The Crazy Expensive Car! - TRIAL FF - Quest Of Love - Prologue

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I KNEW IT. I KNEW IT!!!

I felt that it was short :( didn't know how to prolong it!
 
Don't worry, just edit the end of the prologue to fit something more along the lines of...

"I walked to his tombstone and pondered till the end of the day... I could almost feel his presence. It's still too hard to make a decision, would I be successful, would I just be left broken again? I think it needs a little more time."

You could rearrange it to your liking or ignore my gesture, I'm not overly fussed. :)
 
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