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The lasting appeal or "finish" for lack of a better term just doesn't keep my attention. It's partially the scanner's fault, but it's partially because the contours are smeared amidst the colouring job. It also lacks contrast; make the shadows darker, make the car look shiny, use harder lines and edges. Look at the first Skyline pic you linked; it's got so little grays compared to blacks and whites. You can tell that the car just came out of a car wash. Now look at yours; there's no black, there's white, but barely on the car, and some of the form definition is lost with the "smooth" shading you did with the green. The R34 is and edgy car, so we should see edges.
Try drawing at larger scale; use more of the entire page.
And lastly, kill that quoted image.
Thanks.
Try drawing at larger scale; use more of the entire page.
And lastly, kill that quoted image.
Thanks.