Corruption-The Return of X

[Jacob]

Great work. I love the unusual format with the 'documents' and how finished off your other story and still continued the storyline. 👍

 

[popcorn]

35 LFA'S!? Anyway, great job on the entire thing so far.

 

[DK]

Is Miki's stash of hardcore porn still in the Integra?

 

[Machate-man]

^^^It's "confiscated evidence"; 5 boxes worth

 

[Ryou]

That's a good chapter. Keep it up. . .

 

[C6.R]

very nice:tup:

 

[Skython]

Your pieces of work/art/writing always keep me entertained 👍

 

[Machate-man]

That's a good chapter. Keep it up. . .

very nice:tup:

Your pieces of work/art/writing always keep me entertained 👍

Thank you!
I see that unorthodox methods help keep stories fresh.

 

[Machate-man]

Memories: Part 2​

Sylvia pulled onto SSR7...

...only to see that the checkpoint people were still collecting toll.

Hey! aint that Sylvia?
I believe that is!
Aint she that L-
AH, dont say it...

Hey! How's yo girlf-

Sylvia proceeds to run over the checkpoint-man's feet.
AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHGGGGGGHHHHHHH
My feet! You ran over my 🤬 feet! You 🤬!

I told you so....
Shut the 🤬 up!

Whoops...I may've clipped it a bit says Sylvia, with a smirk on her face

Ok, let's open the taps a bit...
Sylvia then smashes the gas, and then sees the speedometer rise

200km/h...

230km/h...
Then She shifts again from 4th, forgetting that the SL doesn't have 5 gears...
Huh? 5th is reverse?

The Speedo climbed yet more...all the way up to:
250km/h!
The engine temperature then shot up dangerously.

Ha! the tunnel
Perhaps I should get some practice...
Sylvia stops the SL,

Builds the revs,

And takes off!

***​

At the end of the tunnel, the Street WarZ crowd beckoned on all of it's JDM glory:
3 S13s,
a FC RX-7,
An alfa 147,
and several other cars were parked, and their drivers were talking.
Sylvia's sister, however, was nowhere to be found.
Then out of the corner of her eye, a Green mustang Flew out of the end of the opposite tunnel...

***​

Author note:See VTiRoj's Fanfic for part 3.

 

[Zach]

OMG! Last photo of Part 2... looks like the car is farting XD See some brown smoke there?

 

[DK]

^ Would that count as invoking Rule 34?

I'm pretty sure the checkpoint guy would have probably fainted from having his feet crushed by nearly 2 tons of old Merc.

 

[uMadson?]

^ Would that count as invoking Rule 34?

I'm pretty sure the checkpoint guy would have probably fainted from having his feet crushed by nearly 2 tons of old Merc.

What? R 34?

 

[Machate-man]

OMG! Last photo of Part 2... looks like the car is farting XD See some brown smoke there?

Because the tunnel light is brown

Dont worry, my SL is perfectly healthy I think

 

[Ryou]

Corruption. Interesting name. Anyways, in an earlier chapter you said Kaido. I like how you're calling it Kaido, the proper way, and not Touge.

 

[Machate-man]

Corruption. Interesting name. Anyways, in an earlier chapter you said Kaido. I like how you're calling it Kaido, the proper way, and not Touge.

Thanks
Also:

Spoiler

You'll see the significance of "Kaido" after my Corruption fanfic. Let's just say there's going to be some major "moving" happening

specific coordinates:
From: 35°47'28.33"N, 138° 5'24.98"E to: 35°48'12.59"N, 138° 7'29.62"E

 

[Machate-man]

 

[DK]

Those fines seem a bit steep...

 

[Zach]

WTF is what I would say. You open an area specially for high speeds, but even at night, you have a limit of 120 km/h? WTF?

 

[Machate-man]

Interceptors- used in case of unwilling driver



Sylvia Anderson - Secondary Commander
LFA Undercover+
650hp



Avery Smith - Chase Specialist
Gallardo 560 Superleggera II
702hp



John Vincente - Primary Commander
SLR McLaren 900
[CLASSIFIED]

Special Response- When driver resists with extreme speed or violence



Sylvia Anderson
McLaren F1 GTR
[CLASSIFIED]



John Vincente
Bugatti Veyron+
1550hp

 

[Zach]

I'm loving that team of backup cars...

 

[Machate-man]

This is the GTPolice Upper Division's official prompt to the change in patrol and interceptor units.

 

[Zach]

Mmmm... can be produced at little cost...? I've paid 2 million too much!

 

[Skython]

Some epic back up/undercover vehicles. Chases should be entertaining.

 

[VTiRoj]

The police car line-up reminds me of this:



Definately looking forward to chase chapters.

 

[Onboy123]

The police car line-up reminds me of this:



Definately looking forward to chase chapters.

Woohoo!!! Hot Pursuit ftw!!! Shame the actual game wasn't as exciting as the trailer.

And if you won't mind, and as long as you'll be quicker than say…Roj, I'd gladly volunteer as the Veyron Interceptor No street racer is safe! Just ask Roj about what happened to his Supra when we met up once

 

[Machate-man]

Just ask Roj about what happened to his Supra when we met up once

I dare ask: what happened


And yes; I'd gladly take help:tup:

 

[Onboy123]

I dare ask: what happened


And yes; I'd gladly take help:tup:

Let's just say that the Supra didn't look that good when it was constantly rammed at 240+mph (FYI, mine is a drag Veyron, so best stick to route 7, anywhere else, I'd crash)

 

[VTiRoj]

Let's just say that the Supra didn't look that good when it was constantly rammed at 240+mph (FYI, mine is a drag Veyron, so best stick to route 7, anywhere else, I'd crash)

Pffft, you hardly did much aside from stoving the bumpers in and messing up my paintjob.

I'll be happy to help if you need it machate-man, you helped me, so I help you.

 

[Onboy123]

Pffft, you hardly did much aside from stoving the bumpers in and messing up my paintjob.

I'll be happy to help if you need it machate-man, you helped me, so I help you.

Yea, but with GT5 crash physics, it looked like the bumper was melted and stretched to the left by several meters

Yay! More 'attack the Roj' at the dead of night!

 

[Machate-man]

Let's just say that the Supra didn't look that good when it was constantly rammed at 240+mph (FYI, mine is a drag Veyron, so best stick to route 7, anywhere else, I'd crash)

Paint your Bugatti Maziora Seyfert, and you'll qualify.

I'll be happy to help if you need it machate-man, you helped me, so I help you.

Yes!


Also, If you do plan on helping, do this:


Tune any car for 600pp; Prefferebly for power.
If you want to be a cop, then paint it gloss black and install the bare carbon hood. RM models are allowed, but should be 600pp and painted black.

If you want to be a racer, then do as you wish; try to refrain from painting it black. And try to find things that are vaguely street legal; no one can drive around in a GT3 race car and park for dinner somewhere, so why should you?


Post that you are planing on helping, and the car as well.


I may attempt to do a meet on the weekend of Sept. 3-4, so try to get ready