GTracer98's gallery: 30/11/13 - Focus WRC 02

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Nice work, GTracer98. Very interesting set - it's noticeable that you put a lot of effort into getting many different effects and I think that it worked very well. In my opinion, pictures #3, #5 and #10 are particularly great. 👍
 
You got some interesting stuff going on in that Alfa set, I like shot 2 the softness and cold feel suits the location, good atmosphere in it.

Shot 3 has a nice tight fight feel and energy and the warm toning on this one works too.

Shot 5 is also nice the same soft feel but the atmosphere come across well.

And the last is very nice indeed. The sense of speed is great, the coposition is nice and the isolation of the red car on green surroundings works very well.

Good work 👍

As for your latest set, your entry shot is nice and one of the best in that set, my only crit on it though is whether it best relates to the theme because it's hard to se what colour the car actually is and considering the theme was about a specific colour it may have been better to show the colour off more. Still its a nice shot. 👍

Shot 5 also has something that draws me in, which is good. 👍
 
Thank you, Ilya! :)

Thanks, George! You made me change the 2.0 entry, I actually had the same thought that the color wasn't very well visible...
 
The Alfas!!!! Headed for the Bleachers!!!:sly:

Your colorful tones and highlights have captured my imagination...Forever.

Amazing how you see into the shot and pull out just what I need to fuel my raging jealousy.:)

Example: 3rd Benz shot, you know how we drive at sunset, just to where the sun reflects off the signage?:drool:

It's in there, that minor detail is why I love your work. It makes me re-evaluate my own artistry.

Richly nuanced, always to the point.

Starks, you are sick with the styles Kid. I'm a Believer.👍
 
Here are some photos of the 2012 N24 GT-R. Hope you'll enjoy them! :)


13th KM by DocArmor98/GTracer98, on Flickr


Before Wipermann by DocArmor98/GTracer98, on Flickr


GP Track by DocArmor98/GTracer98, on Flickr


Lines by DocArmor98/GTracer98, on Flickr


Mini-Karussel by DocArmor98/GTracer98, on Flickr


No 123 by DocArmor98/GTracer98, on Flickr


Real by DocArmor98/GTracer98, on Flickr


Sun Is Up by DocArmor98/GTracer98, on Flickr


Turn Your Head by DocArmor98/GTracer98, on Flickr


TV Footage by DocArmor98/GTracer98, on Flickr​
 
I only have very nice profane words for this set Doc.

1st shot...Game Over, goodnight everyone, thanks for playing, we have some lovely parting gifts backstage.:sly:

May as well get a summer home behind the bleachers, huh Doc?

The set is as if I took the photos myself, (But in a more amateurish way) realistic vantage points, the sky lightly singes the trees as you blow by.

That hazy reflection:drool:

Photos massaged by the hands of a true visionary.

Just when I think I've seen it all...Starks comes back with jaw-droppers.

Magnificent stylings Ciro. Make more.👍
 
Wow I like a lot of these shot in your lastest set. The light setting and tonal editing is very nice and quite on the realistic side. Plus some solid compositions too and pretty good sense of speed, need I say more. Well done. 👍

It feels to me that you've on the whole improved lately which is great to see, certainly mre consistency of quality in my mind. 👍 Onwards and Upwards.
 
Gary, your comments are always epic, thank you! :)

George, thanks for the compliment, I'm glad you appreciate my work in which I always try to put all my emotions... :)

Herve, thanks, I'm actually thinking I should start making some panoramas soon. :)
 
Nice 3.0 entry Ciro and great work on shadows on this last pic 👍
And great work on light in the 300SL set, love the first one 👍👍
 
I agree with Kodje, the shadows look quite good on that last shot. 👍

Your 3.0 entry is quite nice also. A couple tips though, firstly the Mazda logo is a bit too close to the edges especially on the top edge. Best thing in any kind of graphic design layout is to try and balance elements to so an even distance from both edges would be best and give it a bit more air as they say. Similar to how you have the MX5 part, that is farily well placed.

Also main copy/text is a bit small for a ad headline and that particular font doesn't have a very commercial feel about it. So I think it could be tweaked a little.

Hope that doesn't burst your bubble mate, just trying impart my knowledge.
 
Thanks, Jeremy and George! And yes, I do agree with what you say, George, thing is I'm not very good at advert making...
 
Nice pics, the shooting angle of the Advert and Greatness is really cool and the lighting in them is great too. 👍
 
And yes, I do agree with what you say, George, thing is I'm not very good at advert making...

Well nobody starts off good. That what practice and knowledge is for. ;) Just thought I'd give you something to bear in mind for your future efforts.
 
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