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Man, another Saturday gone because I was asleep.
Granted, I've been up since 5-something but good lord... Why?
Granted, I've been up since 5-something but good lord... Why?
I'm still getting people commenting on my MAL profile about how good my Shana III review is.
I'm still getting people commenting on my MAL profile about how good my Shana III review is.
What is this madness?!!!
This guy on MALThe Snake of the Festival later takes over as leader of the Bal Masque (As he was their former boss before he was sealed away.), and his goal first is to free his old body (Which of course, is a giant snake.), and he has another thing up his sleeve (He reveals this during the war.) which I won't post about due to spoilers.
Not really madness at all. There has been more feedback on drunk stories of mine than on that review.
Also, you have problems using commas. A lot of problems. Along with what parenthetical comments are. Example
You realize they shouldn't be complete sentences, the bits I've put in bold? They should be separate sentences, not inside of parentheses, provided they are complete sentences (which they aren't) and can stand on their own. If you most have those be in that sentence, then correctly use commas to add them to a sentence. On top of that, parenthetical comments are more to add in random extraneous data or opinions - such as to clarify a word.
Also, .), just looks stupid. You'll avoid part of that by not making sentences in them, but also avoid ending comments where a new though or conjunction begins.
Honestly, if I was grading this, I would give it a D for grammar and style.
DAMMAIT! Pc just broke and 3 series of ongoing anime disappear!
It's not the first time. Lost my Code Geass R2 before now it happen again...
Oh god why. =_=
I feel you bro. 👍
DAMMAIT! Pc just broke and 3 series of ongoing anime disappear!
It's not the first time. Lost my Code Geass R2 before now it happen again...
Oh god why. =_=
And that's why you should get a Mac.
Damn right! big MAC should calm me down for awhile.
Damn right! big MAC should calm me down for awhile.
I rather have extra large fries.
Fixed.Depending on your health, it may calm you down for eternity.
I'd love to see you torture yourself with a few episodes of Naruto, write a really negative review and then watch all of the butthurt Narutards froth at the mouth.22 out of 49 people found my review of Steins;Gate helpful, meaning 27 people are Steins;Gate fanboys who are butthurt about my opinion.
I'm surprised a higher percentage of people find my S;G review helpful than my review of the School Days manga. 9 out of 12 people are School Days fanboys apparently, which seriously depresses me that anyone could be a fan of such idiotic garbage.
I'm more of a McChicken Sandwich guy myself.I rather have extra large fries.
OADA:
That's illegal discussion, silly.
Sad face.