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Another good story! đź‘Ť If I were Murray Walker I may scream "Unbeliveable! Look at that! The blue Civic Type-R!!".
And this is my 900th post .
And this is my 900th post .
Meh, the story's alright so far but to be honest, every time I read a chapter I get bored quickly because of the fact that a 317 BHP Civic flies by the majority of racers like they're not even moving. I also don't grasp how a VTEC with a body kit fetched from the bottom of a cereal box can outmaneuver a dedicated sports car like it's nothing. It's uninteresting that way because you know exactly what's going to happen before you begin the plot: The main character of the chapter is going to win, or accomplish something extremely difficult like they're having a cup of tea. And even better; before a loss could be accomplished in "the little VTEC that could," it'll be replaced by something even more ridiculous that can probably run in circles around a sports car like a GT-R somehow.
Good luck with the story anywho, this is just me ranting like always. đź‘Ť
actually, it's not that unrealistic, because the fastest car in this race was the nsx, which has about 290 bhp stock and is rarely tuned to above 350 unless an idiot straps some turbos onto it, so a 317 bhp civic wouldn't be particularly outclassed. And a cereal box bodykit?! The story clearly shows that the civic has been tuned by a professional tuning house a la mine's or hosaka, so one can assume that thanks to innumerable upgrades to suspension, brakes, drivetrain and aerodynamics, the civic also easily qualifies as a "dedicated sports car", with superb handling just like the nsx. Oh, and a lot of the passes were thanks to Yuka's superior driving prowess
nice chapter again Roj. Interested to see what car dex is forced to buy
I understand the gripe. It's the same gripe that people have with Initial D. Although I'd argue that Initial D actually takes it too far sometimes. The Civic is heavily tuned like NSX>GOD said. It would beat a 20 year old NSX that probably doesn't have anywhere near as much tuning, quite easily, before you factor the drivers. Plus, if I'm going to make a chapter where the Civic loses, it's going to be a convincing loss. It would be offensive if it wasnt.Meh, the story's alright so far but to be honest, every time I read a chapter I get bored quickly because of the fact that a 317 BHP Civic flies by the majority of racers like they're not even moving. I also don't grasp how a VTEC with a body kit fetched from the bottom of a cereal box can outmaneuver a dedicated sports car like it's nothing. It's uninteresting that way because you know exactly what's going to happen before you begin the plot: The main character of the chapter is going to win, or accomplish something extremely difficult like they're having a cup of tea. And even better; before a loss could be accomplished in "the little VTEC that could," it'll be replaced by something even more ridiculous that can probably run in circles around a sports car like a GT-R somehow.
Good luck with the story anywho, this is just me ranting like always. đź‘Ť
Plus, if I'm going to make a chapter where the Civic loses, it's going to be a convincing loss. It would be offensive if it wasnt.
hmm.. I'm becoming tempted to start a fan fiction of my own, but to do what I have planned I need the skyline pace car, the one with the lights on the top. Anyone have one they'd be willing to trade for anything?
edit: I'm new to forums, so I don't know if this constitutes as being off topic or inappropriate or whatever. Please excuse me if it is
Good idea but
The lights dont work, however...
I dont want to turn parts of the story into adult material, the furthest I'd go is hinting that such a thing happened. Just trying to keep it reasonably clean for the sake of the AUP.I prefer Fan Fiction Friday over at topless robot myself... but if you could incorporate some of those themes into your next race saga, perhaps in the pits, in the stands, under the hood, and some rams in the rear... you would have a winner on your hands. This just feels too clean for my tastes.
As long as you dont take over the thread, it's fine.hmm.. I'm becoming tempted to start a fan fiction of my own, but to do what I have planned I need the skyline pace car, the one with the lights on the top. Anyone have one they'd be willing to trade for anything?
edit: I'm new to forums, so I don't know if this constitutes as being off topic or inappropriate or whatever. Please excuse me if it is
I see what you did there. To keep things looking slick, I'm only using premiums for main character cars. I appreciate the suggestion though. đź‘ŤRoj if you went with the Kei car buying next chapter, make dex buy the Suzuki Kei WORKS. Get it? A "Kei" car for "Kei" thats called "Kei"?
I want to see Yuka's Reaction when she drives a Smart Car.
Darn, this is amazing - actually has inspired me to make a fanfic of my own. Wait for episode 1 tomorrow
Yeah. I noticed if you flick the high beams off, the left headlight is dimmer than the right.Great chapter, so it's Hitomi with her derpy-eyed C5 Corvette.
By teh way, I feel a bit awkward to say this but was Yuka wearing white panties that time she was tied to teh tree?
Yes, you dirty, dirty man.Is it wrong that I could picture Kei tackling Yuka?
nice chapter, and are Yuka and Hitomi gonna go bowling next?
“So out of the six you picked out, we only managed to remove two…”
And one of them isn't a production car, and the other one sounds like my old kettle.
I just noticed the Cappuccino in your story is exactly the same as the one in my Story.