~ Ready, Steady, Go! - Chapter 55 ~ (02/03/12)(56k/MobileApp Warning!)

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Seems a lot faster than Seiichi and Daisuke's Vitz in my story. Great chapter Roj, I can hardly wait until next Friday!
I'm willing to bet your Vitz is faster than mine around a circuit. I was pretty much writing the chapter while driving, it was that slow to pick up speed. :lol:
This must be one of the best fanfics on GTP. Keep on writing. :)
Awwwwww, you're just saying that. :embarrassed:
I want to see Yuka's Reaction when she drives a Smart Car. :lol:

"DO NOT WANT."

Yuka doesn't like tiny cars. :lol:
 
OMG OMG OMG yes... i litterally just finished reading parts 1-10. and the end of part 1 i got popcorn and pop. sat down to read them all. This story is so well said that when im reading it i imagine im watching a movie... you've got talent. come them coming.. cant wait for next friday already
 
Hey guys. How would you like a bit of fan interaction? I'm basically after a new car for the series and I cant decide on a car. So I've created an open poll. Just enter the car of your choice and press vote.

There's a few limitations though.
- Must be a premium car.
- Cant be a Japanese manufacturer.
- Sports cars only. No hatchbacks or supercars.

Vote here!

Just a last note, the winning car on the poll may not be the one I choose. If I see something in the list that I like more, I may go for that instead.
 
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Right now you have ten votes, and ten different options! :banghead:

That's the problem with open polls like this, a simple spelling mistake turns it into a completely new vote. Like there's "Renault Clio" and "Renault Clio V6", so since I said Premiums only I'm taking that as 2 votes for the Clio V6.

Edit: Forgot to mention, voting ends on Monday. It said in 7 days originally but that's too long for a little poll like this and I'd like to build the car as soon as possible. :)
 
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Update on the poll..
Top Results:

* Chevrolet Corvette Z06
15%
* Dodge Viper Acr
15%
* Renault Clio V6
15%
* Anything In The Lotus Premium Dealer
7%
* ******mobile.
7%
* Mustang Mach 1
7%
* Jaguar Xkr 10
7%
* Either The Lotus Elise 96 Or The Tesla Roadster...Maybe The Elise 111r Too.
7%
* Bmw M3
7%
* Vw Golf Gti
7%

I want the clio or the corvette or dodge viper to win... i think this poll idea is good but needs refining. like have a multiple choices instead of open.. just my thoughts
 
I want the clio or the corvette or dodge viper to win... i think this poll idea is good but needs refining. like have a multiple choices instead of open.. just my thoughts

I thought about a closed poll but I wanted to see what other cars people wanted to see. 👍
 
Hey VTiRoj

I like a lot your story

I think a Lotus Elise would be a good choice, its not a very powerfull and a fast car on the straighta, but is fast on the corners, and i think that Yuka would like the race that.

My vote is for Lotus Elise

Good work..
 
Only 15 hours until the poll is officially closed. Keep 'em coming guys, the suggestions so far have been great!

Edit: Alright, poll closed. Time to find a winner! :D
 
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So, the raw results taken from the poll are as follows.

Top Results:

2 Chevrolet Corvette Z06
2 Dodge Viper Acr
1 Anything In The Lotus Premium Dealer
1 Renault Clio V6
1 Renault Clio
1 Nissan Gtr 07
1 Nissan Gt-r R35
1 :censored:mobile.
1 Mustang Mach 1
1 Lotus Elise 96
1 Jaguar Xkr 10
1 Either The Lotus Elise 96 Or The Tesla Roadster...Maybe The Elise 111r Too.
1 Bmw M3
1 Bmw 135i
1 Aston Martin Db9
1 Vw Golf Gti

Total Votes: 18

There's a few duplicate votes and votes that refer to more than one car so I'll just clean that up. Also for fun, I've made comments beside each car in red.

Top Results:

3 Lotus Elise 96 The people's choice, although I'm not going with it because it doesn't suit the person who's recieving the car. Hint hint, it's not Yuka. ;)
2 Chevrolet Corvette Z06 Ding! Ding! Ding! We have a winner! The Corvette is completely fitting of it's future owner. Since no-one specified whether it would be a C5 or C6, I'm choosing the C5, purely because it's age allows more freedom with it's backstory.
2 Dodge Viper ACR Came very close to being the winner, but against a Corvette, it seems almost too unreal for someone to have a tuned one.
2 Lotus Elise 111R I would've picked the '96 over the 111R anyway.
2 Nissan GT-R R35 I did mention that I didn't want Japanese cars in this poll, right?
2 Renault Clio V6 I consider it a hatchback but I see where you're all coming from. :P
1 Aston Martin DB9 Gorgeous car, glad it made it onto the poll.
1 BMW 135i Not a fan of it's looks but it's a quick car.
1 BMW M3 The M3 was actually one I would've chosen if it got more votes.
1 Lotus Esprit Fast, but maybe too supercar-ish.
1 Lotus Evora This would've been great.
1 Jaguar XKR 10 I kinda hate you all for not voting for the XKR more. I love them. :lol:
1 Mustang Mach 1 Good ol' American Muscle. :D
1 :censored:mobile. I couldn't find this car in GT5.
1 Tesla Roadster I giggled when I saw this pop up.
1 VW Golf GTi At least the Clio had an excuse, this is undeniably a hatchback.

Total Votes: 24

So there you have it guys, look forward to a Corvette appearing in a future chapter! Thanks for voting! If you enjoyed voting then let me know and I'll try and do more. :)
 
Care to explain what you meant there?

I might need to word it better. Basically the ACR is a factory tuned Viper, so aside from tuning shops, who would actually pay that much for an ACR and then try and tune it some more? That's my reasoning anyway. 👍
 
I might need to word it better. Basically the ACR is a factory tuned Viper, so aside from tuning shops, who would actually pay that much for an ACR and then try and tune it some more? That's my reasoning anyway. 👍

I agree here; not many people in the real world are going to buy an ACR and then mod it.

A Z06 however? Yes, definitely.
 
I might need to word it better. Basically the ACR is a factory tuned Viper, so aside from tuning shops, who would actually pay that much for an ACR and then try and tune it some more? That's my reasoning anyway. 👍

AH! i see your point now.. but i love that car, IMO
 
Chapter 11 - Reunion

“This is the place.”
”Thanks Yuka.”
”What you after from him anyway? The Vitz?”
”Yeah, I was hoping to do some kind of deal with him…”
“Alright, see you around.”
”See you.”

Dave got out and walked into TJ’s garage. Yuka headed off home. TJ was working on the R33 Yuka sold to him. Dave walked up to the car.

“Hey, er… I’m Dave. Are you busy? I need to talk to you about a red Vitz.”

TJ rolled out from under the R33.

”Sorry if I’m bothering you, er… I don’t know your name sorry.”
”I’m not busy. I’m just doing some maintenance on my car. I’m TJ by the way.”
”Oh I see. Well TJ, I understand that you’ve got a red Vitz in your possession.”
”I’m lending it out at the moment, why?”
“I know, I’ve met the driver. I’m the original owner.”
”Ah. Now I get it. Well if you want it back you’ll have to pay.”
”I’m not exactly loaded at the moment…”
“Earn your car then.”
“Huh? What do you mean?”
”Do you know how to do basic maintenance?”
“Well, yeah.”

TJ picked up some overalls and tossed them at Dave.

“There’s an Evo out back that needs an oil change. You work for me now.”
“How long until I earn my Vitz?”
“Wait and see.”

Later on…

Kei was flicking through an Auto Trader when Yuka walked in.

“Hey Kei.”
”Yuka! Is it good or bad when a car has a yellow number plate? Most cars have white number plates but there’s a few cars with yellow in here.”
“Yellow number plates are issued to Kei-class cars. It’s just a way of telling them apart to normal cars.”
”Kei-class? That’s funny! So are Kei cars better or worse than normal cars?”
”Haha Kei. They’re smaller and less powerful, but are easier to drive around town. They’re also cheaper to tax and insure. It’s good if you live in a city and don’t care much about what you drive.”
”Oh I see. Maybe I should buy one just so I can have a car that’s named after me!”
“Maybe, but you don’t even have a licence, Kei.”
”True. You think I should get one?”
“If you can afford it. Besides you don’t just get one, you have to practice and take a test before you can get a licence.”
“Can you teach me then, Yuka?”
”I can’t teach you on public roads, I’m not old enough yet.”
”Didn’t your dad take you around the block and stuff?”
“Yeah, but Gion isn’t really ideal for it.”
”True. Oh well I’ll save some money up and hire an instructor!”
“Yeah you’ll be better off. Who knows what’ll happen if I teach you!”

Meanwhile, at TJ’s…

“I changed the oil on that Evo, TJ.”
“Great. Did you see the Impreza behind it?”
”The red one? Yeah.”
”Change the oil on that one too.”
“Seriously?”
”You want your Vitz right?”

Dave grumbled and followed TJ’s orders.

“We’ll be together soon, Vitz…”

Two weeks later…

“I’ve finally got you back, Vitz!”

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“I’ll never lose you again!”

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“You’ll be the fastest Vitz once I’ve got the money to spend!”

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“It’s so good to be cruising down route 7 at 170 again!”

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“What the hell?! Where did that come from?!”

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“That speed… Amazing, I didn’t even see them coming! Who is driving that thing?“

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The Type R Civic looks amazing. :drool:

Nice chapter, wouldn't expect to see that Civic there. I'm pretty much wanting the next chapter about now, I must have it. :)
 
Dare I say it, that Civic actually looks good.

Is this going to set up a rivalry between Dave and Yuka?
 
Not really, Dave lacks the skills and the machinery to take on Yuka. :sly:[/QUOTE]

I think if he had his car tuned like your Yari Yari, he might be able to keep up. :dopey:
 
Interesting turn of events. Good to see the Civic back in action.

I'm able to make a prediction, but I'm thinking of keeping it to myself since it may spoil the story.
 
Interesting turn of events. Good to see the Civic back in action.

I'm able to make a prediction, but I'm thinking of keeping it to myself since it may spoil the story.
Now you've got me wondering what the prediction is. :lol: There's spoiler tags for just that purpose anyway. :P

An army of bunnies invade the country and make Yuka their queen. Much cuteness follows.
 
Now you've got me wondering what the prediction is. :lol: There's spoiler tags for just that purpose anyway. :P

An army of bunnies invade the country and make Yuka their queen. Much cuteness follows.

Well I didn't realize what the spoiler tag does. So, if you're wondering what's the word, I'll just post it here if you want.

Yuka got her Civic back (and it's a bit upgraded also, with the new wing and stuff), and Dave might know sometime later, but he won't realize that quickly that it was Yuka. He may also try to race Yuka again.
 
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