Red-Zone: Racing to the Next Level

IIf you want me to be brutally honest, I'm not enjoying this story much yet. Not enough racing or something, I don't know.

I sincerely would be more comfortable making the following comment if I hadn't a story already up, but here it goes anyway. Probably because the street racing plot is already overused, and don't take it the wrong way, =drifting24/7=, Red-Line was pretty cool actually, but you could have done things a *little* more interesting if the main character was actually from another place, other than Japan, like Europe or so... I'm already tired of japanese cars, to be honest.
 
*edit - changed the dates (sorry Roj, but I think cars on land are much more fun that cars in the air...,👍) and the title of the next chapter, sorry for the changes..,

You're just jealous of my NSX-R 2015 edition doing loop-de-loops and barrell rolls. :P

Nah I'm kidding, I'd rather stick to powersliding too. :D

Another well written chapter, with wooooo~ kissing! :lol: I think we need a PG-13 rating on Red-Zone ASAP before Tori and Zinaida get too comfortable. :dopey:

Paulie: It's only chapter 2 mate, theres plenty of time for racing. 👍

My only issue right now is the lack of pics in this chapter. Zaira should buy a Kodak and snap more pics! 💡
 
You guys read into this stuff too much :P

Keep it coming =D24/7=, building up your characters is never a bad thing!
 
I sincerely would be more comfortable making the following comment if I hadn't a story already up, but here it goes anyway. Probably because the street racing plot is already overused, and don't take it the wrong way, =drifting24/7=,

Have you ever heard of the word "surprises" ??

Red-Line was pretty cool actually, but you could have done things a *little* more interesting if the main character was actually from another place, other than Japan, like Europe or so... I'm already tired of japanese cars, to be honest.

Sorry, I'm Asian.., ;) :D and I like Japanese.., :)

Don't worry, just read and follow the storyline, mate.., 👍

@ Mafs - thanks for pointing out the error..,
 
D24/7 you're so sneaky! I spent all my time on the first three cars and you make it the last car?! I would've done more work to it if I had known!

The story looks like its off to a great start. Can't wait to see the next chapter. Looks like I'll have a reason to go back to GT4 forums now.

EDIT:Whoa, I just noticed two things, character names that I recognize from before,[they got married didn't they] and I skipped over one last thing on that Miata shot. I'll send you a corrected version ASAP.

How on earth did you get the shot of all those cars in a row?
 
I used a part of the camera area (the blue area wherein you can place the camera freely) as reference so that I'll place the camera on only one spot when taking pictures.., 👍
 
Chapter 3 - First Time



- Suichiro - "Good morning to you all, I'm Suichiro Fujime."



- Mrs. Takeuchi - "Okay, now that you've got yourself acquainted with the class, let's see...(looks around the classroom)...ah! That chair on Zaira's left side is empty, you may sit there."

Suichiro takes his seat beside Zaira.

- Ayane - "What's the matter, Zaira? You look so......I don't know, tense? Nervous?"
- Kimiko - "Yeah, you look like you can't hold it anymore. Are you okay?"
- Zaira - "Hey Ayane, do you remember when I brought you to Mt. Yabitsu because you wanted to see me race?"
- Ayane - "Uh, yeah. What about it?"
- Zaira - "When we were about to leave, there was this one guy in the crowds that kept looking at me. Even when we got into the car and left, he was still looking at me."
- Ayane - "Aaaaand, you're saying......that guy..."
- Zaira - "That guy is him!" (points at Suichiro)
- Ayane - "The transfer student? You serious?"
- Kimiko - "Maybe it's just your imagination..."
- Zaira - "No, I'm dead serious! I can remember the face clearly from back then!"


So, the day passed, Zaira feeling a bit...uncomfortable as Suichiro seated beside her.


*dismissal time*



- Zaira - "Hey girls, we planned we'd be hanging out at my place, right? C'mon, let's go!"
- Ayane - "Sorry Zaira, I need to get home right now. My mom's sick, and no one else has to do the chores."
- Kimiko - "Sorry, I'm going to the department store right now. These shoes of mine are pretty worn out, I need a new pair. And besides, have you forgotten that your car only has room for two people?"
- Zaira - "Damn, I completely forgot. C'mon, not even one of you is available? Man, this sucks, you guys are no fun! Oh well, guess I'll head straight home then."


*school grounds, Zaira goes to her car.*

- Zaira - "Where did I put those keys...... (keys drop) Oh!"

As she was about to reach them, someone else picked it up.

- ? - "...Here you go."
- Zaira - "Thanks-- !! ...You're the...transfer student..."
- Suichiro - "?? You know me? ......Oh that's right, you're my seatmate."
- Zaira - "You remember me... Oh no, he remembers my face!! ...Uh...thanks for picking up my keys for me."
- Suichiro - "You're welcome. (looks at Zaira's car) Is this car yours?"
- Zaira - "Yes it is."
- Suichiro - "I see."
- Zaira - "Uh...I 'm thinking...it would be unfair if I know your name and you don't know mine. Your name's Suichiro, right? I'm Zaira Akawa."
- Suichiro - "Akawa, you say?"
- Zaira - "?Huh? Uh...yes."
- Suichiro - "...hmm..."
- Zaira - "W-What is it?"
- Suichiro - "...It's nothing."
- Zaira - "Oh, I see... uhm, by the way, you don't happen...to be...busy?"
- Suichiro - "No, not at all. Why?"
- Zaira - "Uhm...uh...would it be okay if...you would come...to my house...??"
- Suichiro - "?? Why?"
- Zaira - " *cough cough* Well, I told my mom my friends would be coming over, but they said they were busy. Right about now, Mom should be getting the snacks ready. It would be a waste if no one came so...............will you?"
- Suichiro - "Hmm, I've got nothing else to do so...okay."
- Zaira - "Great! Let's go then! (in mind) Man, what a way to welcome a transfer student..."



*Zaira's house*


- Zaira - (opens door) "Mom, I'm home."
- Zinaida - (walks from kitchen)"Welcome back, Zaira. So, did your friends come alo-- (notices Suichiro) Oh my."
- Zaira - "...Uhm... *cough cough* Mom, I'd like you to meet Suichiro. He...just transferred to my school. We're in the same class."
- Zinaida - "A new classmate, you say? What a handsome young man. Transfers during summer vacation are happening lately these days, I wouldn't be surprised."
- Suichiro - "Pleased to meet you, Mrs. Akawa." (bow)
- Zinaida - (chuckle) "No need to be so formal. Zaira, I'm gonna go get the snacks. Why don't you two sit down?"
- Zaira - "Okay."

- Zaira - "So, this is it. Nothing much around here." (a moment of silence)
- Suichiro - "...Akawa-san, may I ask you a question?"
- Zaira - "?? Uh sure, what is it?"
- Suichiro - "Did you happen to be on Mt. Yabitsu about two weeks ago?"
- Zaira - "Uh...yes............. !!"

(simultaneously)
- Suichiro - "Then you must be--... I knew it, you were the..."
- Zaira - "Then you must be-- !! I knew it! You were the..."


- Suichiro - "...The one who beat Sanada."
- Zaira - "...The one who was staring at me."


- Zinaida - (holding snack tray) "My, aren't we lively here? Zaira, I didn't know you're now getting friendly these days. I thought you were a shy-type."
- Zaira - "Mom, did you really have to say it in front of somebody else?!"
- Zinaida - "Ahaha, sorry dear. I didn't mean to slip. Well, I better leave you two alone." (puts snack tray on center table and leaves)


- Zaira - "*grumble* ...Sorry about, my Mom just wants to make me laugh. But I like that personality of hers. Oh yes, where were we? Ah! Right, at Mt. Yabitsu, you...kept......staring at me..."
- Suichiro - "Did I? Sorry about that, I didn't intend to stare at you."
- Zaira - "Is...uh...that so..."
- Suichiro - "I might have an idea on what you're thinking right now. From that experience, to you I'm a suspicious person, now that I've transferred to your school. Even more suspicious is that we're in the same class. Don't get the wrong idea, I transferred not because I'm after you, but because of family and financial matters."
- Zaira - "...I uh...see..."
- Suichiro - "Wait a second, you had a wrong impression on me??"
- Zaira - "...Ehehe..."
- Suichiro - "...And that all of what I said is true, that I'm some kind of 'stalker' to you?"
- Zaira - "...Mm hmm..."
- Suichiro - "......Damn, this is so messed up... I apologize for all of this."
- Zaira - "Ahehe, you don't have to. Whew, I'm just glad everything's clear now."
- Suichiro - "Sorry, it's just that, I was surprised."
- Zaira - "?? Surprised?"
- Suichiro - "Sanada may be just an above-average racer, but everyone knows for sure he's unbeatable at his home turf."
- Zaira - "Suichiro-san, you like street racing?"
- Suichiro - "Yes."
- Zaira - "A-And cars, too?"
- Suichiro - "Yes, a lot. Well, now that our conversation is now about cars and racing, I'd like to take this opportunity. Now I know that you also like street racing, I thought you might be interested in circuit racing as well. I assume you already know of the race track east of Shimotsuma City?"
- Zaira - "You mean the Tsukuba Circuit?"
- Suichiro - "No, Tsukuba Circuit is WEST of Shimotsuma City. I'm talking about the race track that just recently opened. I thought you already know about it."
- Zaira - "No, I don't."

Suichiro pulls out a piece of paper, a brochure of some kind, from his bag and hands it over to Zaira.

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- Suichiro - "At the front is a map of the course. It's a bit short, not more than one-and-a-half kilometers. But it does have a straighforward layout, which makes it a challenging circuit. (Zaira flips the paper) At the back is a map and directions on how to get there. Races are held every Sunday. Since there are no classes on Sundays, I thought I'd go over there."
- Zaira - "You're going to participate in the races?"
- Suichiro - "No, I'm just going to take a look. I can't use my car right now."
- Zaira - "What are you driving?"
- Suichiro - "A Nissan Silvia S15."
- Zaira - "S15, that's not a bad car."
- Suichiro - "I know, thanks...So, do you plan to go?"
- Zaira - "Gee, I dunno, I still have to ask permission from my dad."
- Suichiro - "I see... (looks at cellphone, clock reads 6:30 P.M.) Crap, it's already late. Not good, I have a missed call. (Stands up) Akawa-san, I'll be heading back home now."
- Zaira - "Oh, I'd better join you outside."


*front door, outside*

- Suichiro - "Thanks for the food and hospitality."
- Zaira - "You're welcome."
- Suichiro - "Well, I'll be going now."
- Zaira - "Wait, you know how to get back to your house?"
- Suichiro - "Yes, don't worry."
- Zaira - "Oh, okay..."
- Suichiro - "See you at school tomorrow."
- Zaira - "See ya!"

*living room*

- Zaira - " *sigh* What a day..."
- Tori - " 'Suichiro-san, you like racing?' "
- Zaira - "Huh? Dad? *gasp* Don't tell me you-- !!"
- Tori - " 'A-And cars, too?' "
- Zaira - "You've been eavesdropping THE WHOLE TIME!!"
- Tori - " 'You mean the Tsukuba Circuit?' "
- Zaira - "How could you do this to me?!"
- Tori - " 'No, I don't.' "

Zaira punches Tori on the side.

- Tori - "Ow! C-Calm down, sweety. Sheesh, girls these days just can't take a joke..."

Zinaida then slaps Tori in the face.

- Tori - "Ouch! What was that for!"
- Zinaida - "Excuse me?! What's that supposed to mean?!"
- Tori - "C'mon, honey, you know I was just...kidding, ahehe......uhhh.......oh dear, two girls taking on one guy, this is so unfair...................................I'm dead..."


*the next day, September 2, 2019. School, classroom. 8:00 AM*


- Zaira - (as soon as she enters the classroom...)"Hey, uh, Suichiro-san..."
- Suichiro - "Yes?"
- Zaira - "You said yesterday, you're going to the race track in Shimotsuma City, right?"
- Suichiro - "Yes. So, are you going too?"
- Zaira - "Uh huh, my dad wants to come along, too. I'm going to race there, I like to know how it feels like when you're racing in a circuit."
- Suichiro - "I see. I'll be expecting you to come over this Sunday, then."
- Zaira - "Yeah." (takes her seat)

- Kimiko - "Wow, that's something new, Zaira. How did you two get along?"
- Ayane - "Did you make friends with your 'stalker' ?"
- Zaira - "Shut up! He is not my stalker!"
- Ayane - "Then who is?"
- Zaira - "Nobody!"
- Ayane - "Hahaha!"
- Kimiko - "Ahaha...but seriously, how did you get along with him? What happened?"
- Zaira - "Long story, I'll tell you later."






While classes are going on...

- Zaira - (spacing out)"...Circuit racing...... come to think of it, this will be my first time racing in a closed circuit. I wonder how it feels like...is it different compared to street racing?? .........Only one way to find out..."













next on Red-Zone : Chapter 4 - Different Grounds


don't miss it!!



First race will be in the next chapter.., ;)



*edit - note: big thanks to AMG for the Motorland track map.., 👍
 
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First race in the next chapter, good to hear.:)

Nice chapter there, I like how you've changed Tori's and Zinaida's personalities so they seem more "parental", which really helps with the image that they ARE older and parents now.:)
 
Chapter 4 - Different Grounds


- Zaira - (spacing out)"...Circuit racing...... come to think of it, this will be my first time racing in a closed circuit. I wonder how it feels like...is it different compared to street racing?? .........Only one way to find out..."




*a few days later... September 8, 2019. Zaira's house*


- Tori - "Zaira, are you ready?"
- Zaira - "Yup. C'mon Dad, let's hurry, I wanna see the race track!"
- Tori - "Ahaha, no need to rush dear, Shimotsuma City's just a 30-minute drive from here."
- Zaira - "But that'll turn into one hour if we catch heavy traffic."
- Tori - "All right, all right."
- Zinaida - "Seems like you two are very excited. (kisses Zaira in the cheek) Take care, sweety."
- Zaira - "Yes, Mom."
- Zinaida - "Take care of yourself. Watch over Zaira, okay?"
- Tori - "Why not? (kisses Zinaida in the lips)"

- Zaira - "Bye Mom! We'll be back in the afternoon!"




*conversation while driving*

- Tori - "It's going to be your first time racing in a closed circuit. Are you excited?"
- Zaira - "...I'm getting both excited and nervous."
- Tori - "I felt the same too back then. My first experience in a race track... I can still remember it was in Germany. It was pretty memorable, because it felt different compared to racing in the mountain roads. I had a hard time adjusting to the new feeling, but somehow I managed to. Don't worry honey, I'm sure you can do the same."
- Zaira - "Yeah!"
- Tori - "By the way, you do know how to get to Shimotsuma City, don't you?"
- Zaira - "Of course, I read the map carefully, and...oh no! the left turn we're supposed to take is a hundred meters away!"
- Tori - "And we're at the rightmost part of the freeway-- Whoa!!" (sways to the right) "Hey! You should be more care-- (sways to the left) *bump* Oww!"

Zaira dodges traffic so that they can take the next left turn.

- Zaira - "That was close! Dad, are you okay?!"
- Tori - "(in pain)...No... m-my head...hit the window...rngh......."
- Zaira - "I'm sorry Dad, I'm really sorry!!"
- Tori - "(still in pain) ...Ugh...next time, leave...the driving to me......"



*at the race track in Shimotsuma City*

- Zaira - "I wonder where he is..."
- Tori - "Who, your friend?"
- Zaira - "He said he'd come over...oh, there he is! Suichiro!!"

- Suichiro - (looks around) "...?? Akawa-san. So, you did come."
- Zaira - "Dad, I'd like you to meet Suichiro. He's the new classmate that came over to our house a few days ago."
- Suichiro - "Pleased to meet you, Mr. Akawa. I'm honored to make your acquiantance." (bow) *in mind* "So, I've finally met the famous Tori Akawa in person."
- Tori - "C'mon, don't be getting so formal and serious now because of my status. Just treat me like I'm an average grown-up man."
- Suichiro - "I apologize."
- Tori - "Hahaha! Hey Zaira, you gotta teach your friend how to loosen up!"

- Suichiro - *in mind* "What the...is this really THE Tori Akawa?? When he's on TV, he looks so serious behind the wheel and at the pits. But off the track, he's so......I don't know, carefree?" "Akawa-san, you like to see the race track, right? Follow me, it's this way."

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- Zaira - " 'Motorland', huh..."
- Tori - "The first and the last corners are just a walking distance from each other."
- Zaira - "It's pretty small."
- Suichiro - "Well, this course IS designed for beginners."
- Zaira - "I can't wait to race, I'm so hyped up!!"
- Suichiro - "If you're going to sign up for a practice and race session, the registration office is right over there."
- Zaira - "Thanks, we'll be going there now. How about you? Where will you stay?"
- Suichiro - "Me? I suppose I'll take a look around at some of the cars."
- Zaira - "Okay, see you later!"


- Suichiro - (looks at Zaira's MR2) "Except in Mt. Yabitsu, Where have I seen this car before...? ......!! Could it be...?"



*an hour later*

- Zaira - "Yoshi, I'll finally get to drive around the course!"
- Tori - "Almost forgot, here's the radio that came along with the registration, place it in the cupholder so that it's secure. Take care, Zaira."


Zaira rolls out of the pits to begin the practice session.


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- Tori - "Zaira, can you hear me? Is the radio working?"
- Zaira - "Loud and clear, Dad."

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- Tori - "Good. Have a warm-up around the course first. Your practice session begins when you cross the starting line. Once you cross it, you have three laps. Got it?"
- Zaira - "Got it. ...My MR2 may look plain outside, but it's actually tuned. Alright, if the setup worked well on Mt. Yabitsu, it should also work well here."

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- Zaira - "Muffler sounds good, no problems so far."

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- Zaira - "?? Two corners that appear as one... that's a bit deceiving."

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- Zaira - "That's the pit lane entrance. That must mean this is the final section of the course."

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- Zaira - "Suspension's right on top on this last corner."

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- Zaira - "Whoa! Too early on the gas there."

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- Zaira - "Gotta be more careful next time around. Okay, my practice session begins now, time to go full out!"

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- Zaira - "Brakes are good, heavy braking is a snap."

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- Zaira - "Controlling the gas is easy on NA cars. No lag and all."

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- Zaira - "I have to treat these two corners as one."

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- Zaira - "The course is actually well-designed, a straight follows the slow corners."

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- Zaira - "The sweeper's coming up. There will be no more mistakes this time."

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- Zaira - "Yosh! That was clean! Alright, two more laps."

- Suichiro - (sees Zaira go past the starting line) "...Hmm......"

*after two laps*


- Tori - "Honey, can you hear me? That's three laps now. Time to get back to the pits."
- Zaira - "Okay."

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*at the pits*

- Tori - "So, how was the course?"
- Zaira - "Great! It was fun driving around it!"
- Tori - "Good to hear that."

- Zaira - "Hey Suichiro!! Did you see me practice?"
- Suichiro - "I did. You were pretty fast down the straight. Your car sounded and behaved different... it's tuned, isn't?"
- Zaira - "Yes, it's tuned."
- Suichiro - "I see."
- Zaira - "It's just pretty basic tuning."
- Suichiro - "What's the power level?"
- Zaira - "That I don't know. Dad, how much power does my car have?"
- Tori - "The MR2? Let's see...I think it generates around 240ps."
- Suichiro - "240ps, that's not a bad number."
- Zaira - "You think so?"
- Suichiro - "Yes. Just by listening to the car's exhaust sound, I can tell the acceleration is pretty smooth."
- Zaira - "Wow, you can tell just by listening? That's amazing!"
- Suichiro - "It's nothing, really."
- Zaira - "Oh shoot, I have to get ready for the race. You better watch me, okay? See ya!"
- Suichiro - "...Uh...okay."



The time came, the grid Zaira's in will now begin the race.

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- Zaira - "Dad purposely put me in the last position, I can't believe it! Oh well, I too, wanted to give myself a challenge. It's a short course, and I only have two laps."

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Toyota MR2 G-Limited (SW20) - Zaira Akawa

Tune / Upgrades:

axle-back exhaust
high performance spark plugs
thinner head gaskets
high-efficiency exhaust manifold
heavy-duty clutch plate
lightweight flywheel
non-adjustable sports springs
street-sports tires w/ Enkei 5-spoke wheels

Specs:

197 hp -> 234 hp
151 ft.lb -> 178 ft.lb


- Zaira - "Alright, this is it, MR2. Are you ready? Let's go!"

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This will be the first time Zaira will be competing in a closed circuit. Race 1, begin!!


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- Zaira - "Whoa, it's pretty cramped once you place a grid here."

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- Skyline driver - "Dammit! I went too fast ON THE FIRST CORNER!"

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- Taurus driver - "I knew bringing a Taurus here was a bad idea..."

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- Celica driver - "...Baka."
- S2000 driver - "?? ...The hell..??"
- Zaira - "Huh? What are the guys in front doing??"

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- Zaira - " *gasp* Whew, that was a close ca--"

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- Zaira - "--Whoa!! Hey, watch it!"

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- Zaira - "I just hope these 3 give me a good challenge."

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- S2000 driver - "That MR2 keeps up with my S2...no doubt, that thing's not stock."

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- S2000 driver - "Dammit! A pass on the outside?! Don't think you can get away with it!"
- Zaira - "Hehe, what do you think of that?"

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- Zaira - "Okay, this is stupid. Just how dumb can you guys get?! BRAKE!!"
- Celica driver - "No good!"

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- Zaira - "Another easy pass...this is getting lame..."

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- Zaira - "I wonder if I can still call this a 'race'..."

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- Zaira - "One more position and I'll be the leader."

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- Supra driver - "Thanks to those two losers in front, I was able to grab 1st place. No way I'll hand this position over to you!"

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- Zaira - "This guy knows how to defend his position. Good, I like it."

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- Supra driver - "1st place is mine, stay there."

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- Supra driver - " S:censored: !! I lost concentration!"

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- Supra driver - "Grrr!!"

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- Zaira - "Can't believe you easily lost to pressure. Oh well, 1st place is mine for the taking!"

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- Zaira - "Only thing left to do is to hold this position."

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- S2000 driver - "At this rate, it will be impossible to catch up to that MR2. I have to do something."
- Zaira - "I'm kind of...enjoying this...driving around race tracks. But the opponents suck!"

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- Supra driver - "That car's fast! Even my Supra Turbo can't catch up!"

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- Zaira - "Last corner...better not spoil it."

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- Supra driver - "Shoot! Not again!"

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- S2000 driver - "I guess 2nd place will have to suffice..."

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- Zaira - "All right!! I won!!"



*back at the pits*

- Zaira - "Yoshi yoshi!! I won, Dad, I won!!"
- Tori - "Congratulations, sweety!"
- Zaira - "Hehe, thanks Dad!"
- Suichiro - "Congratulations on the win, Akawa-san."
- Zaira - "Thanks, Suichiro. Although I'm not that contented, because some of my opponents didn't really give a fight. But still I won!"
- Tori - "Say, why don't we go celebrate??"
- Zaira - "That's a great idea, Dad! Hey Suichiro, why don't you come celebrate with us??"
- Suichiro - "Huh? Uh sure, I'd like to...but--whoa!!" (Zaira drags him)
- Zaira - "Cool! C'mon Dad, let's go!"
- Tori - "Uh...honey..."
- Suichiro - "Akawa-san, chotto matte! Aren't you forgetting something?"
- Zaira - "What?"
- Suichiro - "Your MR2 is a two-seater. There are 3 of us here."
- Zaira - "...........Riiiiight........Man, I always forgot..."
- Tori - "There's always a next time, Zaira."
- Zaira - "...Okay. (at Suichiro) Come over next time, promise??"
- Suichiro - "...Uh, okay, I promise."
- Zaira - "All right! I'll see you tomorrow at school then!"
- Suichiro - "I'll see you later, take care."






- Tori - "...So, it has finally begun...her career..."






next on Red-Zone : Chapter 5 - ...And so it Begins



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The new chapter is great, finally a race :D Maybe it was an easy win, but there are more to come :mischievous: (I hope so at least :lol:)

Also:

Dad, how power does my car have?" -> "How much power" 👍
 
Excellent chapter! Although Zaira's right, the opposition sucks... But thats a bug in GT4. I have fought powerful cars and won there in a... Oh well I forgot the name of the car. I don't play GT4 in ages... Anyway, nice new chapter!
 
- Suichiro - "What's the power level?"

I'm probably on my own here, but I got a chuckle out of that. Blame Dragonball Z. >_>

Tori getting beaten up by the women of the house, priceless. :sly:👍 Zaira's being all cute with Suichiro, definately going to be keeping an eye on those two. :lol:

What a great start to Zaira's racing career though, at least she got some practise at emergency dodging. Poor Taurus. :dopey:

Oh to the black Supra driver: Should've came to me about setting that thing up. :P
 
Nice to see that all of us will still drive the same cars 10 years into the future :lol: Seems like Sci-fi movies got it wrong again.
 
Great new chapter d24/7 👍


What in hell is a Taurus SHO doing in Japan? I mean, the engine was built by Yamaha and all but still...

:P

Really? The SHO's V8 is designed by Yamaha? I thought it was only the earlier model's V6.

Nice to see that all of us will still drive the same cars 10 years into the future :lol: Seems like Sci-fi movies got it wrong again.

:lol:
 
The new chapter is great, finally a race :D Maybe it was an easy win, but there are more to come :mischievous: (I hope so at least :lol:)

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Dad, how power does my car have?" -> "How much power" 👍

corrected.., 👍

Which one of these things is not like the others? :sly:

What in hell is a Taurus SHO doing in Japan? I mean, the engine was built by Yamaha and all but still...

:P

odd one out, lol.., I spent probably one hour getting a grid that would contain Japanese cars only.., that was the closest one I could get to.., or perhaps you would like to see a Ford F-150 instead? :lol:

I'm probably on my own here, but I got a chuckle out of that. Blame Dragonball Z. >_>

Tori getting beaten up by the women of the house, priceless. :sly:👍 Zaira's being all cute with Suichiro, definately going to be keeping an eye on those two. :lol:

The beating up should be enough for now, let's give Tori a break.., ;)

What a great start to Zaira's racing career though, at least she got some practise at emergency dodging.

:lol:

Nice to see that all of us will still drive the same cars 10 years into the future :lol: Seems like Sci-fi movies got it wrong again.

:lol: great Chapter!

Great new chapter d24/7 👍

:lol:


damn you guys.., :lol::lol:
 
How on earth did you get the shot of all those cars in a row?

Quite a few hours of editing in GIMP. I sent him about 6 or 7 different shots of the same thing to see which one would turn out best.

Long process, but to get recognition for it makes it all worthwhile. :)
 
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