FJ's Photo Galleria 12/20/12

ffjjbb · Dec 16, 2012

Could you guys give me feedback on what I can do to improve my photos?

I'd really appreciate it. Thanks in Adv. :dopey:

Spitfire by ItsFJ, on Flickr

Gallardo Nurburg by ItsFJ, on Flickr

Trial Mountain Circuit by ItsFJ, on Flickr

Starion Sky Replacement by ItsFJ, on Flickr

The Top Gear Test Track_1 by ItsFJ, on Flickr

Ahrweiler - Town Square_2 by ItsFJ, on Flickr

lilmann73 · Dec 17, 2012

It's a cool set! I like two and five a lot, and that interior shot... :drool:

mazda787 · Dec 17, 2012

Agreed about the interior shot :drool:

Taiga · Dec 17, 2012

Second shot speaks for itself. The DoF is about right, the tone allows the picture to portray a warm, sunset mood while at the same time, the contrasting did the shadows at just a nice level. Good job. 👍

GPR · Dec 17, 2012

I'd say your best shots are number 2 and the interior shot. It's pretty good. And shot two has a good warm feel. 👍

As for the others, to the problem with shot 1 is that if the sky were that extreme colour and intesity the track and object would likely be more intense with colur and probably have more contrast with shadows and light. Atm it looks a little unfitting/convincing.

Shot 3 is not bad, pretty good compo, toning is pretty good also, I think it just feels a dark overall to me which makes it appear a bit dull.

Shot 4 the sky replacement is not bad but the ground/scenery colour toning doesn't match and the darkness of those elements looks like its been made darker to suite the sky which appear unatural looking to me. So together it doesn't seem cohesive enough.

Shot 5 is again not too bad at all just feels a bit weirdly dark considering the over exposure of the sky.

Sorry if that's a bit of a whack to your confidence, I just thought I'd give you some hopefully useful advice for you consider in your future works.

Keep at it!