Street Elite - Chapter 9 - New Beginnings - (26/7/11)

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Is the Hayate, Hiroto's brother the same Hayate as the limo chauffeur? I'm confused.
 
Is the Hayate, Hiroto's brother the same Hayate as the limo chauffeur? I'm confused.

Haha, no. Hiroto's brother is Hayate Iwasa. The chauffeur was Hayate Nakamura. Now if Hayate was Hiroto's cousin, opposed to brother, then he would be the chauffeur.
 
I had a hard time beating you. Is it RWD? I can't believe you spun in a FF 63hp car, if it is FWD.

It's a FF, 63HP, 507Kg Tall+soft suspension race car with racing slicks and optomized gearing that was set up specifically for Tsukuba:sly:

*BTW, I spun out using the E-brake, since you can still spin the front tyres with the rear locked!
 
Haha, no. Hiroto's brother is Hayate Iwasa. The chauffeur was Hayate Nakamura. Now if Hayate was Hiroto's cousin, opposed to brother, then he would be the chauffeur.

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Hmmm... I would not like to be him!
Now I see why you used Cyan
 
^ Same here, I used comfort mediums too.
 
Hiring over!

Reserved Spaces:

Honda Integra Type R (DC2) - Jai-AE86
Civic EG6 - Driftking18594
Civic EK9 - Yellomello


I will send them with the correct parts, so don't worry about spending cash. Also, we will do this Saturday.
 
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Sign me up for the EG Civic!
 
Okay everyone, sorry if some people were to late, but there will be other chances! For the 2 who signed up, we will do this on Saturday around 6 PM GMT. Is that fine?
 
People have been doing biographies, so here's mine. . .

Major Characters

Ryou Takishida
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Age - 19
Car - Daihatsu MIRA (Highly Tuned)
Enjoys Driving - Yes
Personality - Calm, furious at certain moments
Likes - Cars, Wangan Midnight, Street Racing, Super GT
Dislikes - Alchohol, Annoying Brats
Lives - With his younger sister
Childhood - Lonely, hated school
Notable Fact - His parents moved away, thus leaving him to take care of his sister

Aiko Takishida
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Age - 17
Car - Mazda Autozam AZ-1
Enjoys Driving - Yes
Personality - Kind-Hearted
Likes - Cars, Cute Things, Anime
Dislikes - Being lonely all the time, Bullies, Violence
Lives - With her older brother
Childhood - Many friends, enjoys school when it's with her friends
Notable Fact - Although she's younger than Ryou, she does the cooking and everything

Maki Okazakawa
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Age - 19
Car - None
Enjoys Driving - Meh, doesn't really drive
Personality - Kind, Sweet, Calm
Likes - Reading, Anime, Violin. . . Ryou (;))
Dislikes - Rudeness, Smart-asses, Justin Bieber
Lives - With her sister, as her parents passed away
Childhood - Had friends that always hung out with her, enjoyed life
Notable Fact - She's in love with Ryou, but hides it

Yuki Shizuko
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Age - 19
Car - Nissan 240SX (RPS13)
Enjoys Driving - Pretty much
Personality - Quiet, Intelligent, Kind
Likes - Sushi, Nissan, Books, Computers
Dislikes - Rap, Rude people
Lives - Alone
Childhood - Had friends, but rarely talked/hung out with them, was the smarter kid.
Notable Fact - He gives off a rather girlish appearance, but doesn't care at all.

Kenshin Sasakawa
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Age - 19
Car - Toyota Corolla Levin
Enjoys Driving - Yes
Personality - Calm, furious at certain moments
Likes - Cars, Stories, Super GT
Dislikes - Horror, Guns, VW Beetles
Lives - With his dad, as his mom died from a disease
Childhood - Had many friends, hated school
Notable Fact - He often fights with his dad

Osamu Takamoto
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Age - 20
Car - Acura NSX
Enjoys Driving - Yes
Personality - Friendly, Rather talkative, Energetic
Likes - Cars, Food, Television, Nice houses
Dislikes - Rude people, Annoying people, Rap, Justin Bieber
Lives - With his sister
Childhood - Had quite a lot of friends, pretty much had a good life.
Notable Fact - He is a rookie in the Super GT area.

Nobuyuki Takahitoshi
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Age - 19
Car - Mazda RX-7 FD3S Efini '91
Enjoys Driving - Yes
Personality - Friendly, Social, Outgoing, Energetic
Likes - Television, Friends, RX-7's, Super GT, Trance, Girls
Dislikes - Annoying people, Rap, Bad tasting Food, Justin Bieber, Rebecca Black
Lives - With his friend
Childhood - Well known kid, never felt alone, had many friends
Notable Fact - He's in love with the Vocaloid, Hatsune Miku, but she isn't real, therefore he keeps it a secret from others.



Secondary Characters

Tomoya Miki
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Age - 24
Car - Honda Civic Type R (EK9)
Enjoys Driving - Yes
Likes - Road Trips, Family, Cars
Dislikes - Idiots, Bullies
Personality - Kind and calm
Lives - With his wife and 2 kids
Childhood - Bored-Minded, Often would sneak out of school to look at cars
Notable Fact - Ever since he was married and had kids, he promised to race safer

Daiki Akatsuka
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Age - 21
Car - Nissan Skyline Coupe
Enjoys Driving - Yes
Personality - Hot-Headed
Likes - Cars, Girls, Anime
Dislikes - Loneliness, Hamburgers
Lives - Alone
Childhood Lonely, would often skip school
Notable Fact - Arrested for jacking a car at 18

Minor Characters

Arata Yokokawa
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Age - 24
Car - Toyota Bb
Enjoys Driving - Sort of
Personality - Ambitious
Likes - Scion's, Cars, FF's, Alcohol
Dislikes - Kei cars, Dumb people
Lives - With his older brother
Childhood - Laughed at for liking a Toyota Bb
Notable Fact - Forced his mom to buy a Toyota Bb for him at 16 years old

Masaru Mitsuoka
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Age - 19
Car - Acura Integra (DC2)
Enjoys Driving - Yes
Personality - Genious, often got to skip school because of it
Likes - Acura's, Cars, Seafood
Dislikes - Heavy Metal, Bullies
Lives - With his younger brother, and younger sister
Childhood - Had many friends, people often asked him for help
Notable Fact - Prefers Acura's over Honda's

Ren Yasuda
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Age - 20
Car - Honda Civic (EG6)
Enjoys Driving - Definitely
Personality - Rough
Likes - FF's, Cars, Alcohol
Dislikes - Non-FF's
Lives - With his girlfriend
Childhood - Always tried to impress ladies, generous
Notable Fact - Hates other cars that aren't FF

Akira Yoshina
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Age - 19
Car - Ferrari 512BB
Enjoys Driving - If in a Ferrari
Personality - Hooning, Kind at times
Likes - Ferrari's, Anime, Mountain's, Trance
Dislikes - Slow cars, cheap cars, rock music
Lives - Alone
Childhood - Popular kid
Notable Fact - He has the only Ferrari in Kyoto-Gion
 
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Hey, love this fanfic. :-) I have a random question for you. Where do you get the avatars for your bios from? Searched for a program on google the other day but not really any solid results. Would be appreciated if you could help me out. :-)
 
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Note - If text is Italic, that means they're talking in their mind.
Note 2 - Haruna is Tomoya's wife, ever since he got married, he promised to drive safer.
Note 3 - Some text is black, those are for the minors.

Chapter 4 - The Grand Finale Must End With Defeat

"So, you were good enough to beat Arata, eh?"
"Uh. . . I. . . I guess."
"What are you talking about? It's a crappy fridge, anything can beat it."
"So, I go home now?"
"No. . . Now you have to battle Tomoya"
"Tomoya?"
Suddenly, a man of about 24 walks over.
"He doesn't look street racer material."
"Nice to meet you, Tomoya Miki, and you are?"
"Ryou Takishida, nice to meet you."
"Cut the chit-chat and lets race!"
Ryou took a look at Tomoya's car, a Honda Civic Type R (EK9)

EK9 Specs
BHP - 465
Weight - 1132kg
Aerodynamics - Slight
Known Top Speed (For Now) - 195 MPH (318 KMH)
Owner - Tomoya Miki

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"Let''s get started! Start the countdown!"
"5. . ."
"4. . ."
"3. . ."
"2. . ."
"1. . ."
"Go!"
The cars set off. . .
"Haruna, I promise to drive safely. . ."
"Eh? I'm tired. Let's just get this over with."
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"Hmm? That's a MIRA with only 202 HP, and he's passing me? Is that possible?
"I should get Coffee after this race. . ."
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"Yes EK9! Catch up! I knew this would come in handy."
"Is that M.O.V.E? I hear M.O.V.E."
As Tomoya catched up, the turn came, and his EK9 wouldn't turn.
"Damn, understeer!"
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"Hmm? Back there, aren't you?"
"Stay calm Tomoya, it doesn't matter, it's just racing, besides, I have a great family."
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"Your still back there seems boring."
"Dive into Stream. . ."
"Yawn, will he catch up so this race will be more exciting?"
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"Yawn, c'mon, you can go faster, can't you?"
"Let's try and work on a racing line."
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"Seems as if I'm alone."
"You can't see me, but you will, very soon."
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"Did he crash or something?"
"Damn, I think I'll lose."
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"I feel as if I'm doing a time trial"
"Haruna, please give me your luck."
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"This guy's good, no doubt."
"Guess I'll have some fun trying to drift."
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"Going very well for an FF drift."
"I see smoke, I must be getting closer."
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"Oh 🤬!"
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"Whew, that was close."
"Now's my chance to try and catch up!"
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"I see you."
"Finally, this battle can actually get started."
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"Yes, that's it EK, catch up!"
"Here we go. . . MIRA."
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"I won't make the same mistake as last time here!"
"Hmm?"
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"Finally decide to attack, eh?"
"Finally. My luck is coming."
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"Will I win?"
"I'm catching up. . ."
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"Damn, understeer again!"
"This is why my MIRA is great. . ."
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Ryou pulled away as they passed by the lit trees.
"I'm going to win, for sure."
"EK, I know you can go faster. . ."
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"Still behind, this is actually a quite boring race."
They kept on going.
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"I can't lose! I can't!"
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"Faster! Please. . . Faster!"
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"I see you! It's not to late to catch up."
"Catching up?"
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"Okay, let's end this."
"Please Haruna! Keep your luck with me!"
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The race ended, Tomoya had screwed up and spun out, but remained safe.
"Great race, Ryou."
"You too, Tomoya"
"Cut the talking! Masaru, get over here!"
"H. . . Hello. I'm Masaru Mitsuoka"
"Ryou Takishida, nice to meet you."
Ryou took a look at Masaru's Acura Integra, which looked fast in his opinion.

Integra Specs
BHP - 354
Weight - 1032kg
Aerodynamics - Slight
Known Top Speed (For Now) - 186 MPH (299 KMH)
Owner - Masaru Mitsuoka

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"Okay! Let's start!"
"5. . ."
"4. . ."
"3. . ."
"2. . ."
"1. . ."
"Go!"
They started off, quite slowly actually.
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"Damn, revved it badly."
"My calculation was correct, I shall start accelerating past him now."
As Masaru was right with his before-race calculations, his car did accelerate past Ryou.
"The hell. . .?"
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"I will pass him using the inside of a corner then!"
Ryou's car started to speed closer to Masaru.
"Huh? That car is faster than expected."
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"Haha, understeer is common for FF's."
"Too bad this race happened before my suspension tune."
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Ryou's car slipped past.
"This guy's good, even if he understeers, he can catch up."
"Unbelievable speed on such a tight corner!"
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After Ryou overtook, he made a medium-length gap between them.
"That corner is my first attack point."
"Although you made a gap, I still see you in my vicinity."
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"His car is faster on straights, of course."
"Don't underestimate my Acura, it's faster than it looks."
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They went a bit farther, and Ryou was still in the lead.
"I'm tired."
"This guy's good."
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They went through the straight just after that corner, and headed to the next corner. Coming out first of the corner is Ryou.
"I wonder how Aiko's doing in Ibaraki."
"This guy really is fast, no doubting the idea. I'll start another calculation."
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They still went further, Ryou in the lead, Masaru in the back, calculating.
"I love leading."
"Let's see, dimension, length. . ."
Masaru's car started to slide.
"Hm?"
"Damn."
Masaru steered the car back and continued the calculation.
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"What's he doing? What's making him slow?"
"Distance, width. . "
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"Maybe I should have a little fun with handbrake drifting."
"X times Y equals. . ."
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"This is a breeze."
"6 to the 2nd power, times X, times. . ."
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"This night is dark, and these nice trees make it beautiful."
"Times pi, divided by 16. . ."
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"Hmm."
"My calculation is finished; I will have a perfect finish on the second lap!"
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They went along the straight.
"This long straight is his attack point."
"Yes! Nearing lap 2!"
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As usual, Masaru's calculation was correct, and he overtook
"My calculation is correct, I'm overtaking."
"No worries, I'll overtake in the tunnel."
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"Damn understeer."
"Here I go."
Ryou headed torward the inside.
"Oh yeah, this is his attacking point."
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But just as Ryou was about to overtake, his Mira slid.
"Damn, losing traction."
"Hmm? It seems as if he's losing traction from the tires."
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As a result of Ryou's mistake, they drove to the end of the straight, where they tackled the second corner.
"He won't catch up, my calculations are unbeatable."
I will pass, I know I will, soon. . ."
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They headed to another straight, and Ryou took the lead once again.
"Hmm, he's good, but my plan is working."
"Oh, I'm in the lead?"
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They drove a bit more, and Masaru took the lead again, they then found another corner.
"So far, so good. . ."
"This is tiring."
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They drove a bit more, and then Ryou took the lead, AGAIN.
". . ."
"This guy is way better than I expected."
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On the way to the Half-circular turn, Masaru caught up to Ryou.
"Fast car. . ."
"No-one can beat my fascinating calculations!"
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It ended up as Masaru coming out in the lead, and they drove a bit more, and reached the tunnel.
"My attack point is near."
"Definitely going to win."
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They reached Ryou's attack point, and his Mira began to catch up.
"Hmm?"
"Here goes nothing. . ."
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His Mira caught up more.
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Ryou's Mira then made the final speed, and overtook.
"Victory."
"What? Impossible for people to beat my calculations!"
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Ryou stepped out of the car, and the team was staring. Ren began clapping slowly.
"Congratulations, looks like you beat the teams best racer, but you still have me! Now get in the car, and let's race our 1 lap deathmatch!"
"Oh, I'm so tired."

Honda Civic (EG6) Specs
BHP - 426
Weight - 1035
Aerodynamics - None
Known Top Speed (For Now) - 198
Owner - Ren Yasuda

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"5
4
3
2
1
Go!"

The cars started out, with the EG6 in first.
"Heh heh heh."
"So tired. . .
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Ryou neared to Ren, but Ren didn't agree, and bunted Ryou into the wall.
"Hmm? Damn you. . ."
"Going to win."
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They came to the first corner of the reversed version, but something odd happened. . .
"Understeer? How?"
"Haha, this is great!"
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"I'm pretty far back, I better draft and catch up. The sooner done, the sooner I can head to somewhere and go to sleep."
"That Mira will be mine very soon."
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"GOING TO WIN!"
"Wow, these trees really light u. . . Wait, I'm catching up."
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Ryou continued to draft and began to catch up.
"Passed him?"
"WHAT? HOW?"
Yes, Ryou has passed Ren nearing a corner.
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"HE'S PULLING AWAY? IS THIS POSSIBLE?!"
"Getting more tired. . ."
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"HOW IS THIS 🤬 POSSIBLE? I CAN'T BE LOSING!"
"Nearing that nice tunnel."
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They reached the tunnel, and Ryou was still in the lead.
"Impossiblefor you to pass, I'm going to win now."
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''NO!!!!"
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Someone in the audience appeared, and took a snapshot of Ryou's win, a race everyone will remember. . .

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The End of Chapter 4

Footnote - Sorry this took so long to release, school was very hard :indiff:
 
Great chapter! Now I see why the time was so great between chapters...
Also, I want to race your MIRA someday...
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Great chapter! Now I see why the time was so great between chapters...
Also, I want to race your MIRA someday...
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Thanks, hopefully Street Elite will get more views again, so I don't have to go to plan B and make a new Fan Fiction.

You could race my MIRA soon
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^ Please, Miyu's S15 will kick your asses. :sly:

Great chapter, it was really fun driving the EG, even though it handled like a brick.
 
Thanks for the great compliments everyone, I will be continuing Street Elite, and chapter 5 will be out very soon ;).

Never knew people would actually like a story of a Kei car, but turns out that quite a lot of people like it.
 
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