I can see both those pics and the ones you posted earlier.
The car feels a bit 'boxy', but I guess that's obvious. Other than that, it isn't too bad. I wanna see the car again in darker edges
I can see both those pics and the ones you posted earlier.
The car feels a bit 'boxy', but I guess that's obvious. Other than that, it isn't too bad. I wanna see the car again in darker edges
Life Step Van. More boxy than Cube.
Boxy? I know, sadly as a student I don't get to spend as much time designing as I wish I could .
I think with that LSC1 I messed up the dimensions as well, the wider rear section somehow goes from being 90mm wide to 80mm wide without caving in at any point
Thanks, your feedback is much appreciated, *begins setting targets for future designs*
Do you seriously think that that car is boxy?
What I would suggest doing is to forget the idea or intent of drawing a fancy car for the time being, deconstruct the car into basic shapes, and then illustrate form (i.e. giving it highlights and/or shadows).
TechnicolorsThey're not showing up for me, but right-clicking them and opening them up seems to fix that. Nice designs by the way. Great reflections and color play 👍
Just finished this R34 today, and my god it looks sexy:
Can't believe I actually drew this .
These both just took around an hour.
Not bad at all. I would personally like to see the contours brought out a little more either through sharper use of colours or lines. The coloured pencils kind "smudge" the crispness of the image. I wouldn't suggest using a black ink pen to outline it, but kick up that contrast; make the car look shiny with light reflections instead of soft highlight spots. Also, please refrain from using graphite as your source for gray. It's an easy solution, but it honestly just doesn't cut it. Use a gray coloured pencil and mix in black if the shade needs to be darker.
Not a problem; No one really taught me how to draw a whole lot better either. I've only picked up about 3 or 4 things from my drawing instructors in school in my 3 years at Uni; everything else I learned or learned through mimicking others. You could argue that that's not learning, but I look at and try to understand how reflection works by looking at objects in real life; why the reflection of the ground bends according to the bend in the surface and why the reflection of the sun is on several surfaces of a car. To understand how an image reflection should work, I imagine every surface is as reflective as a mirror. Because I know that light traveling from a single spot on the ground to the reflective surface bounces off into my eye generating that image, I deconstruct every curved surface into numerous planes and visually generate a depiction of what the reflection would look like in each of those little panes sloped and angled all differently. Afterwards, I would piece everything together into what it would probably look like when it's a surface that has a gradual change of angle.Thanks for the feedback AOS, I've learnt how to draw and colour/render all by myself so I'm always learning. I have no one to help me or advise me (anyone I show just thinks they're awesome - so it's good to really know how to really make them awesome!) 👍
Don't have an exact number, but it's hella small... I'd say smaller than 500px.What you saidAs for the picture resolution itself I have no idea what size it is? I uploaded from my phone - i'll try via laptop next time.
I understand why you wouldn't understand my gripe with graphite being used as gray, but once you draw more and see work by other people, you'll begin to understand why. If you must know, it because it makes the drawing look amateur. How? To me, it's not so much the final result; it's actually more because the artist chose not to or was got a little lazy and decided not to use the gray coloured pencil. Thing about graphite is that that leave a shiny finish whereas a coloured pencil won't... or at least not in the same way.
As for the pencils and reflections, the first one sort of shows what I'm getting at. Here's some better examples of my older work that illustrate what I mean:
http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs37/i/2008/252/7/9/Mazda_RX_7_FD3S_by_DeStryker17.jpg
http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs32/i/2008/213/2/1/BnW_Rim_by_DeStryker17.jpg
Notice how I use hard contrasts between the highlight and body? While it's not photo realistic, it conveys a stronger sense of a glossy, polished surface.
Works the same way as graphite... form is just easier to understand when there's no colour involved for some people.
Also, please refrain from quoting images as well if it's not necessary. It's just more scrolling for all of us.
Well at least using the colouring pencils that I use right now, they just don't have that delicate touch that graphite pencils have. Graphite pencils are easier to shade with because it doesn't require too much effort for the shading to actually begin. Using my colouring pencils, then I have to press considerably harder for the colour to show up, but it might just be me.
And I have edited the previous post and changed the images to URL links to save us all a lot of scrolling 👍 .
It's not just you, i find it easier shading in graphite, i can see what AOS means with regards to graphite looking shiny (irl), but when viewing pics on a computer screen, i personally don't see much difference really, and i don't really see it as being lazy at all.
Using my colouring pencils, then I have to press considerably harder for the colour to show up, but it might just be me.
You're either using crappy coloured pencils or you're not getting the pigment into the little ridges and pores of the paper, I'm betting on the former. Good colouring pencils are soft and scraping the material off the pencil and onto the page is much easier since it's more waxier than something like Laurentian.
Give Prismacolor's colour pencils a try. You can buy them individually and even try them out at an art store before you buy.
There isn't any fancy technique to using a pencil.... I just use mine like any ordinary pencil.
Here's something I drew in class back in '08.
http://a5.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/170_22558809096_511439096_544990_2531_n.jpg