"The Highway racer I" CHAPTER 12: Graduation!

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Hey guys! Sorry for the slight delay. My ps3 has been having problems with its bluray drive. I will post the next chapter maybe this weekend. Thank you! :)
 
CHAPTER 9: John Konnor



The sun rises in the quiet street of Gion. Josh is up, getting the Vitz ready for the trip to Mt. Aso. Yumi is inside making breakfast.


Kyoto - Gion_1 by halfcab23, on Flickr



"Yumi! Are you ready for today?"

"Yup. Its been a long long time since we've visited Mt. Aso. I can't wait!"

"We're going wheel shopping too, right?"

"Yup!"




Josh and Yumi get in the Vitz and make their way to Mt. Aso. They take the new, Route X Highway. Yumi opens the windows, and removes her ponytail.


Special Stage Route X by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Ahhh.... I love the cool day breeze!"

"*thinking* Woah... She looks so cute with her hair down.. I could stare at her all day...."

"This highway is pretty cool! Have you tried racing here?"

"........Huh? Erm.. Nope. Not yet, but maybe I'll try it out. They call this highway the Bayshore route. Elcid told me theres some fierce competition here."

"Really?"

"Yeah. Racers here are mostly stationed marines with their imported US cars."

"Well... I'm sure its nothing you cant handle!"

"Hahaha! maybe."




They take the exit. Soon, they get on the mountain.


Mt. Aso (Tarmac)_14 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"I can't wait. I finally get to drive dad's GT-R.."

"Why? Won't it be slow?"

"Well... It wont be as quick as my car, but I want it because it used to be my dad's car. So many memories in it."

"Oh.."

"I love mountain roads..."


Mt. Aso (Tarmac)_13 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"I really like the setup of this Vitz."

"HEY! You sir, are paying for my gas."

"Hahaha! No problem!"


Mt. Aso (Tarmac)_12 by halfcab23, on Flickr



They arrive. Josh sees the White Hakosuka parked out. Athena emerges from the GT-R.


Mt. Aso (Tarmac)_11 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Hey Josh!"

"Hey sis. Is that the GT-R?"

"Yup. It stinks inside. It smells like old man."

"Hahaha! Does it run?"

"Well, I couldnt start it. Here are the keys. Good luck."



Athena hands over the keys. Josh notices that the keychain is the same as the one that he got from his R34.

"Wait... I have the same keychain."

"Really? Weird. Dad had that keychain custom made. Oh, is Yumi there?"

"Uh, yeah. Shes in the car."

"I'll invite her for some coffee. Yumi!"

"Hey Athena!"

"Hey! Wanna have coffee? Josh will probably take a while."

"Sure!"



Athena and Yumi go inside the house first, while Josh inspects the Hakosuka.


Mt. Aso (Tarmac)_10 by halfcab23, on Flickr


Mt. Aso (Tarmac)_9 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Wow.. It still looks good after all these years."

Josh opens the hood. The infamous S20 engine used in the Prince R380 is sitting in the engine bay, covered in dust.


432EngSmall by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Woah.... The rare S20.... Lets start it."


He goes in the cockpit.

"Woah.. Oil gauges.. Water gauges.. This looks like a racecar in normal livery. Lets try it.


Josh tries to start the S20. He presses on the clutch, puts it in neutral, and turns the key. After 4 clicks, it roars to life.

"The classic sound of carburetors."

"Even the tachometer is up to 8000rpm. Thats pretty high for an old car. Maybe I'll take it to Mr. Tatsumi today."



Yumi and Athena go to Josh.

"Wow! it looks great! And it actually works!"

"Huh? Thats weird... It didnt start when I tried."

"Maybe because I'm the master? Haha!"

"*sigh* What a kid!"

"Yeah right! Well, Yumi told me you guys were going wheel shopping. You guys should get going!"

"... Oh. Yeah! Yumi, drive the Vitz. I'll bring you to the wheel place. Can you keep up?"

"Of course I can! Bye Athena!"

"Bye! Take care guys!"


Josh leads Yumi to Shino Speed. The Tuned S20 engine revs to 8000rpm. Yumi is keeping up with the Skyline.


Mt. Aso (Tarmac)_7 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Wow! For an old car, it runs pretty good!"


Mt. Aso (Tarmac)_6 by halfcab23, on Flickr


"... This GT-R is wild... Yumi's driving skills improved too."

"Ah... Nothin like drifting a skyline...."


Mt. Aso (Tarmac)_2 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Drifting huh!? You aint leaving me in the dust!"


Mt. Aso (Tarmac) by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Hahaha! You're getting better Yumi!"


Soon, they reach Shino Speed. Josh and Yumi park inside the garage. Mr Tatsumi steps out of his office, and sees the Hakosuka.


Eifel (Circuit) by halfcab23, on Flickr


"Back so soon Josh? Oh, you brought a friend with you."

"Oh yeah, Mr. Tatsumi, this is my girlfriend, Yumi."

"Nice to meet you sir!"

"Hahaha! Nice to meet you too! So, what can I do for you? Is that you're Dad's Skyline?"

"Yeah. I just got it from my mom house. It needs a bit of cleaning. I was hoping you could help."

"Of course I could! How about you, young lady?"

"Oh, I wanted to change the rims on my Vitz."

"We have a huge selection over there. My daughter Rikako would be more than happy to help! Rikako!"

"Yes father?"

"Rikako, this is Yumi. She needs help looking for rims. Show her our selection!"

"Alright. Nice to meet you Yumi."

"Nice to meet you too!"

"Alright Yumi! Can I leave you first? Just get anything, then I'll pay for it."

"Thanks!"


Josh shows Tatsumi the GT-R.

"Wow... After all these years... Shes still alive."

"Yeah. I can't really tell whats been done to this car. I don't really know Carburetor engines."

"Well, for starters, the carburetors have been swapped for bigger Weber racing carbs, a competition spec header, Racing camgears from the GR8 engine, and a touring spec muffler..."

"Wow... Thats amazing. Did my dad do all this?"

"Well.. I guess so. I, myself can't believe where he got these parts."

"Why?"

"Some of these parts are only found in racecars. They're not exactly street-legal. Many of them from the R380 racecar."

"Woah...."

"Can you start it for me?"

"Yeah sure."

The S20 roars to life.

"How high does it rev?"

"Well, I was revving it at 8000rpm awhile ago."

"Amazing..."

"Hows the engine?"

"Let me take a look."



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"Its perfectly balanced. I wonder where your dad had this tuned.."

"Can you make it faster?"

"Well.... I dont think theres much to do here. This engine is at its full capacity. I could do a tune-up, but it wont really give a power difference."

"Is it reliable enough to race?"

"Hmmm... Yeah. But its an old car. I dont think it can beat the competition nowadays."

"Maybe I'll just use it as my daily car. My GT-R sips too much gas."

"Oh right! How is the GT-R?"

"Its scary. The engine is the same as the 400R NISMO right?"

"Yup. I got the engine from a wrecked 400R. I decided to build a demonic R34 with it."

"Well, I can honestly say its nothing short of demonic in terms of speed. I saw a restrictor though."

"Oh right. I put that in so you could learn how to control it before unleashing the beast."

"Oh, I had it uninstalled actually. I took it out for a spin on the wangan. I managed 370kmh. May I ask whats the full power of the GT-R?"

"WHAT!? You actually mastered the car already!?"

"Well, I wouldn't say mastered, but I can handle it. It is quite difficult to handle it actually. Its unnaturally fast."

"*thinking* Amazing....... In such a short time, he already got the steering feel, and the throttle work..."

"Yeah.. It has about 800hp. Its because of the twin turbo conversion I did. I've only done those kinds of conversions on you, a black Porsche, and your brother's R34 GT-R."

"Huh? I thought Bill had his R35 tuned by NISMO. Weird... WAIT. Why do YOU know Bill??"

"Bill has an R35 now? Oh, I know your brother because he used to date Rikako."

"*thinking* Huh? Bill used to date Rikako? Weird....."

"Wait, what R34??"

"Oh.... Nothing!"

"But you just sa-"

"NOTHING."

".uh...Okay?"

"Well then! Let's see what rims Yumi picked shall we?"

"Sure."

"*thinking* Something is damn fishy....."


Josh and Tatsumi go out of the office. Josh sees Yumi eyeing a fresh set of Enkei Tarmacs.


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"Nice one Yumi! Looks great!"

"You really think so? Thanks!"

"I really like the look! So, Mr Tatsumi, how much?"

"Oh, Its actually sold already. I could order if you want, then just bring it here to have the wheels changed."

"Thank you sir."

"Its no problem at all!"

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Josh and Yumi make their way back to Gion.


"Wow. The tune-up made a big difference... Throttle response is good... and it runs smoother."



They reach Gion. They see a parked Dodge Challenger in the driveway.


Kyoto - Gion by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Oh no... It can't be.."

"Huh? Wow! A muscle car!"



Josh and Yumi park at the house. An American looking man in his 20's wearing military clothes gets out of the Challenger and approaches Josh and Yumi.

"Yumi!! Hows my Hot Flower? Wanna go for a ride in my Muscle Machine?? We'll have some fun!!"

"What the.... Don't you dare talk to my girlfriend like that."

"Whoa!? This is the chump you're dating nowadays? Hah! You've lost taste girl!"

"Shut up John!"

"John? You know this guy?"

" The names John Konnor! I used to be her boyfriend. Remember the good times we had? The times we had going on vacations... You've grown Yumi.. You became... A woman.."

"Go away John. We broke up already."

"What? I came here to-"

"You heard her. Get out."

"Why you little..."



John punches Josh in the face. Josh is knocked out.

"JOSH!!! **** YOU JOHN!"

"Now... Time for you to come with me! Lets have some fun!"



John grabs Yumi and puts her in the Challenger.

"Let go of me you *****!"

"Not until we have fun!"




John escapes with Yumi. Josh wakes up.

"*snore* Huh.....Wha-....YUMI! I've got to chase after her!"


Josh gets in the GT-R. He floors the throttle.


Kyoto - Gion_2 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"I should try Yumi's phone."

Josh dials Yumi phone. Yumi answers it.

"YUMI! Are you-"

"JOSH! ROUTE 5!"

Call ends.

"Got it. I'm not leaving you."




Josh makes his way to Route 5.


Special Stage Route 5_8 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"They should be here somewhere.."


Special Stage Route 5_6 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Found you."

Josh guns the GT-R. He tailgates the Challenger.


Special Stage Route 5_4 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Huh!? What the..."

"Josh!"

"Thats him? Hah! Doesn't he know I'm the Hammer of Bayshore?"

"He'll get you. He never loses."

"Hah! You dare deceive me!?..."

SLAP! John slaps Yumi. Meanwhile, in the GT-R...


"Dammit..... How do I do it? I dont want Yumi to get hurt."

"Wait, I smell engine smoke... Is the Challenger broken?"



The Challenger blows a head gasket. It leaves a trail of smoke.


Special Stage Route 5_3 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"I should make a move... on the straightaway...

"Dammit Yumi! You made me miss a shift! You broke my Challenger!"

"Save me Josh.........."



As they get on the straight, Josh pulls to the side, and hits him. He instantly losses control.


Special Stage Route 5 by halfcab23, on Flickr


"Yes!"

"CRAP!"

The Challenger stops. Its engine cuts, and it wont start. Josh gets Yumi out of the Challenger, and puts her in the GT-R.

"Yumi... Are you ok?"

"Yeah..."


John gets out, and tries to punch Josh.

"I'll get you for that!"

"Hah! Eat this!"


Josh give John a flying kick to the face, putting him down on the floor with a broken nose.

"OWWWW!!!! Damn you!"

"That was for hitting a girl."

"Fine.......**** you and your girlfriend.."

Josh kicks him again, knocking him out.

"Now thats for hitting MY girl."



Josh drives to a nearby parking lot.


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"Yumi.. Are you alright?"

"Yeah babe.."

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"Damn... You have a bruise on your face..."

"....He kinda slapped me..."

"Now I really want to kill him... Whats the story anyway?"

"John and I used to date back in the day, when you were still racing on the mountains, and we were just neighbors. I broke up with him, because he started using hard drugs. Then he would threaten to hit me.."

"Oh.. Well thats never gonna happen..."

"I know.... Thank you for saving me.."

"I'm always here.."

"I love you."

"I love you too.




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Special Stage Route 7 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"He brought your Hakosuka to my shop."

"That thing is still alive? Cool. I miss the roar of that S20."

"Its in pretty good shape actually. Oh, I didnt know it had racing parts! Thats why I could never beat you back then!"

"Hahaha! I got those parts from my friend. He works on the Group A division of racing. I got parts from a wrecked racing Hakosuka."

"Oh, I thought you got them from Tsuchiya."

"Haven't really heard from Tsuchiya for a while. I got them from Yamamoto."

"Oh.. His son's are pro drivers right?"

"Yeah. They are called the "Twins of Motegi"."

"So, anyway, you're son has amazed me. Josh got to mastered the R34 without the limiter already."

"Really? Then I guess its time. Next week."

"You think he has a chance? The GT-R is pretty good, but your Porsche is the Devil."

"We'll see."

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CHAPTER 9 END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

next chapter will be posted the week after this week, because of exams. Stay posted! :)
 
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I must say that this is one of the best fanfics I've read for quite some time. You can really see the improvement in your writing. And you have chosen some nice cars for it. Especially the Hakosuka. 👍
 
Oh God, the Hakosuka.

My other love in this game, only competition for its affection include a few Lotuses and the Amuse cars. And the NSX-LM Road Car.
 
Thank you guys for the good feedback! Please expect the next chapter next week. I really have a load of exams :))
 
Hey guys! Sorry for the long delay, my exams arent done yet. As a bonus, I will release two chapters at the same time. I plan to release them maybe tomorrow, or the day after tomorrow. Sorry again for the delay! :)


EDIT: 08/8/2012: Hey guys, most of my classes were cancelled due to strong rains and floods. Therefore my exams have been postponed. I do not know when I will be able to release the next chapters, but rest assured this fanfic will still continue. As a bonus, I will release 2 chapters at the same time. Thank you! :)
 
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Chapter 10: The White Tails!



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Special Stage Route 5_1 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"I've been hearing rumors of a new bigshot on the wangan."

"Whats his name?"

"Josh Takeshi. He drives a monster R34."


"R34 huh? I'm sure its nothing your LFA cant handle. Does he go Touge racing?"

"From what I know, he came from the Touge, and started highway racing."

"I wanna challenge him on the Touge. Nothing can stop us."



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"The White Tails."




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"JOSH!"

"....Huh?... Whats up?..."

"Its 8:30am. We're late!"

"Oh right!!"




Josh goes down to eat breakfast. He sees the bruise on Yumi's face.

"Hey... Are you okay to go to school today? Hows your bruise?"

"Well... I think I wanna rest first actually.."

"Rest first then. I'll just grab all your homework like last time. I feel better if you rest."

"Ok... Have a nice day then!"

"You too!"




Josh gets in the Hakosuka. The S20 roars to life. The classic sound of carburetors echo throughout R246.


Tokyo R246 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Nothing sounds as legendary as this S20. Dad did a great job with this car..."

"Whats this?"


Josh finds a piece of paper in the compartment. He opens it. It is a receipt from a second-hand car dealership for a '86 Porsche 964 turbo. It is registered to Richard Takeshi.

"Where'd this come from? Porsche 964.... Thats weird. I dont recall our family owning a Porsche."



"Wait... I actually remember something about a Porsche... When Bill was training for track days with his R32..."


Tsukuba Circuit_3 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Damn... Tsukuba is hard...."

"Dont worry. Josh and I are right here behind you."


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"Once I get my car, I will also race here!"

"Hahaha! When you're 18 years old."

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Josh sheds a tear, remembering the memories he had with his dad.


Tokyo R246_1 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Its a shame you didnt get to see me drive dad. I really miss you. I didnt even get to see you when you died."





Josh parks the Hakosuka outside the school because it doesnt have the school sticker. Everyone notices it immediately since its an old car.


Tokyo R246_2 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Damn... I should get to class quickly!"



Josh gets to class. His professor catches him.

"Aiyah! Late again?! Mr Takeshi!?"

"Oh Crap! gomenasai!!!!"

"Not good! Not Good at all! 100 pushups!"

"Is that even possible!?"

"Start!!!"

"1...2...3...4..5..6"

After 12 pushups, Josh returns to his seat. Elcid is there.

"Nice pushups! Haha!"

"Shut up! My arms are sore.. Why does Mr. Tetsujin have to be so hard on latecomers...."

"Because you've been late 10 times already. Mr. Tetsujin is also the strictest teacher in the world."



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"So whats on your hitlist now? You have the Legendary Z, The Hammer of Bayshore, A 500hp Supra and Your Brother's R35 under your belt! Who do you plan on challenging next?"

"Wow... I beat that much people already? Well I don't know man. I'm actually waiting for the black Porsche on the Wangan."

"Ohh.... So you're after the Shadow of Route 7 now... Bring your best car. He's gonna be a pain in the ass to beat."

"Yeah. Hopefully my R34 can beat it."


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"So guess what?"

"What?"

"Harumi's finally my girlfriend!"

"Nice bro! I'm happy for you!"

"Thanks! I was thinking of celebrating with drinks later tonight."

"Sure dude. My place?"

"Sure!"

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Class ends. Josh walks back to the Hakosuka. He sees a letter posted on the windshield of the car.

"What the.... A letter?"

Josh opens it.

"Next week, after the last day of school. Be on Route 7 at 1:30am. Bring your best. Regards, Mr. R"

"What the hell.... Who is Mr. R?"


Then, a white Toyota 86 stops behind Josh. Two girls in long, white coats get out.


Tokyo R246_3 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Joshua Takeshi!"

"Huh?"

"We are the White Tails. I am Rin Aizawa. I specialize in Wangan racing. This is my partner, Touge specialist Kazumi Kitami. "

"Um... Okay?"

"We would like to challenge you to a fight. Are you free tonight?"

"Yeah sure."

"Good. We will plan 2 races. The highway race will be tonight, and the Touge will be tomorrow. We will be waiting for you at Route 7 at midnight. First one to reach the end of the tunnel wins. Please bring your best."

"Okay."


The White Tails leave.


Tokyo R246_4 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Is the Hakosuka his car? Thats pretty rare."

"Well... Whatever car he has.. Hes never gonna beat us."

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"Jeez.. Where are all these challenges coming from? Oh no.. The R34's suspension settings can't do Touge. Maybe I could borrow something from Elcid."


Josh gets home. He sees Yumi, curled up in a blanket, watching TV.


"Hello cutie!"

"Hey! Youre back!"

Yumi give Josh a kiss. Josh gets butterflies in his stomach from the taste of Yumi's lips.

"..Woah... Oh, and I got your homework. Elcid and Harumi will visit later."

"Oh, whats the occasion?"

"Elcid's just happy because Harumi agreed to be his girlfriend."

"Aww.. Sweet!"

"Yeah..."

"So, anything else happen today?"

"Oh yeah, I got challenged by a group to race later. They're called the White Tails."

"White Tails? cool name. What do they drive?"

"I don't know. They just told me to bring my best. I found a letter on my car too, challenging me to a race next week."

"Wow! Youre getting pretty famous!"

"I know... But I don't want to get noticed that much. haha."



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"Oh, I have a surprise for you."

"Really? I love surprises!"

"Come with me. Its inside the bedroom."

Josh winks.

"Oh... That surprise. Are you sure we're ready for this? I mean, I would love to, but we're not even married."

"Uh... what do you mean?"

"I didnt buy anything sexy yet... What do you want me to wear?"

"WHAT!? What are you talking about!?"

"The 'surprise' right? I know what you mean! *wink*"

"Um, I'm pretty sure you dont."

Josh brings Yumi to the bedroom. Josh opens a drawer, and pulls out a silver locket with his picture and Yumi's picture.

"The surprise was a necklace! It came from my mom. What did you think the surprise was?"

Yumi blushes

"Oh... nothing. I love you!"

"Okay... I love you too."



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Night comes. Elcid and Harumi arrive in Harumi's Evo 4.


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"Hey guys! Woah.. Is that your car Harumi?"

"Hey Josh! Yeah. This is my baby!"

"Hey Josh! I brought drinks!"

"Good good... Come in guys!"

"Hey guys! How are you Harumi?"

"Im good!"

"Oh, can you help me cook dinner?"

"Sure sure!"



Josh and Elcid stay outside.


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Kyoto - Gion_3 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Harumi's car is sick man."

"Yeah. On the way here, we passed the Eiger touge. She had complete control of the car man. Shes a killer Touge racer."

"Damn... Oh, do you know anything about the White Tails?"

"The White Tails? They're one of the best street racing teams. One is a killer highway racer with her LFA, and the other is a killer Touge specialist driving a new generation Toyota 86. Why?"

"Im racing the Highway specialist at midnight tonight.. Im racing at the Touge too.. I really need to find a drift car. The White Tail's 86 dominates the Touge."

"WHAT!? THE WHITE TAILS CHALLENGED YOU!?"

"Yeah dude... They came to me after school. They were two girls."

"Damn... I hope your R34 can kill the LFA. I have a car for you. I'll lend it to you for tomorrow's battle."

"Oh really? Thanks man. What kind is it?"

"Its a surprise. Haha!"

"Fine... Whats an LFA then?"

"The LFA is a car produced by Lexus. It has a 4.8 liter V10 engine. I think the White Tails LFA is tuned, I'm not sure how much power it has."

"Damn... Well, I'm sure my GT-R can kill it! Hahaha!"

"Hopefully.. The Touge specialist is good too. I heard she used to be a pro driver."

"Really? Oh man... Looks like some serious competition."

"GUYS! DINNER!"

"Ok!"

"Ok!"

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Josh and Elcid go inside. On the table, a huge feast.

"Tada! Harumi helped me cook all this."

"Oh wow! Thanks guys!"

"Thanks babe!"

They eat. Soon after, Josh goes to the GT-R, giving it a checkup before the race.


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"So how is it?"

"Everythings pretty good. I checked everything out."

"Can I ride with you? I wanna see how the fast the LFA of the White Tails go."

"Yeah sure dude!"



Josh and Elcid get in the R34.

"Bye Josh! We'll wait here! Dont forget your promise!"

"Yeah! Elcid, be careful!"

"Don't worry guys. I got this!"

"See you later!"



The R34 gives out a deep sounding growl. It echos throughout the streets of Gion. Soon, they hit the wangan.


Special Stage Route 7 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"They should be here."

"Im excited."


Then, another set of headlights appear in the rearview mirror.


Special Stage Route 7_1 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Is that them?"

"I think so."

The LFA and the GT-R are side by side. Then, the LFA screams, and speeds off.


Special Stage Route 7_2 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Lets do this!!"

"Nothing can beat me!"

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Josh observes the LFA at a comfortable 300kmh.



"I've never seen a car like that. It sounds like a jetplane."

"Well, I guess thats expected of a car that costs 375,000USD."

"Damn... Thats way too much money."


"Im going all out tonight."


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Meanwhile, at Gion...


"Is that a bruise?"

"Oh.. Yeah. Do you remember John?"

"Your Ex? Yeah. I remember him. He was a jerk right?"

"Well, after Josh and I got home, he punched Josh and kidnapped me yesterday."

"Really? Damn... Are you alright?"

"Yeah.. Josh went after me. I got this bruise because John slapped me."

"Thank god."

"I know. I can't even think of what would've happened if Josh didn't go after me."



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Josh presses the High boost button on the steering wheel. The turbos
spool, and jerk the car forward. Its immense power is immediately felt throughout the whole car.



Special Stage Route 7_3 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Passed."

"This car is the devil isnt it?"

"A bit... I love how the turbos spool."

"Look at that. An RB series revving above 9000rpm."


Special Stage Route 7_5 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Dammit. His R34 is really something. He's going about 370kmh."

"I heard its engine is an RBX version tuned to 800hp."

"Crap.... I guess I'm not winning tonight."

"Don't worry. I'll have him on the Touge. Theres no way that an 800hp car like that can be controlled on a tight course. My 86 can do this."

And another win for the R34.


Special Stage Route 7_6 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Yes!"

"Damn..... I think I'm gonna be sick!"



Both cars stop on the side of the road.


Special Stage Route 7_7 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"That was a good race. I thought we had dominated the wangan. Turns out we didn't."

"That was a good race. Where will the Touge match be?"

"It will be at Mt. Eiger tomorrow. Be there at 6pm."

"Speaking of which, can I bring a different car for the battle tomorrow?"

"What car will it be?"

"Elcid?"

"An S13 Silvia."

"Hah! Sure. Dont hold back."

"See you guys tomorrow then."



The White Tails leave.


Special Stage Route 7_8 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"He must be kidding if he thinks an outdated Silvia can beat my 86. My car was literally built for mountain racing."

"Don't get cocky Kazumi. Even I thought an R34 can't beat me... Until now.."


Special Stage Route 7_9 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"S13? Where'd you get that?"

"Well, it used to be my cousin's car. He had to sell it to me because he likes muscle cars. I bought it from him at a cheap price."

"Is it tuned? I dont think a stock SR20 can beat the new 86."

"Thats why I bought it. He had it tuned with TOMEI parts. It has a very special engine in it."

"Woah... Thats pretty cool. I can't wait to see it tomorrow man. Oh, I forgot to tell you. I found a letter on my car awhile ago."

"Really? What'd it say?"

"Its said to come here on the Wangan after the last day of school. At 1:30am."

"Was there a name?"

"Oh right. All it said was Mr.R. I don't know anyone like that."

"Only one way to find out then. Do you need me to accompany you?"

"Naw man. I can do this by myself."

"Alright bro."


They get back to Gion.



"Hey! How was the battle?"

"We won... This car is the Devil."

"Hahaha! The battle was intense! Their car was a supercar, but the GT-R held its own."

"That's great!"

"Alright then bro! I will bring the Silvia here tomorrow. We'll be on our way! Thanks for tonight!"

"Thank you Josh! Thank you Yumi!"

"See ya Elcid! Bye Harumi!"

"Bye Harumi! See ya Elcid!"


Elcid and Harumi leave.

"Hey... I'm really happy that we're together."

"Huh? Oh, me too babe. Im happy too."

"Now I have a surprise for you."

"Really? What is it?"

"Its upstairs. *wink*"

"Ooohh..... Is it a necklace?"

"Definitely not. Haha!"

"Let's see it then."

"I love you."

"I love you too. Forever and Always."




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Special Stage Route 7 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Damn... Your porsche seems to get faster everyday."

"Yeah. I tested its top speed recently. 377kmh."

"Jeez.... Thats enough to make a dead guy scream..."



Special Stage Route 7_1 by halfcab23, on Flickr


"So you gave him the letter?"

"Yup.. You think he'll take your fake death alright?"

"I hope so.."

"Well then. I wish you the best."

"Thanks. Its time to become a father once again."



CHAPTER 10 END!!!
 
Chapter 11: Promises.



Trial Mountain Circuit_7 by halfcab23, on Flickr


"I remember that dreaded day.."



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"I came home from school. The phone rang, and Mom answered it."


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"After the phonecall...."


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"..."


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"She told me dad had died in a car accident..."

"I lost it. I went to my room and punched walls... It hurt, but not as much as the pain I felt in my heart."

"Now.... I concentrate on getting better at driving."



Trial Mountain Circuit_2 by halfcab23, on Flickr


Trial Mountain Circuit_1 by halfcab23, on Flickr


"For my dad."



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"*snore* Huh-..."

"Whats up babe?"

"Oh..... Sorry... I had a bad dream...."

"Awww..... Its ok.. I'm here.."



Josh and Yumi get up for breakfast.

"What do you want for breakfast?"

"Anything!"

"Alright then.. I'll just make pancakes."

Doorbell rings.

"I'll get that."




Josh opens the door.

"Hey dude!"

"Hey man! I brought the S13 over for later's battle. wanna check it out?"

"Sure!"


Elcid brings Josh to the S13.


Kyoto - Gion_1 by halfcab23, on Flickr


Kyoto - Gion by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Wow.... It looks... Stock."

"Check out whats under the hood."



As Josh opens the hood, he immediately notices that the SR20 is a touring spec.

"Wait.... Is that a SR20 TOMEI shortblock?"

"Yup. Forged pistons too."

"Woah..... 2.2 liter SR20 huh? With a huge HKS turbo."

"And it has a BLITZ exhaust. Not bad huh?"

"Yeah..... What was your cousin gonna use it for?"

"Well... He wanted to enter the D1GP competition, but he got lazy and instead wanted his S13 to look clean, but mean on the inside. He won a trophy from a Hellaflush event for being one of the cleanest looking Silvias."

"Whats the max power?"

"Since its detuned, its a little under 400hp. The suspension settings were specifically tuned for Mt. Eiger."

"Woah.. I can't wait to try it out.. Oh, have you eaten man? There are pancakes inside."

"Sure dude!"


Josh brings Elcid inside to eat breakfast.

"Hey Elcid! You hungry?"

"Hey! Yeah... I'm always hungry..."

"Here. Help yourself with the pancakes!"

"Thanks dude!"


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"So whats the plan today?"

"Oh, I have a race at Mt. Eiger later. Wanna ride with me?"

"Sure!"

"Jeez.... These pancakes are to die for...."

"Hahahaha!"

"Oh right, whats your plan Josh? Wanna go for some practice rounds against Harumi?"

"Yeah! Harumi is a pretty good driver!"

"Sure! Lets all get in the Silvia!"



They all pile in the Silvia. Josh passes the Bayshore route.


Special Stage Route X_1 by halfcab23, on Flickr


"Wow... I really like how smooth the Bayshore is."

"Yeah... The SR20 in this Silvia is very responsive..."

"I like this car!"


Josh takes the exit. Soon, they reach the Eiger Touge.


Eiger Nordwand Short Track_13 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Its been a while since I drove an FR on the Touge."

"You're not scared are you? Sissy. Haha!"

"Hahaha! I will try my best."

"Alright then! I just called Harumi and I told her that we'll meet at her place."

"Alright.. Everyone buckle up."

"Why?"

"I'm gonna attack the corners."

"Show us what you've got!"


Eiger Nordwand Short Track_12 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Brake.... Heel-toe... Downshift... Turn.... Countersteer..."


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"WOAH!!! GET ME OUT OF HERE!!!"

"Woohoo!"


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*thinking* Wow..... This car..... I really like it.."



Josh stops behind Harumi's Evo.


Eiger Nordwand Short Track_8 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Hey! Its Harumi!"

"I'm moving to Harumi's car.... You drive like a demon.."

"Hahaha! I still got it..."

"One day I will beat you! Hahaha!"

"We'll see!"


Josh and Harumi line up.


"Hey Harumi!"

"Hey Josh! So how are we doing this?"

"Hmmm..... Wanna just run the course? Like, lets just have fun and have a practice session!"

"Sure! Keep up with my Evo. If you can! Haha!"

"Let's GO!"


Josh puts the pedal to the metal, but Harumi's Evo IV's 4G63T engine paired with the 4WD system keeps the car stable and increases the lead.


Eiger Nordwand Short Track_7 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Woah.... Harumi is a pretty good driver!"

"Hah! I bet I can drive better..."


First corner approaches..

"Lets see what this baby can do!"


Eiger Nordwand Short Track_6 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Man.... 4WD is really helpful on the tarmac..."

"Come on Josh! You can beat her!"

"I wish.... But her Evo's 4WD system is unbeatable. She even has those Anti-lag systems... I wonder if I can still pull my old trick off.."

"Pull what trick?"

"You'll see...."

Next corner approaches..


Eiger Nordwand Short Track_5 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"...."

"Hah! He'll never get you babe!"

"My Evo is still the best on the Tou- WHAT!?"


Eiger Nordwand Short Track_4 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Woah....."


Eiger Nordwand Short Track_3 by halfcab23, on Flickr


"Whew..... Thank god..."

"How did you even do that!?"

"I used to practice that everyday back in high school...."


Josh and Harumi park first.


Eiger Nordwand Short Track_2 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"HEY! How did you do that!?"

"I told you he was a demon...."

"Haha! I remembered a trick I used to do on the touge, thought I'd try it again."

"What did you do though?"

"I slammed the inner tires into the gutter. That way, I would have more stable cornering and I won't be affected by the G forces."

"Can you teach me sometime?"

"Sure!"

"Yumi! Weren't you scared?"

"Hahaha! Of course not! I'm never scared if its Josh driving!"

"Haha!"

"Let's chill at my place first!"

"Sure!"



They all hangout at Harumi's Mansion.

"Holy.... Your house is HUGE!"

"Yeah!"

"Thanks! Have a seat first while I grab you all some coffee."

"Oh, its okay I mean, we could get it ourse-"

"James!"

A man in a black suit approaches Harumi.

"Yes Ms. Takahashi?"

"Can we please have 4 coffees?"

"Certainly!"

*thinking* Holy cow.... She even has her own butler..."

"So... May I ask, what do your parents do for a living?"

"Oh, my dad's a property developer and my mom's a real estate agent."

"Haha! Do youre parents know that you race?"

"Of course not!"

"Don't they get suspicious? I mean, you drive a Lancer Evo."

"Oh, they don't know that the Lancer Evolution is a sports car. They never even thought that my old Impreza wagon was about 300hp."

"What do they drive?"

"My dad drives an Aston Martin Vantage, and my mom drives a Ferrari 458 Italia."

"Woah....."

"They were kinda disappointed when I asked for an Evo instead of a Benz. They gave me a lot of money, so when I bought the Evolution, I used the excess money for upgrades."

"A Benz...."

"What modifications did you do to your Lancer?"

"Oh, I had the Turbo swapped out for a bigger Garrett T04, I bought a RALLIART aerokit, I managed to find a WRC-spec Anti-lag system, a RALLIART header and muffler, ARC intake and MINE'S front mount intercooler. Final power is under 470hp."

"I didn't understand anything. Haha!

"Wow.... Your Lancer must be wild."

"I think you can actually beat my Evo IX."

"Of course I can!"

Josh suddenly hears a car racing in the mountains.

"Can anyone else hear that?"

"...I can hear it.. You think its the White Tails?"

"Yeah.. Lets go."

"Good luck on your race Josh!"

"Can I ride with you?"

"Sure!"

"Alright! You guys go, I'll stay with Harumi first."

"Awwww.. So sweet.."

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Josh and Yumi get in the Silvia. Josh starts the SR20, and floors it.


"I hope i can beat them."

"Don't worry.. This is nothing you can't handle."


Eiger Nordwand Short Track_1 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Is that them?"

"Yup."

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"Thats them isn't it?"

"Yup. Lets discuss the battle."


The Silvia stops behind the 86.. Both drivers get out.


Eiger Nordwand Short Track by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Nice car... You think you can beat my 86?"

"We'll see."

"Who's the girl?"

"My name is Yumi Takahara. I'm Josh's girlfriend."

"Alright then. We'll start here. We'll do one whole round, then the first one to cross the bridge again wins. Cat and Mouse race. Since we're the challengers, you pick if your the Cat."

"Hmmm..... I'll be the Cat."

"Alright then. Let's race."


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Both cars get ready to race.


*thinking* Hmmm... Why would he want to chase me? If he plans on overtaking me with a trick, then he's mistaken. I'm not losing today. Not ever."


The 86 roars.



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"Lets do this."


"Nothing can beat my 86!"



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"Woah..... That jump can really mess up your rhythm.."

"Wait.... What just happened to her car? Is she suffering from tire wear already?"




Eiger Nordwand Short Track_16 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Dammit.... I didnt get the jump... My rear suspension is too stiff..."

First corner approaches...

"Lets just see how good the White Tails are!"


Eiger Nordwand Short Track_17 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Shes got some skill.."

"So this is the real Josh Takeshi... Not bad.."


Eiger Nordwand Short Track_19 by halfcab23, on Flickr


"Well that wasn't so bad..."

"I should attack at the next corner."

Second corner approaches.


Eiger Nordwand Short Track_18 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"*thinking* Woah..... The control Josh has on this car, is unbelievable..."


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"Hah! You're never passing me!"

"Watch it Kazumi. Focus."


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"THERE!"


Eiger Nordwand Short Track_21 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"WHAT!?"

"NO WAY! What is he doing!?"


Eiger Nordwand Short Track_23 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"You wont get away.."

"It worked.. The gutter technique actually worked.."

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"I don't know what just happened, but I have my own trick too..."

"I have this battle in the bag!"


Josh and Kazumi reach the tunnel.


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"After the tunnel, there's gonna be an inclined right turn. His car is on the outside line. I should just stick my 86's nose on the inside, and he'll lose it."


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"I got it!"

"Woah... Tires are really slipping..."


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"****! She got me..."

"I have to say kid. You've got some skill."


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"Im not losing."

"*thinking* Damn.... I need to form a counterattack.... But where? The battle's gonna end soon.


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Wait..... Her car can't handle jumps.. I got it!"



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"Damn.... Tires are suffering..."

"Wait... He's quick.. His exit speed is unbelievably fast.."

"But, I'm already in front.... I'm not letting him pass..."


"Damn... I hate this jump..."


"I should just stick to her side.. Then she'll lose her control.."


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"WHAT!? SIDE BY SIDE!? YOURE CRAZY!"



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"Josh...."

"I got this."





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"Kazumi..."

"I know.... I'm sorry Rin."


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"It was a great battle Takeshi."


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"She spun out.... We won..."

"We won!!!"

"Hahaha!"



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Eiger Nordwand Short Track_36 by halfcab23, on Flickr


"It was a great race Mr. Takeshi. Your technique was legendary."

"To be honest, I actually feel happy that I lost to you."

"Your technique was prett-"

"And I find you cute. Haha!"

"Woah really?"

"WHAT!? Wait just a se-"

"Okay Kazumi! We should go now. Its been a pleasure to meet you Mr. Takeshi."


The White Tails leave... Josh and Yumi return to Harumi's house.

"Hey guys! So how was the battle?"

"We won!"

"That's great!"

"She was really good. The Silvia was really fun to drive. Say, are you selling that car Elcid?"

"Hahaha! Never! The SR20 in that car is pretty rare!"

"Hahaha! Alright then.... Can Yumi and I have a ride back to Gion?"

"Sure dude!"


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Elcid brings Josh and Yumi back to Gion.

"See you later Josh!"

"Bye guys!"

"Thanks for lending me the Silvia Elcid! Thanks too Harumi!"

"Thank you guys!"


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"I guess... Its just that Mr. R left huh?"

"After the last day of school right? Are you ready?"

"A bit... I have a feeling that this battle is not just any battle."

"Well... I believe you can win any kind of battle. You're a very skilled driver Josh."

"Oh... I never got to ask you..."

"Huh? What is it?"

"What do you want to be when you grow up?"

"Well.... I want to be a professional driver. Like my dad."

"Thats great! I hope you achieve your dream!"

"Whats your dream?"

"Um..... I haven't really thought about it yet...."


"Really?"

"I haven't really found my calling yet..."

"..I will help you find your dream!"

"Thank you... That means so much to me."


"*thinking*I do have one dream though...







I wanna be your wife someday.."



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Special Stage Route 7 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"I hope you forgive me Josh."


Special Stage Route 7_1 by halfcab23, on Flickr

"Forgive me for not being there."


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"But I promise... After our race.."



"I will never leave again."


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CHAPTER 11 END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
that gutter thing reminded me of initial D, that part where the hachi roku faces for the first time the impreza
 
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