Climbing the Ladder Chapter 6: ATTESA Dorifto

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Nobody's commenting on this chapter. :grumpy:

In other words: This tread needs a bump.
 
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Nice, it reminds me of Aiko's race in Street Elite, Chapter 3.5. Great job! 👍

I expected you to comment on how fast Kei cars are on tight tracks.
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Chapter 3.5: A call to RKM​

*Phone Ringing*
"Hello?"
"Yes, is this RKM motorsports?"
"Indeed it is, Roj Speaking."
"Can I order a R34 Black Edition Suspension Kit for my R34 V-Spec II?"
"What color is it?"
"Midnight Purple II, I don't see why this is Relevant"
"Then no, you cannot. It's called the Black edition."
...
"Just Kidding, Would you like express shipping?"
"Yes please, I need them for a Trackday next week."
"Could I have your Address and credit card info please?"
"Sure Its....
"Thank you for callling RKM motorsports and have a nice day Mr. Ito."
"You too Roj."
 
nice as much as I love my R34 i love this fiction keep it coming

Thanks, I would Write Chapter 4 right now, but I'm tired. Expect it sometime during the weekday next week. I'm gone from the 13th to 15th for a FTX, so Chapter 5 might take a while. (I have it all planned out...roughly...in my head)

And I also should do Charater Bios, cuz everyone else is.
 
Holy 🤬 I've been writing Togei racers for so long. I need some sleep (last time I checked a 13 year old having 7 hours of sleep a day isn't healthy.
 
Chapter 4: V-Cam Just Kicked in Yo!

"Good Luck Hiroshi, I see some pretty fast cars out there."
"Then it's a good thing I bought that RKM suspension Kit"
Announcer: "Would the drivers for Race Set 5 please line up on the grid."
"Gotta Run Junichi, See you at the winner's circle"

1. 2000 TVR Cerbera Speed 12
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"It was very nice of Peter Wheeler let me to buy this car."

2. 1994 McLaren F1
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"This was once the world's fastest car, I'll school everybody around this track."

3. 2002 Pagani Zonda C12S 7.3
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"I heard a Regular C12S lost to that R34 at the back, hopefully I can beat him with my car's bigger engine."

4. Volkswagen V12 Nardo Concept
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"It might be a VW, but it's one hell of a Volkswagen!"

5. 2002 Ferrari Enzo
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"No way a car named after old man Ferrari himself can lose."

6. 2009 Mercedes-Benz SLR McLaren (19inch Wheel Option)
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"A XJ220 and a R34? I feel some Déjà vu. Hopefully this Jag owner is more respectful of my car."

7. 2009 Chevrolet Corvette ZR1 (C6)
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"This car better be worth the import fees I paid for it."

8. 2000 Tommy-Kiara ZZII
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"I see a R34, But I have the weight distribution advantage."

9. 2000 TVR Cebera Speed 12
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"Come on my Blackpool Rocket"

10. 2002 Cadillac CIEN Concept
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"Let's see what this V12 Northstar can do."

11. 2008 Dodge Viper SRT10 ACR
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"I'm Glad I bought one of these before they went out of production"

12. 2003 Audi Le Mans Quattro
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"It's that monster R34. I can't lose to the same car twice."

13. 2005 Ford GT (No Stripe)
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"Do I see another GT through that small back window?"

14. 2006 Ford GT
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"Hey Look! Another GT!"

15. 1992 Jaguar XJ220
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"Did I leave my golf clubs in the trunk?"


16. 2002 Nissan Skyline Skyline GT-R V-Spec II Nur (R34)
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"Oh 🤬 I left the EV-R in silent mode! No wonder It felt weird. Now to test my new iPod connectivity, lets see....slide to unlock...Play."
Jason Mraz: "no more, no more. It cannot wait..."
I agree, No more, next song


The Green Flag Dropped just as the First Cerbera gunned it's V12.

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"I should tell Nobuyuki about RKM"
"What the 🤬?!"
"WOAH!"

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"He Passed me already?"
"Must block the Skyline."

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Which isn't that hard when your car is the size of Texas.

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"BOOST!"

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Jag and Ford Driver: "🤬 🤬 🤬 🤬!!!"

Flashback Time!
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"What are you Doing you old Fart?!"
"Getting into Third."

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"Oh Come on! That's Cheap!"
"Damn You Datsun!"
"Is that supposed to be an Insult to the car that just passed you?" :grumpy:

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"I have almost 100 more Horsepower than you"
"And I Have my peak power from 3000RPM"

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"My Vette!"
I take a glimpse at the Corvette's hood
"Putting a checkered flag on it doesn't make it faster."

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"Where did you Come from?!"
"Behind you?"

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"V-Cam Just Kicked in Yo!"
"Ich bin nicht amüsiert."
I am not Amused.

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"I'm Going to get You."
"But Peter said this had almost 1000HP!"

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"Damn, this car turns on a dime."
"How could he be going in so fast and still be able to get the inside line?"
"Go ask the Guys at RKM motorsports."

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"Is mister Zonda scared already?"
I shouldn't be so arrogant
"🤬 You."

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People weren't expecting me to get in front of the Zonda so fast, so this was the First picture after I overtook him.
"Well. At least third still gets a pretty good prize."

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"I wonder if Roj will fine tune the suspension a little bit more for me."
"Are you Breaking Down?"
"Of course not. I'm just understeering because I have S3 Grade tires.
WHAT?! I'm running R1 Tires!

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"This will be Interesting"

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"Indeed it will, I wish you good luck"
"Let's try not to have contact then."

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"Stable as a house? Yes. Maybe it's a little too stable."

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"Ahh It's the last lap a solid win for Team McL- What the heck? he's right behind me
"Konichiwa"

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Once again the crowd underestimated me on the corner entry.
"NOOOOOO!! There goes a million yen."

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This extra money is going into the earthquake/tsunami aid."
"Well at least I lost to a man who will put his cash to a good cause."

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"Entering Victory Mode"

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"Wait... I JUST BEAT A FREAKIN MCLAREN F1!:dunce:"
Cue the laughter of the crowd and other racers.
Luckily, the laughter died down as I came to collect my 3 million yen cheque.

"Hiroshi? Why are you calling?"
"I won the race at Tsukuba."
"Who were you up against?"
"two Cerbera Speed 12s, a Zonda C12S with the bigger engine, a Viper ACR, and a McLaren F1, among other cars."
"Oh that's ni-WAIT! WHAT?! A MCLAREN F1?"
"The same thing happened to me when I realized I beat him."
"Well, congratulations."
"Thank you."

Oh yeah and SVX wins the name contest. You'll get your prize when PSN gets back online, but I need your PSN.

Last, but not least; I have to thank Roj at RKM motorsports for the R34 Tune, you can find all their tunes here
 
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Sorry about the photos, I'm aware of it and getting it fixed.

EDIT: Fixed, Fortunately it was just a couple pics.
 
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You're giving me second thoughts of not having an R34 in a fanfic, sir.

By the way, I still don't know which car should I give for that 240RS.
 
Oh yeah and SVX wins the name contest. You'll get your prize when PSN gets back online, but I need your PSN.

I guess you get to keep the GT-R, as I don't have a PS3. Glad to help you out. Fantastic chapter Zhu8.
 
Nothing can beat a well-tuned GT-R. :D
 
Stop using Photobucket. I can't see any photos except for a notice of that you exceeded your bandwidth.
 
Well, all I noticed is that the image is either moved or deleted, not a notice of exceeding bandwidth limits.
 
I always love a bit of supercar stomping. Best party trick the Skyline has I think. :D

Protip: Photobucket accounts are free, so if you exceed bandwidth, delete a few pics and make a fresh account. ;)

Oh and thanks for the shoutout(s). I like how many of our cars end up in fanfics. :P
 
I always love a bit of supercar stomping. Best party trick the Skyline has I think. :D

Protip: Photobucket accounts are free, so if you exceed bandwidth, delete a few pics and make a fresh account. ;)

Oh and thanks for the shoutout(s). I like how many of our cars end up in fanfics. :P

Thanks for the tip. I might give you another shoutout if you make some new tunes :sly:
 
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