Some Photography Pieces...

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Danny

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Are you kidding?
With me doing Photo and Visual Communications as a module of Advertising this year, I thought I'd post a few bits up here.

Any advice or improvements you could give me would be greatly appreciated!

SLRrhian.jpg


slrtree.jpg


slrtree2.jpg


SLRlamp.jpg


SLRhalls.jpg


SLRsky.jpg
 
Liking the 2nd, 4th and 6th one the most. The first is alright in terms of execution, but it just isn't my thing.

Good start :D.
 
Are you sure the 1st series were yours too, because your other pics are much more interesting.
The 1st set were in my opinion nothing more than snapshots. The lantern had potential but would have been better of in Portrait and more to the left. Smack in the midde is booooring. A lot better is the road, it leads your eye in to the picture. The posterising and crossprocessing is not really my thing but I like the makeup girl. The pic above that, what are you trying to convey, the fence?
Snow landscape suffers from not being horizontal. Sorry for the harsh sounding critique. It's to provoke your thoughts, not to disagree :)

AMG.
 
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