~ Ready, Steady, Go! - Chapter 55 ~ (02/03/12)(56k/MobileApp Warning!)

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Chapter 8 - Baby Civic

Three years ago…

Dave and his close friend Frank were in the Suzuka pit lane, preparing for the upcoming race.

“Hey Dave, look at these cars.”
”I know Frank. I’m a bit scared to tell you the truth.”
”What do you mean scared? Your Vitz is fast!”
”Fast on the street but I’ve not go chance against a brand new Civic Type R!”
“What Civic Type R?”
”The blue one, with the tall guy and shorter girl near it.”
”Oh.”
”Look at those two, they look like a couple.”
“I wonder who’s driving in the race.”
”Probably the guy. Pretty girls don’t race, it’s fact.”
“I wonder what they’re talking about.”
”She’s probably going on about clothes and he’s pretending to listen.”
”Probably.”

An announcement came on, telling all drivers to get onto the grid.

“Looks like it’s starting, mind if I ride shotgun with you Dave?”
”Sure go for it.”
”Cool.”
”Hey wait a sec, why is the girl getting into the driver’s seat of that Civic?”
”You serious? Wow.”
”The guy is riding with her. That’s a bit backwards isn’t it? Maybe I can beat the Civic!”
”Haha women drivers eh?”
“Yeah! Anyway lets go!”

Starting Grid
1. Silver Peugeot 406 Coupe
2. Black Toyota Celica ST202
3. White Toyota Celica ZZT231
4. You Know Who’s Blue Honda Civic Type R
5. Dave’s Red Toyota Vitz
6. White Honda Civic Type R EP3
7. Champagne Nissan Primera
8. Red Corolla Levin BZ-R


“This 406 Coupe will win with it’s European performance!”

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“This generation of Celica is superior to any other, I wont have trouble dealing with that new one beside me.”

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”It’s going to be a battle of the Celica’s!”

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“Reckon I can win?”
”Easily. Just don’t overdo it, we haven’t even broken in the engine yet.”
“Alright!”

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“Lets do it Dave!”
”I’ll take them in the corners!”

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“So that’s the new Japanese-spec Type R eh? Looks more practical than the ones we get back in the UK…”

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“I hope dad doesn’t mind me borrowing the Primera….”

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”My modified Levin should breeze this.”

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The lights went green and Dave floored it, spinning the Vitz’s skinny tyres.

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“Damn it they’re all overtaking me!”
”Wow dude, just wow.”

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“I’m last!”
”You’re being beaten by a chick.”
”Shut up!”

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“I told you I’d make it up in the corners!”
“Where the hell are you going?!”

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“Yeah!”
”Holy crap!”

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“Gotta pass this Celica!”

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“Move!”
”Careful dude the white one is still beside us!”

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“Damn she’s winning!”
”You’re nuts man! Slow down before you crash!”

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“I can keep up with a Type R!”

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“Pass him Dave!”
”I’m trying!”

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“How fast is that Civic man?”
”They’re toying with me! Argh!”

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“Late braking technique!”
”Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!”

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“Ohhh crap…”
”I’m gonna die… I’m gonna die…”

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“All right!”

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“There’s a Vitz behind you.”
”Seriously? I think he’s eager to win.”
”Toy with him a bit.”

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“I wont let a chick beat me!”

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“Just a dab of throttle…”

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“I wont lose!”

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“This is fun!”
”Don’t push too hard, it’s still a new engine.”

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“I’m going to pass!”

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“Damn it!”

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“Damn you!”

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”What the crap?! On the last lap as well!”
“This is hilarious!”

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“I’ll get you under cornering again!”

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“See!”
”You’ve still got that girl to catch.”

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“I’m going to beat you too! Don’t worry!”

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“Persistent isn’t he?”
”Reminds me of you.”
”Me? Why me?”
”Because you’re a persistent girl!”
“How rude!”
”It was a compliment!”

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“I’ve got the inside!”
”Pass her!”

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“Stop it you freaking annoying girl!”
“Woah dude, chill.”

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“Argh! There’s no hope now!”

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“She won…”
“You did your best dude.”

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Present day…

Yuka was sitting at home, watching TV with Kei. Yuka’s phone rang, it was Cooper.

“Hey Cooper.”
”Yuka, I need to ask you something.”
”What’s up?”
”Do you have any intention to confront Ed?”
”About?”
”The theft.”
”You know it was him?”
”Word spreads fast.”
”Oh. Well I guess I want to. Why?”
”Everyone at the used lot wants to crack his skull open.”
“Really? Why? I don’t want to beat him up, I just want to talk some sense into him.”
”Are you sure Yuka? Just a few days ago you was ready to bust some balls.”
”I realised I’d be happier if I just let it go. There’s no point getting revenge like that. I’m just going to call the cops after talking to him.”
“If you’re sure, then okay. Everyone’s pissed at him anyway. The dishonest prick.”
”Where is he anyway?”
”At home. He took a few days off after I bopped him on the nose.”
”What did you do that for?!”
”I was just defending myself! He lashed out at me.”
”What did you say to him beforehand?”
“Nothing offensive. Just that he’s got nowhere to run if I call the police.”
”Cooper!”
”What?”
”Nevermind. I want to talk to Ed.”
“I can get him to come into work tomorrow if you want.”
”That’ll be good. Thanks Cooper.”
”You’re welcome Yuka. Anyway, how’s the Civic?”
”TJ is fixing it. He says it’ll be as good as new.”
”That’s great!”
”I’m also sending it away for a full tune up. It’s going to be twice as fast as it used to be, maybe more.”
“Sheesh! As if it wasn’t fast enough already Yuka! Plus you have that R33!”
”The R33 is going after the Civic is repaired, so yeah.”
”Oh. Well that’s a shame. Anyway Yuka I’ll see you tomorrow I guess.”
”Yeah, see you tomorrow.”
”Bye Yuka.”
 
I liked the flashback, it adds a lot to the story.
 
If that Vitz was n RS Turbo it would have won! Great chapter, I liked the bit of back story, can get get some more of it?
 
^ I'm pretty sure that was an actual Vitz RS.
 
If that Vitz was n RS Turbo it would have won! Great chapter, I liked the bit of back story, can get get some more of it?

^ I'm pretty sure that was an actual Vitz RS.

I think he meant if it was the Vitz RS Turbo that's based on the first generation Vitz. The one in the chapter is a second generation Vitz RS, which has no turbo.
 
Awesome Chapter, as usual. For some reason the GTPlanet app crashes whenI go to this page. Odd.
 
Awesome Chapter, as usual. For some reason the GTPlanet app crashes whenI go to this page. Odd.
Yeah I don't recommend viewing the thread with a phone. :P
Is this a online race? A Vitz is impossible to overtake those carz.

All the races so far have been offline with AI.
 
I think he meant if it was the Vitz RS Turbo that's based on the first generation Vitz. The one in the chapter is a second generation Vitz RS, which has no turbo.

Your spot on, the RS Turbo starts out in life with 151hp and once fully modded it has 259hp. Combined that with weight around 850KGs and you have a killer FF econo track car.
 
Chapter 9 - Goodbye Ed

“Yuka’s here. Where’s Ed?”
”Waiting in her office.”
”Okay, make sure no one disturbs them.”
”Why? Where are you going Cooper?”
”I need to prepare for when Yuka’s done.”
”What? What do you mean?”
“You’ll see.”

Yuka walked in. Cooper went to greet her.

“Yuka, hey.”
”Hey Cooper.”
“He’s in your office.”
”Thanks Cooper.”
”If you need me just call, alright?”
”Will do.”
”Alright, be careful Yuka.”
”Oh don’t worry.”

Yuka proceeded to walk into her office, she saw Ed with his head down, trying not to make eye contact with Yuka. She sat down in her chair.

”So, Ed, long time no see.”
“Yuka…”
”I’ve already got the full story from our mutual friend, so don’t start. I’m past the point of caring why you did it.”
”Yuka… I…”
”I said don’t start!”
”But…”
“I don’t want your excuses, your apologies or whatever else you have to say.”
“Then what do you want me to do Yuka? I’m sorry for what I did, I regret it so much!”
”Really? Then how does it feel when you’re destroying something that’s special to me?”
“I didn’t want to do it Yuka!”
”Shut up! You’re even more pathetic that I thought you were! You made the choice yourself, no one had a gun to your head.”
”Yuka please understand!”
”Understand what? That you think stealing and smashing cars is romantic?”
”That I like you!”
”You have a funny way of showing it!”
”I’m sorry! Please forgive me! I don’t want to go to jail!”
“Oh shut up! I have every intention of turning you in to the police after I’m finished with you.”
”Yuka please! I beg you!”
“Man up already!”
”Yuka…”
”Ed let me ask you something.”
”Okay…”
”What did you think was going to happen after stealing my car? That I’d stop driving? Stop racing? How dumb are you? Did it not occur to you that I’d get a new car and keep racing?”
“I wasn’t thinking straight Yuka!”
“You never think straight! If you wanted to date me you should’ve been a man about it!”
”I’m sorry Yuka! I know I’ve blown my chances with you.”
”I said I don’t want your apologies!”

Yuka reached over and slapped Ed hard, creating a deep red handprint on his cheek.

“Oww!”

Ed rubbed his cheek in pain.

“That hurt!”
“You’re pathetic Ed!”
”Please stop Yuka!”

Yuka picked up a large tin and wielded it in her hands. Ed cowered behind the desk.

“Yuka! No! Please stop!”

Yuka put the tin down.

”Oh for goodness sake. Sigh. Come with me.”
”What…?”
”You think racing is dangerous right? Let me show you just how dangerous it really is.”

Yuka walked out of her office.

“Come on already.”

Ed got up and followed Yuka. She walked out to the R33 outside.

”Get in.”

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Ed got into the R33’s passenger seat. Yuka got into the driver’s seat and locked the doors.

”Yuka…?”

Yuka started up the R33.

“Belt up.”
“Okay…”

Ed put his seatbelt on. Yuka put the R33 into gear and launched it, lighting up the rear wheels.

“Yuka!! Stop!”

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Yuka threw the R33 into a high-angle drift.

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Narrowly missing the wall.

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And near missing the guardrail after linking drifts.

“Yuka! Please stop! You’re going to crash!”

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Yuka stayed silent, throwing the R33 into another crazy drift, near missing another guardrail.

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“Let me out! I don’t want to die!”

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“I’m choking on all this smoke!”

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“I’m sorry Yuka! I’m so sorry!”

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Yuka stayed hard on the throttle, continuing her drift frenzy.

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She threw the car into a high-speed drift after barrelling down the main straight. She came within inches of hitting both barriers.

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“Yuka!!!!”

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“Do you see now, Ed? I don’t need your concern. I know the risks of racing and I have the ability to keep control of the car on the edge.”
“Yuka… But…”
“Don’t but me. I’m fully capable of taking care of myself. I don’t need you or anyone else trying to nanny me.”
”I just don’t want to see you get hurt…”
”Should’ve thought about that before you decided it was a good idea to rob me.”

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”I’m sorry Yuka…”
”Sigh... Get out Ed.”
”Please don’t…”
“It’s obvious that you don’t get it. I’ve been nice to you so far, don’t push me more than you already have done.”
“I don’t want to go to prison.”
“Run away then, I don’t care, just get out.”
“I won’t run away.”
“Whatever, just get out.”
“I’ll face the consequences of my actions.”
“Why the sudden change of tune?”
“I’m manning up, finally.”
“Well that’s good news. Cooper is waiting by the gates.”
“Goodbye then, Yuka.”

Yuka unlocked the doors and let Ed out. She watched him walk to Cooper, before disappearing into the offices.

“I just don’t get some people at all.”

The sound of sirens approached the car used lot.

“That’s my cue.”

Yuka turned around and drove off, away from the incoming police cars.
 
Well done! This story is amazing in so many ways!

As feminine as that R33 looks, I love it so much I recreated it for myself! You have good taste VTiRoj! Can't wait for Chapter 10! :sly:👍
 
Great chapter as always. 👍

Maybe Yuka should take up drifting.
 
I can say that I'm an okay drifter, but that R33 was doing most of the work in those pics. I was running staggered tyres. It's all Hollywood magic. :lol:
 
Just checked in all of the chapters and I'm seeing good progress in the story. Well about what Ed had done to Yuka, that reminds me of what I have done to a friend of mine... :nervous:

By the way, if Yuka see me doing this to her R33 after buying it from her, she's gonna be real mad too...
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Just checked in all of the chapters and I'm seeing good progress in the story. Well about what Ed had done to Yuka, that reminds me of what I have done to a friend of mine... :nervous:

By the way, if Yuka see me doing this to her R33 after buying it from her, she's gonna be real mad too...
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You've seen the Lambo orange R33 Imported from motorex too?
 
You've seen the Lambo orange R33 Imported from motorex too?

Oh, not yet. Haven't heard of it, gonna Google it up later.

And VTiRoj, I have a suggestion. For a street racing scene, SSR5 isn't introduced yet. So far, there's SSR7 in the beginning and some of the other races are in Tokyo R246. SSR5 would be a good addition to the story :)
 
Oh, not yet. Haven't heard of it, gonna Google it up later.

And VTiRoj, I have a suggestion. For a street racing scene, SSR5 isn't introduced yet. So far, there's SSR7 in the beginning and some of the other races are in Tokyo R246. SSR5 would be a good addition to the story :)

Thanks for the suggestion. I've been planning on including SSR5 and CSR5 later on already. Thing is I cant find a way to use them without it feeling like I'm doing it for the sake of using them. Same goes for the other Japanese tracks.

Don't know if it's an actual spoiler but I might as well put the tags to good use. :dopey:
Suzuka full is already written in.
 
Chapter 10 - I’ll Be Back

Two weeks later…

“Hello, Civic.”

Yuka was standing in front of her repaired Civic. It looked like new again, minus most of the mechanical and body parts. It was now ready to be sent off to RKM Motorsport for its transformation.

“You’re already looking good. I can’t wait to see how much you’ve changed after the tune up.”

Yuka began running her hand down the side of the Civic.

“Once you’re done, we’re going on a long drive together.”

She walked around the back of the Civic, feeling the new panels.

“And I wont settle for anything less than full throttle.”

TJ walked into the garage.

”I see you’ve already gotten reacquainted.”
”It’s just like new again, sort of. Thank you TJ.”
”It’s no problem. I’ve been on the phone to the guys at RKM.”
”Really? What did they say?”
”Just that they’re ready to take the car. I’ve already made the preparations.”
”I guess you’ll be wanting the keys to the R33 now, huh?”
”Yeah. Unless you want to say goodbye first.”
”I already did. I actually managed to get its top speed on the GPS.”
”Really? How fast did it go?”
”315.”
”Woah. It wont take much to crack 320 then.”
“It’s the spoiler, it’s got a fair bit of downforce on it.”
”I’ll have to try it out myself.”
”You wont regret it, that’s for sure. Anyway here, it’s yours now.”

Yuka handed the keys over to TJ.

”And this is yours for the next couple of weeks.”

TJ handed Yuka a set of Toyota keys.

“Toyota? If this turns out to be a Prius…”
”Don’t worry, it’s better than a Prius.”
“A Supra?”
”I’ll take you to it…”
”It’s not a Supra then?”

TJ brought Yuka outside to the car park.

”TJ…”
”Yes, Yuka?”
”I only see one Toyota here.”

Yuka pointed out a bright red Vitz, sitting low on aftermarket wheels.

”That’s the one.”
”A Vitz?!”
“What’s wrong with a Vitz?”
“Can’t I have that Benz?”
”Customer’s car.”
”Or that M3?”
”Customer’s.”
”What about that S13?”
”It has no wheels.”
”So! Better than a Vitz!”
”Yuka you’re taking the Vitz whether you like it or not!”
”Alright, alright. Sheesh! I’ll take the Vitz! You want to borrow a pad? It sounds like it’s your time of the month.”

TJ glared at Yuka.

“I’m kidding!”
”Anyway! Come with me.”

TJ took Yuka inside to his office and picked up an envelope from his desk.

”Here’s what I owe you. I’ve got the payment for the Civic’s tuning ready too.”
”Thanks TJ.”
”You’re welcome. Anyway Yuka, it’s about time I take the Civic to RKM’s place.”
”Alright.”
“Don’t thrash the Vitz.”
”I won’t…”
“I’ll be off then.”

Yuka walked over to her Civic and gave it a hug.

”I’ll see you soon.”

Later on…

Yuka arrived at work with the Vitz. Everyone at the office greeted her as she made her way to her office.

“Yuka!”
”Glad to see you back Yuka!”
”Hey Yuka!”
”Yuka you’re back!”
”Hi Yuka!”

Yuka reached her office and sat down, Cooper walked in.

”So, back to normal now huh?”
”Yeah.”
”What car did you use to get here?”
”A Vitz.”
”Oh the red one with the red lipped Enkei’s? Is it yours?”
”No I’m borrowing it from TJ until my Civic is done.”
”Ah I see. How is it?”
”I hate it. It’s gutless and has no grip. It understeers more than the R33 did!”
”Oh… That sucks.”
”Like you wouldn’t believe.”

Meanwhile…

“Hey dude, isn’t that your old Vitz?”
”Where?”
”Parked in that used lot.”
“It’s for sale?”
”No man, looks like it belongs to someone.”
”Oh. I wonder who owns it now.”

Yuka walked out of the used lot with Cooper and approached the Vitz.

”Hey isn’t that…? Dave isn’t that…?”
”It’s that girl from three years ago!”
“Is that the same guy too?”
”Nah he’s shorter than I remember.”
”They don’t seem close. Maybe she’s showing the car to her co-worker?”
”Probably. I’m going over.”

Dave and Frank walked over to Yuka and Cooper.

Dave: ”Hey.”
Cooper: “Hey.”
Yuka: “Hi!”
D: “I was just wondering, who owns this Vitz?”
Y: “Technically someone else but I’m borrowing it for the next couple of weeks…”
C: “What’s this about?”
D: “Oh my apologies! I’m Dave and this is my buddy Frank.”
Frank: “Hey.”
C: “I’m Cooper, this is Yuka.”
D: “Well, Yuka. Can I ask you something?”
Y: “Sure.”
D: “Do you drive or used to drive a blue Civic Type R?”
Y: “Yeah. It’s off being tuned though… Wait… You’re the Vitz guy from three years ago?”
D: “Yep. That’s me.”
Y: “Wow. Nice to meet you finally!”
D: “Likewise!”
Y: “So are you looking to get your Vitz back or did you just want some nostalgia?”
D: “A bit of both.”
F: “Dave, don’t.”
D: “Shush Frank. Anyway who actually owns the Vitz now?”
Y: “A mechanic in Gion.”
D: “That’s weird.”
Y: “Why weird?”
D: “I originally lost it in a pink slip to someone in Australia. It’s funny how it ended up back here in Japan.”
Y: “Really? Who did you lose it to?”
D: “Some guy in a Holden Monaro. After my race with you I tuned the Vitz up a bit and won a few races. Then I went overseas to Australia to see if I could beat a few V8’s.”
F: “Surprisingly enough he beat a few guys over there. Hence why he ended up racing for slips.”
C: “Sheesh. Tough luck.”
D: “At least I had enough money to get another car. It’s trashed now though. Wrapped it around a tree.”
Y: “I can take you to the mechanic I mentioned if you want.”
D: “Really?”
Y: “Yeah. I’m working now though, come back in a few hours maybe?”
D: “Yeah will do. I’ll come back later. Bye guys. Nice meeting you.”
Y: “See you later.”
C: “Bye!”
F: “Bye!”

Dave and Frank walked off, looking back at the Vitz constantly before it was out of view.

“You’ve raced that guy before?”
“Yeah it’s only just hit me. I didn’t recognise the car since it’s been modified since the race.”
”Is Dave good?”
”He’s pretty good. My Civic was still showroom fresh at the time. The engine wasn’t even broken in so I took it easy.”
“He beat you?”
”Nah. He stuck to me when I was holding back but the moment I had a little fun I left him for dead. He did beat an EP3 Type R though so I’ll give him credit.”
”And you said this Vitz was crap?”
”It is crap. I can drive it fast but it’s still crap.”
“He’s got more skill than me then.”
“Yep.”
”Hey! You’re not supposed to agree!”

Yuka started giggling.

“Well he has gotten closer to me than you ever will, so you’re right!”
”That’s not nice! Yuka!”

Later on…

Yuka left work and walked over to the Vitz.

“Yuka!”
”Hey Dave, you’re right on time.”
”Truth is I’ve been here for an hour already. I just wanted to admire the Vitz.”
”Er… Okay. Get in.”

Yuka headed down route 7.

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“So Yuka, how do you like the Vitz?”
”It’s not bad.”
“Really? It’s just you’ve been constantly doing 120 and the roads are clear. Don’t you want to floor it?”
“Not particularly, why?”
“Well the fastest I ever went was about 170. I never could get it past the 180 mark.”
”So you want me to try and push it past 180?”
”Yeah, if you don’t mind.”
”Alright then…”

Yuka threw the gears down from seventh into fourth and floored the throttle.

“All right! Go fast my little Vitz!”
“This is going to take a while, Dave.”

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”130!”

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“140!”

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“150!”

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“160!”

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“Nearly 170 Yuka!”

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”170!”

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“Can we get to 180?”

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”175… Come on Vitz… 177… 178… 179…“

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“180! Yes! You did it Vitz!”

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Tech Specs
Car: Toyota Vitz RS 1.5 ‘07
Owner: TJ (Driven by Yuka)
Drivetrain: FF
Power: 117 BHP
Weight: 1070 KG


”Isn’t this great, Yuka?”
”To be honest, this is the first time I’ve been bored when flooring a car.”
”Yuka…? It’s not fast? But…”
”It’s okay at low speeds but it hasn’t got the balls to really make an impact on a highway.”
“Really Yuka?”
”Really. I’m sorry for being harsh on your car, but it’s the truth.”
“It’s alright…”
“If it makes you feel any better, it’s good on fuel even when I’m doing these sort of speeds.”
“Yeah, much better…”
 
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Seems a lot faster than Seiichi and Daisuke's Vitz in my story. Great chapter Roj, I can hardly wait until next Friday!
 
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