Red-Line

[Parnelli Bone]

I have only 2 words to say: +REP!!!!

 

[mafia_boy]

SH, while I agree that he technically 'is' breaking AUP, I think the context he was trying to convey across that this R.B. person in the story was a cocky racist S.O.B. and racist people do say stupid crap like the J word, the N word and such.

Just for suggestions and examples mate (So please [AND I MEAN ANY MODERATOR PLEASE] don't think I'm saying this for real or to break AUP, it's just an example!!), would R.B. calling Tori other names such as 'slaphead' (another bad racist connotation) be considered worse or better than being called a 'J**'?? Or would just an 'OI YOU' or 'OI D-HEAD' be better edited in?? What would your suggestion be for the edit??

Also, some of the fine lines a storyteller has to tightwalk to make sure a story is up to reading standard & not breaking AUP makes it hard to bring out a quality story, and even through this d24/7 has kept the quality to a very high standard. I hope he keeps it going, it's the main reason GT4 forum is getting traffic again!!

 

[VTiRoj]

I think "OI YOU" will do, or perhaps "OI YOU LITTLE KID". At least d24/7 didn't fill his story with the word. Just 2 instances I found with Ctrl+F. But I do agree, as a writer it's hard to balance words with what fits with the character and what is accepted on the webspace that you post your work on.

But hey, apart from 2 words in the recent chapter, all of d24/7's writing has been totally within the AUP and yet still provided quality storytelling. 👍

 

[Smallhorses]

SH, while I agree that he technically 'is' breaking AUP, I think the context he was trying to convey across that this R.B. person in the story was a cocky racist S.O.B. and racist people do say stupid crap like the J word, the N word and such.

Yeah, I understood this, and while it helps to portray the character's arrogance and ignorance, it's got to be acknowledged that there's a thread specific to use of that word. I'm well aware of what goes on in the real world, but like entire sentences made of profanity, there's no place for it here.

Just for suggestions and examples mate (So please [AND I MEAN ANY MODERATOR PLEASE] don't think I'm saying this for real or to break AUP, it's just an example!!), would R.B. calling Tori other names such as 'slaphead' (another bad racist connotation) be considered worse or better than being called a 'J**'?? Or would just an 'OI YOU' or 'OI D-HEAD' be better edited in?? What would your suggestion be for the edit??

Also, some of the fine lines a storyteller has to tightwalk to make sure a story is up to reading standard & not breaking AUP makes it hard to bring out a quality story, and even through this d24/7 has kept the quality to a very high standard. I hope he keeps it going, it's the main reason GT4 forum is getting traffic again!!

I don't believe it's the main reason the GT4 forum is getting traffic, there's a small clique of readers that come in for this thread alone, but they're not in the majority by any stretch of the imagination. It is true that this thread is one of the most outstanding examples of quality writing, reporting and photography though.

It is possible to write good stories without violating our AUP, there's many examples out there, unfortunately a lot of folks seem to think this is the only race report in here!

As far as examples go for making someone seem ignorant and arrogant, something not so overtly and directly racist or vulgar would be appropriate, and it's quite possible to come up with a list if you put your mind to it. Steer clear of obvious racial slurs like the J-word & N-words you mentioned, most vulgar 4-letter sexually oriented swearwords, you know, F-word, C-word (male & female) etc.

Ok so it's not quite so true as real adult life, but there's plenty of PG safe ways of making out what you mean.

"Oi dogbreath!", "Hey greasestain!", "Yo! Gimp!", etc., still imply hostility without overstepping the boundaries here.
True we don't want you to have to resort to using terms that no-one would ever use nowadays, I mean: "I beg your pardon, you feeble-minded imbecile" does sound a little archaic!

 

[mafia_boy]

I was joking with his story being the only reason GT4Forum gets traffic, my 400m thread is the other reason. jk.

And while I know this isn't the only story in the Race Report forum, this story is by far the best of the lot (and I've read all of them in here, some seem like they were written with the special kid in mind!!). Gimp, or muppet would be my choices. I love using the word muppet, I started using that word nearly 10yrs ago to describe certain people (ie. plebs) and now it's being used as a pure insult which is a bonus and a pain at the same time.

 

[Parnelli Bone]

I didnt' see any problem with the "word", personally it doesn't bother me, and i am of a mixed race. It made me really want to see D24/7 kick that racist's ass, actually!

 

[mcsqueegy]

I'll keep it short and sweet.

YAY!!!

Congrats to him on the first circuit victory!! How Tori beat the 2 S2000's though is just . Can't wait for number 17!!! I was just beginning to wonder what had happened to Red-Line...

*Walks off with unusually happy (or drug-like?) expression on face *

 

[Skygrasper550]

Another fantastic chapter =drifting24/7=! 👍
However, please take a quick look in this thread and make some more appropriate edits to your post.
Thanks.

YAY! He's back making chapters!

I have to say, that win was amazing. I know Deep Forest is a tricky track, especially with a FWD but somehow your Civic beat the Amuse S2000 there. Great stuff.

Tori still misses Zinaida? Bless the guy. He did great in racing though. Practice... looked a bit slippy out there.

The Pace Car actually racing seems odd, but you can't choose who you race so that's understandable. I only just noticed after seeing the images that the Amuse S2000's carbon fibre is much darker than the Spoon Civic's. Funny stuff with Robert too. The Celica doesnt sound that bad, though.

But yes, we want more and we want more now.

Quick note: You haven't closed all your tags.

SH, while I agree that he technically 'is' breaking AUP, I think the context he was trying to convey across that this R.B. person in the story was a cocky racist S.O.B. and racist people do say stupid crap like the J word, the N word and such.

Just for suggestions and examples mate (So please [AND I MEAN ANY MODERATOR PLEASE] don't think I'm saying this for real or to break AUP, it's just an example!!), would R.B. calling Tori other names such as 'slaphead' (another bad racist connotation) be considered worse or better than being called a 'J**'?? Or would just an 'OI YOU' or 'OI D-HEAD' be better edited in?? What would your suggestion be for the edit??

Also, some of the fine lines a storyteller has to tightwalk to make sure a story is up to reading standard & not breaking AUP makes it hard to bring out a quality story, and even through this d24/7 has kept the quality to a very high standard. I hope he keeps it going, it's the main reason GT4 forum is getting traffic again!!

I think "OI YOU" will do, or perhaps "OI YOU LITTLE KID". At least d24/7 didn't fill his story with the word. Just 2 instances I found with Ctrl+F. But I do agree, as a writer it's hard to balance words with what fits with the character and what is accepted on the webspace that you post your work on.

But hey, apart from 2 words in the recent chapter, all of d24/7's writing has been totally within the AUP and yet still provided quality storytelling. 👍

Yeah, I understood this, and while it helps to portray the character's arrogance and ignorance, it's got to be acknowledged that there's a thread specific to use of that word. I'm well aware of what goes on in the real world, but like entire sentences made of profanity, there's no place for it here.



I don't believe it's the main reason the GT4 forum is getting traffic, there's a small clique of readers that come in for this thread alone, but they're not in the majority by any stretch of the imagination. It is true that this thread is one of the most outstanding examples of quality writing, reporting and photography though.

It is possible to write good stories without violating our AUP, there's many examples out there, unfortunately a lot of folks seem to think this is the only race report in here!

As far as examples go for making someone seem ignorant and arrogant, something not so overtly and directly racist or vulgar would be appropriate, and it's quite possible to come up with a list if you put your mind to it. Steer clear of obvious racial slurs like the J-word & N-words you mentioned, most vulgar 4-letter sexually oriented swearwords, you know, F-word, C-word (male & female) etc.

Ok so it's not quite so true as real adult life, but there's plenty of PG safe ways of making out what you mean.

"Oi dogbreath!", "Hey greasestain!", "Yo! Gimp!", etc., still imply hostility without overstepping the boundaries here.
True we don't want you to have to resort to using terms that no-one would ever use nowadays, I mean: "I beg your pardon, you feeble-minded imbecile" does sound a little archaic!

will do editing right now.., i apologize, i didn't know usage of the word "J**" was part of the AUP.., guess i wasn't reading .., will edit right now to comply with AUP rules..,

*edit - changes made to Chapter 16:

-added pics
-added/changed dialogues
-closed all and tags
-changed the "J**" word to "Skinny Face"

i was kind of in a hurry, so many errors may still be present, please do so kindly to inform me

again, mods, i apologize, before i post Chapter 17 i'll make sure i have read the AUP

now if you'll all excuse me, i have some work to do over at my "garage" *rushes over to TTL*

 

[fookin]

nice work. sad to see my favorite s2000 lose but heck, that's storytelling for ya.

 

[Paulie]

Ooh, ooh yeah!

That just filled an empty hole I had, renewing the addiction. Good chapter.

 

[Smallhorses]

Thanks for the edits =drifting24/7=. 👍

It's great to see your Civic taking on a full 6 car field for a change, but I was wondering if you've ever considered going for something a little longer? 💡

Nurburgring 4hrs (165 A-spec points) in a stock version of a very familiar car! (Sorry, no pics for this one. )

^ If repeating something like that (especially given the prize-money and the prize-car ) doesn't win Zinaida's

, then it's time for Tori to start looking for another girly!!

 

[Skygrasper550]

Thanks for the edits =drifting24/7=. 👍

It's great to see your Civic taking on a full 6 car field for a change, but I was wondering if you've ever considered going for something a little longer? 💡

Nurburgring 4hrs (165 A-spec points) in a stock version of a very familiar car! (Sorry, no pics for this one. )

^ If repeating something like that (especially given the prize-money and the prize-car ) doesn't win Zinaida's

, then it's time for Tori to start looking for another girly!!

well, Tori isn't ready yet for the 'Ring, (please read Chapter 15 ) that race is quite long, and he's just beginning on circuit racing..,

wow, i wish i can play that race, thing is my time limit on the PS2 is 3 hrs, so it's a no-go for me..,

currently working on Chapter 17, will be ready by tomorrow..,

 

[VTiRoj]

well, Tori isn't ready yet for the 'Ring, (please read Chapter 15 ) that race is quite long, and he's just beginning on circuit racing..,

wow, i wish i can play that race, thing is my time limit on the PS2 is 3 hrs, so it's a no-go for me..,

currently working on Chapter 17, will be ready by tomorrow..,

No, it's the other way around. The 'Ring is not ready for Tori.

Try and get a time extension. Work out a deal? 👍

Those last 5 words made me cry with happiness.

 

[Skygrasper550]

No, it's the other way around. The 'Ring is not ready for Tori.

Try and get a time extension. Work out a deal? 👍

Those last 5 words made me cry with happiness.

my dad's being strict with the electrical bill, especially that semestral break is up and i have got nothing to do around the house but play and watch TV.., and i'm not really into endurances races..,

hope i can finish uploading the pics today, the writeup is finished though..,

 

[Kingofweasles]

my dad's being strict with the electrical bill, especially that semestral break is up and i have got nothing to do around the house but play and watch TV.., and i'm not really into endurances races..,

hope i can finish uploading the pics today, the writeup is finished though..,

Have you tried the "B-Spec triple-Speed" trick? I was able to do the Nurburgring 24hrs in like 9 with that trick!

Though i think in the context of you're story, that may not be the best option. Oh, and keep the story rollin' man! I'm hooked!!

 

[mafia_boy]

Hello, it's tomorrow and there's no red-line.

Come on D, I need my fix man, come on maaaaaaaaan, I'll do anything.....I'll tune your ride brother come on maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan.

 

[VTiRoj]

It might be tomorrow for you, but for D it's still today!

Then again, my today ends in 41 mins.

 

[mafia_boy]

Nah, it's 3 or 4hrs behind me (think it's 4 because of daylight saving).

That said, he's probably snoozing right now then.

 

[VTiRoj]

*slaps self for forgetting D's location briefly*

Silly me.

 

[Skygrasper550]

Red-Line Chapter 17 : Kyosuke's Time to Shine​

My race is over, now it's Kyosuke's turn. I can't wait to see him in action!


More and more cars come in as we wait for Kyosuke's turn to race. I couldn't help but notice that the cars coming in are now exotics and muscle cars. I'm seeing Mercedes Benz's, Chevrolet's and BMW's come in. The owners of those cars must be rich.

While waiting, me and Kyosuke watched a few races from the grandstands.

"Wow, that BMW sure is fast."
-"Yeah, just look at the gap between that car and the 2nd placer."
*"1st place goes to the BMW M3 GTR! What a race!"

After going back to our spot, Kairi came from the registration office with unexpected news.

"The people at the registration office informed me that clockwise races on the circuit are to be held only until noon. Kyosuke, since your race begins after 12:00, you are to race in the anti-clockwise direction."
-"Hai, I understand."
"Is your Evo ready?"
-"It's ready to go anytime."
"Excellent. We'll begin your practice run right now."

After making final checks on the Evo... "They're giving you 5 laps, same as Tori. Make the most out of it."
"Hai."

As Kyosuke fired up the engine and rolled out of the pit lane, me and Kairi went over to the monitors and contacted him through the radio. ~"Kyosuke, can you hear me?"
-"Loud and clear, Kairi-san."

"Many people here say that this course is harder in the reverse direction. Make a clean and fast run, study the course very carefully."
-"Hai, Kairi-san."

"Yamato, what's the status of the Evo?"
-"Same as Tori's car, we brought back the power upgrades and tuned the suspension for circuit racing. We've also lengthened the gear ratios to maximize the engine's power on the straights."
"Hmm, sounds good, I think I'd like to give it a test run myself."
-"Haha! Now that's something I don't hear from you everyday!"

"My Evo's 4G6E produces reliable torque, perfect for this uphill section."

"There we go, nice and easy."

"I'll try braking a little later on here."

*after 5 laps*
~"That's a good run, Kyosuke. Finish the last lap and head back to the pits."
-"Will do."

After finishing the practice run, Kairi went over to Kyosuke. "How did the practice run go?"
-"The car was great! I had no problems at all, it runs the way I want it to. The course is fairly easy once you get used to it."
"I see, that's good to hear."

We waited until it was time for Kyosuke to race. 2 laps around the reverse direction of the course. Kairi handed over to us the paper containing the lineup. With the exception of him, all of us, especially Yamato are surprised at the lineup.

"Uh...is there a gas leak in here??"
-"What is, Yamato?"
"What is it?! Can you not read?!"
-"What's the problem with it?"


1st: Chevrolet Corvette ZR-1 (C4) '90

2nd: BMW M3 GTR '04

3rd: Lotus Esprit V8 SE '98

4th: Mercedes-Benz E 55 AMG '02

5th: Chevrolet Corvette Z06 (C5) '04

6th: Mitsubishi Lancer Evolution V GSR '98

This grid is full of high-end sports cars! And that's the BMW we saw earlier!!

"Couldn't they have given you another set, with opponents that Kyosuke can 'handle'?"
-"No, I was the one who chose this lineup."
"NANI?!?! And they allowed you to put the Evo on this grid?!"
-"Yes. I insisted it."
".....You're insane, you're all insane."

Is Kairi out of his mind? This is suicide! If you look at it from any angle, Kyosuke is clearly at a complete disadvantage!

A home-grown sports sedan racing against a sea of race-bred exotics. How will Kyosuke pull off a win? We're gonna need a miracle, right now. Race 10, begin!!

*"This is interesting, folks. We have another unusual lineup, a Japanese tuner racing against muscles and exotics. This is going to be a great race!.....And it's go!!"
"Those guys are fast on the straight..."

"First up, the black Corvette."

"Hmm, looks like you're not as fast as I thought you'd be."
"WHAT THE?! How can a tuner be faster than my Corvette?"

"I think I'm going nuts! He easily pulled away from me!"

"! He already passed the Corvette behind me??"
"If you're going to tune a Mercedes and make it go fast, first you have to remove all, and I mean ALL of the luxury and upholstery items inside."

*The Lancer just passed two cars as if he didn't break a sweat!"
"Well, that was short work."

"Hehe, this race will just be a walk in the park, like the one I had earlier."

*" Well folks, just as I have said, this HAS turned out to be another great race!"

"A little more closer..."

"My car won't turn!"
"Good, time to claim 1st place."

"Damn!"
"One very big weakness of muscle cars is handling. That's why I chose the M3, this machine is well-balanced and has excellent performance."

"It's that M3....he's good. Well then, I'll have to do better."

"Gotcha."
"Darn, I wasn't looking at my mirrors! He popped out of nowhere and passed me!"

*"Incredible! We're having a hell of a great race here people, cars overtaking one another!"
"See you at the finish line."
"He's quick!"

"Whoops, spoke too soon."
"I'll take 3rd place back, thank you."

"Great, now we're building up behind this other Corvette."

(turbines spool at the same time)
"This can't be! My Esprit's being matched by a mere Lancer?!"

"See ya."

"Dude, you're blocking the roadway!"

"! Where'd he come from! A lap ago he was at the back, now he's here?!"

"Yosh, now there are no more obstacles."

"Now it's just you and me. Let's see how good you really are."

"This full-throttle section is exhilirating, especially when you're going over 200 km/h. I'm beginning to like this course."

"Hmm, you're as good as your teammate Tori. Team MUGEN, you sure put up a good fight."

"He's fast, good thing I can keep up with him."

*"The Lancer is going to overtake the M3..."
"Now's my chance."

*"...But the M3 easily defended his position! What a battle this is!"
"Not so fast!"
"How'd he...?"

*"They're still neck and neck!"
"Your tricks won't work on me!"
"This guy's way better than I thought..."

"...but I'm running out of tarmac. I need to pass that M3 now."

"No more corners left, this will now be a drag race on the home stretch."

"I can do this." (floors on the throttle)
"Don't think you can outpace me on the straight!" (floors on the throttle)

*"Hold your breath, people!!"

"...Did I win??"


They crossed the finish line at the same time. Everyone was quiet. They waited for the total time confirmation of the race. They watched the large timers on the pit lane...



1st: Mitsubishi Lancer Evo V GSR - 3:07.831

2nd: BMW M3 GTR - 3:07.834


*"I...I don't know how to describe this, ladies and gentlemen...The Lancer won!! Amazing!! By 3-thousandths of a second!!"
...Unbelievable...Even I became speechless, Kyosuke won by a hair strand. That was a very minute difference in the times, anyone couldn't see that difference with the naked eye. 0.003 of a second?! But still, the times determined the winner and loser. Kyosuke won!! By a nearly invisible margin!


After Kyosuke came back to the pits... "Did I win? Was it a tie?"

When we told him about his total time confirmation and of the M3's, his jaw dropped.

"Hahahaha! Man, this is just my lucky day!"
-"Congratulations, Kyosuke-san!"
"Thanks, Tori. But I admit, I could've lost to that driver. He's way better than I am."
"Nani? Really??"

The driver of the M3 approached us. Wait a minute, I think I recognize that face...it's Harald! Harald Konig!! The guy whom I raced against back at Capri!!

"!! It's you!"
-"Recognize me?? Hehe...I thought you would."
Kairi remarked, "Well, what a surprise. It's good to see you again."
"Indeed, same here. I wanted to know how really good Team MUGEN is, by challenging both your drivers. This is the second time I lost to a neck-and-neck race from you guys. You're...incredible. Thank you for the wonderful race."
-"You should thank them, they're the ones who raced against you."
"Ah yes, Tori and Kyosuke." We shaked hands with him. "We put up quite a show, did we? Kyosuke, you and Tori are amazing."
-"Arigato."

"Hmm, since you've been racking up wins, expect Team MUGEN get a little attention anywhere you go from here."


Team MUGEN getting famous? Hmm, that can't be helped if we are to achieve our goal, to become one of the best.

"I've had enough of Europe, we've already done so much around here. Yamato, What's a good next destination?"
-"Hmm, lemme think...hey Kairi, how about..."






(cellphone rings)

"Hello?"
~"Harald, it's me."
"Hey, good timing you called."
~"Have you met them?"
"Fortunately, yes."
~"Did you race with them?"
"Yeah. I lost, again. They're really good."
~"I see. Have you told them about me?"
"No, not yet."
~"Hmm, looks like I have to introduce myself to them in person."
"Yes, I think that would be a better idea."
~"Do you know where they're headed next?"
"I think they're headed at Sears Point."
~"Is that so? Thanks. I'll call you when I meet them."
"Sure."

(call ends)

Team MUGEN.....you just wait for me.....



next on Red-Line - Chapter 18 : Stars and Stripes

don't miss it!!

 

[Skygrasper550]

pardon for the super delay.., had to take care of school-related obligations (of course, school always comes first) and I watched F1.., after that I'm still uploading the pics.., but anyways, here it is, Chapter 17, hope you like it..,


*edit- whoops, i spotted a minor error.., man, i'm still having errors..,

=d24/7=

 

[Paulie]

EPIC!! EPIC!! EPIC!! EPIC!! EPIC!! EPIC!! EPIC!! EPIC!! EPIC!! EPIC!! EPIC!! EPIC!! EPIC!! EPIC!! EPIC!! EPIC!! EPIC!! EPIC!!
Those other drivers don't know how to drive a Corvette, they are un-worthy!

Ooh, Stars and Stripes, I can't wait, this sounds awesome!

Edit: Oh, and by the way, what an awesome finish, and what awesome photography (How do you do it? ) But I think the M3 got ripped off.

Edit 2: I wonder if there will ever be a twist in this story?

 

[mcsqueegy]

Victory! I loved it, particularly because I had a race like that (won by 0.006) not so long ago! I must say, the amount of effort that goes into it is amazing, I don't have the time or the patience. Also, an unbelievable photo with the Chevy and Evo together... Black = yummy. Can't wait till America! Although let's hope Tori doesn't have to face the Corkscrew... 👍

 

[Skygrasper550]

I was looking at the M3 when the drag race happened. I didn't even pay attention to the track, nor the finish line, not even my car, but at the M3. When I saw the split time, !! I was shocked and jaw-dropped at the same time.., I had a REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY hard time capturing that "perfect moment" at the finish line, about 8 repeats of the whole damn replay .., Man I'm good..,

 

[Paulie]

Victory! I loved it, particularly because I had a race like that (won by 0.006) not so long ago! I must say, the amount of effort that goes into it is amazing, I don't have the time or the patience. Also, an unbelievable photo with the Chevy and Evo together... Black = yummy. Can't wait till America! Although let's hope Tori doesn't have to face the Corkscrew... 👍

Reminds me of a race I had online in GT5 where I got outdragged to the finish line of Suzuka and lost by 0.001sec, against real people! It was for 1st too.

Let's hope he doesn't have to face another C5 Z06 in his Civic. Leave those cars to Kyosuke.
I have a feeling that the low top speed of the muscle cars will play a role.

I was looking at the M3 when the drag race happened. I didn't even pay attention to the track, nor the finish line, not even my car, but at the M3. When I saw the split time, !! I was shocked and jaw-dropped at the same time.., Damn I'm good..,

Modest much?

Forgive my stupidity and poor memory, but who was Yamato? Is that Kyosuke? Kairi is the team boss right? If I can find a way to take race pictures I want to do my own story when the full GT5 comes out, just so I can use muscle cars. (Plus it looks like fun).

 

[Skygrasper550]

Victory! I loved it, particularly because I had a race like that (won by 0.006) not so long ago!

but my margin was even smaller..,

I must say, the amount of effort that goes into it is amazing, I don't have the time or the patience. Also, an unbelievable photo with the Chevy and Evo together... Black = yummy. Can't wait till America! Although let's hope Tori doesn't have to face the Corkscrew... 👍

oh, but he WILL face the Corkscrew...,

Reminds me of a race I had online in GT5 where I got outdragged to the finish line of Suzuka and lost by 0.001sec, against real people! It was for 1st too.

Must've sucked to be you back then..,

Let's hope he doesn't have to face another C5 Z06 in his Civic. Leave those cars to Kyosuke.
I have a feeling that the low top speed of the muscle cars will play a role.

not another C5 Corvette, yes.., but much stronger opponents, IN HIS CIVIC.., (evil laugh) Mwahahahahahaha!!!!

Modest much?

Forgive my stupidity and poor memory, but who was Yamato? Is that Kyosuke? Kairi is the team boss right?

Yamato is the head mechanic of the team, Kairi is the team boss.., 👍

If I can find a way to take race pictures I want to do my own story when the full GT5 comes out, just so I can use muscle cars. (Plus it looks like fun).

It is fun, when you're making stories! but you often feel that pressure, that makes you write the chapters, the next one has to be as good as, or even better, than the previous one.., that's what I feel.., but heck, I enjoy doing it!!

 

[Paulie]

but my margin was even smaller..,

Wise guy.

Must've sucked to be you back then..,

Not really, we race for fun, not to win, and a race like that is something you savour. Good battles are what you hope for, even if in last place and fighting for 2nd last (like that normally happens though.)

not another C5 Corvette, yes.., but much stronger opponents, IN HIS CIVIC.., (evil laugh) Mwahahahahahaha!!!!

Stronger than a C5? In the Civic? Hah, let me drive the muscle cars.

Yamato is the head mechanic of the team, Kairi is the team boss.., 👍

Right, I thought so, but then couldn't remember if they had a mechanic that was a major part of the story.

 

[Skygrasper550]

Wise guy.



Not really, we race for fun, not to win, and a race like that is something you savour. Good battles are what you hope for, even if in last place and fighting for 2nd last (like that normally happens though.)

yeah, I know that feeling.., 👍

Stronger than a C5? In the Civic? Hah, let me drive the muscle cars.

it's on.

Right, I thought so, but then couldn't remember if they had a mechanic that was a major part of the story.

hmm, still thinking about adding something to Chapter 17, but then it would spoil the Chapter, too many edits.., it would look like I'm rushing things.., if someone wants that added bit, please say Yes..,

 

[Paulie]

Yes, but let me know the differences since the original post as that's the only one I've read.

 

[Skygrasper550]

There, it's up, added something on the end part of the chapter. Hopefully that will be the LAST edit in Chapter 17.., now, to Chapter 18!!