The Sun Sets. A Cowboy's Last Ride.
This part is taken from Jacob's perspective, for one last time.
Song:
Pearl Jam - Sirens.
At long last, i have returned. Outlaw is now just a fleeting memory. It's about time, you asked? You asked correctly. Gone is the racing god. Gone is the cowboy that raged an inferno. Gone is the fool that i was trapped within. Now i am me. Jacob Ross.
I'll say this for sure: Did you expect this? I know you all did. With events that has happened, you think all i can do is cry? I lived life as the tragic clown fish once.. But let's look at the bright side.
The Harbingers are now gone, with thanks to Clark's trap, Nash's actions, Jared's crew and Sonny's coup de grace. The Harbinger has fled from my view after Nash's pipe dream, or so i thought. Moments i walked out through the chaos, I saw him, apprehended with my former clothes, with the crimes i have committed. What a fitting end for a stupid old man.
Three of us exited the building as hostages. Me, unharmed, by chance that Outlaw knew a kevlar vest is the thing to wear. Then, Clark, who is wounded.. shot in the leg and gut. But.. my dearest Rin. My dearest Jess. How can you just do that? Your love to me has been so dedicated. It insults me. What you've done is supposedly fatal. The blood from that wound's not going to clean easy, much to the benefit of covering my tattoo, walking by the policemen who misidentified the Harbinger.
I hear sirens. Police cars, and a fire engine? That's going too far. But after seeing me, carrying a seriously wounded woman, they called in the ambulance. I walk by the chaos. Henchmen getting arrested. Soldiers getting accounted for. I walk.. towards Nash. Next to him is probably the people that stand by me at this moment of sorrow. She's dying, and i can't hope for any more miracles.
Jacob: "Kirkham. You came to see me crumble or what?"
Nash: "It's been a long time coming, Jake. You've crossed paths with Kayne, as by my ideals. It's about time you get what you deserve, while the injury not really what i planned out. Rin's been in the confides of the Harbingers, until now, where she's trapped by her own pain once again."
Jacob: "Hah.. there's a lot of sins i have to confess to soon. Where's Son?"
Jackie: "My boy just hanging around there. He call me just a week ago lah, and make me call my boys so we outnumber the bad guys lah. That's the girl you married? Pretty girl."
Jacob: "You need to get your boy a good woman. He's thirty and what? Not a married man? *sigh*"
Jackie: "Silly he is? Say he want drive fast car, and still he don't get girl."
A gold Citroen arrives with Sonny on board. He approaches. And then i turn to see.. Paul? What's the Scot doing here?
Sonny: "Alaaa, dad. You let me live my own life lah. I marry whenever i want, okay?"
Jackie: "Whatever lah, but you promise you get someone pretty ah?"
Paul: "With such a look, it's not tough ta find someone who won't say no. I mean, there's someone just under that level of good looking: Ross."
Jacob: "Paul. What does this look like, to you?"
Paul: "The last of our kin. Aye, but it hurts to see this sight, eh?"
Sonny: "Don't be so negative lah. And what's the motto of the phoenix? After death, it will be reborn, is it?"
Jacob: "Let's see for sure.."
Jared popped by with the paramedics exiting an ambulance, ready to help.
Jacob: "Come on, cap. No time to lose. Nearest hospital."
Jared: "Rin.. oh my God."
Jacob: "Don't go soft yet, cap. The nearest hospital, pronto."
Jared: "... Don't worry, gunny. I got it."
He lifted my dearest on a bed and i climbed in. I left everything to clean up with Nash. I threw my keys to him, hoping he won't do anything too drastic to such a beautiful vintage.
Nash: "Jacob is devoted to the end, despite the corruption of his habit. I wonder what turned it all for him?"
Sonny: "Hey, i didn't give up on him. I mean, i knew him for my whole life lah."
Jackie: "Our whole lives, Sonny. You really have to get a girl to marry. You've already grown a beard!"
Paul: "First, it was me and me girls in trouble. I couldn't a believe it's his turn nae."
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After all this, i decided to see how this all carries out. The legacy that i carry has rubbed through those i helped and hindered. I don't care what really happened to the rest of them, with my focus so far on Jess. But, i am sure you're all very curious. I've gotten into contact into those that were involved in this half year I've been through. A lot has happened, and i have thanked them personally.
Firstly, let's see what has happened to that snaky gangster Gary.
Song:
Weezer - Automatic (L.A. Riots)
He went back to the States, finished with the services of Vulture. He visits a local graveyard just by the outskirts of California, and overlooks a gravestone, while wearing his signature purple suit. He reads from a small note to a crowd of agents from various agencies. What does it all mean?
Gary: "Ladies and gentlemen. We've come to mourn at the poor soul of the woman that we've respected as a fighter against justice, a messenger of the Devil, a plight of society. Yes. As much as it seems like a dream, the one and only Assassin is no more."
Ginoa Fantoccia is dead. It's a sad end indeed. The world is rid of one pest that ruins the cycle of Capitalist life.
After the ceremony, Gary then stares at the gravestone. The wind blows his hair and his suit. A figure approaches. A woman, to be precise.
Ginoa: "So, that's how it looks like to die? I'd expect more of a turnout."
Gary: "Gin.. you wanna be more careful now? Is this the first of what is supposed to be a fake death? You're dead. You're not supposed to give two f:censored:s about it, okay?!"
Ginoa: "Hehehe, i have to get to know how to do this more often. Because, you never know. I won't say this will be the first of my very disappearances."
Well, it seems that our Assassin isn't dead, at all. She's a tough nut. Gary pushed hard and spent a lot of money to get her back on her feet, while hiding from the police. They had to flee Japan, knowing that a new beginning has to happen. A beginning of a relationship? Maybe. Gary's not the sort to make a long term girlfriend stay, but time can change things.
They walk through a path to the parking lot. Eventually, Gary gets on a specially made cobalt Ducati 1198, with the Assassin just behind him.
Gary: "This is a sweet, sweet bike. I just don't get it, with you and spending."
Ginoa: "Come on, Gare-bear. We can admire this later. Let's head to LA. I'm sure you still have your old place, am i right?"
He starts the engine, and pushes the bike to the limits.
Gary: "So, where to? To my place? Well, you'll have to live with.."
Ginoa: "I'll live with anything, don't worry. I'm planning to live low.. until the time comes. For now.. for now.."
Gary's conclusion? He's now in Los Angeles with Ginoa. Their names are to disappear from the wanted list. It won't be long before they re-emerge as what they live to be.. it's going to be something to look out for.
Ginoa: "There won't be an end until i get what i want. Oh, Madame Amadine.."
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What did i tell the new Blacklist? I told them just one thing. I didn't give them any choice, but to once again, split up.
Jacob: "So, it is settled? On what's about to happen? You all won't stay in Japan, no?"
Murph: "Unfortunately no, mate. I have business to tend to back in my place. It's not racing, nope. It's more on the side of what's going to happen."
Leona: "To sum up, Balagur has met living legend racer man. Nash, was it?"
Fred: "Ah yup. Nash has plans for him. He told us that he wants his 'talents'. And no, he didn't exactly say what it is."
Lee: "He scary guy, boss. But, looks okay to me when it comes to his intentions."
Jacob: "Lee. I'm not your boss anymore. The purpose of this meeting is for one thing. The official disbanding of our little group, now that Outlaw is gone."
Murph: "Gone? You don't mean? You really are turning a new leaf, eh Jake? It's unusual for you."
Jacob: "A man told me to carry on with whatever decisions you made. I won't hesitate to bring my persona to oblivion."
Lee: "To carry on."
Leona: "Carry on."
Fred: "To carry me? Er hemm.. I mean to carry onwards."
Jacob: "With that.. good luck in the foreseeable future. Murph.."
Murph: "I've got to go get in contact with Nash first, man."
Jacob: "And in Germany..."
Leona: "I won't give up. You give me chance, like Balagur told me about his tale. I won't forget it. I won't forget you."
Jacob: "Right... I won't forget. How about you two?"
Fred: "Back roaming around the States for me, ehehe. After winning the Championship, it's months of shine for me. Gehehehe!"
Lee: "I'm going to stay at Nippon. Nice place. Won't be saying goodbye to the soil here anytime soon, but i need another job than just speed tester."
Jacob: "Well then. It's official. We close our battle of pride. We're now beings, looking to survive. Racing is our tool. Use it well, as i will."
The tension arose for a moment, then we split our separate ways. And i didn't tell you, we were in an airport, walking towards the agendas we were given.
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I didn't get much, but this is my best at describing what happened to most others.
I didn't see Alan personally. He left Japan as soon as he heard that Keith has a reason to leave the country. Alan left for his home in London. But he didn't leave alone. He left with my other mother. Nami. I would have never guessed it. But a wedding is about to be planned for the two. Details i wouldn't share because i don't know.
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Keith, recently accepted into the 24 hours of Le Mans. That's following my father's footsteps. And to top it off. A whole team. Directed by my father. Mechanic team from Germany's finest, featuring the lovely Lucia the Prodigy. Bernardo happens to handle the work behind the curtain, with things like sponsors and licensing. A modified Corvette C6.R takes the helm, under Keith's beloved Blade Silver paintjob. And the drivers..
The drivers, was i surprised who they are. Keith tags along with Williem and Eduard. Some of the finest racers I've battled across the dark Nurburg roads. Teach the boy well, or I'll have your heads.
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Vulture and Izumi, are unfortunately, stripped of their dynasty. Vulture does have a partial backup for this. He still has control of Hagetaka Finance, under a friend replacing him as CEO for the time being. The heat in Japan has been quite high since my final battle with Clark. As of now, i heard they're in China. I can imagine them doing the Asian things. Amongst the bamboo forest, a man meditates. A woman hopefully should recover from the traumatizing experience of being charged.
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Jared went back to his home in Washington, USA. He received a few distinctions from the Scotland Yard. He's satisfied that I've reunited with my beloved, after he told me about the guilt he carried. All i can do is not forgive, but to help him accept the fact that he's doing it for us. As my commander and my good friend, i say: at ease, commander.
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Hideki and Ayumi? I left them. But social media is a good thing. We said our farewells there. I told them what happened to Outlaw, and in return, they told me about beginning a tuning garage together just by the mountains of Fuji, a few blocks from Keith's home. It'll be about a year before I'm seeing that open, from what I'm hearing. The secrets they carry, i hope, stay secret. And for that reason, is why i gave them that deed. That deed to the home.
I have to start dissuading people that think I'm Outlaw. I have this hunch there's a bunch of those people..
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And then we have Clark. A cruel man who has a plan. A plan to be the best. His treatment took a short time, surprisingly. He's persistent to roll on the streets again..
He drives a new car, for his Scuderia carries a large bounty for facing Outlaw. Another Ferrari, or so i heard. It's style mimics of his Scuderia.
And he's impressed. At the car i mean. He's still being a cocky a:censored: on the street racing in Japan. You know.. a proper car beats any cheap pocket rocket, and a proper driver behind it.
Despite me driving mostly Fords, the engineering of Ferrari are exemplary. I don't have a say at this, but Clark plans to extend this and shove it in their faces, or so he says. He's bringing over his FXX, last i spoke to him.
That will be the end for the racers in Japan, seeing how unfair that would be in terms of the average street racer's budget. How did he get one, and smuggle it out of Ferrari's hands?
I doubt I'll be getting an answer, so: all the best for my worthiest rival. Hoping no more bruises from you.
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I had a chat with Paul by the mountain roads of the country. It was about more than just being someone that follows others.
Jacob: "Family?"
Paul: "They're back in me home. And I'm no person to hide secrets. They know Nash brought me along for an errand. That errand involves what he's going to do, and I'm sure Clark's told you all about it."
Jacob: "He hasn't, actually. Please tell me we're on the same team."
Paul: "We are, and let me have ye up ta speed. Something about Nash. Nash wants back on the victory road. Nash put us all in this."
Jacob: "So that he would have us take the helm after he opens the path. I like it. But.."
Paul: "Aye? What's up?"
Jacob: "That we're going to be under Nash again. It's uncomforting, for me at most. Since he is my mentor of the roads. Would you love to carve your own path? I mean.. like the brave warriors of the past."
Paul: "Oi. I'll have ye know, that the brave warriors were under one king. They obey his almighty order, because.."
Jacob: "Because they think he is said 'almighty'. How about we get into Nash's head. We don't have to be his playthings forever."
I gave Paul a moment while we watch the lovely sight.
Paul: "As much as i wuld agree with ya, we'll have to go along with the flow. It's too complicated at the moment."
Jacob: "*sigh*"
Paul: "Hey. Don't take me word so highly. Opinions are hard ta share."
Jacob: "It's not easy to sway your heart, isn't it? Well. I'll have to let time explain to you what i mean for real. You've been under the wing of those stronger than you. That's always been your trouble."
Paul: "It has. As much as we help each other out, Nash's gonna need our help after what he's done."
Jacob: "You know what?"
Paul: "What?"
I had another view telling him something. Opinions change.. like i truly have.
Jacob: "You're right. I might as well try to clean up all my debts."
Paul: "Or it might haunt you?"
Jacob: "...You're not that dumb as you assume you are."
Paul: "Huh? That's just off, man."
Jacob: "Off, but... Sonny told me to tell you something."
Paul: "That is?"
Jacob: "Something.. i can't speak about it, in exact form, that is."
Paul: "Oooh.. It's got me hooked in, I'll tell ya that."
Jacob: "Tell me.. what is it that you dear most? I mean an object of sorts. Not a person."
Paul: "Hmm.. i didn't give it any thought. What's that supposed to mean?"
Jacob: "Trust me on this one. I am myself and how i achieved to reach this state of person today is because of my dearest remembering me from this beautiful pendant that Nash somehow got hold of. I'm not saying that a pendant is the miracle worker of life, but.."
Paul: "Some sort of keepsake? Hmm.... I do have this one photo. It's me when i was a wee lad. I remember it like a moment i lost me balloon in me younger days. I saw a man pick it up, and it was the Flying Scot himself! Jackie Stewart. He gave me back the balloon. My parents, who were chasing me while i scurry around, thanked him, and took a picture of him and me. It's how i got into racing today. I want to be like that old man."
Jacob: "It's time then. You put that faith of your skills into believing your icons of your past, and like me, there is good fortune to come soon."
Paul: "I'd say... that might work out pretty dandy."
And Nash? He's still waiting. I don't know how long will we wait, but..
I'm looking forward to it.
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Sonny? He's disappeared without a trace. I know. I haven't met Jackie in a decade. He's grown, and he's akin to what he was when i do my own things with Sonny in their home. I thought nothing about him and his son, then.. I heard rumors.
Rumors of a black Camaro shredding the large scale competition. Inside it?
So, is that your calling, Son? I'll be impressed with what you can do. Sir Ben's Ford is one fine machine, though. It won't be long before we get on track together..
There has to be another tale behind this high level racing... I'll see to it that any suffering you eased upon me, it will be paid back twofold!
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But..
Just a week before all of this has happened, something called to me. I can't say what, but I had to end it. What is it that caused me to lose it? It must be that man. Hiramoto, was it? A shrine in Suzuka? I heard he's back, but i really have little in the faith of the supernatural.
And then i had a second thought about it. Why is this man Keith's inspiration for life? Why did i choose to ignite the flames of a country so serene and respectful? What happened to my spare cowboy hat?
I won't be getting an answer for those, but it's time I get things right for once.
Yes. This is Outlaw's Mustang. I had someone paint it with white and red rims, according to how i feel then. What made me lead to such dedication like this, i have no idea. It just occurred to me that it's what i have to do.
I had another round of Suzuka, once again. The Mustang is now just a sign that the legend lives on as a promise Jacob Ross kept. The white? It's not just a cover.
The racer's plaque i burned had a car named after him. It was a cheap 86, but with proper tuning. The coloring was interesting to say the least, but i would prefer to name this coloring: the purification of myself.
I wonder what part of my mind had me cross the GT500 Legend? I crave for such names, but Outlaw's infamy around here already got him probably more than just one name.
The lap? I'm no Suzuka super professional, so don't expect the times i do here as great as the ones Keith does in his former day job.
It was 2:05.892. Not bad, but this is my second time here. There's more to it than just saying that's good.
I parked by the 130R again. The memorial isn't there. I have this feeling too much has happened in this spot. But, i can see some people watching me.
I'm wearing Outlaw's hat, but the tattoo? Not visible to the naked eye no more. It was a surprisingly brief process. I don't know how Nash has experience removing those pigments of ink under the skin..
The hat stuck with me, as per a promise, and my bespoke jacket and the such. It's a brand new look for me. I'm proud of it. The public knows I'm not Outlaw, and I'll keep it that way.
And speaking of him.. I threw a large garbage bag. It's got all the jackets. All the covers. All the spare hats, except for the one i had on. With me is also another gasoline can. Nobody's seeing this; I can tell that's hard to be true.
And then: the Devil's Dance once again. Fire burns.
Jacob: "So long, cowboy."
But the sounds of fire engines came quicker than i thought. I managed to get away before they arrived.
At that day, there was one more thing before i am truly free of these chains. Just one more..
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These chains i mentioned? I call it my heart's burdens.
Song:
30 Seconds To Mars - Kings And Queens.
Song Progress: 0:00 - 0:29
The roads are empty. It's like that day. When i decided to visit those two.
What better time is it to reunite with a friend i now call inseperable. My Ford GT.
My ally through the days of my sorrow. But today, unlike those days..
I wasn't alone.
I came from a hospital.
Yes. Despite the severe injury...
Song Progress: 0:30 - 3:19.
My wife is alive and fine. She's just fatigued in the car. I guess whatever reason Nash had to treat a difficult injury and wake her up so fast again..
It's got a bearing of his will being. That's a guess, but.. for us all: the moment of truth.
She awakes..
Rin: "Jake?"
Jacob: "Hello again.."
Her foggy mind must've been confused on why I'm pushing the Ford GT to it's limits. 210 mph. She's thinking about a kidnapping.
Rin: "Huh?! What's happening? I can explain!"
Jacob: "Jess.. Jess! Calm down. I've been filled on the whole situation. The Mythic.. The Harbingers.. Jared's doings."
Rin: "Oh... you have?"
I do. I have to know why. My instincts may be right, but who knew that might be what has been conceived.
Jacob: "...."
Rin: "...."
Jacob: "Tell me.. how is it we haven't seen each other for years? I thought at first, when i came, the ring you wear would mean nothing."
Rin: "Ehh.. it did.. a few weeks ago. The day you raced sensei."
That day.. the moment i lost my soul to a demon.
Jacob: "Interesting.. (the day i lost my very mind, eh)."
Rin: "But.. we're back? For real? You are.."
Jacob: "I am your husband, my dear.. we can go sentimental when we reach home. How about we catch up? What have you been doing to steer away from a bunch of professional criminals?"
Rin: "But.. but first: you're really Jacob Ross? When i saw you that day on Nash-sama's final move.."
Jacob: "I was still in veil, but then i saw you get shot.."
I did witness it, while blurry. Nash filled that gap for me. It was painful for me and him.
Rin: "It was luck. The bullet barely missed the major organs. And you coming back.."
Jacob: "How about.. movement?"
Rin: "It might take a while to.. get used to normal walking again. You have the.."
Jacob: "Crutches? I'm afraid i have to do the lifting.. I'll get one first thing tomorrow."
Rin: "Ha.. haha.. that's like you.."
Jacob: "And about the cryptic things you do in Keith's home.."
I didn't marry a stalker. I just didn't want to accept that fact.
Rin: "...I can't help it, okay! I'm just a pretty girl; crazy and smart."
Jacob: "As odd as that is, I appreciate you looking out for me and all, Jess. And where do you hang out?"
I'll forgive that, for now.
Rin: "Tokyo. Just by Yokohama Bay. We're headed for Kei-san's home?"
Jacob: "His old home.. He's moving out in a few days, for Europe. He's gotten himself into Le Mans."
Rin: "Really? Kei-san's been exceptional on the track last season."
Jacob: "Indeed."
Rin: "You must be proud of him."
Jacob: "No s:censored:, i am. But.. let's get to someplace you can rest. I'm sure the mountain air would be lovely.."
She suddenly held my arm. I am speechless, for a moment that is.
Jacob: "Hey! Let go!"
Rin: "My hero! Ahahahaha!"
A small glance and i noticed she was in tears saying all of that. I can't object. I saw her smile again. It warms my heart, it did.
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Song Progress: 3:20 - 5:09
Ross Residence, Fujinomiya. 10 PM.
I parked the car by the home I live in. I got out the car that marked my being. I came over to see if Rin needs a leverage.
Why did i mention that? Of course she needs it! She did open the door, but she's kind of stuck. We were stubborn when we denied the hospital's rehabilitation. I guess this is how it all paid.
Rin: "Ahh. You don't mind if.."
Jacob: "No.. Not one word. Allow me."
I lifted her like when i married her for the first time. Like that time, i was walking to a home. I saw both the rings that bonded us. I saw her beautiful smile. But this time..
We weren't ready for a remarriage at the time. Clothing and time aside, we're too focused on being together rather than the formalities. Also, unlike that time, the door opens to our surprise.
Gary.. and a party blower.
Gary: "Heyyy! They're backkk! Man am I so glad! I mean.. nothing to do with your.."
Clark: "You as:censored:! Ruined.. THE.. SURPRISE!"
I came in to see.. well, for starters: we saw a large banner. It read.
WELCOME BACK TOGETHER.
And who did we see? It really is a surprise.
"Dearie. I'm happy to see it worked out till the end."
Laura Bradley-Ross. My mother, and caring housewife.
"I wouldn't doubt Jake for one bit, Hon. He's tougher than Iron Man, he is."
Louie Ross Jr. My father, and retired racer.
"That's my brother! Wooop! It did work out."
Keith Ross. My only sibling, and the successor of our father.
"Mi Amico! And Rin? Mio Dio! Cento di questi giorni!"
Bernardo Bellini. Italian secret agent, and family man.
"Herr Ross and his sweetheart. Reminds me of that day once again."
Lucia Weiss. Young German tuner with a knack in car mechanics.
"Cowboy is back on his senses. I like."
Leona Mashkov. Russian street racing queen, promoted to ring meister.
"Little Jacob? You're not him no more? We miss you, you hear!"
Fred McStevenson. Big rig racer, and a friend in many a dark time.
"It's over already? I mean: grats, boss!"
Ramlie Aji. Speed racer enthusiast.
"Hoi! Just tell me when's the remarriage, and I'll crash it again. BAM!"
Murphy Barrister. The world's craziest racer, bar none.
"*blows* Three cheers for J!"
Gary Dhetto. Not your typical American gang lord.
"So... you're married, Kate? To him? I'd believe it only when i see it, hehe."
Ginoa Fantoccia. Assassin in hiding.
"Just like this, we have you back on the top in no time. Perfect."
Nash Kirkham. Man of enigmatic legend, and my mentor.
"What a sweet moment. I just can't believe I'm going to be his second dad, hohoho."
Alan Robinson. One of the few racing icons of Bristol.
"Don't worry about their marital issues. We have our own to catch up on."
Nami Seno. Widow, and Rin's mother.
"And thus, there was peace. No more soulless f:censored:er to deal with."
Clark Kayne. Street racing messiah.
"With them Harbie's guys all gone, we can finally have the celebration we need, ya."
Paul Henderson. The new hope of Mythic.
"And i can't believe i put these two together. Just tell me when you're getting a kid lah."
Sonny Meng. Childhood friend in youth, celebrity in present, badass in his lifetime.
"The sorts of things my boy can do. Get a woman lah, so we get these moments for ourselves!"
Jackie Meng. Travel agent.
"Ahah. I'm so happy, I'm tearing buckets!"
Izumi Yamazaki. A former agent, now on the loose.
"I have to admit that i wanted you for longer in my field of work, Ross.. But, a congratulations is what you need."
Vulture Jing. CEO, but now taking a vacation.
"Back together. I didn't expect it to happen so soon, too."
Hideki Minami. A boy i trust, and one that has determination.
"Deki-san! It's really the end of the story Jacob-san's been telling us about! The prince and the princess. Ahhhh."
Ayumi Tanaka. Formerly number one fan of me.
"And his pretty Frau is a talented racer? Not a coincidence, ja?"
Williem Weiss. The man in the famed Orange Lightning.
"Jacob had a tragic tale? I guess there was a sad before the happily ever after."
Eduard Alvarez. Friend of many tastes in supercars.
"You're easing that wound, eh Jake? At ease, Gunny."
Jared Sykes. My commander.
Here we are, together.
I walked in to those that would support me, despite my recent crowning of evil. It makes me happy. I've finally felt that i achieved something. Just when i saw it all.
Rin: "You've met quite the band of people to find me. And after all of this?"
Jacob: "It's over. The suffering. It's about time i get the sunshine we deserve. Thank you, everyone."
Song Progress: 5:10 - End.
"And thank you.. for riding along with me."
FIN ENDING.
Author's (Final) Notes
- First of all, thanks to everyone who read my story thus far. I won't make any special mentions, because, if you've read from the humiliation of the Tsunami Riders to here, you already are one of them.
- Sequel? It's coming. Just hand me the break that i need. Fresh ideas, more interesting quirks, less cliches, and reduced ways of keeping a story stale. The sequel will be take a different standpoint on how it's presented, but it should be mostly the same style. Yes, the action will stay.
- Clark was intended to use an Enzo Ferrari. But, it's such a fickle machine to drive, even after a tune.
- So, it's a stock 430? It's still a Dark Horse Scuderia! The removal of the wing and body work was so i could give it more power. With a similar acceleration, it tops out at 214 with gearbox adjustment, but it goes 198 with the body work, and against 225 Trans Cammer? Doomed, I'd say.
- Since nobody volunteered to do the duel with me, i had to do it within the confines of 2 player mode. Unlike most other fiction that uses it (there are a few older stories that use this to get 2 cars in one picture), i have a sibling do the work for me.
- The last ambush was reviewed many many times. Paul has always played a large role in it from first draft. And, yes, that role is the final blow against Gerald.
- The Harbinger's fate was to die, but i liked Nash's idea of framing him better.
- I'm hoping to dodge the cliche of weak women. Rin may have been captured, but i don't know if i justified it correctly. She's got no dedication into martial arts, but i didn't say Jacob might've taught her to do so. She's going to extend that part of character in the sequel, if it's going to be action packed.
- Despite Outlaw getting the win, the whole race isn't scripted. I don't have any qualms on who's going to win. Like what i did to Sonny in Chapter 3, it really sucks if the hero wins every single time.
- A Guilty Gear reference in the form of how Jacob died and is replaced with Outlaw, akin to Zato-1 and his shadow Eddie.
- My heart warmed when i read through my whole fiction. I did it to put the memories scene in SSR7. I felt sad that it had to end, but i was happy at all the effort i've done over the year.
- And if you don't know: The last scene with Jacob and Paul. It's the passing of the baton. The sequel's not going to be very Scottish, but I'll try.
- We all expected the happy ending? The hero has saved the princess. The bad guys are gone. YES I KNOW CLICHE. GAAAAAA*technical issues*.
- Gary and Ginoa's scene references the ending of Metal Gear Solid 1. One of the gems of the last century.
- Ginoa is planned to live. The scene is based on an episode of Leverage, where Sophie allegedly dies to hide from a former employer's actions.
- Yes, i have memoirs of characters in GTA Online.
Ginoa Fantoccia - Pegassi Bati 801.
Jacob Ross - Vapid Bullet.
Gary Dhetto - Bravado Gauntlet.
Paul Henderson - Dewbauchee Rapid GT.
Outlaw - Vapid Dominator.
- Rin's "fatal" injury references that of Lisa Lisa in JoJo's Bizarre Adventures, part 2. A sword slice just by the heart, but not a fatal injury at all.
- Those were the first photos I've caught in Cape Ring and Monza. And: yeah, pretty obvious, Sonny.
- Yep.. That's the source of Paul's first name. Jackie Stewart had a son named Paul.
- Confused with the chronology of events? Here:
1) Final race. Outlaw banished. Clark and Rin injured.
1 month.
2) Jacob's second fire in Suzuka. Reuinion with wife. The final congratulations.
At least a week ahead.
3) The individual endings.
- So, I'd like to admit something: why did Jacob (or anyone that drives) seem so powerful? He is, without a doubt a very talented driver. 'One of the best' mindset to back that up. Yes. That's strong stuff. This fiction debuts characters that has already developed. It's not the newbie rises from humble beginnings type of story. Don't take it from that angle.
- The white Mustang is a sign that Outlaw is purified. Now, Outlaw is forever one with Jacob Ross. And if you're going to expect Jacob to get hold of the Shelby GT500 in the next game, it's going to be Performance White with black stripes.
- Draft songs that have changed after each review of the final round. I think my whole fiction would feel pretty bland without music on the whole.
Split/Second Theme Song.
Epic, but destructive. To be used in SSR5 Finale.
Nero - Me & You (Dirtyphonics Mix)
Loved it since i heard it from Trackmania 2: Canyon. Since it's going to be in GT6... Also:
Izumi's leitmotif (the normal mix).
The Qemists - Stompbox
Dropped in favor of S.W.A.G.
Pendulum - Showdown
While already used for Jacob's first track race in Fuji, i considered using it.
Muse - Knights Of Cydonia
Incredible, but i won't be using it now. It's going to appear in the sequel though, but when?
Metallica - The Outlaw Torn (S&M)
To be used on Outlaw's appearance, but it would feel biased on him as an enemy. I want him and Clark on same terms of fairness.
The Who - Won't Get Fooled Again (Cato Remix)
Overused. But i can't help on how epic it is.
- The usage of Automatic (L.A. Riots) is my farewell to both this and GT5. For me, that song is the one that pretty much marked my GT5 experience, like with Moon Over The castle in GT4. Want the MP3? I'm sure you've heard of a YouTube Downloader.
- And despite GT4 using the Ford GT as it's cover car, i never had any affection to it yet. At the time, my favorite cars were the Saleen S7, Lamborghini Diablo and the Porsche Carrera GT. I started caring after hearing of Carroll Shelby's death, and after that, it's pretty much how that love started.
- But that love was with the Shelby Mustangs, not the Ford GT. It's not until i read about Ford whacking Ferrari is when i loved it, and buying the black striped Ford GT in GT5. Love at first drive? Hell to the yes.
- Biographies are on hold. It will work under request now.
- The distant relation between Jacob and Keith is a realistic one. I'm watching my dad and uncles and compare it to my own and my siblings. It's a scary thought, but it's something we might have to accept.
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SEQUEL - The Dawn Of Mythic: A legend in hiding has brought the world a new level in racing that nobody's ever seen. Who is prepared to see the consequences?
Hey, aspiring story writers to be.
Want some tips on how to make a story? I know fanfiction's going to make a rise for the next game. While I'm no know it all, how about my top 5 tips?
1.
INTEREST. Make sure it's not going to be a bore fest. Maybe involve a few quirks within. A laugh is totally acceptable, even with the tone I'm going with. Ask yourself before inserting this into the plot: would someone read it and be impressed? Make some witty comments now and then. Make a quirk now and then. Make a funny joke. Try to suck the reader into the story. It doesn't have to be so dark or informative forever. Need help for characters? Try a Leitmotif to help convey how you should feel for him/her. Put a personality difference for anyone you see. Not everyone has to be heroic. I'd rather play the game with a diverse team and not with four white mages, thank you very much.
2.
NO MONOTONY. A long story shouldn't be occupied with the same result or the use of soulless robot characters along the way. Make it all different. Different every time is good, in both plot, style, and even writing style sometimes. The audience expects something fresh. And it'll be great to see varied characters, that talk, act, react, feel and seem different. If a fiction is difficult to read, it could be monotony, because having a character seem the same as the rest makes it like watching an army corp do it's daily rounds: boring. Also, try to get some relationship points in. Say and do things close friends would. Say and do things mortal enemies would. Don't spoil too much future info. Don't go doing risky things that'll tell readers about your habit of ass pulls, but at least risk a bit for something like a plot twist.
3.
DISCOURAGE REFERENCING. I'm not saying no to referencing (there's a lot in my work) but this is your story. You can say you got inspired from another medium. If your fiction has full of info required to know, they'd not read it at all, right? Try to make characters come from nowhere else but your mind. Ones with a personality made by you, while not exactly original. If you have to reference, it better be a well known one, or it has to be effective enough to make someone feel that it's worth it. You don't have to force anyone to watch Planet Of The Apes when i had Gary's Challenger on fire from 2-2. Instead of head on referencing the vague ones, try putting one that fits with the situation, to ensure someone at least giggles getting what it means. Reducing referencing also means less cliches; the bane of all stories.
4.
SIMPLE VOCABULARY. Let's try to reduce the useless info leaking out of paragraphs. It's totally fine if English isn't your first language. Go ahead and use the simple sentences as long as you know they're the right thing to tell. Like: 'I like the magnificence of taste provided in this pastry', can be reduced to: 'I like pie' very simply. We're not going to bash at you for simplicity, but try not to overdo it, especially in dialogue (see MONOTONY above). And find the mix between simple and realistic. Try not to explain every little damn detail in one moment.
5.
FEEDBACK. It's to be expected that if you write down something that'll be exposed to the mass media, it's going to impress them or just tell them.. nah. It's not that you're a bad fiction writer, but more of a bad sport by not taking it positive. There's bound to be a bad apple in the basket of fruity goodness. You screwed up something, yeah, you learn, not get a hissy fit about it. Also, if it's not feedback that you're being bombarded by of all the negativity, that's abuse. That's reportable to the moderators, so don't be afraid if things like that should happen.
..and I've implemented these into my fiction, more prominent since chapter 3. I've tried to improve over time, and some mistakes might be visible from my fiction. I'm not perfect, okay?
Crossovers.
From finishing this chapter, I've proposed reopening the crossover section. You, after all, are free to bring someone here to your fiction freely, as long as you obey these conditions.
- No deaths, or crippling injuries. This is a DUH!
- Stay in character. Generic talking makes me feel bad. Don't be afraid to do some character traits e.g: Clark can beat up a random person if he wants to etc.
- No cases of biasing your own characters against mine. I didn't make fiction for that reason.
- Read my whole story so you won't miss out on important details (the only thing i want from you).
- Please not have too much of them. It's your original story, not the ultimate showdown.
- Obey the locations:
Anywhere: Jacob, Rin, Keith, Louie Jr, Laura, Bernardo, Lucia, Clark.
Virginia: Fred.
Washington D.C: Jared.
California:Sonny, Gary, Ginoa.
Nurburg, Germany: Leona, Williem, Eduard.
London, UK: Alan, Nami, Paul, Nash, Murph.
Japan: Lee, Hideki, Ayumi.
China: Vulture, Izumi.
Since The Dawn Of Mythic is just about a year past this ending, you can even make any of my work a side character for the story. Just ask me.
Impressive crossover material will have me provide a mention, while outstanding performance will be repaid with an appearance.
Cars Introduced.
- Keith's Corvette ZR1 RM. 694pp
- Clark's SP1. 590pp
- Sonny's Camaro SS RM. 650pp
Cast Introduced.
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Jackie Meng Wei Ng. Sonny's father. A commander within a private security firm, backed up by many associates and his training in the Singapore Army Spec Ops. Jackie married a woman and raised Sonny from his birth till now. Harsh, and expects a lot from his son.
Just some more sequel stuff.
- Money gain in GT6 seems pretty hopeless if the seasonals is 20k each, so a wait is to be expected before i can begin.
- Nationalities for the new characters:
Armand - British-German
Englehart - Hispanic-American
Billy - American
Fiona - Scottish
The Richelieu - French
- The prologue will focus on Paul getting to know his fellow team mates. A part for each person. The concept for him meeting Jacob again is the best, for me.
- If money gain is unfavorable, i might have to put away the second focus on Clark, but he plays a major role nonetheless.
- Expect a few more characters than the ones i confirmed to be revealed. Amadine is a character related to someone in this fiction. This person is CONFIRMED.
- Start prediction? Maybe May, like this story. I have to get a hand on the game first, then see what progress can be made. This is obviously subject to change.
"And that concludes the adventures of an American wandering around in an eastern land. The objective achieved. The couple reunited. A demon vanquished. But.. that is not all, for Jacob Ross has evolved, from one that thinks, to one that has no more doubts of his skills. But, that is something he has to prove, at another time."
Jacob: "The sun sets for the day. It's about time we get some rest."
Rin: "Until the next dawn."