George's Gallery - BMW M3 CSL

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The CF could use a little brightening, but for a first attempt it is not bad at all! 👍
 
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The CF could use a little brightening, but for a first attempt it is not bad at all! 👍

Well, I wouldn't say that, its just the lighting is bad and even if you did have a carbon fiber hood in real life, the weave would be hard to see.

Try it on a pic where the light is more even...
 
Man you really need to lose this new sig you have, it takes away from the picture...it is just terrible, also, that is a nissan 300zx, not a 350z...
 
I think you need the car to glow out a little more. Do you mind me editing the pic a little to show you what you can do with the pic? I totally respect your gallery and your shots, but I want to see if I can help you in any way possible.
 
I would let him do it, i mean, you can take shots awesome, and you use photoshop to do random things such as lowering cars, and putting decals on them, why dont you try to make your images look nicer with brightness, contrast, saturation, levels, etc. and filters...i mean your angles and car selection is great, now take it to the next level and edit your pics to be artwork, i know that you can do it!
 
now thats better. the skyline pic is pretty good but i thought the 300zx pic was absolutely :yuck: if you dont mind me saying
 
I've brightend this one, added motion blur and rised the saturation slightly.


 
Ok George, this is what im talking about, this photo is much better than your previous updates. I like this idea, even though it may be a little overused, but at least youve given me a photo that can be critiqued...It looks very nice, although you probably shouldnt use so much motion blur, too much can make it look unrealistic, as it has done here....but its still a good picture in many ways, one of these is how well you cut out the car, its very very clean, and i can tell that you didnt rush through it, you took your time to create a quality image. The car looks a little too low, but thats ok. Also, it appears as if the front end of the car is blurred, from an in game blur....the best thing to do if you know that the pic you are taking is going to be blurred in photoshop, is to set the arperture and the shutter speed to the highest setting, this ensures that the entire car is in focus. All in all, not a bad update, and certainly more entertaining than your other recent posts....Keep this up George!!!

Things to work on:

Less blurring
no in game blur
and find other better angles
 
Yes, this is a huge improvement. I love this photo, great editing.
Keep producing shots like this and you'll soon be among the best around here. 👍
 
I think it's my best picture yet, thanks for the comments.

I did'nt lower the car in that picture, it just happened to be low, probaly becuase I was turning quite hard.


I'll update taking what you said into account D_P 👍
 
AWWW YEAHHH!!! THATS WHAT IM TALKIN ABOUT!!! evo 6 TME, my all time favorite evo, u represent it well *hands u mad propz* very clean work and the blur is very good. keep it up man ;)
 
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