Right, well, I'm a bit of a noob to the site, but here's my thoughts;
Hally-
dynamic looking photo, I like the lens flare on the lights and the slight angle makes things a bit more exciting. I'd personally look take the edges of the picture slightly tighter to the sides of the car, but other than that it's a fair example of this type of shot. It's obvious that you've stuggled a little to get the balance of not over exposing the sky too much, and keeping the subject matter lit as well, maybe taking the picture at a different location or driving from a different direction might help, or using a little bit of post-production.