And Coffee, I don't know if Google keeps you up to date, but the Chapter 14 preview you've got the link to has been updated recently. It's around 8 pages now
I have to say, Unit, I bloody love the final one.
The colours are smooth and nicely shaded, but have a cool texture to them. Almost like an actual brush. I think the flatness of the colours in the second coloured pic compared with the first makes the glow effects seem much cleaner and more vibrant.
Overall, I love it.![]()
@unit-one, I agree with coffee about your drawing. The second one's much cleaner. And you aren't trying to view the ponies through a haze of green and white. (The fireflies and comets). Which helps you focus on the subjects, the ponies.
I think what you have to remember about ponies is the fact they're very simple. In the show you don't see individual strands of hair like in the sketch, it works well for the sketch, but not coloured drawings. So removing it to make it flat really improved the coloured picture.
Overall I like it 100% more than the previous version. Good job. 👍
It looks good, but the hair looks a bit one dimensional. It lacks texture, I think.
Only one crit, Unit.
Fy's looking awful close to hugging that filly with a wing.![]()
Is that a bad thing?
By the way. This is the picture for the contest.
IT IS THE BEST PICTURE EVER ANY MORE TIME SPENT WOULD JUST MAKE IT WORSE
Err, I of course mean, take your time.![]()
Saying my OC hugging Trxie is a self-insert...then you got Fy's withers getting headstroked by Star Sky...