I know it's good, but I could have made it great. More patience and time between chapters would have been better. As the school year starts, and my schedule gets regular, I'll begin working on a masterpiece, I guess.
Put it this way: BEST RACE STORY I'VE EVER READ.
The Magnum Opus. If you can top it, I will roll over and choke.
I can't wait to see the next masterpiece from the StigNumbers world-famous workshop.
I would like the setup for the "secret weapon" RUF.