staff advisors
Consisted entirely of turds.

For **** may be shot at odd corners
And paper supplied there to suit,
But a **** would be shot without mourners
If someone shot that **** Shute.
 
Binds

Time and Tide, Cut and Dried, Tried and True, Feelings and you,
High and Low, give it a little go, Duck and cover, Tuck and roll,
Let emotions just go, In and out, out and about, Near and far, where we are, Stand to subsist and exist, Possibly be alive just to survive,

Take the Rope, then cope with hope, Hack it and back it, Tuck it and **** it, Then try your luck.
Have a direct object, Supervise the demise, Parole it and control it, though we scrutinize you will find a surprise, We were a little late to evaluate, Just investigate please don’t hate, Wealth is not the total accumulation of this population, Face the drought and don’t pout, Then the Almighty Purge and surge, We will all emerge.

All about you, kind of like taming the shrew, Should I just drink the brew? Over and under, during that little blunder, Love that little thunder. Smirk that smile, take a little while, smell the rose, make that pose. Coming out the things I said, Coming out many times I bleed, For you are, confusion that never stops, It is not about remaining on the top.
 
I made a couple really crappy "poems" for some reason a couple years ago.

pick up the pieces;
they're for your nieces

glue them together;
they're light as a peacock\'s feather

watch them tumble down;
like a prom queen's gown

pick them up and start over;
for you see, thw world\'s nearly over

over when this ceases to rhyme;
never will this happen
 
yeah, i hate poetry too. in fact i just wrote an essay on why prose is better than poetry. basically the points go like this.

-proper word selection is vital to expression
-poetry has other intentions than expressing yourself (getting things to rhyme, to have a good rhythm, etc)
-these intentions are enjoyable, but less so than genuine expression
-selecting words that satisfy these intentions hinders your ability to select the words that express yourself best

so prose wins!

yes, some people are good enough to get things to rhyme and etc AND express themselves, but they are few and far between so on average that makes prose the winnard.
 
Poetry does not have to rhyme, and the best poetry doesn't. Poems that rhyme sound very amateurish to me. And similar arguments can be made against prose; proper grammar can limit expression, too.

So, now that I've insulted everyone who posted their poem . . .
 
Yes, I'm very hurt by your comments. As you can see from my poems, I spent a great deal of time on them.

I think meter is more important than the rhyme scheme.

(You should underline the text in your signature and make it a different color. I assume you are trying to fake a link? if not, make like I never said this)
 
The Maze

This is so complicated
My life; a labyrinth
This maze has me frustrated
There are no guides, no hints.
Yet somehow I will make it through
The twisting corridors
And find my way toward unfaded
Final ending doors.

For this lab rat's fine'ly found
A supernat'ral guide
Who'll keep me safe and homeward-bound
And keep my pace in stride.
For on my journey through the maze
I do intend to win;
To beat the system, fair and square
And return home again.

©2003 Jpec07
 
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