You seem to be carrying too much speed into the corners and running wide on a few occasions.
Slow in, fast out and smooth is required around the ring.
From 2:06 to 2:20, you easily caught back up to the blue Evo with good, smooth driving, but then too early and aggressive on the brakes at 2:25, and again too much brake at 2:35.
that uphill section, only needs a slight brush of the brakes, and sometimes (vehicle dependent), just an aggressive lift-off to get the front end to turn in.
But you do seem to leave some big doors open,
You're not a bad driver.
Just need to brush up on "Race Craft" a bit.
Going into the Karousel, you should have been right across to the inside to cover that gap, once that outside manouver on the black car was off the cards.
And you got caught up someone elses battle around 5:00 to 5:25.
I try and let guys like that fight each other like they were, and you only have to drive at 97-98% to match their speed.
but you have to keep close enough and on the inside line at all times to protect your own position, but be ready to capitalise, as they will almost always, run wide on the outside.
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