Also, I've been having thoughts recently about re-doing Vols. 3 & 4. Something about a red-headed young woman in Tokyo just makes me think I've missed a few opportunities. I've re-written Hashiriya once before, so maybe it wouldn't hurt to do so again.
Please do, man, please do
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I remembered the old Race Report forum and after a pang of guilt looking at my abandoned story, I found your old Vol 1 thread, and started reading it again. I gotta say, reading through all of it, you've come a long, long way since you've started.
I find it hard to incorporate humour into writing, but you seem to have gotten that downpat easily, mate:tup:. It's great, reading all these little pop-culture references, and I love how... bizarre some of the things that the characters come out with or do. Akiko on drugs, what a sight to behold
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And your style of writing itself has come a long way. Especially during the story interludes where there isn't any racing; you use literary devices to great effect (given me inspiration, possibly
) and it's great to read through a story that doesn't always take itself very seriously.
10/10 for me, I really should have stuck around
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Although I doubt you remember me anyway
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