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The Boom: Officially Ended; Car Reveals for The Next Fanfic
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Page 22 - Charge to Freedom
Ben is in a pinch right now. But I have observed him once in the car, and he maintains his composure despite me losing control over the car. He's not going to snap out that easily...
We're counting on you. We're a team, right?
Ben: "Perfect Line? Yeah, right... as if that will bring you to victory all the time.
What if I am your opponent? An opponent that knows your moves since the dawn of time..."
Sir Shaw: "There you go... such a good boy. Just follow me. I promise you, I'm doing what's best for you."
With more determination to defeat his father once and for all, Ben never let go of the accelerator. His eagerness for freedom made him grip the steering wheel harder.
Then, approaching the hairpin, he slams on the brake pedal hard...
Ben: "Hey Shaw... do you even know why this is called the "Raging Bull"? I shall show you..."
As if commencing a plan, Ben just takes the inside... and dives in.
Ben: "What if... I destroy your rhythm? Do you think you could still maintain that perfect line of yours?"
Living up to the animal on the badge, Ben charges at Sir Shaw, effectively disrupting his rhythm.
Sir Shaw: "What in the world!? What are you doing?!?"
Sir Shaw weaves out in order to avoid contact. This cost him his concentration, and as well as his cornering speed.
Ben: "Such a crybaby. You don't even want that precious GT40 to be scratched, do you? Thanks to your preaching in the past, I already know your mistake! There is no such thing as the Perfect Line!"
The Countach had a moment of lead, as the GT40's powerful engine allows it to perform better cornering exit speeds that made it retake the lead.
However...
Ben: "Your style of racing is almost perfect, I admit. But its real weakness would show if I disrupt it!
You are not ready for this! Real racing can be a dogfight!"
He intimidates his father once again, as if performing a pit maneuver.
Sir Shaw: "Preposterous!"
He weaves out of his line once again to avoid contact. Ben's strategy truly pays off.
Ben: "You used to be in the lead when you race, however you are not prepared for sudden attacks. Feeling sweaty right now?"
Tomoko: "It's the final lap, and Ben is in the lead!"
Gan: "Consider ourselves lucky that we have Ben at our side. He is truly a force to be reckoned with."
Sir Shaw: "That was a dirty trick!"
Ben: "Sometimes one must go rough to attain victory.
And I follow my own Line! I have my own line of life that I follow!"
Then Ben twists the rear view mirror to the opposite side, a sign that he is not looking back, determined to run his life on his own.
Ben: "I'm not a puppet anymore!"
Sir Shaw: "Something must have happened to Ben... he's never like that before."
Sir Shaw: "As long as you carry the McCarthy name, you shall always be my son! Run away or not, you'll bear the fact that I'm your father! I am just grooming you to be my successor! Who wouldn't want that privilege?
Sir Shaw: "Just do as I say!!!"
Sir Shaw accelerates hard so that the car can get out of the hairpin faster, however... the rear wheels spin violently.
And the car lost control as a result.
Ben: "What's wrong, my beloved father? You lost your cool already? That's what happens when I ruin your rhythm. And also, that's the price to pay...
...for ruining my life."
I got up and prepared the checkered flag. Ben... just one last push.
And he crosses the line first! I waved the checkered flag, with a face of joy looking at his car. I think I am not on his level... just yet.
Meanwhile, in the GT40, Sir Shaw hits the steering wheel hard, and then grips it tightly.
Sir Shaw: "I cannot accept this. Curse you... curse you... and your children for as long as I live!"
Back in the Countach, Ben shows a genuine, bigger smile on his face, something that he hasn't done.
Ben: "Finally, I'm free... I can let my tears fall, I can show a smile every time I like.
Thank you, Michiharu... your story inspired me, and gave me strength to leap this big hurdle."
End of Page 22
Ben is in a pinch right now. But I have observed him once in the car, and he maintains his composure despite me losing control over the car. He's not going to snap out that easily...
We're counting on you. We're a team, right?
Ben: "Perfect Line? Yeah, right... as if that will bring you to victory all the time.
What if I am your opponent? An opponent that knows your moves since the dawn of time..."
Sir Shaw: "There you go... such a good boy. Just follow me. I promise you, I'm doing what's best for you."
With more determination to defeat his father once and for all, Ben never let go of the accelerator. His eagerness for freedom made him grip the steering wheel harder.
Then, approaching the hairpin, he slams on the brake pedal hard...
Ben: "Hey Shaw... do you even know why this is called the "Raging Bull"? I shall show you..."
As if commencing a plan, Ben just takes the inside... and dives in.
Ben: "What if... I destroy your rhythm? Do you think you could still maintain that perfect line of yours?"
Living up to the animal on the badge, Ben charges at Sir Shaw, effectively disrupting his rhythm.
Sir Shaw: "What in the world!? What are you doing?!?"
Sir Shaw weaves out in order to avoid contact. This cost him his concentration, and as well as his cornering speed.
Ben: "Such a crybaby. You don't even want that precious GT40 to be scratched, do you? Thanks to your preaching in the past, I already know your mistake! There is no such thing as the Perfect Line!"
The Countach had a moment of lead, as the GT40's powerful engine allows it to perform better cornering exit speeds that made it retake the lead.
However...
Ben: "Your style of racing is almost perfect, I admit. But its real weakness would show if I disrupt it!
You are not ready for this! Real racing can be a dogfight!"
He intimidates his father once again, as if performing a pit maneuver.
Sir Shaw: "Preposterous!"
He weaves out of his line once again to avoid contact. Ben's strategy truly pays off.
Ben: "You used to be in the lead when you race, however you are not prepared for sudden attacks. Feeling sweaty right now?"
Tomoko: "It's the final lap, and Ben is in the lead!"
Gan: "Consider ourselves lucky that we have Ben at our side. He is truly a force to be reckoned with."
Sir Shaw: "That was a dirty trick!"
Ben: "Sometimes one must go rough to attain victory.
And I follow my own Line! I have my own line of life that I follow!"
Then Ben twists the rear view mirror to the opposite side, a sign that he is not looking back, determined to run his life on his own.
Ben: "I'm not a puppet anymore!"
Sir Shaw: "Something must have happened to Ben... he's never like that before."
Sir Shaw: "As long as you carry the McCarthy name, you shall always be my son! Run away or not, you'll bear the fact that I'm your father! I am just grooming you to be my successor! Who wouldn't want that privilege?
Sir Shaw: "Just do as I say!!!"
Sir Shaw accelerates hard so that the car can get out of the hairpin faster, however... the rear wheels spin violently.
And the car lost control as a result.
Ben: "What's wrong, my beloved father? You lost your cool already? That's what happens when I ruin your rhythm. And also, that's the price to pay...
...for ruining my life."
I got up and prepared the checkered flag. Ben... just one last push.
And he crosses the line first! I waved the checkered flag, with a face of joy looking at his car. I think I am not on his level... just yet.
Meanwhile, in the GT40, Sir Shaw hits the steering wheel hard, and then grips it tightly.
Sir Shaw: "I cannot accept this. Curse you... curse you... and your children for as long as I live!"
Back in the Countach, Ben shows a genuine, bigger smile on his face, something that he hasn't done.
Ben: "Finally, I'm free... I can let my tears fall, I can show a smile every time I like.
Thank you, Michiharu... your story inspired me, and gave me strength to leap this big hurdle."
End of Page 22
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Hello, readers! Let's have a little coffee break. Next page will be due tomorrow.
For this one, I shall spill something which has been running at the back of my mind:
Remember the scene in which Takuma and Nobuhiko have set a duel for supremacy, from one of my GT5 fanfics?
That could be changed. As what I'm envisioning is actually a larger dream race - WHERE ALL MEMBERS OF THE DREAM ALLIANCE will battle for who's the fastest among them.
Possible venues include - Twin Ring Motegi Road Course, Grand Valley Speedway, or Suzuka. It'll be like a Best Motoring style of battling, and not a scripted one so it doesn't matter who wins.
However, the Takuma vs. Nobuhiko duel is more likely to happen, as I have written a draft of it.
That's all for now. You can PM me if you want to be a volunteer. The list of cars they'll be driving will be published soon.
Please stay tuned.
For this one, I shall spill something which has been running at the back of my mind:
Remember the scene in which Takuma and Nobuhiko have set a duel for supremacy, from one of my GT5 fanfics?
That could be changed. As what I'm envisioning is actually a larger dream race - WHERE ALL MEMBERS OF THE DREAM ALLIANCE will battle for who's the fastest among them.
Possible venues include - Twin Ring Motegi Road Course, Grand Valley Speedway, or Suzuka. It'll be like a Best Motoring style of battling, and not a scripted one so it doesn't matter who wins.
However, the Takuma vs. Nobuhiko duel is more likely to happen, as I have written a draft of it.
That's all for now. You can PM me if you want to be a volunteer. The list of cars they'll be driving will be published soon.
Please stay tuned.
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Page 23 - Fraulein
Ben have finally defeated his father, and considers himself "free from his chains". He was already "free" when he ran away, you know?
I guess you'll really consider yourself free when you have overcome the one thing that binds you. Running away is not enough.
And now, Ben has to come clean to us. With his true agenda finally came to light, he has to explain it to us.
One Being philosophy... what is it?
When we arrived home, Ben stopped on his tracks as we entered the living room. He knelt down, and then bowed like the highest form of apology for the Japanese.
Tomoko: "Ben???"
Ben: "Forgive me, for having deceived you."
There's nothing for you to apologize about!
Gan: "Why are you seeking forgiveness? You didn't do anything offensive so far."
He looks up to us... he's not Japanese, hence he shouldn't really do such gesture.
Ben: "Look, Shaw have revealed to you why have I joined this team. The truth is, he is right... but having got to know you made me reconsider my plans.
I can't take advantage of your kindness. I just can't. I'm not that cold to begin with."
Michiharu: "But you did say that you want to establish your own racing team after your retirement, right? Maybe this One Being theory might help."
Ben: "I have realized that it's wrong to use you as my Guinea Pigs for my experiment."
He stands up, and then returned to his usual cool self, as if nothing happened at all.
Ben: "But I might reorganize my plans... after all, I want to build a team."
Then he went outside for a smoke. That scene was awkward, if you ask me.
Tomoko: "That was awkward."
Gan: "At least he came clean."
Tomoko: "But that One Being theory, what is it?"
Gan: "It is only for Ben to know. He has to start over again. Besides, you two have your own agendas for joining this team, right? You Tomoko wants to prove to the world that women can be as fast as men, and Michiharu simply wants to beat Hiroyuki. You see, we're all even.
It's just normal for a team to have its members having their little agendas, just as long as it doesn't hurt anybody. We may have a common goal, but of course, we have differences."
Okay, with all that being said, it is all time for us to rest.
After having a brief sleep after dinner, I have decided to join Ben at the balcony. Won't he stop smoking even for a minute? Seriously, he'll get lung problems.
Ben: "Oh, here you are."
Michiharu: "You okay? You should be happy, since you're free."
Ben: "It's just that my guilt balanced out the happiness I have for beating Shaw. It'll be just like a typical day ended in a neutral mood."
Michiharu: "If I were you, I'd be celebrating."
Ben: "You're curious about that One Being theory, huh? I'm sure you came here to ask that.
Sigh... You see, I believe that to be the greatest racer, one must combine all the attributes needed. And all must be enhanced before combining them into one.
The body, spirit, and the car must be all working in harmony. That's the theory in a nutshell. There are only a few that possess that unique trait. You see, race car drivers of today are just getting in the league by just flashing their bills. ALL of them lack the qualities that I look for.
You can't be the fastest in one sitting."
Could that be me? Hehehehehehehe.... Kidding aside, I'm nowhere near as what he described. I have to work on a lot of things. There's still so much for me to learn.
Ben: "I even have yet to come clean at Brandon. He is curious if he's a potential candidate, but I'm starting to turn him into a guinea pig.
Maybe I'm rushing things. For now, I'll put this thing on hold, and focus on being a proper teammate, working together with you. Seeing both of you race made me realize that you're on a league similar to mine, hence I have to look at you as an equal."
Michiharu: "That's a lot you've explained. I have little idea on that theory, but the most important thing is that it came off from your chest. Leaving it inside for too long will not help you."
Ben: "That's right.
Hey, care to have a drink with me? Let's go inside... buddy."
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Oh man.... how many bottles of beer have I consumed? You are such a bad influence, Ben! What time is it???
Shoot! It's 9 in the morning! I used to wake up so early...
I headed down to the kitchen to have breakfast.
Tomoko: "Good morning! And both of you should join Oktoberfest."
Gan: "We'll be having a guest here, and that person will be in charge for the catering. Speaking of which, that person should be around the corner, as she is from Germany. I wonder what's taking her so long?"
Michiharu: "I got it. Any other plans for today?"
Gan: "Drive the Ferrari 330 P4. And that's my order."
What??? Seriously??? But the World Sports Car Championship is fast approaching, so I guess this is the right time.
Gan: "Just drive around the roads here, and be careful. I trust that you have the skill for piloting such car, knowing how well you've handled the Miura."
Right. I have taken upon myself that I must drive the Ferrari should I have gotten used to the Miura.
Give me an hour to prepare myself, okay? I'm messed up from last night.
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Just nearby Ben's chalet, a blue BMW 507 stops due to overheating.
Getting out of the car is a woman, wearing a brown fur coat, and yellow hair tied to a bun. She inspects the engine, and is billowing out smoke.
Meanwhile, Michiharu is testing out the 330 P4's abilities. He is taken by shock by the car's immense speed.
What is this? This thing is the fastest car in the world!!! The way it picks up speed is similar to a rocket taking off! It will definitely leave even the likes of the Miura to the dust!
Tomoko is not joking, this car has the capability to reach 320 km/h! My hair can be torn off any time now!
Huh? What's that blue car doing over there? It's stalled... I'll pull over to help. It's kinda awkward to stop for a stranger, if you ask me. But I think it needs help.
After pulling over, I approached the car, and suddenly, a woman came out from it. She is just as tall as Tomoko, and youthful too.
???: "Excuse me? Can you help?"
Michiharu: "Sure."
???: "You see, I'm supposed to meet someone. I need to get there really fast, as I'm running late. Then this car broke down."
Michiharu: "I can take you there, miss."
???: "Hmmmmmm.... since you look Asian, I assume you know Gan Kurosawa. Maybe you don't..."
So she's the person that Gan should meet. Hey, I know him.
Michiharu: "I know him. He's my manager. And the meeting place is very near here. Please get in my car, I'll take you there."
???: "Really? Thank you! But what about my car?"
Michiharu: "I will call a tow truck once we arrive at that place. Let's go."
She got in the car. And we set off. Then I hit the accelerator hard. Hey, I have to resume the practice, you know? Besides, she is in a hurry.
???: "Eeeeeeeeeeeek!!! Please slow down a bit! I am in a hurry, but I don't want to die, either!"
Michiharu: "Don't worry, we'll get there in time. And I'm a race car driver."
Wow, you said it with pride, Michiharu. As if you have accomplished enough for you to say that. Bravo.
???: "Oh, my name is Annie Eisenberg. Pleased to meet you. As you have probably known, I own a bakery, but I also cater."
I stepped on the brakes as we approach a corner.
Annie: "Hey! I almost hit my head..."
Whoa... the car is stable! Kinda ironic given the car's speed. So this is how a race car drives?
Of course I'm feathering the throttle, but the car is planted through the turns. It turns better...
...and stops better than a road car. Annie is literally hanging on for her life here.
Michiharu: "We are close."
It climbs up the steep hill like it has no weight burdening the car! Racing cars are on a different level... They are like gods of the roads.
End of Page 23
Ben have finally defeated his father, and considers himself "free from his chains". He was already "free" when he ran away, you know?
I guess you'll really consider yourself free when you have overcome the one thing that binds you. Running away is not enough.
And now, Ben has to come clean to us. With his true agenda finally came to light, he has to explain it to us.
One Being philosophy... what is it?
When we arrived home, Ben stopped on his tracks as we entered the living room. He knelt down, and then bowed like the highest form of apology for the Japanese.
Tomoko: "Ben???"
Ben: "Forgive me, for having deceived you."
There's nothing for you to apologize about!
Gan: "Why are you seeking forgiveness? You didn't do anything offensive so far."
He looks up to us... he's not Japanese, hence he shouldn't really do such gesture.
Ben: "Look, Shaw have revealed to you why have I joined this team. The truth is, he is right... but having got to know you made me reconsider my plans.
I can't take advantage of your kindness. I just can't. I'm not that cold to begin with."
Michiharu: "But you did say that you want to establish your own racing team after your retirement, right? Maybe this One Being theory might help."
Ben: "I have realized that it's wrong to use you as my Guinea Pigs for my experiment."
He stands up, and then returned to his usual cool self, as if nothing happened at all.
Ben: "But I might reorganize my plans... after all, I want to build a team."
Then he went outside for a smoke. That scene was awkward, if you ask me.
Tomoko: "That was awkward."
Gan: "At least he came clean."
Tomoko: "But that One Being theory, what is it?"
Gan: "It is only for Ben to know. He has to start over again. Besides, you two have your own agendas for joining this team, right? You Tomoko wants to prove to the world that women can be as fast as men, and Michiharu simply wants to beat Hiroyuki. You see, we're all even.
It's just normal for a team to have its members having their little agendas, just as long as it doesn't hurt anybody. We may have a common goal, but of course, we have differences."
Okay, with all that being said, it is all time for us to rest.
After having a brief sleep after dinner, I have decided to join Ben at the balcony. Won't he stop smoking even for a minute? Seriously, he'll get lung problems.
Ben: "Oh, here you are."
Michiharu: "You okay? You should be happy, since you're free."
Ben: "It's just that my guilt balanced out the happiness I have for beating Shaw. It'll be just like a typical day ended in a neutral mood."
Michiharu: "If I were you, I'd be celebrating."
Ben: "You're curious about that One Being theory, huh? I'm sure you came here to ask that.
Sigh... You see, I believe that to be the greatest racer, one must combine all the attributes needed. And all must be enhanced before combining them into one.
The body, spirit, and the car must be all working in harmony. That's the theory in a nutshell. There are only a few that possess that unique trait. You see, race car drivers of today are just getting in the league by just flashing their bills. ALL of them lack the qualities that I look for.
You can't be the fastest in one sitting."
Could that be me? Hehehehehehehe.... Kidding aside, I'm nowhere near as what he described. I have to work on a lot of things. There's still so much for me to learn.
Ben: "I even have yet to come clean at Brandon. He is curious if he's a potential candidate, but I'm starting to turn him into a guinea pig.
Maybe I'm rushing things. For now, I'll put this thing on hold, and focus on being a proper teammate, working together with you. Seeing both of you race made me realize that you're on a league similar to mine, hence I have to look at you as an equal."
Michiharu: "That's a lot you've explained. I have little idea on that theory, but the most important thing is that it came off from your chest. Leaving it inside for too long will not help you."
Ben: "That's right.
Hey, care to have a drink with me? Let's go inside... buddy."
**************************************************************************************
Oh man.... how many bottles of beer have I consumed? You are such a bad influence, Ben! What time is it???
Shoot! It's 9 in the morning! I used to wake up so early...
I headed down to the kitchen to have breakfast.
Tomoko: "Good morning! And both of you should join Oktoberfest."
Gan: "We'll be having a guest here, and that person will be in charge for the catering. Speaking of which, that person should be around the corner, as she is from Germany. I wonder what's taking her so long?"
Michiharu: "I got it. Any other plans for today?"
Gan: "Drive the Ferrari 330 P4. And that's my order."
What??? Seriously??? But the World Sports Car Championship is fast approaching, so I guess this is the right time.
Gan: "Just drive around the roads here, and be careful. I trust that you have the skill for piloting such car, knowing how well you've handled the Miura."
Right. I have taken upon myself that I must drive the Ferrari should I have gotten used to the Miura.
Give me an hour to prepare myself, okay? I'm messed up from last night.
**************************************************************************************
Just nearby Ben's chalet, a blue BMW 507 stops due to overheating.
Getting out of the car is a woman, wearing a brown fur coat, and yellow hair tied to a bun. She inspects the engine, and is billowing out smoke.
Meanwhile, Michiharu is testing out the 330 P4's abilities. He is taken by shock by the car's immense speed.
What is this? This thing is the fastest car in the world!!! The way it picks up speed is similar to a rocket taking off! It will definitely leave even the likes of the Miura to the dust!
Tomoko is not joking, this car has the capability to reach 320 km/h! My hair can be torn off any time now!
Huh? What's that blue car doing over there? It's stalled... I'll pull over to help. It's kinda awkward to stop for a stranger, if you ask me. But I think it needs help.
After pulling over, I approached the car, and suddenly, a woman came out from it. She is just as tall as Tomoko, and youthful too.
???: "Excuse me? Can you help?"
Michiharu: "Sure."
???: "You see, I'm supposed to meet someone. I need to get there really fast, as I'm running late. Then this car broke down."
Michiharu: "I can take you there, miss."
???: "Hmmmmmm.... since you look Asian, I assume you know Gan Kurosawa. Maybe you don't..."
So she's the person that Gan should meet. Hey, I know him.
Michiharu: "I know him. He's my manager. And the meeting place is very near here. Please get in my car, I'll take you there."
???: "Really? Thank you! But what about my car?"
Michiharu: "I will call a tow truck once we arrive at that place. Let's go."
She got in the car. And we set off. Then I hit the accelerator hard. Hey, I have to resume the practice, you know? Besides, she is in a hurry.
???: "Eeeeeeeeeeeek!!! Please slow down a bit! I am in a hurry, but I don't want to die, either!"
Michiharu: "Don't worry, we'll get there in time. And I'm a race car driver."
Wow, you said it with pride, Michiharu. As if you have accomplished enough for you to say that. Bravo.
???: "Oh, my name is Annie Eisenberg. Pleased to meet you. As you have probably known, I own a bakery, but I also cater."
I stepped on the brakes as we approach a corner.
Annie: "Hey! I almost hit my head..."
Whoa... the car is stable! Kinda ironic given the car's speed. So this is how a race car drives?
Of course I'm feathering the throttle, but the car is planted through the turns. It turns better...
...and stops better than a road car. Annie is literally hanging on for her life here.
Michiharu: "We are close."
It climbs up the steep hill like it has no weight burdening the car! Racing cars are on a different level... They are like gods of the roads.
End of Page 23
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Since we're nearing Chapter 3, I'll spill you the cars that you can use for volunteering for the duels in that chapter:
Chevrolet Nova SS
Chevrolet Corvette C2
Honda Ballade Sports CR-X '83
Shelby GT350
Details will be posted soon, so please stay tuned.
Chevrolet Nova SS
Chevrolet Corvette C2
Honda Ballade Sports CR-X '83
Shelby GT350
Details will be posted soon, so please stay tuned.
Since we're nearing Chapter 3, I'll spill you the cars that you can use for volunteering for the duels in that chapter:
Chevrolet Nova SS
Chevrolet Corvette C2
Honda Ballade Sports CR-X '83
Shelby GT350
Details will be posted soon, so please stay tuned.
I'll take the Nova then.
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And here's some stuff one should expect:
- Chapter 3 will feature mostly American muscle. And another female character will be introduced, as Japan's "Touge Goddess"
- Chapter 4 will take place 5 years after Chapter 3, and this will highlight the Michiharu vs. Hiroyuki duel.
(Countach 25th Anniversary vs. Ferrari F40 in Suzuka)
And here's another spill:
Toyota 2000GT vs. Shelby GT350 (The Boom)
-------- 30 Years Later ----------
Lexus LFA Nurburgring vs. Shelby GT500 (Takuma Gaiden 2)
- Chapter 3 will feature mostly American muscle. And another female character will be introduced, as Japan's "Touge Goddess"
- Chapter 4 will take place 5 years after Chapter 3, and this will highlight the Michiharu vs. Hiroyuki duel.
(Countach 25th Anniversary vs. Ferrari F40 in Suzuka)
And here's another spill:
Toyota 2000GT vs. Shelby GT350 (The Boom)
-------- 30 Years Later ----------
Lexus LFA Nurburgring vs. Shelby GT500 (Takuma Gaiden 2)
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Page 24 - Turning Point
Okay, so apparently the woman named Annie Eisenberg is the person Gan should meet today. I found her just around the corner, just as she is about to arrive when her car broke down.
So I offered to bring her to Ben's chalet so that she can meet Gan at the appointed time. She's rather straight and serious, not like the cheerful Tomoko.
And she's well-off, having owned two restaurants, a bakery and a grill. An odd combination, and the former is the more popular one.
As for the 330 P4, I must say that it's brilliant. I can't express my satisfaction further. In the past, I have difficulties whenever I drive a car for the first time. But now, it's entirely different. While it has more power, and I have to be careful on the throttle, the car will do the rest for me. It turns easily, stops better, and is surprisingly stable. Are all racing cars built to be like that?
When we arrived, the woman immediately gets out and meets with Gan. Does she really have to be in a hurry?
Gan: "Oh I'm glad you made it. I thought you're lost."
Annie: "Actually, my car broke down just as I'm approaching this place. One of your drivers found me and picked me up."
Gan: "I see. Shall we get to business? After all, you have a great offer, and I love your business and stop by it whenever I visit Germany.
The two are discussing matters. So that means she'll be with us, catering food and drinks for us.
Oh, I almost forgot, Gan told me last night that we are going to France, since the first round of the World Sports Car Championship will be held in Monaco, for better convenience. His team of mechanics are already stationed there, and that we should meet them tomorrow. Oh great, I'm going to wake up early for this...
Suddenly, someone covered my eyes.
Tomoko: "Guess who..."
Michiharu: "Tomoko..."
She let go of me and I faced her. I don't know what to say whenever I'm with her...
Tomoko: "Cheer up! Something wrong?"
Michiharu: "Nothing!"
Tomoko: "You are in your usual grumpy self again."
Ben suddenly enters the scene... wow, way to break our moment.
Ben: "Lovebirds are allowed in my home, but don't leave too much mess, if you know what I mean."
Tomoko: "Hey! What's that supposed to mean?"
Ben: "Why don't you find out? Oh well, where we're going tomorrow will be perfect for both of you. Oh Paris..."
Michiharu: "Hey... it's not what you think."
Ben: "Oh ho ho... I can tell. Oh well, time to make a cup of coffee for the guest. You two enjoy yourselves."
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Location: Circuit de La Sarthe, France
Time: 3 pm, the next day
Zzzzzzzzz..... zzzzzzzz.... zzzzzzzzz....
....er wha??? Someone is waking me up. Where are we? I had a nice sleep in the caravan.
Tomoko: "Hey... you overslept. We're here in Le Mans."
Michiharu: "Really? I thought we're going to stop first at out hotel?"
Tomoko: "Gan-san decided to test the 330 P4's top speed, so that he can see whether it's ready for the upcoming race or not."
Michiharu: "I see."
We got out of the caravan together and lead me to the pit garage. She showed me the course layout. It looks rather simple... with a very long straight that caught my attention. Then she pointed at an area at the end of the long straight.
Tomoko: "This is where you should start braking. You'll see a "100 meters" marker. If your eyes are fast enough to see it, then brake. The car's brakes are designed to stop the car easily from 320 km/h. If you can't see it, then you can brake once you see this curve that will lead to the sharp, 90 degree right-hander. Got it?
Ben and I will go to the straight and will use the radar to record your speed.
You should relax, race cars are built to deal with high-speed stress. And most importantly, racing cars are built to place as less stress to the driver as possible. They send a message that you should focus on winning."
Michiharu: "Okay. I got it."
Gan: "Okay, people! Let's get started! We don't have all day for this! Michiharu, get in the car. Then the two of you must head to the straight."
Ben and Tomoko head out as the mechanics have finished setting up the car. Just how much money you spend on running a racing team? I can't imagine paying these mechanics, the drivers, and of course, the car.
Oh, where's Annie?
Michiharu: "Annie seems absent."
Gan: "She'll be with us in the race day. Now go out there and test yourself."
And so, I set off. Somehow, what Tomoko said about racing cars is right. I can feel easiness as I drive the car, probably because I'm used at high speeds now.
Okay, just focus. You have now gotten this far.
The one thing that once stroke fear on me is now on my side. I am now more confident in stepping the pedal! With the things I've learned, I have finally accepted "Speed"! Speed is within me now!
I am now entering the famous Hunaudieres Straight, where the trees witnessed the legends that have blitzed at speeds exceeding 300 kilometers per hour. Does this Ferrari live up to its claims? Let's find out!
Actually, this car doesn't have a speedometer, so I don't know what speed I'm running at.
But I can tell that I'm going faster... my body is leaning further. This is a racer's dream, to be pushed further... to be pushed further, beyond boundaries. I want that too.
What used to be a nobody who ran away from home, is now blitzing with pride. The world shall remember my name - Michiharu Kanonji.
I'm totally sucked in. I'm in the world where every kilometer per hour counts.
Ben: "328 kilometers per hour. It's still fast today. Imagine that kind of speed in the late 60s."
Tomoko: "Impressive! Then it could mean it's ready for competition. After all, we're about to face cars as fast as that Ferrari."
There are small markers. Better be safe now. Brake!
Whew... I made it.
But that means, I'm ready. I am reflexive enough to control this car. I am so much ready to face the world!
****************************************************************************
Location: Suzuka Circuit, Mie Prefecture, Japan
Time: 10:30 am, the next day
Hiroyuki is once again honing his skills in Suzuka. But this isn't just a normal practice session.
In actuality, he is being tested by one of the racing teams if he's qualified for the spot. A surprise revelation, if one must ask.
He enters the corners the same manner as he would in other sessions. He would not show anything less than his all.
He returns to the pit lane to meet up with the team's manager named Shinji Yama****a.
Hiroyuki: "How did I fare?"
Shinji: "Very well done! You met my expectations. You truly are Suzuka's Lone Wolf."
Hiroyuki: "Though of course, my Lone Wolf days are over."
Shinji: "Being in a team will make your career better. I promise you that."
Hiroyuki: "Someone told me something along those lines. Yeah, he's right all along."
Then as if fate arranged it, Michiharu (looking up the ceiling while lying on his bed) and Hiroyuki utter this powerful sentence:
Michiharu and Hiroyuki: "Farewell, shabby old me..."
End of Page 24
****************************************************************************
Tricks of the Trade:
Hello fellow readers! As promised in my status, I will post my tips. I'm no means a perfect writer, but a dedicated one at that.
So here are some helpful tips:
Continued Interest - this is what keeps me on writing fanfics. Remember, there are a plethora of cars in GT. Whenever I am interested in a specific car, I think of a story out of it. And if it's plausible, then I will have a go at it and write. It must have a theme as well - i.e. Rallying (it must be a car known for rallying prowess). If I have to insert another tip related here, it's Dedication. You need to be dedicated to your work. Set a time in which you write a draft and then set another for posting it. Laziness can kill a fanfic.
Stick to the Essence of a Race Report - we write stories as a creative manner, but one must remember that this is a RACE REPORT. Think as if you're playing as the character who drives the car. Get a feel on how it drives, how much tuning you've done, how it fares against other cars. Make an analysis, if you can, but not to the point of being too geeky.
Do not feature cars just for the sake of showing it. This is not Redline, and treat each car as if they are characters of the story too. Each of them must be coupled with your experiences with it. It's much better for them to be seen competing rather than just being parked, cruised around, or just cars on display.
Variety - hmmmmm.... what can I say about this? We have freedom on which type of cars we want to feature, but do not just stick on one type. Supercars are too cliche, if you ask me, being seen in action movies running in daring stunts and avoid having a scratch. But I'm not saying that you should not feature them. You are free to do so, however, balance is the key - it also means being realistic, as not everyone can afford to own a supercar. You can also tune a specific car exclusive only to your work (i.e. Nissan GT-R Takanori Edition II), which is I think is cool.
Character Backgrounds - I got to admit that I need to work on this. There's more to character than just being a racer. This is why Ben has another day job - as a real estate agent, or Tomoko - a Mochi Shop owner after retiring from racing. Come up with more interesting backgrounds that also define the character.
And the main character, must have a humble beginning. You can make a character a child of a prodigy, but it must undergo hardships too before becoming a well-accomplished character.
Research - this is VERY IMPORTANT. This will save you from being a laughingstock, especially when it concerns about car performance. GT does not supply you all the information you need when it comes to cars. Come on, there's always Google. It's just a click away. The same applies to time and place settings. This is also helpful on fanfic duels, when a car's characteristics are concerned, and how you must use it to your advantage.
And this is also helpful when dealing with other racing cultures:
For example - a foreign street racer sets foot in Japan's street racing scene, and finds it fascinating, but at the same time, very difficult to beat the racers. This is because Japan's tuning culture is simply crazy. Do not just assume the fact that Japan has cheap JDMs that can't beat supercars - in fact, the country is the breeding ground of supercar-eating beasts. So in short, don't make this character easily conquer the streets of Japan.
So there you have it. These are easy tips to follow. I wish you good luck should you venture on to writing.
Okay, so apparently the woman named Annie Eisenberg is the person Gan should meet today. I found her just around the corner, just as she is about to arrive when her car broke down.
So I offered to bring her to Ben's chalet so that she can meet Gan at the appointed time. She's rather straight and serious, not like the cheerful Tomoko.
And she's well-off, having owned two restaurants, a bakery and a grill. An odd combination, and the former is the more popular one.
As for the 330 P4, I must say that it's brilliant. I can't express my satisfaction further. In the past, I have difficulties whenever I drive a car for the first time. But now, it's entirely different. While it has more power, and I have to be careful on the throttle, the car will do the rest for me. It turns easily, stops better, and is surprisingly stable. Are all racing cars built to be like that?
When we arrived, the woman immediately gets out and meets with Gan. Does she really have to be in a hurry?
Gan: "Oh I'm glad you made it. I thought you're lost."
Annie: "Actually, my car broke down just as I'm approaching this place. One of your drivers found me and picked me up."
Gan: "I see. Shall we get to business? After all, you have a great offer, and I love your business and stop by it whenever I visit Germany.
The two are discussing matters. So that means she'll be with us, catering food and drinks for us.
Oh, I almost forgot, Gan told me last night that we are going to France, since the first round of the World Sports Car Championship will be held in Monaco, for better convenience. His team of mechanics are already stationed there, and that we should meet them tomorrow. Oh great, I'm going to wake up early for this...
Suddenly, someone covered my eyes.
Tomoko: "Guess who..."
Michiharu: "Tomoko..."
She let go of me and I faced her. I don't know what to say whenever I'm with her...
Tomoko: "Cheer up! Something wrong?"
Michiharu: "Nothing!"
Tomoko: "You are in your usual grumpy self again."
Ben suddenly enters the scene... wow, way to break our moment.
Ben: "Lovebirds are allowed in my home, but don't leave too much mess, if you know what I mean."
Tomoko: "Hey! What's that supposed to mean?"
Ben: "Why don't you find out? Oh well, where we're going tomorrow will be perfect for both of you. Oh Paris..."
Michiharu: "Hey... it's not what you think."
Ben: "Oh ho ho... I can tell. Oh well, time to make a cup of coffee for the guest. You two enjoy yourselves."
**************************************************************************************
Location: Circuit de La Sarthe, France
Time: 3 pm, the next day
Zzzzzzzzz..... zzzzzzzz.... zzzzzzzzz....
....er wha??? Someone is waking me up. Where are we? I had a nice sleep in the caravan.
Tomoko: "Hey... you overslept. We're here in Le Mans."
Michiharu: "Really? I thought we're going to stop first at out hotel?"
Tomoko: "Gan-san decided to test the 330 P4's top speed, so that he can see whether it's ready for the upcoming race or not."
Michiharu: "I see."
We got out of the caravan together and lead me to the pit garage. She showed me the course layout. It looks rather simple... with a very long straight that caught my attention. Then she pointed at an area at the end of the long straight.
Tomoko: "This is where you should start braking. You'll see a "100 meters" marker. If your eyes are fast enough to see it, then brake. The car's brakes are designed to stop the car easily from 320 km/h. If you can't see it, then you can brake once you see this curve that will lead to the sharp, 90 degree right-hander. Got it?
Ben and I will go to the straight and will use the radar to record your speed.
You should relax, race cars are built to deal with high-speed stress. And most importantly, racing cars are built to place as less stress to the driver as possible. They send a message that you should focus on winning."
Michiharu: "Okay. I got it."
Gan: "Okay, people! Let's get started! We don't have all day for this! Michiharu, get in the car. Then the two of you must head to the straight."
Ben and Tomoko head out as the mechanics have finished setting up the car. Just how much money you spend on running a racing team? I can't imagine paying these mechanics, the drivers, and of course, the car.
Oh, where's Annie?
Michiharu: "Annie seems absent."
Gan: "She'll be with us in the race day. Now go out there and test yourself."
And so, I set off. Somehow, what Tomoko said about racing cars is right. I can feel easiness as I drive the car, probably because I'm used at high speeds now.
Okay, just focus. You have now gotten this far.
The one thing that once stroke fear on me is now on my side. I am now more confident in stepping the pedal! With the things I've learned, I have finally accepted "Speed"! Speed is within me now!
I am now entering the famous Hunaudieres Straight, where the trees witnessed the legends that have blitzed at speeds exceeding 300 kilometers per hour. Does this Ferrari live up to its claims? Let's find out!
Actually, this car doesn't have a speedometer, so I don't know what speed I'm running at.
But I can tell that I'm going faster... my body is leaning further. This is a racer's dream, to be pushed further... to be pushed further, beyond boundaries. I want that too.
What used to be a nobody who ran away from home, is now blitzing with pride. The world shall remember my name - Michiharu Kanonji.
I'm totally sucked in. I'm in the world where every kilometer per hour counts.
Ben: "328 kilometers per hour. It's still fast today. Imagine that kind of speed in the late 60s."
Tomoko: "Impressive! Then it could mean it's ready for competition. After all, we're about to face cars as fast as that Ferrari."
There are small markers. Better be safe now. Brake!
Whew... I made it.
But that means, I'm ready. I am reflexive enough to control this car. I am so much ready to face the world!
****************************************************************************
Location: Suzuka Circuit, Mie Prefecture, Japan
Time: 10:30 am, the next day
Hiroyuki is once again honing his skills in Suzuka. But this isn't just a normal practice session.
In actuality, he is being tested by one of the racing teams if he's qualified for the spot. A surprise revelation, if one must ask.
He enters the corners the same manner as he would in other sessions. He would not show anything less than his all.
He returns to the pit lane to meet up with the team's manager named Shinji Yama****a.
Hiroyuki: "How did I fare?"
Shinji: "Very well done! You met my expectations. You truly are Suzuka's Lone Wolf."
Hiroyuki: "Though of course, my Lone Wolf days are over."
Shinji: "Being in a team will make your career better. I promise you that."
Hiroyuki: "Someone told me something along those lines. Yeah, he's right all along."
Then as if fate arranged it, Michiharu (looking up the ceiling while lying on his bed) and Hiroyuki utter this powerful sentence:
Michiharu and Hiroyuki: "Farewell, shabby old me..."
End of Page 24
****************************************************************************
Tricks of the Trade:
Hello fellow readers! As promised in my status, I will post my tips. I'm no means a perfect writer, but a dedicated one at that.
So here are some helpful tips:
Continued Interest - this is what keeps me on writing fanfics. Remember, there are a plethora of cars in GT. Whenever I am interested in a specific car, I think of a story out of it. And if it's plausible, then I will have a go at it and write. It must have a theme as well - i.e. Rallying (it must be a car known for rallying prowess). If I have to insert another tip related here, it's Dedication. You need to be dedicated to your work. Set a time in which you write a draft and then set another for posting it. Laziness can kill a fanfic.
Stick to the Essence of a Race Report - we write stories as a creative manner, but one must remember that this is a RACE REPORT. Think as if you're playing as the character who drives the car. Get a feel on how it drives, how much tuning you've done, how it fares against other cars. Make an analysis, if you can, but not to the point of being too geeky.
Do not feature cars just for the sake of showing it. This is not Redline, and treat each car as if they are characters of the story too. Each of them must be coupled with your experiences with it. It's much better for them to be seen competing rather than just being parked, cruised around, or just cars on display.
Variety - hmmmmm.... what can I say about this? We have freedom on which type of cars we want to feature, but do not just stick on one type. Supercars are too cliche, if you ask me, being seen in action movies running in daring stunts and avoid having a scratch. But I'm not saying that you should not feature them. You are free to do so, however, balance is the key - it also means being realistic, as not everyone can afford to own a supercar. You can also tune a specific car exclusive only to your work (i.e. Nissan GT-R Takanori Edition II), which is I think is cool.
Character Backgrounds - I got to admit that I need to work on this. There's more to character than just being a racer. This is why Ben has another day job - as a real estate agent, or Tomoko - a Mochi Shop owner after retiring from racing. Come up with more interesting backgrounds that also define the character.
And the main character, must have a humble beginning. You can make a character a child of a prodigy, but it must undergo hardships too before becoming a well-accomplished character.
Research - this is VERY IMPORTANT. This will save you from being a laughingstock, especially when it concerns about car performance. GT does not supply you all the information you need when it comes to cars. Come on, there's always Google. It's just a click away. The same applies to time and place settings. This is also helpful on fanfic duels, when a car's characteristics are concerned, and how you must use it to your advantage.
And this is also helpful when dealing with other racing cultures:
For example - a foreign street racer sets foot in Japan's street racing scene, and finds it fascinating, but at the same time, very difficult to beat the racers. This is because Japan's tuning culture is simply crazy. Do not just assume the fact that Japan has cheap JDMs that can't beat supercars - in fact, the country is the breeding ground of supercar-eating beasts. So in short, don't make this character easily conquer the streets of Japan.
So there you have it. These are easy tips to follow. I wish you good luck should you venture on to writing.
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- United Kingdom
Page 24 - Turning Point
Okay, so apparently the woman named Annie Eisenberg is the person Gan should meet today. I found her just around the corner, just as she is about to arrive when her car broke down.
So I offered to bring her to Ben's chalet so that she can meet Gan at the appointed time. She's rather straight and serious, not like the cheerful Tomoko.
And she's well-off, having owned two restaurants, a bakery and a grill. An odd combination, and the former is the more popular one.
As for the 330 P4, I must say that it's brilliant. I can't express my satisfaction further. In the past, I have difficulties whenever I drive a car for the first time. But now, it's entirely different. While it has more power, and I have to be careful on the throttle, the car will do the rest for me. It turns easily, stops better, and is surprisingly stable. Are all racing cars built to be like that?
When we arrived, the woman immediately gets out and meets with Gan. Does she really have to be in a hurry?
Gan: "Oh I'm glad you made it. I thought you're lost."
Annie: "Actually, my car broke down just as I'm approaching this place. One of your drivers found me and picked me up."
Gan: "I see. Shall we get to business? After all, you have a great offer, and I love your business and stop by it whenever I visit Germany.
The two are discussing matters. So that means she'll be with us, catering food and drinks for us.
Oh, I almost forgot, Gan told me last night that we are going to France, since the first round of the World Sports Car Championship will be held in Monaco, for better convenience. His team of mechanics are already stationed there, and that we should meet them tomorrow. Oh great, I'm going to wake up early for this...
Suddenly, someone covered my eyes.
Tomoko: "Guess who..."
Michiharu: "Tomoko..."
She let go of me and I faced her. I don't know what to say whenever I'm with her...
Tomoko: "Cheer up! Something wrong?"
Michiharu: "Nothing!"
Tomoko: "You are in your usual grumpy self again."
Ben suddenly enters the scene... wow, way to break our moment.
Ben: "Lovebirds are allowed in my home, but don't leave too much mess, if you know what I mean."
Tomoko: "Hey! What's that supposed to mean?"
Ben: "Why don't you find out? Oh well, where we're going tomorrow will be perfect for both of you. Oh Paris..."
Michiharu: "Hey... it's not what you think."
Ben: "Oh ho ho... I can tell. Oh well, time to make a cup of coffee for the guest. You two enjoy yourselves."
**************************************************************************************
Location: Circuit de La Sarthe, France
Time: 3 pm, the next day
Zzzzzzzzz..... zzzzzzzz.... zzzzzzzzz....
....er wha??? Someone is waking me up. Where are we? I had a nice sleep in the caravan.
Tomoko: "Hey... you overslept. We're here in Le Mans."
Michiharu: "Really? I thought we're going to stop first at out hotel?"
Tomoko: "Gan-san decided to test the 330 P4's top speed, so that he can see whether it's ready for the upcoming race or not."
Michiharu: "I see."
We got out of the caravan together and lead me to the pit garage. She showed me the course layout. It looks rather simple... with a very long straight that caught my attention. Then she pointed at an area at the end of the long straight.
Tomoko: "This is where you should start braking. You'll see a "100 meters" marker. If your eyes are fast enough to see it, then brake. The car's brakes are designed to stop the car easily from 320 km/h. If you can't see it, then you can brake once you see this curve that will lead to the sharp, 90 degree right-hander. Got it?
Ben and I will go to the straight and will use the radar to record your speed.
You should relax, race cars are built to deal with high-speed stress. And most importantly, racing cars are built to place as less stress to the driver as possible. They send a message that you should focus on winning."
Michiharu: "Okay. I got it."
Gan: "Okay, people! Let's get started! We don't have all day for this! Michiharu, get in the car. Then the two of you must head to the straight."
Ben and Tomoko head out as the mechanics have finished setting up the car. Just how much money you spend on running a racing team? I can't imagine paying these mechanics, the drivers, and of course, the car.
Oh, where's Annie?
Michiharu: "Annie seems absent."
Gan: "She'll be with us in the race day. Now go out there and test yourself."
And so, I set off. Somehow, what Tomoko said about racing cars is right. I can feel easiness as I drive the car, probably because I'm used at high speeds now.
Okay, just focus. You have now gotten this far.
The one thing that once stroke fear on me is now on my side. I am now more confident in stepping the pedal! With the things I've learned, I have finally accepted "Speed"! Speed is within me now!
I am now entering the famous Hunaudieres Straight, where the trees witnessed the legends that have blitzed at speeds exceeding 300 kilometers per hour. Does this Ferrari live up to its claims? Let's find out!
Actually, this car doesn't have a speedometer, so I don't know what speed I'm running at.
But I can tell that I'm going faster... my body is leaning further. This is a racer's dream, to be pushed further... to be pushed further, beyond boundaries. I want that too.
What used to be a nobody who ran away from home, is now blitzing with pride. The world shall remember my name - Michiharu Kanonji.
I'm totally sucked in. I'm in the world where every kilometer per hour counts.
Ben: "328 kilometers per hour. It's still fast today. Imagine that kind of speed in the late 60s."
Tomoko: "Impressive! Then it could mean it's ready for competition. After all, we're about to face cars as fast as that Ferrari."
There are small markers. Better be safe now. Brake!
Whew... I made it.
But that means, I'm ready. I am reflexive enough to control this car. I am so much ready to face the world!
****************************************************************************
Location: Suzuka Circuit, Mie Prefecture, Japan
Time: 10:30 am, the next day
Hiroyuki is once again honing his skills in Suzuka. But this isn't just a normal practice session.
In actuality, he is being tested by one of the racing teams if he's qualified for the spot. A surprise revelation, if one must ask.
He enters the corners the same manner as he would in other sessions. He would not show anything less than his all.
He returns to the pit lane to meet up with the team's manager named Shinji Yama****a.
Hiroyuki: "How did I fare?"
Shinji: "Very well done! You met my expectations. You truly are Suzuka's Lone Wolf."
Hiroyuki: "Though of course, my Lone Wolf days are over."
Shinji: "Being in a team will make your career better. I promise you that."
Hiroyuki: "Someone told me something along those lines. Yeah, he's right all along."
Then as if fate arranged it, Michiharu (looking up the ceiling while lying on his bed) and Hiroyuki utter this powerful sentence:
Michiharu and Hiroyuki: "Farewell, shabby old me..."
End of Page 24
****************************************************************************
Tricks of the Trade:
Hello fellow readers! As promised in my status, I will post my tips. I'm no means a perfect writer, but a dedicated one at that.
So here are some helpful tips:
Continued Interest - this is what keeps me on writing fanfics. Remember, there are a plethora of cars in GT. Whenever I am interested in a specific car, I think of a story out of it. And if it's plausible, then I will have a go at it and write. It must have a theme as well - i.e. Rallying (it must be a car known for rallying prowess). If I have to insert another tip related here, it's Dedication. You need to be dedicated to your work. Set a time in which you write a draft and then set another for posting it. Laziness can kill a fanfic.
Stick to the Essence of a Race Report - we write stories as a creative manner, but one must remember that this is a RACE REPORT. Think as if you're playing as the character who drives the car. Get a feel on how it drives, how much tuning you've done, how it fares against other cars. Make an analysis, if you can, but not to the point of being too geeky.
Do not feature cars just for the sake of showing it. This is not Redline, and treat each car as if they are characters of the story too. Each of them must be coupled with your experiences with it. It's much better for them to be seen competing rather than just being parked, cruised around, or just cars on display.
Variety - hmmmmm.... what can I say about this? We have freedom on which type of cars we want to feature, but do not just stick on one type. Supercars are too cliche, if you ask me, being seen in action movies running in daring stunts and avoid having a scratch. But I'm not saying that you should not feature them. You are free to do so, however, balance is the key - it also means being realistic, as not everyone can afford to own a supercar. You can also tune a specific car exclusive only to your work (i.e. Nissan GT-R Takanori Edition II), which is I think is cool.
Character Backgrounds - I got to admit that I need to work on this. There's more to character than just being a racer. This is why Ben has another day job - as a real estate agent, or Tomoko - a Mochi Shop owner after retiring from racing. Come up with more interesting backgrounds that also define the character.
And the main character, must have a humble beginning. You can make a character a child of a prodigy, but it must undergo hardships too before becoming a well-accomplished character.
Research - this is VERY IMPORTANT. This will save you from being a laughingstock, especially when it concerns about car performance. GT does not supply you all the information you need when it comes to cars. Come on, there's always Google. It's just a click away. The same applies to time and place settings. This is also helpful on fanfic duels, when a car's characteristics are concerned, and how you must use it to your advantage.
And this is also helpful when dealing with other racing cultures:
For example - a foreign street racer sets foot in Japan's street racing scene, and finds it fascinating, but at the same time, very difficult to beat the racers. This is because Japan's tuning culture is simply crazy. Do not just assume the fact that Japan has cheap JDMs that can't beat supercars - in fact, the country is the breeding ground of supercar-eating beasts. So in short, don't make this character easily conquer the streets of Japan.
So there you have it. These are easy tips to follow. I wish you good luck should you venture on to writing.
Dem tips
and awesome chapter, Ive nearly read all of the sectors now.EDIT: Can I take the CRX too
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- INF_Mike458
Since we're nearing Chapter 3, I'll spill you the cars that you can use for volunteering for the duels in that chapter:
Chevrolet Nova SS
Chevrolet Corvette C2
Honda Ballade Sports CR-X '83
Shelby GT350
Details will be posted soon, so please stay tuned.
I'll take the GT350 then.
As for the F40 vs Countach battle, can I take the Countach?
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- Manila, PH
- TakuKanonji22
Page 25 - Sir Shaw's Trump Card
I have entered the global stage. I am not proving myself in Japan anymore, but in the entire world. All eyes are on me. Would this hinder me in my quest to glory?
I am always wondering how the famous athletes around the world take on the pressure. They must not make a single mistake. Everyone is watching, and if you did screw up, everyone will talk. Words spread like wildfire, and they can cause your fall.
I've done a part of my goal, which is to pilot the 330 P4 to heavenly speeds. Tomoko told me that I was able to reach 328 kilometers per hour. From behind the wheel, it's totally different. Gan's Ferrari and even Ben's Countach are not on the 330 P4's level of speed. However, to be able to keep that race car stable means that I have improved a lot.
And now... it's time. Time to prove my worth!
We have arrived in Monaco a week later. It's the 1st round of the World Sports Car Championship. At the pit lane of the race track, I see a lot of people... and teams set up their cars.
I am walking around, and then I see Annie grilling some meat and seafood for our provisions. She's been cooking ever since we arrived. Are we having a buffet after the race?
Annie: "Oh, hi there."
Michiharu: "Nice seafood you're cooking. I used to eat them back home."
Annie: "I see. I assume they're raw."
Her waiters take some of the cooked items. And then one of them serve a glass of water to me. I need a drink...
Annie: "Good luck. As far as I know, these races are intense. And not everyone is kind enough to give you an opening."
Gan called me, suddenly. Annie smiled at me as I heeded the call.
Gan: "Time to do a practice lap."
Michiharu: "I am familiar with this course already. In fact, I had a showdown here with one of the competitors in the Mille Miglia. I'll head out once again so that I won't forget. It's been quite a while."
Gan: "Oh I see. That's good. You gotta hurry, we have little time left before the race starts."
Tomoko: "I'm coming! I'll ride with him!"
What did she just say??? Oh boy... it's happening again....
Tomoko: "You said that you have passed by this layout already."
Michiharu: "Hiroyuki told me to pass here at the time. And... I had a duel here."
I tucked the car at the inside... yes, that's the way. That's what Uncle Koichi told me.
Tomoko: "Wow... impressive cornering ability! And I think you have finally gotten the hang of controlling a high-powered car."
Tomoko... you are always at my side, whether I feel up or down. You are always here for me. This is what "friends" are for, right? But... I think it's more than being just friends.
The trick here is that I must maintain the car's traction, especially at corner exits. This is basically a point-and-squirt layout of a track.
This place is filled with wonderful things. The scenery, this car...
...and the woman beside me.
We returned to the pit lane. That wasn't enough, I know. But we have no time left. I can still familiarize the track during the race.
Then Ben handed me a mouthpiece.
Ben: "We'll communicate during the race. We'll also keep you informed.
This is it, Michiharu. Welcome to the big leagues. From now on, you'll be racing with all eyes on you. You cannot afford to do a mistake. I know the pressure you're feeling right now."
Gan: "I made no mistake in hiring you. Keep this up. Win... or lose, we'll always be here for you. We're a family."
Tomoko: "He's right. And just think about winning. We've done the rest."
Meanwhile, Sir Shaw is at the upper part of the bleachers, smoking with his pipette, and with his butler as well.
Sir Shaw: "Ben has yet to see the last of me. Let's see if he can overcome this party trick I've done."
Butler: "Sir, the FIA executives will arrive shortly."
Sir Shaw: "They won't be in time to see the roster. Perfect."
And it's a rolling start. This is it, Michiharu. No turning back now. The old, shabby you is officially gone.
However, Tomoko and Ben are shocked at the appearance of two leading cars of the pack.
Tomoko: "Oh no... Michiharu will have a tough time. Or it's even impossible to win."
Ben: "The Toyota is not the problem, but that Chaparral 2J. As far as I know, it's banned!"
Tomoko: "Banned!?"
Ben looks around, and then sees his father at the bleachers, crossing his legs with a grin familiar to Ben.
Ben: "Shaw... I know that gesture. He does that whenever he finds it fun to punish me. He has something to do with this!"
Gan: "What do you mean!?"
Ben: "Remember, he pulls the strings of every major race in the world! He's doing this to make me pay!"
Ben runs as fast as he can, to confront his father once again...
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I have entered the global stage. I am not proving myself in Japan anymore, but in the entire world. All eyes are on me. Would this hinder me in my quest to glory?
I am always wondering how the famous athletes around the world take on the pressure. They must not make a single mistake. Everyone is watching, and if you did screw up, everyone will talk. Words spread like wildfire, and they can cause your fall.
I've done a part of my goal, which is to pilot the 330 P4 to heavenly speeds. Tomoko told me that I was able to reach 328 kilometers per hour. From behind the wheel, it's totally different. Gan's Ferrari and even Ben's Countach are not on the 330 P4's level of speed. However, to be able to keep that race car stable means that I have improved a lot.
And now... it's time. Time to prove my worth!
We have arrived in Monaco a week later. It's the 1st round of the World Sports Car Championship. At the pit lane of the race track, I see a lot of people... and teams set up their cars.
I am walking around, and then I see Annie grilling some meat and seafood for our provisions. She's been cooking ever since we arrived. Are we having a buffet after the race?
Annie: "Oh, hi there."
Michiharu: "Nice seafood you're cooking. I used to eat them back home."
Annie: "I see. I assume they're raw."
Her waiters take some of the cooked items. And then one of them serve a glass of water to me. I need a drink...
Annie: "Good luck. As far as I know, these races are intense. And not everyone is kind enough to give you an opening."
Gan called me, suddenly. Annie smiled at me as I heeded the call.
Gan: "Time to do a practice lap."
Michiharu: "I am familiar with this course already. In fact, I had a showdown here with one of the competitors in the Mille Miglia. I'll head out once again so that I won't forget. It's been quite a while."
Gan: "Oh I see. That's good. You gotta hurry, we have little time left before the race starts."
Tomoko: "I'm coming! I'll ride with him!"
What did she just say??? Oh boy... it's happening again....
Tomoko: "You said that you have passed by this layout already."
Michiharu: "Hiroyuki told me to pass here at the time. And... I had a duel here."
I tucked the car at the inside... yes, that's the way. That's what Uncle Koichi told me.
Tomoko: "Wow... impressive cornering ability! And I think you have finally gotten the hang of controlling a high-powered car."
Tomoko... you are always at my side, whether I feel up or down. You are always here for me. This is what "friends" are for, right? But... I think it's more than being just friends.
The trick here is that I must maintain the car's traction, especially at corner exits. This is basically a point-and-squirt layout of a track.
This place is filled with wonderful things. The scenery, this car...
...and the woman beside me.
We returned to the pit lane. That wasn't enough, I know. But we have no time left. I can still familiarize the track during the race.
Then Ben handed me a mouthpiece.
Ben: "We'll communicate during the race. We'll also keep you informed.
This is it, Michiharu. Welcome to the big leagues. From now on, you'll be racing with all eyes on you. You cannot afford to do a mistake. I know the pressure you're feeling right now."
Gan: "I made no mistake in hiring you. Keep this up. Win... or lose, we'll always be here for you. We're a family."
Tomoko: "He's right. And just think about winning. We've done the rest."
Meanwhile, Sir Shaw is at the upper part of the bleachers, smoking with his pipette, and with his butler as well.
Sir Shaw: "Ben has yet to see the last of me. Let's see if he can overcome this party trick I've done."
Butler: "Sir, the FIA executives will arrive shortly."
Sir Shaw: "They won't be in time to see the roster. Perfect."
And it's a rolling start. This is it, Michiharu. No turning back now. The old, shabby you is officially gone.
However, Tomoko and Ben are shocked at the appearance of two leading cars of the pack.
Tomoko: "Oh no... Michiharu will have a tough time. Or it's even impossible to win."
Ben: "The Toyota is not the problem, but that Chaparral 2J. As far as I know, it's banned!"
Tomoko: "Banned!?"
Ben looks around, and then sees his father at the bleachers, crossing his legs with a grin familiar to Ben.
Ben: "Shaw... I know that gesture. He does that whenever he finds it fun to punish me. He has something to do with this!"
Gan: "What do you mean!?"
Ben: "Remember, he pulls the strings of every major race in the world! He's doing this to make me pay!"
Ben runs as fast as he can, to confront his father once again...
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Page 26 - Honorable
Well then, I'm off to a good start. This is it, with encouragement from the people who care for me, I'm all ready to face the world! I want to see how I stack up against seasoned race car drivers!
Encouragement... something I'll treasure forever. I never had that kind of positive reception in my entire life. I'd better treasure it. I'll return the favor...
...by winning this!
The 330 P4 totally agrees with me. We are together overcoming our opponents standing in our way. I'll never forget this car, and its experiences that gave me.
After that hairy, Grand Hotel Hairpin, I stabbed the brake pedal once again, but in a later manner, so as to overtake.
And then that red car in front of me has impressive speed as well. Don't worry too much, as this is just the start!
Meanwhile, the higher-ranking FIA Executives have joined Sir Shaw at the covered area of the bleachers.
Sir Shaw: "Good day, Gentlemen. Please enjoy the rest of the race. It's off to a good start."
And whilst everyone has settled, Ben suddenly barged in. Sir Shaw stands up to confront his son.
Sir Shaw: "What are you doing here? How dare you barge..."
Before uttering the next word, he was punched hard by his son on the face. The force is strong enough to fall on the concrete.
Ben: "How's that, huh? You cheap son of a..."
Sir Shaw: "You're not driving??? Then who..."
Ben: "Shut your trap! The one driving is far more honorable and faster than you and I combined. A man from the East."
Sir Shaw remembers the encounter with Michiharu and his Miura.
FIA Executive: "What on earth is going on??? Have you gone mad? Why punch your father?"
Ben: "Sir, apparently Shaw here allowed a banned car to run in this event. All for the sake of revenge. Next time, you should be the ones taking charge."
One of them use binoculars, and see the banned fan car that is the Chaparral 2J.
FIA Executive 2: "Indeed. That car was banned years ago! What's this travesty, Sir Shaw?"
Ben: "It's all over, Shaw. You may do as much dirty tricks as you want, but they can never crush me, nor my entire team.
You can disown me as early as now if you want to. I've had enough of this wretched family."
I have overtaken the swoopy race car after the chicane. I blocked its path, should it plan to overtake.
Start of the 2nd lap. How many more to overtake until I take the lead?
Tomoko: "Michiharu-kun!"
Tomoko... why call me all of a sudden?
Tomoko: "Listen to me! You have to concentrate to your fullest! The two leading cars are powerhouses! One of them is even banned in the motorsports world!"
What? One of them is banned? Could that mean that it's too fast for the competition?
Suddenly... I feel something burning. What is this? I never felt this sensation before! It's this...
...flaming urge to win! Come on! I'm all fired up!!!
End of Page 26
AUTHOR'S NOTES:
- Give it a few more pages, and Chapter 2 is over. The next rounds of the said championship? Never bother. They could be mentioned by Michiharu, but not going to be highlighted. If I do, then it will make this chapter too long, and even divert away from the original plot.
Well then, I'm off to a good start. This is it, with encouragement from the people who care for me, I'm all ready to face the world! I want to see how I stack up against seasoned race car drivers!
Encouragement... something I'll treasure forever. I never had that kind of positive reception in my entire life. I'd better treasure it. I'll return the favor...
...by winning this!
The 330 P4 totally agrees with me. We are together overcoming our opponents standing in our way. I'll never forget this car, and its experiences that gave me.
After that hairy, Grand Hotel Hairpin, I stabbed the brake pedal once again, but in a later manner, so as to overtake.
And then that red car in front of me has impressive speed as well. Don't worry too much, as this is just the start!
Meanwhile, the higher-ranking FIA Executives have joined Sir Shaw at the covered area of the bleachers.
Sir Shaw: "Good day, Gentlemen. Please enjoy the rest of the race. It's off to a good start."
And whilst everyone has settled, Ben suddenly barged in. Sir Shaw stands up to confront his son.
Sir Shaw: "What are you doing here? How dare you barge..."
Before uttering the next word, he was punched hard by his son on the face. The force is strong enough to fall on the concrete.
Ben: "How's that, huh? You cheap son of a..."
Sir Shaw: "You're not driving??? Then who..."
Ben: "Shut your trap! The one driving is far more honorable and faster than you and I combined. A man from the East."
Sir Shaw remembers the encounter with Michiharu and his Miura.
FIA Executive: "What on earth is going on??? Have you gone mad? Why punch your father?"
Ben: "Sir, apparently Shaw here allowed a banned car to run in this event. All for the sake of revenge. Next time, you should be the ones taking charge."
One of them use binoculars, and see the banned fan car that is the Chaparral 2J.
FIA Executive 2: "Indeed. That car was banned years ago! What's this travesty, Sir Shaw?"
Ben: "It's all over, Shaw. You may do as much dirty tricks as you want, but they can never crush me, nor my entire team.
You can disown me as early as now if you want to. I've had enough of this wretched family."
I have overtaken the swoopy race car after the chicane. I blocked its path, should it plan to overtake.
Start of the 2nd lap. How many more to overtake until I take the lead?
Tomoko: "Michiharu-kun!"
Tomoko... why call me all of a sudden?
Tomoko: "Listen to me! You have to concentrate to your fullest! The two leading cars are powerhouses! One of them is even banned in the motorsports world!"
What? One of them is banned? Could that mean that it's too fast for the competition?
Suddenly... I feel something burning. What is this? I never felt this sensation before! It's this...
...flaming urge to win! Come on! I'm all fired up!!!
End of Page 26
AUTHOR'S NOTES:
- Give it a few more pages, and Chapter 2 is over. The next rounds of the said championship? Never bother. They could be mentioned by Michiharu, but not going to be highlighted. If I do, then it will make this chapter too long, and even divert away from the original plot.
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A little coffee break here, guys.
We're nearing the end of Chapter 2. Few pages left, and it's over. It's the longest chapter in the story, because it's the gradual shift, and then turning point of Michiharu's life as a racer.
Chapter 3 will be shorter, as there are fewer battles there. And it'll focus on Hiroyuki more than Michiharu, though of course the latter will still play a large role there.
And oddly enough, the FINAL BATTLE of this story has just been recorded. I'm that excited to organize it. Wait for long, though...
We're nearing the end of Chapter 2. Few pages left, and it's over. It's the longest chapter in the story, because it's the gradual shift, and then turning point of Michiharu's life as a racer.
Chapter 3 will be shorter, as there are fewer battles there. And it'll focus on Hiroyuki more than Michiharu, though of course the latter will still play a large role there.
And oddly enough, the FINAL BATTLE of this story has just been recorded. I'm that excited to organize it. Wait for long, though...
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A Little Coffee Break - Destiny Repeats
Just a little teaser on the final battle of the story. Hiroyuki recounts what happened 25 years ago.... at Suzuka.
Location: Suzuka Circuit, Mie Prefecture, Japan
Time: 10 am, the present day
This day is the housewarming day for the new home of the Hiramoto couple. However, as everything is prepared, Hiroyuki decided to head to Suzuka, along with his two sons - Nobuhiko and Nobuyuki - for a little recreation.
It turns out though, that Hiroyuki's McLaren F1 has been heavily modified.
Nobuhiko: "Oyaji didn't tell everything about his McLaren, nor even our GT3 car. He's been secretive lately."
As it passes the start line, Nobuyuki starts the stopwatch.
Nobuyuki: "There's nothing we can do about it, Little Nobu. But he did promise to reveal our GT3 race car tonight at the housewarming party."
Nobuhiko: "But he did leave a hint. He said that it's "surprisingly balanced" for its type.
Nobuyuki: "That's it? Race cars are supposed to be balanced, right?"
Hiroyuki: "This car is better overall. Gone is the skittish nature of the normal car. When was the last time I got this involved in a car?"
Hiroyuki: "Ah, yes.... it was that day 25 years ago... who wouldn't forget? That could arguably be the best battle of my life. Michiharu Kanonji.... I was fooled by his appearance."
Approaching the hairpin, he brakes hard. The rear wing prevents the car from losing stability during braking. Hiroyuki struggled at this very hairpin before with the normal car.
Hiroyuki: "Heh... impressive stability for a car of this caliber, much like my F40."
Hiroyuki: "But I do sense something oncoming... a battle much greater. Why do I feel something big is going to happen? It's not even the GT3 Championship. But something bigger.
Michiharu, do you see what's going on from above? And, can you also feel it?"
Zooming past the 130R exceeding 200 KM/H, he gently applies the brakes, given the fact that the car doesn't have ABS.
Hiroyuki: "Michiharu, you gave me the best duel of my life. Who would've thought that the man who crashed his GT-R like a total newbie would end up making me sweat at the end?"
The modified McLaren crosses the line at 1 minute and 54.1 seconds. His two children are amazed at the lap time, and as well as the skill of their father, despite having not raced for long.
Nobuyuki: "Un... believable. I'd never thought that the McLaren F1 could go around the track that fast. I had always thought of it as a high speed luxury hypercar."
Nobuhiko: "That's 4 seconds faster than Takuma-san's race-prepped FD."
Hiroyuki returns to the pit lane, with his two sons applauding at him.
Hiroyuki: "What's with the applause, really?"
Nobuyuki: "Oyaji, you smashed the previous lap record! 1 minute and 54.1 seconds!"
Hiroyuki: "And you're saying that today's racing cars can beat this? Heh... racers of today are spoiled too much by these driver assistance gadgets installed. Back in my day, we control cars through skill alone. You think I can't handle more than 700 horsepower?
I'm slightly disappointed at the fact that our GT3 race car has ABS since it's a "requirement for safety". Though the traction control and stability control systems were removed by my request.
GT3 racing cars are for babies, in fact. To think they come with driver aids as standard. I even threatened not to push through the deal if they didn't remove those driver aids in our car, which they did, anyway."
Nobuyuki: "Spill it!"
Hiroyuki: "Can't it wait until tonight? It's just a few hours away."
Nobuhiko: "If you insist, then."
Nobuyuki: "All of bullying at Takanori-san was for nothing."
Hiroyuki: "Takanori's resilience reminded me of his father. He'll never give up no matter what kind of challenge he'll face. He's so brave. So brave that he even punched me on the face to stand up for someone he holds dear."
Nobuhiko: "What makes you say that? And you're feeling nostalgic."
Hiroyuki: "Every time I'm here at this track, I remember the duel we once had, 25 years ago. Even seeing the Kanonji twins race reminds me of him."
Nobuhiko: "I raced Takanori-san here before too. I barely won..."
Hiroyuki: "However, if Takuma is concerned, then he is like the modern-day Michiharu. If one of you will be racing him, then I won't be surprised if...
...history will repeat itself."
End
Just a little teaser on the final battle of the story. Hiroyuki recounts what happened 25 years ago.... at Suzuka.
Location: Suzuka Circuit, Mie Prefecture, Japan
Time: 10 am, the present day
This day is the housewarming day for the new home of the Hiramoto couple. However, as everything is prepared, Hiroyuki decided to head to Suzuka, along with his two sons - Nobuhiko and Nobuyuki - for a little recreation.
It turns out though, that Hiroyuki's McLaren F1 has been heavily modified.
Nobuhiko: "Oyaji didn't tell everything about his McLaren, nor even our GT3 car. He's been secretive lately."
As it passes the start line, Nobuyuki starts the stopwatch.
Nobuyuki: "There's nothing we can do about it, Little Nobu. But he did promise to reveal our GT3 race car tonight at the housewarming party."
Nobuhiko: "But he did leave a hint. He said that it's "surprisingly balanced" for its type.
Nobuyuki: "That's it? Race cars are supposed to be balanced, right?"
Hiroyuki: "This car is better overall. Gone is the skittish nature of the normal car. When was the last time I got this involved in a car?"
Hiroyuki: "Ah, yes.... it was that day 25 years ago... who wouldn't forget? That could arguably be the best battle of my life. Michiharu Kanonji.... I was fooled by his appearance."
Approaching the hairpin, he brakes hard. The rear wing prevents the car from losing stability during braking. Hiroyuki struggled at this very hairpin before with the normal car.
Hiroyuki: "Heh... impressive stability for a car of this caliber, much like my F40."
Hiroyuki: "But I do sense something oncoming... a battle much greater. Why do I feel something big is going to happen? It's not even the GT3 Championship. But something bigger.
Michiharu, do you see what's going on from above? And, can you also feel it?"
Zooming past the 130R exceeding 200 KM/H, he gently applies the brakes, given the fact that the car doesn't have ABS.
Hiroyuki: "Michiharu, you gave me the best duel of my life. Who would've thought that the man who crashed his GT-R like a total newbie would end up making me sweat at the end?"
The modified McLaren crosses the line at 1 minute and 54.1 seconds. His two children are amazed at the lap time, and as well as the skill of their father, despite having not raced for long.
Nobuyuki: "Un... believable. I'd never thought that the McLaren F1 could go around the track that fast. I had always thought of it as a high speed luxury hypercar."
Nobuhiko: "That's 4 seconds faster than Takuma-san's race-prepped FD."
Hiroyuki returns to the pit lane, with his two sons applauding at him.
Hiroyuki: "What's with the applause, really?"
Nobuyuki: "Oyaji, you smashed the previous lap record! 1 minute and 54.1 seconds!"
Hiroyuki: "And you're saying that today's racing cars can beat this? Heh... racers of today are spoiled too much by these driver assistance gadgets installed. Back in my day, we control cars through skill alone. You think I can't handle more than 700 horsepower?
I'm slightly disappointed at the fact that our GT3 race car has ABS since it's a "requirement for safety". Though the traction control and stability control systems were removed by my request.
GT3 racing cars are for babies, in fact. To think they come with driver aids as standard. I even threatened not to push through the deal if they didn't remove those driver aids in our car, which they did, anyway."
Nobuyuki: "Spill it!"
Hiroyuki: "Can't it wait until tonight? It's just a few hours away."
Nobuhiko: "If you insist, then."
Nobuyuki: "All of bullying at Takanori-san was for nothing."
Hiroyuki: "Takanori's resilience reminded me of his father. He'll never give up no matter what kind of challenge he'll face. He's so brave. So brave that he even punched me on the face to stand up for someone he holds dear."
Nobuhiko: "What makes you say that? And you're feeling nostalgic."
Hiroyuki: "Every time I'm here at this track, I remember the duel we once had, 25 years ago. Even seeing the Kanonji twins race reminds me of him."
Nobuhiko: "I raced Takanori-san here before too. I barely won..."
Hiroyuki: "However, if Takuma is concerned, then he is like the modern-day Michiharu. If one of you will be racing him, then I won't be surprised if...
...history will repeat itself."
End
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Page 27 - The Powerhouses
So there are two cars left to deal with, and one of them is a banned one, according to Tomoko.
Suddenly, after hearing those, a burning sensation ignited within me. Is it because of my eagerness to win, knowing how fast the cars are? Or even the entire competition? I don't know for sure, but...
...it's such a good feeling! My grip on the steering wheel is firmer, and my gear shifting is faster.
Meanwhile, at the pit lane...
Gan: "I've got myself thinking on how that banned Chaparral 2J made it."
Tomoko: "Maybe this is the doing of Ben's father. But do you have an idea what that is?"
Gan: "It's one of the most interesting racing cars in motorsports history. It changed the rules of motorsport forever. It has "fans" to generate downforce whenever needed."
Tomoko: "Fans?"
Gan: "Who would've thought that a device known for cooling would also turn out to be an unfair weapon? Those fans create a vacuum effect underneath, sucking the car down. This, in effect, will make the car's downforce constant."
Gan: "Because of that, the Chaparral 2J became a dominating force in Can-Am racing. It cleared corners like a breeze, keeping downforce levels constant. The fan technology was soon discovered by the organizers, and banned the car immediately because of the unfair advantage it has. A normal car would lose downforce when it slows down, or when the slip angle is too much."
Tomoko: "Then that means, nothing can stop it!"
Gan: "Oh, that's where you're wrong. The Toyota 7, on the other hand, will only be Michiharu's chance of winning."
What's that weird-looking, box car? And it has a propeller at the back. I guess cars come in all shapes and sizes. It corners very fast, though!
But oddly enough, the leading car is slowing it down....
Gan: "I can't believe someone actually restored the ill-fated Toyota 7."
Tomoko: "As far as I know, that one never ran in any major race. It was even shelved just before it competed."
Gan: "That's because the car is too fast and too unsafe all for beating the competition, that the test drivers actually died during its development."
Tomoko: "That's depressing."
Gan: "Toyota was struggling to beat its rivals in the Can-Am series, that they decided to twin turbocharge the V8 engine. However, the Toyota 7 was not able to compete in the 1970 season since open wheel cars are not allowed in the Japanese Grand Prix, along with the deaths of those 2 test drivers.
The engine is far too powerful for the chassis. Hence the reason I believe that it's actually slowing down that Chaparral. Consider Michiharu a lucky person. That Toyota 7 doesn't have all the traction it needs, slowing it down."
Whoa! Those two cars in front of me are rocket ships! Even this Ferrari can't compete with them in power! What shall I do???
But I'm too far to give up! I cannot give up here! I made it this far! Why would I stop?!?
I have adjusted my braking points. Braking late will make me keep up...
But I'm actually too fast for the corner! I'm understeering while that white boxy car carries on.
Tomoko: "I think I've figured it out..."
Gan: "How to overtake those two?"
Tomoko: "Yes. But he has only one chance to do it."
Gan: "How?"
Tomoko grabs the communication system and talks to Michiharu.
Tomoko: "Listen, Michiharu-kun! The only way to overtake those two powerful cars is to attack at the Grand Hotel Hairpin! The leading car will slow down that fan car for you!"
Thanks, Tomoko.... You really have a much better experience in racing, for you to come up with such plans.
And there it is, the hairpin!
Brake... tuck at the inside. And nudge that boxy car!
All right! The plan worked! I'm in the lead! I could really use some studying to learn more on racing strategies.
Michiharu: "I got the lead! I am in the lead!"
Tomoko: "All right! Now take it from there! Show your might!"
Don't let your guard down though, Michiharu... that car behind you is very fast.
But as soon as I get out of the chicane, the gap has spread! All right... it's time to fire up once again!
Look out world! Here comes Michiharu Kanonji, from a small island in the East called Japan!
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So there are two cars left to deal with, and one of them is a banned one, according to Tomoko.
Suddenly, after hearing those, a burning sensation ignited within me. Is it because of my eagerness to win, knowing how fast the cars are? Or even the entire competition? I don't know for sure, but...
...it's such a good feeling! My grip on the steering wheel is firmer, and my gear shifting is faster.
Meanwhile, at the pit lane...
Gan: "I've got myself thinking on how that banned Chaparral 2J made it."
Tomoko: "Maybe this is the doing of Ben's father. But do you have an idea what that is?"
Gan: "It's one of the most interesting racing cars in motorsports history. It changed the rules of motorsport forever. It has "fans" to generate downforce whenever needed."
Tomoko: "Fans?"
Gan: "Who would've thought that a device known for cooling would also turn out to be an unfair weapon? Those fans create a vacuum effect underneath, sucking the car down. This, in effect, will make the car's downforce constant."
Gan: "Because of that, the Chaparral 2J became a dominating force in Can-Am racing. It cleared corners like a breeze, keeping downforce levels constant. The fan technology was soon discovered by the organizers, and banned the car immediately because of the unfair advantage it has. A normal car would lose downforce when it slows down, or when the slip angle is too much."
Tomoko: "Then that means, nothing can stop it!"
Gan: "Oh, that's where you're wrong. The Toyota 7, on the other hand, will only be Michiharu's chance of winning."
What's that weird-looking, box car? And it has a propeller at the back. I guess cars come in all shapes and sizes. It corners very fast, though!
But oddly enough, the leading car is slowing it down....
Gan: "I can't believe someone actually restored the ill-fated Toyota 7."
Tomoko: "As far as I know, that one never ran in any major race. It was even shelved just before it competed."
Gan: "That's because the car is too fast and too unsafe all for beating the competition, that the test drivers actually died during its development."
Tomoko: "That's depressing."
Gan: "Toyota was struggling to beat its rivals in the Can-Am series, that they decided to twin turbocharge the V8 engine. However, the Toyota 7 was not able to compete in the 1970 season since open wheel cars are not allowed in the Japanese Grand Prix, along with the deaths of those 2 test drivers.
The engine is far too powerful for the chassis. Hence the reason I believe that it's actually slowing down that Chaparral. Consider Michiharu a lucky person. That Toyota 7 doesn't have all the traction it needs, slowing it down."
Whoa! Those two cars in front of me are rocket ships! Even this Ferrari can't compete with them in power! What shall I do???
But I'm too far to give up! I cannot give up here! I made it this far! Why would I stop?!?
I have adjusted my braking points. Braking late will make me keep up...
But I'm actually too fast for the corner! I'm understeering while that white boxy car carries on.
Tomoko: "I think I've figured it out..."
Gan: "How to overtake those two?"
Tomoko: "Yes. But he has only one chance to do it."
Gan: "How?"
Tomoko grabs the communication system and talks to Michiharu.
Tomoko: "Listen, Michiharu-kun! The only way to overtake those two powerful cars is to attack at the Grand Hotel Hairpin! The leading car will slow down that fan car for you!"
Thanks, Tomoko.... You really have a much better experience in racing, for you to come up with such plans.
And there it is, the hairpin!
Brake... tuck at the inside. And nudge that boxy car!
All right! The plan worked! I'm in the lead! I could really use some studying to learn more on racing strategies.
Michiharu: "I got the lead! I am in the lead!"
Tomoko: "All right! Now take it from there! Show your might!"
Don't let your guard down though, Michiharu... that car behind you is very fast.
But as soon as I get out of the chicane, the gap has spread! All right... it's time to fire up once again!
Look out world! Here comes Michiharu Kanonji, from a small island in the East called Japan!
End of Page 27
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Page 28 - Unforgettable Experience
I did it... I finally did it.
I actually won! Who would've thought a man who started from nothing would end up getting this far?
Tomoko: "We did it! We're off to a good start of the championship!"
Gan: "Michiharu, this is the beginning... when the world will see your true worth."
When I went down the car, Tomoko runs towards me and...
...kissed my cheek. Uh-oh... here it goes again... my heart!
Tomoko: "Oh... I'm sorry. I just got carried away."
Meanwhile, at the bleachers, some organizers help Sir Shaw stand up. Then one of the FIA Executives stand before him.
FIA Executive: "Sir Shaw McCarthy. We truly recognize your contribution to this prestigious organization. However, this organization does not condone unfair practices - such as the fan technology, which you clearly know that it is not allowed within the rules. Allowing such car to participate all for your selfish desire tarnish the image of this very organization. We do not allow such trickery nor treachery to spoil the essence of motorsports. All these drivers work very hard to achieve their goals, and we cannot allow one car to ruin them all.
And because of that, you, Sir Shaw McCarthy are hereby banned from the FIA forever. You are stripped of your position as your punishment. You can no longer race in our organized events.
Coincides with your retirement, am I right?"
Ben has smiled upon hearing the verdict. He leaves them without a word and joins his team.
He looks up on Michiharu, standing at the center of the podium, holding the gold trophy shining under the sun.
Ben: "Well, what do we know? That chap made it."
All eyes are on me next time... Bigger challenges await, especially the 2nd round. With those ahead of me, I'll be prepared. I'll continue on growing, growing through experience.
**************************************************************************************
We are celebrating our victory still, at Ben's Chalet in Switzerland. Oh, the entire team is present as well. So, we all enjoy buffet and drinks inside. Do we have to celebrate that much? It's just the first round...
Tomoko: "Don't tell me you'll be grumpy tonight! Celebrate your victory! Don't be such a stuffed shirt!"
Michiharu: "It's just the first round. We can celebrate like this when we win the entire championship."
Tomoko: "Hey! Every victory deserves a celebration! You deserve this! Come on!
Suddenly, all of us are being called by Gan for a meeting.
Gan: "Listen up. I know this is just the first round, but every hard work deserves a reward. The 2nd round is far off, but we must always be in tip-top condition, always prepared for what's to come.
Michiharu here, must be celebrating! You deserve all the glory, after what you've went through. You climbed up to the top, to the point that the world sees you and your worth."
Michiharu: "Thanks, everyone. If it weren't for you, then I wouldn't have gotten this far. Thank you for all the things you've taught me."
Ben: "Ugh... you make it sound like you're leaving us, chap! Go see a speech teacher! You're a killjoy!"
Hey! I'm just saying what I feel! Of course I'm grateful to everyone who contributed to this. I didn't achieve this alone, you know?
Gan: "Tomorrow, we shall be setting off. Since we have accepted an offer to race in an event in the USA, we shall head there, and a car is waiting for us."
Ben: "We're going to a place filled with cheeseburgers, hillbillies, rednecks, and yank tanks? Great."
Next stage would be America, huh? Will I be able to meet Richard there once again? I'll set my prejudices aside. Who knows, maybe USA and its people aren't that bad at all.
Tomoko: "I'm always curious as to why that country is a superpower. Oh well, we'll know when we get there."
I briefly stand up and head to the garage. I am now looking at the two cars that gave me unforgettable learning experiences throughout my racing life.
Thank you very much. How do you say Thank You in Italian? Never mind... the most important thing is that you thank them for the lessons they taught you.
I'll never, ever forget you. Should I return here, I'll definitely have a fun drive with you. I'm already excited...
...but that will have to wait. I need to go. I need to learn some more. And I'm sure I can control you better than before.
Off to the next adventure! Here I come, America!
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Meanwhile, at the other side of the globe... well, back in Japan.
At dawn, the morning sun greets the sight of speeding white hatchback at the mountain pass.
- Yay! We're finally done with Chapter 2. The longest I've ever done, really. But of course it covers the turning point of Michiharu, which is the point of this chapter.
- Chapter 3 will be shorter, as I've mentioned before. But fans of American Muscle should enjoy it (hopefully).
Plans for the future?
- Hmmmmm... I might make a story about Takuma's adopted son - Little Ben - and his adventures in Karting. And the challenge is... to drive the Shifter Kart!
- And back to Team Silverblade. Those 4 racing robots are test mules of the leader.... for something even bigger. And no, it's not mass-producing those robots should data acquisition becomes successful. Something to do with a serum of some sorts....
...whoops, I cannot spill any further. Find out more in Takuma Gaiden 2 - Dream Alliance 3!
- With the VGT cars raining down on us, it is possible that each member of the Team Silverblade will own a VGT car. Keep it coming, Kaz. Bring out those damn VGTs!
(and I'm hoping that the Mazda VGT is a rotary-powered car; as I'm cooking up something from that)
That's all for today, readers! Chapter 3 will be released next week! A good rest is needed now and then!
Ciao!
I did it... I finally did it.
I actually won! Who would've thought a man who started from nothing would end up getting this far?
Tomoko: "We did it! We're off to a good start of the championship!"
Gan: "Michiharu, this is the beginning... when the world will see your true worth."
When I went down the car, Tomoko runs towards me and...
...kissed my cheek. Uh-oh... here it goes again... my heart!
Tomoko: "Oh... I'm sorry. I just got carried away."
Meanwhile, at the bleachers, some organizers help Sir Shaw stand up. Then one of the FIA Executives stand before him.
FIA Executive: "Sir Shaw McCarthy. We truly recognize your contribution to this prestigious organization. However, this organization does not condone unfair practices - such as the fan technology, which you clearly know that it is not allowed within the rules. Allowing such car to participate all for your selfish desire tarnish the image of this very organization. We do not allow such trickery nor treachery to spoil the essence of motorsports. All these drivers work very hard to achieve their goals, and we cannot allow one car to ruin them all.
And because of that, you, Sir Shaw McCarthy are hereby banned from the FIA forever. You are stripped of your position as your punishment. You can no longer race in our organized events.
Coincides with your retirement, am I right?"
Ben has smiled upon hearing the verdict. He leaves them without a word and joins his team.
He looks up on Michiharu, standing at the center of the podium, holding the gold trophy shining under the sun.
Ben: "Well, what do we know? That chap made it."
All eyes are on me next time... Bigger challenges await, especially the 2nd round. With those ahead of me, I'll be prepared. I'll continue on growing, growing through experience.
**************************************************************************************
We are celebrating our victory still, at Ben's Chalet in Switzerland. Oh, the entire team is present as well. So, we all enjoy buffet and drinks inside. Do we have to celebrate that much? It's just the first round...
Tomoko: "Don't tell me you'll be grumpy tonight! Celebrate your victory! Don't be such a stuffed shirt!"
Michiharu: "It's just the first round. We can celebrate like this when we win the entire championship."
Tomoko: "Hey! Every victory deserves a celebration! You deserve this! Come on!
Suddenly, all of us are being called by Gan for a meeting.
Gan: "Listen up. I know this is just the first round, but every hard work deserves a reward. The 2nd round is far off, but we must always be in tip-top condition, always prepared for what's to come.
Michiharu here, must be celebrating! You deserve all the glory, after what you've went through. You climbed up to the top, to the point that the world sees you and your worth."
Michiharu: "Thanks, everyone. If it weren't for you, then I wouldn't have gotten this far. Thank you for all the things you've taught me."
Ben: "Ugh... you make it sound like you're leaving us, chap! Go see a speech teacher! You're a killjoy!"
Hey! I'm just saying what I feel! Of course I'm grateful to everyone who contributed to this. I didn't achieve this alone, you know?
Gan: "Tomorrow, we shall be setting off. Since we have accepted an offer to race in an event in the USA, we shall head there, and a car is waiting for us."
Ben: "We're going to a place filled with cheeseburgers, hillbillies, rednecks, and yank tanks? Great."
Next stage would be America, huh? Will I be able to meet Richard there once again? I'll set my prejudices aside. Who knows, maybe USA and its people aren't that bad at all.
Tomoko: "I'm always curious as to why that country is a superpower. Oh well, we'll know when we get there."
I briefly stand up and head to the garage. I am now looking at the two cars that gave me unforgettable learning experiences throughout my racing life.
Thank you very much. How do you say Thank You in Italian? Never mind... the most important thing is that you thank them for the lessons they taught you.
I'll never, ever forget you. Should I return here, I'll definitely have a fun drive with you. I'm already excited...
...but that will have to wait. I need to go. I need to learn some more. And I'm sure I can control you better than before.
Off to the next adventure! Here I come, America!
**************************************************************************************
Meanwhile, at the other side of the globe... well, back in Japan.
At dawn, the morning sun greets the sight of speeding white hatchback at the mountain pass.
End of Chapter 2
Author's Notes:
- Yay! We're finally done with Chapter 2. The longest I've ever done, really. But of course it covers the turning point of Michiharu, which is the point of this chapter.
- Chapter 3 will be shorter, as I've mentioned before. But fans of American Muscle should enjoy it (hopefully).
Plans for the future?
- Hmmmmm... I might make a story about Takuma's adopted son - Little Ben - and his adventures in Karting. And the challenge is... to drive the Shifter Kart!
- And back to Team Silverblade. Those 4 racing robots are test mules of the leader.... for something even bigger. And no, it's not mass-producing those robots should data acquisition becomes successful. Something to do with a serum of some sorts....
...whoops, I cannot spill any further. Find out more in Takuma Gaiden 2 - Dream Alliance 3!
- With the VGT cars raining down on us, it is possible that each member of the Team Silverblade will own a VGT car. Keep it coming, Kaz. Bring out those damn VGTs!
(and I'm hoping that the Mazda VGT is a rotary-powered car; as I'm cooking up something from that)
That's all for today, readers! Chapter 3 will be released next week! A good rest is needed now and then!
Ciao!
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Awesome job. Looking forward to Chapter 3.
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Hello readers.
As much as possible, I do want to keep in touch with you during breaks.
So what I have been up to for this week-long break? Well...
- Waiting for the torrents of the 1st and 2nd episodes of Initial D Final Stage
- Grinding in GT6.
- Tuning Richard's Firebird.
- Waiting for the Senna Content
- Do some shopping (both diecast models and groceries )
Car suggestions for future fanfics are also welcome. Who knows, I might make a story out of them. Each car has a story to tell, and they deserve to be heard.
As much as possible, I do want to keep in touch with you during breaks.
So what I have been up to for this week-long break? Well...
- Waiting for the torrents of the 1st and 2nd episodes of Initial D Final Stage
- Grinding in GT6.
- Tuning Richard's Firebird.
- Waiting for the Senna Content
- Do some shopping (both diecast models and groceries
)Car suggestions for future fanfics are also welcome. Who knows, I might make a story out of them. Each car has a story to tell, and they deserve to be heard.
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- Manila, PH
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The Return of the Monster...
Hello readers! Allow me to dedicate this post for this devious little monster. It was a naughty being in GT5, but now in GT6, it's a monster - truly living up to its real-life reputation. The best 100,000 Credit car could arguably be the RE Amemiya FD3S.
You do remember that in the GT5 fanfic during its showdown against Yuki's S2000 at a perilous rain (and fog!) weather at the touge, the FD's turbos got shut, but towards the end, the turbos sprang up to life again, which is considered to be a miracle. Takuma took advantage of this miraculous situation and grabbed the win (also due to Yuki's hesitance in the fog).
Now, allow Takuma to narrate how the replacement turbos turn out...
Shutting down the computer... Okay, it's off. It's just 4 in the afternoon, I know. It's too early for me to leave work. But I need to do something that should have been done anyway.
Since tonight is the housewarming party of Hiroyuki-san's new home in Roppongi Hills, of course I have to attend - as it also serves a very important meeting for all the drivers of the Dream Alliance. My wife and kids will go there ahead using a separate car, as I told them that I'll catch up.
First thing to do... head to RE Amemiya tuning shop. Ama-san is present. The new turbos in the FD have been installed over a month ago, but due to the hectic schedule and consecutive road reviews, I have yet to do a proper shakedown. And I don't want to just get in the car and go all-out.
When I entered his shop, Ama-san greeted me. And the two of us discuss the settings of the car. The new turbos turn out to churn out so much boost, that I have decided to pay a visit and regulate the boost settings. You don't want to ruin your precious car's engine, right?
Takuma: "Before I do anything crazy, let's regulate the car's boost, Ama-san. Just like before."
Isami Amemiya: "No problem. I should have done that the day I installed them."
Takuma: "On a street setup - for the touge and regular driving use - I wish for a 4.7 final drive ratio and a 12 psi boost. Is it possible? As far as I know, a stock turbo can handle 10 psi at max... so...."
Isami Amemiya: "You can easily adjust them through the Apexi Power FC, right? So it should be no problem for you."
Okay then... with Ama-san guiding me, it took me time to fiddle with the power settings. I don't want to break the turbos again.
I have decided...
Takuma: "There. 580 horsepower for the street setting. And 650 horsepower for the circuit setting. Hmmmmm... for the circuit setting, I'll use a 4.3 final drive ratio. I'll set that up whenever I enter the track."
Isami Amemiya: "It's decided. Please wait for Motoharu to adjust the gears. 4.7 final drive for today, right?"
Takuma: "Yes please."
And then my personal mechanic finally arrives after setting up another customer car. While he's doing the job, I look around the garage. Most of the customer cars here are the FDs. It's clearly why... the FD is the pinnacle of the Rotary sports, and they're easy to source, anyway, from Zenki to Kouki model. I do see some FCs and RX-8s too.
Sadly, Ama-san had stopped creating tuning concepts for the FD. The Genki 7 is his last project and bodykit he can offer for the FD. I'm happy with the Super G bodykit that is equipped currently in my FD. It looks pretty badass, and the fixed lights are an icing on the cake. I don't want to start a debate about fixed lights and pop up lights for the FD. We have different tastes.
And the sun is starting to set. Motoharu is done. Time for a shakedown!
Takuma: "Thank you very much for the help. Oh, is the crate engine ready?"
Isami Amemiya: "Yes. The 3 rotor unit is ready. On what car do you plan to install it on?"
Takuma: "I'm very sorry, but I have to keep it a secret. I need to go now. Thank you very much! Please have it delivered to my home as soon as possible."
Isami Amemiya: "You've got to tell me then, or else I won't do it."
Oh all right... But only Ama-san knows it, for the moment. I whispered it to him. And then all I can see is a face of shock from him. Hehehehehe... even he was struck at that revelation.
I immediately left. And with a short straight I can burst the FD out, the acceleration is immense. I never felt that before on a street-tuned car!
I headed on a mountain pass in Kanagawa, just nearby Takanori's home. Just a quick shakedown would do. I don't want to be late for the party, either.
Oh, aside from the new turbos, the engine is semi peripheral ported for a bit more power. I don't want to go full porting as it would sacrifice the FD's everyday drivability.
The acceleration is addicting... the new turbos completely took my breath away. With these, I can take down 4WDs a lot easier!
New damping and spring setup has been implemented too, along with new LSD settings. There is still traction despite the new power. 4.7 final drive works well on a technical layout.
Hmmmmm.... I wonder if I can take down touring cars with the new power. The acceleration is on par with them, you know?
Time for an uphill stretch...
And it doesn't struggle. Hehehehehe.... I love you so much, FD! And OF COURSE I LOVE MY WIFE TOO!!!
I think it's just perfect timing. Competition is getting rough, and the FD must be in shape for it.
It's my first time entering the GT3 Championship. Would that provide me the challenge I'm looking for? Let's see.
Too bad, FD... You'll have to wait a bit longer for me to drive you again. I'm sorry. I love Rotaries as much as I love Lamborghinis. So much so that I own three FDs...
Don't worry though, I'll drive you a lot should the championship ends. Knowing the monster within you, let's eat some more 4WDs and Touring Cars!
I stopped by at a Parking Area first and grab a canned soda from a vending machine. I'm taking a good look at the FD...
Look at you... you're smiling. It's as if we had a good time, even though it was short. We had been through so much trials, and you didn't give up. We share the same fighting spirit, eh?
Now, time to go to the housewarming. Let's see what's in store for us in the future. Hiroyuki-san will surely have big plans.
Author's Notes:
- This FD is truly the best of both worlds. Street or Track, it can deliver. It still holds its reputation as the "Touge Monster" while also making a name at the tracks as the "Circuit Monster".
- License plates? Yep, thanks to Photoshop, you'll be seeing them in the road cars featured here. Now, I need Euro and US license plate generators...
Hello readers! Allow me to dedicate this post for this devious little monster. It was a naughty being in GT5, but now in GT6, it's a monster - truly living up to its real-life reputation. The best 100,000 Credit car could arguably be the RE Amemiya FD3S.
You do remember that in the GT5 fanfic during its showdown against Yuki's S2000 at a perilous rain (and fog!) weather at the touge, the FD's turbos got shut, but towards the end, the turbos sprang up to life again, which is considered to be a miracle. Takuma took advantage of this miraculous situation and grabbed the win (also due to Yuki's hesitance in the fog).
Now, allow Takuma to narrate how the replacement turbos turn out...
Shutting down the computer... Okay, it's off. It's just 4 in the afternoon, I know. It's too early for me to leave work. But I need to do something that should have been done anyway.
Since tonight is the housewarming party of Hiroyuki-san's new home in Roppongi Hills, of course I have to attend - as it also serves a very important meeting for all the drivers of the Dream Alliance. My wife and kids will go there ahead using a separate car, as I told them that I'll catch up.
First thing to do... head to RE Amemiya tuning shop. Ama-san is present. The new turbos in the FD have been installed over a month ago, but due to the hectic schedule and consecutive road reviews, I have yet to do a proper shakedown. And I don't want to just get in the car and go all-out.
When I entered his shop, Ama-san greeted me. And the two of us discuss the settings of the car. The new turbos turn out to churn out so much boost, that I have decided to pay a visit and regulate the boost settings. You don't want to ruin your precious car's engine, right?
Takuma: "Before I do anything crazy, let's regulate the car's boost, Ama-san. Just like before."
Isami Amemiya: "No problem. I should have done that the day I installed them."
Takuma: "On a street setup - for the touge and regular driving use - I wish for a 4.7 final drive ratio and a 12 psi boost. Is it possible? As far as I know, a stock turbo can handle 10 psi at max... so...."
Isami Amemiya: "You can easily adjust them through the Apexi Power FC, right? So it should be no problem for you."
Okay then... with Ama-san guiding me, it took me time to fiddle with the power settings. I don't want to break the turbos again.
I have decided...
Takuma: "There. 580 horsepower for the street setting. And 650 horsepower for the circuit setting. Hmmmmm... for the circuit setting, I'll use a 4.3 final drive ratio. I'll set that up whenever I enter the track."
Isami Amemiya: "It's decided. Please wait for Motoharu to adjust the gears. 4.7 final drive for today, right?"
Takuma: "Yes please."
And then my personal mechanic finally arrives after setting up another customer car. While he's doing the job, I look around the garage. Most of the customer cars here are the FDs. It's clearly why... the FD is the pinnacle of the Rotary sports, and they're easy to source, anyway, from Zenki to Kouki model. I do see some FCs and RX-8s too.
Sadly, Ama-san had stopped creating tuning concepts for the FD. The Genki 7 is his last project and bodykit he can offer for the FD. I'm happy with the Super G bodykit that is equipped currently in my FD. It looks pretty badass, and the fixed lights are an icing on the cake. I don't want to start a debate about fixed lights and pop up lights for the FD. We have different tastes.
And the sun is starting to set. Motoharu is done. Time for a shakedown!
Takuma: "Thank you very much for the help. Oh, is the crate engine ready?"
Isami Amemiya: "Yes. The 3 rotor unit is ready. On what car do you plan to install it on?"
Takuma: "I'm very sorry, but I have to keep it a secret. I need to go now. Thank you very much! Please have it delivered to my home as soon as possible."
Isami Amemiya: "You've got to tell me then, or else I won't do it."
Oh all right... But only Ama-san knows it, for the moment. I whispered it to him. And then all I can see is a face of shock from him. Hehehehehe... even he was struck at that revelation.
I immediately left. And with a short straight I can burst the FD out, the acceleration is immense. I never felt that before on a street-tuned car!
I headed on a mountain pass in Kanagawa, just nearby Takanori's home. Just a quick shakedown would do. I don't want to be late for the party, either.
Oh, aside from the new turbos, the engine is semi peripheral ported for a bit more power. I don't want to go full porting as it would sacrifice the FD's everyday drivability.
The acceleration is addicting... the new turbos completely took my breath away. With these, I can take down 4WDs a lot easier!
New damping and spring setup has been implemented too, along with new LSD settings. There is still traction despite the new power. 4.7 final drive works well on a technical layout.
Hmmmmm.... I wonder if I can take down touring cars with the new power. The acceleration is on par with them, you know?
Time for an uphill stretch...
And it doesn't struggle. Hehehehehe.... I love you so much, FD! And OF COURSE I LOVE MY WIFE TOO!!!
I think it's just perfect timing. Competition is getting rough, and the FD must be in shape for it.
It's my first time entering the GT3 Championship. Would that provide me the challenge I'm looking for? Let's see.
Too bad, FD... You'll have to wait a bit longer for me to drive you again. I'm sorry. I love Rotaries as much as I love Lamborghinis. So much so that I own three FDs...
Don't worry though, I'll drive you a lot should the championship ends. Knowing the monster within you, let's eat some more 4WDs and Touring Cars!
I stopped by at a Parking Area first and grab a canned soda from a vending machine. I'm taking a good look at the FD...
Look at you... you're smiling. It's as if we had a good time, even though it was short. We had been through so much trials, and you didn't give up. We share the same fighting spirit, eh?
Now, time to go to the housewarming. Let's see what's in store for us in the future. Hiroyuki-san will surely have big plans.
Author's Notes:
- This FD is truly the best of both worlds. Street or Track, it can deliver. It still holds its reputation as the "Touge Monster" while also making a name at the tracks as the "Circuit Monster".
- License plates? Yep, thanks to Photoshop, you'll be seeing them in the road cars featured here. Now, I need Euro and US license plate generators...
- 5,798
- Manila, PH
- TakuKanonji22
CHAPTER 3
MUSCLE
The world now watches on Michiharu. It has recognized his capabilities as a racer. The person who started out from running away from home will turn out to be one of the drivers the world has to watch out for.
He moves on to the next stage, and perhaps a new type of car once again - American Muscle. Cars that leave the owner lusting for more....
Will Michiharu also fall prey for the thirst of power?
Also, be the witness of the tale of the sibling rivalry of the Hiramoto family - Hiroyuki and Ryuji battle it out on who's the fastest... and which theory will prevail.
Page 1 - All American RacerMUSCLE
The world now watches on Michiharu. It has recognized his capabilities as a racer. The person who started out from running away from home will turn out to be one of the drivers the world has to watch out for.
He moves on to the next stage, and perhaps a new type of car once again - American Muscle. Cars that leave the owner lusting for more....
Will Michiharu also fall prey for the thirst of power?
Also, be the witness of the tale of the sibling rivalry of the Hiramoto family - Hiroyuki and Ryuji battle it out on who's the fastest... and which theory will prevail.
"Good Morning, ladies and gentlemen. We have started our descent to Los Angeles International Airport. Please fasten your seatbelts and remain seated for our descent."Tomoko: "Hey... wake up. Michiharu, wake up!"
Michiharu: "Wha...??? What is it?"
Tomoko: "We're about to arrive. I wonder where are the skyscrapers?"
Michiharu: "I'll sleep again... I haven't been sleeping for the entire duration of our flights."
Yeah.... I managed to fall asleep just an hour ago. From Paris to New York, and then this...
I HAVE NO SLEEP! PLEASE LET ME! YOU CAN EVEN CARRY ME ONCE WE GET OUT OF THE PLANE...
Ben: "I salute Michiharu, though, for staying up for almost an entire day. I guess he can teach me about endurance, eh?"
Tomoko: "Oh! I see buildings now! We're landing!"
I do hope. AND I DO HOPE! That we'll head straight to the hotel and call this day a rest day. I need tons of sleep...
Tomoko: "Michiharu-kun, what are your plans while we're here in LA? Hey, why don't we go to Hollywood Boulevard? Or Beverly Hills? Just the two of us!
Wait.... What??? Really? Oh no... oh no... HEART.... BEATING... FAST....
Michiharu: "Ummmmmm.... uhhhhhh.... sure."
Oh boy, you said it again, Michiharu.
Ben: "Mr. Gan, let's set a day just for these two love birds to have fun. What do you say?"
Gan: "No problem."
Okay, that's it! I'm jolted!
Michiharu: "Hey! It's not what you think! Gan, chigau yo! Ore tachi wa tomodachi dake!
(It's not what what it looks like! We're just friends!)
Gan: "Sou ka? Soretomo... kanojo wa koibito darou? Hahahahahaha!" (Is that so? Or perhaps, is she your love interest?)
Tomoko just giggles, with her cheeks blushing.
Ben: "Ah! I'll direct a love story!"
Oh please, can you just stop? Hey, it's not what it looks like, okay? We're just friends. Period.
When we landed, we immediately headed to the hotel arranged by our sponsor that invited us. And also, that person is sourcing the car we'll use. I wonder how much Gan has spent once again for tweaking that car...
We settled in a suite. And it's opulent. All four of us gathered at the round table at the suite room.
Gan: "Listen up. We're going to be here only for the invitational race in Laguna Seca. Then it's a break for all of us. The 2nd round of the World Sports Car Championship is still far off. So I guess we must do this, and enjoy the vacation."
So we're not going to be in this country for long, eh? I'm actually fascinated with it right now.
Ben: "Glad to hear it. Because I don't want to see that person here as well."
Tomoko: "Huh? Who?"
Ben: "Let's just say I had a spat with him. Typical American and British quarrel."
Tomoko: "That's cryptic. Oh well, it should be settled, though, while you're here."
Ben: "Maybe... if I do see him again. He'll be better off singing instead."
I guess that's the price to pay for being famous, huh? You get to know more people, but not all of them will be on your good graces.
Suddenly, a phone rings. Gan picks it up.
Gan: "Oh, right now? I'll be meeting him at the lobby."
After putting down the phone, he gets his coat and gets out of the room.
Tomoko: "It could be the sponsor."
Ben: "I'm 100 percent sure. We're going to drive a Yank Tank."
In case you're wondering, we didn't bring any car at all. Tomoko's Stratos is sent back to Japan, while Ben decided to leave his Countach back in his home.
Michiharu: "Yank... Tank?"
Ben: "American Muscle Car, they say. I don't even know why they have to call them as such. Big engines placed on a questionable chassis."
Hiroyuki did say something like that too... So most likely, I'll be seeing more of them here.
Gan returns immediately. And he holds a car key.
Gan: "Our car. Yep, it's here. We shall be heading off to Willow Springs this afternoon. It's an hour away from here. For now, Michiharu will play as Sleeping Beauty.
All right! Time to hop on the bed! Wait... who will be sleeping on the other bed?
Ben: "Gan and I will be sleeping at the other room across this suite. You and Tomoko can have fun here."
What?!? REALLY???
Tomoko: "I'm fine with it."
Michiharu: "I can sleep on the sofa at the suite."
Tomoko: "Hey, there are two beds in this room. You didn't come in a hotel room to sleep on a sofa."
I'm kinda relieved, but she's a girl, you know? And it's not like we're a couple. Well, you know what I mean. It's just awkward...
Well, never mind. Time for a power nap!
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Location: Willow Springs Raceway - The Big Willow
Time: 4 pm
And just like Gan said, the trip is just an hour. Quite near from the city, if you ask me.
Then we all gathered at the trailer. I'm curious as to what car are we driving.
And then... as the back is opened, it's a purple car with a black hood. And it's quite big.
Ben: "I knew it..."
Gan: "This is the Plymouth AAR 340 Cuda Six Barrel. This will represent us. And it's modified, of course. I'm sure Ben will be satisfied here, as the suspension components have been tuned, and the transmission is even converted to a Hurst 5-speed manual. Happy?"
Ben: "I'll reserve my judgments. Let's go, Michiharu. You'll drive."
Oh... okay. Time for me to see why Richard is so aligned with this type of car. I started it up. And the carburetor engine (yes, I can tell it) springs to life. And it's arguably the best burble I've ever heard.
Ben: "Not bad for a V8. Now let's see if it isn't lazy."
We have set off. As soon as I step on the accelerator, it felt a little different. It felt... a bit lazy. The power will just kick in after. This is odd...
Ben: "Not that powerful, is it?"
Michiharu: "Seems like it. The power is there, but it's not as immediate as the Miura."
I turned the wheel. I can tell the suspension is tuned. It's sharp, but.... uh-oh. Oops.
Ben: "I don't blame you."
And it sent us sliding at the next corner.
Ben: "Expect it to handle like that. American V8 engines have explosive amounts of torque that induces wheelspin easily. But I'm quite impressed with the suspension tuning, actually. It's not that bad as I'd initially expected. European V8 engines, on the other hand, are on the smooth side."
What a breathtaking view of the desert. And the road is quite wide.
Ben: "Maybe I could use a little drive with this too. After the race, perhaps."
There it is. I feel the power. It's like this car is telling me to push it more. Maybe Richard likes this feeling that made him prefer a muscle car.
And indeed, it is fast. Maybe it could beat Richard's Corvette at this level.
Ben: "140 miles per hour at the end of this straight? Not bad. Though it could do better with more power."
Michiharu: "I think so."
After another lap, we returned to the pit lane. I like the car, but it needs more power for it to be competitive.
Michiharu: "Gan, how much power does this car have?"
Gan: "According to the sponsor, it's slightly tuned to 386 horsepower."
Ben: "With the new gearbox in place, we have concluded that it needs more. 400 or more horsepower can do."
Gan: "We'll work on that. But, how's the handling, then?"
Michiharu: "Wheelspin is imminent. I was sliding at a corner back there. It turns sharply, but it suddenly slides at the corner exit that I have to concentrate on my footwork."
Ben: "Still a crude Yank Tank for me, though. The suspension did its job right, but it needs more tweaking as well, especially that a power increase is in order."
There is power, but it has to be as fearsome as the Miura for me to like it... It definitely needs more horsepower.
However, the car proves to be an interesting piece for me. It reminds me of the GT-R back home....
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Author's Notes:
- This part will make Michiharu familiarize the Muscle car. Expect a single race in Laguna Seca, and a duel to follow, that concerns Ben, of course. Yep, Ben will be driving a Yank Tank to combat another Yank Tank.
- Then the latter part will focus on which is the True Muscle. It's about how power should be taken seriously, and it's more to having more power and more torque. Also serves a moral lesson... about power, of course.
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I have finally gotten a grip on the so-called "American Muscle" or "Yank Tank" as Ben calls it. They're quite.... quirky, if you ask me. They're big, and heavy for my taste.
Sure, the suspension is modified, but the car can't really get away the fact that it's heavy, and there is a noticeable weight transition. Good thing the sponsor gladly took the feedback and proceeded with further modifications.
When we returned to the hotel, Gan immediately told us to get food for dinner. He gave each of us some money to buy our own, and share as well. Ben and Gan left first, so that leaves...
...just the two of us? Another awkward moment with Tomoko.
No! It must be special!
Tomoko: "So, care to go around? Let's find some grub to eat."
Michiharu: "Oh. Okay."
Together, we went out. And since we're nearby the shopping complex, Tomoko immediately held my hand.... and dragged me to some shops a girl could ever dream of. They are posh, and I think I could not afford any of the items on sale.
Tomoko: "Before I leave, I will buy that pearl necklace."
Michiharu: "Don't forget it, okay? Hey, let's buy some food already. The long trip and that brief run made me hungry."
Tomoko: "Oh really? Well, me too, actually. Hehe. Okay then, let's look for somewhere to eat. A stall, perhaps.
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While the two are strolling around, an applause can be heard at a bar across the street. Inside, there is a sizable amount of audience, as they make sure to attend the performance of an up-and-coming country singer named Lewis Hawthorne. The bar is booming thanks to him, and his voice.
He fixes his cowboy hat and taps his spur three counts. Then he starts his song.
While performing, a man comes up the stage, tapping his shoulder. That man waits for Lewis to finish the song. And when it did, he stands up and bows to his audience.
Lewis: "That was just finished last night. I'm glad it turned out to be okay. It was quite rushed, to be honest. I've got to come back for a while, people. Enjoy the good drinks!
He goes backstage, and the man escorts him to his room. He is greeted with a sight he's used to - a manager. Lewis sits down, and reads the contract on the table.
Manager: "Your voice could have a better future, you know? Everyone in this bar loves you. So why not put it to good use and actually earn?"
Lewis: "You know, there is something called Background Check. You could have asked the multitudes of managers coming in here and show contracts to me."
Manager: "I can double whatever the previous contract offered you. I'm telling you, this is all worth it. You have to move up in life."
Lewis: "Maybe. But the satisfaction doesn't come along. Even I, don't get why am I enjoying this. I'm in a state of confusion right now.
I'm sorry, but I cannot take the offer. I cannot perform at my best in front of you if I'm like this. I sing just to vent out. I'm going out for a while. I'm very sorry."
He storms out with his guitar and heads home. Upon arriving, he leaves his guitar at the sofa, and grabs the keys.
He gets in his Chevrolet Nova SS, a car he bought from a used car lot. It's actually a third-hand vehicle, but he did use his earnings to restore it. But it does not end there...
...as his Nova SS is tuned near to the specifications of an SCCA race car. Power is quoted at more than 400 horsepower.
He goes to Willow Springs, a place he usually hangs out at, when he feels blue.
While the setting sun is bright and clear, his mind clearly isn't. He has been torn.
Lewis: "I don't have a clear goal. Do I get happiness either from just sitting down and sing, with low risks? Or sit down, turn the wheel, and step on the gas along with a high risk? Thinking up of new verses with notes could sometime let me down, but my voice just backs them up, and I earn considerably. But I leave my guitar, and drive like hell... there's the excitement AND MONEY. But I might die."
Lewis: "One thing is for sure though, is that I won't lose to him. Definitely I must not. I'm going to knock some good ol' sense, and show to him that...
Lewis: "...our home-grown rides are part of the racing world too. Even if I have to die just to prove it, then so be it.
American Muscle cars deserve the same respect as those snooty, expensive European sports cars."
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Location: Tokyo, Japan
Time: 6 pm, the next day
Michiharu once again takes out the Skyline after closing the hardware store early. He is about to meet Hasemi.
Hasemi: "Oh, there he is. And it's louder???
Gan steps out of the car, then the two look at it.
Hasemi: "Did you tinker it again?"
Gan: "Of course. As far as I know, everything needed in basic tuning is already there. The stock turbo gains additional boost along with a new exhaust. 360 horsepower is the grand total.
I cannot lose to some kids running around here, you know?"
Hasemi: "But I thought Michiharu would be driving this?"
Gan: "He will. But before he arrives, I have to make sure it can beat those street racers. It's becoming a trend now, despite the government's plans against it.
Hasemi: "Gotta enjoy it while it lasts. Who knows."
Gan: "You're absolutely right. Though my street racing career ended abruptly in the hills."
Hasemi: "You know, Michiharu is an accomplished racer now. You can't let him partake into something like this. It'll jeopardize his career."
Gan: "It's also tuned for the circuit, my friend. Can't let me have some fun? I have enjoyed beating Celicas and Fairlady Zs with this."
End of Page 2
I have finally gotten a grip on the so-called "American Muscle" or "Yank Tank" as Ben calls it. They're quite.... quirky, if you ask me. They're big, and heavy for my taste.
Sure, the suspension is modified, but the car can't really get away the fact that it's heavy, and there is a noticeable weight transition. Good thing the sponsor gladly took the feedback and proceeded with further modifications.
When we returned to the hotel, Gan immediately told us to get food for dinner. He gave each of us some money to buy our own, and share as well. Ben and Gan left first, so that leaves...
...just the two of us? Another awkward moment with Tomoko.
No! It must be special!
Tomoko: "So, care to go around? Let's find some grub to eat."
Michiharu: "Oh. Okay."
Together, we went out. And since we're nearby the shopping complex, Tomoko immediately held my hand.... and dragged me to some shops a girl could ever dream of. They are posh, and I think I could not afford any of the items on sale.
Tomoko: "Before I leave, I will buy that pearl necklace."
Michiharu: "Don't forget it, okay? Hey, let's buy some food already. The long trip and that brief run made me hungry."
Tomoko: "Oh really? Well, me too, actually. Hehe. Okay then, let's look for somewhere to eat. A stall, perhaps.
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While the two are strolling around, an applause can be heard at a bar across the street. Inside, there is a sizable amount of audience, as they make sure to attend the performance of an up-and-coming country singer named Lewis Hawthorne. The bar is booming thanks to him, and his voice.
He fixes his cowboy hat and taps his spur three counts. Then he starts his song.
While performing, a man comes up the stage, tapping his shoulder. That man waits for Lewis to finish the song. And when it did, he stands up and bows to his audience.
Lewis: "That was just finished last night. I'm glad it turned out to be okay. It was quite rushed, to be honest. I've got to come back for a while, people. Enjoy the good drinks!
He goes backstage, and the man escorts him to his room. He is greeted with a sight he's used to - a manager. Lewis sits down, and reads the contract on the table.
Manager: "Your voice could have a better future, you know? Everyone in this bar loves you. So why not put it to good use and actually earn?"
Lewis: "You know, there is something called Background Check. You could have asked the multitudes of managers coming in here and show contracts to me."
Manager: "I can double whatever the previous contract offered you. I'm telling you, this is all worth it. You have to move up in life."
Lewis: "Maybe. But the satisfaction doesn't come along. Even I, don't get why am I enjoying this. I'm in a state of confusion right now.
I'm sorry, but I cannot take the offer. I cannot perform at my best in front of you if I'm like this. I sing just to vent out. I'm going out for a while. I'm very sorry."
He storms out with his guitar and heads home. Upon arriving, he leaves his guitar at the sofa, and grabs the keys.
He gets in his Chevrolet Nova SS, a car he bought from a used car lot. It's actually a third-hand vehicle, but he did use his earnings to restore it. But it does not end there...
...as his Nova SS is tuned near to the specifications of an SCCA race car. Power is quoted at more than 400 horsepower.
He goes to Willow Springs, a place he usually hangs out at, when he feels blue.
While the setting sun is bright and clear, his mind clearly isn't. He has been torn.
Lewis: "I don't have a clear goal. Do I get happiness either from just sitting down and sing, with low risks? Or sit down, turn the wheel, and step on the gas along with a high risk? Thinking up of new verses with notes could sometime let me down, but my voice just backs them up, and I earn considerably. But I leave my guitar, and drive like hell... there's the excitement AND MONEY. But I might die."
Lewis: "One thing is for sure though, is that I won't lose to him. Definitely I must not. I'm going to knock some good ol' sense, and show to him that...
Lewis: "...our home-grown rides are part of the racing world too. Even if I have to die just to prove it, then so be it.
American Muscle cars deserve the same respect as those snooty, expensive European sports cars."
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Location: Tokyo, Japan
Time: 6 pm, the next day
Michiharu once again takes out the Skyline after closing the hardware store early. He is about to meet Hasemi.
Hasemi: "Oh, there he is. And it's louder???
Gan steps out of the car, then the two look at it.
Hasemi: "Did you tinker it again?"
Gan: "Of course. As far as I know, everything needed in basic tuning is already there. The stock turbo gains additional boost along with a new exhaust. 360 horsepower is the grand total.
I cannot lose to some kids running around here, you know?"
Hasemi: "But I thought Michiharu would be driving this?"
Gan: "He will. But before he arrives, I have to make sure it can beat those street racers. It's becoming a trend now, despite the government's plans against it.
Hasemi: "Gotta enjoy it while it lasts. Who knows."
Gan: "You're absolutely right. Though my street racing career ended abruptly in the hills."
Hasemi: "You know, Michiharu is an accomplished racer now. You can't let him partake into something like this. It'll jeopardize his career."
Gan: "It's also tuned for the circuit, my friend. Can't let me have some fun? I have enjoyed beating Celicas and Fairlady Zs with this."
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Interesting page. đź‘Ť
Does this suppose to be like this? I'm very confused...
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Location: Tokyo, Japan
Time: 6 pm, the next day
Michiharu once again takes out the Skyline after closing the hardware store early. He is about to meet Hasemi.
Hasemi: "Oh, there he is. And it's louder???
Gan steps out of the car, then the two look at it.
Hasemi: "Did you tinker it again?"
Gan: "Of course. As far as I know, everything needed in basic tuning is already there. The stock turbo gains additional boost along with a new exhaust. 360 horsepower is the grand total.
I cannot lose to some kids running around here, you know?"
Hasemi: "But I thought Michiharu would be driving this?"
Gan: "He will. But before he arrives, I have to make sure it can beat those street racers. It's becoming a trend now, despite the government's plans against it.
Hasemi: "Gotta enjoy it while it lasts. Who knows."
Gan: "You're absolutely right. Though my street racing career ended abruptly in the hills."
Hasemi: "You know, Michiharu is an accomplished racer now. You can't let him partake into something like this. It'll jeopardize his career."
Gan: "It's also tuned for the circuit, my friend. Can't let me have some fun? I have enjoyed beating Celicas and Fairlady Zs with this."
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Doing a "Time Jump"?
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Well, it's just the Time Zone.
Plus, it's also safe. Even that little detail is important in a time setting.
Like that, it's 6 pm in Tokyo, so that means it's actually 2 am in Los Angeles (since Willow Springs is nearby).
And it's not always happening the same time as the previous scene.
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