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My band teacher is the most hilarious teacher in the school. Nuf Said.
saxplayer1998My band teacher is the most hilarious teacher in the school. Nuf Said.
masterrawadI'm in the orchestra in my school, but isn't concert band a necessity for marching band? You need to crawl before you walk...
rb26xHey guys. High school isn't going all too well right now. I haven't been on here in months, so I think I'll rant. Just throwing a warning out there.
My grades are really bad for the usual self. I'm not exactly a genius but generally I get good grades. As of now I'm failing English, and almost Spanish III, but the marking period just began so maybe it will change. Calculus is a 93, Physics is a 90, Microeconomics is an 80, and some nonsense electives are 80 and 75. Not all that bad, but this is why it bothers me so much:
I want to go to college to become an engineer, preferably mechanical but that may easily change. This year, 11th grade, is extremely important grade-wise. Now to be an engineer, will one use a lot of english themes and ideas of novels or spanish language working in the country at a mostly white-collar job? Not likely. So why must I suffer through courses I find boring, difficult, and pointless to do something unrelated? My grades will not be very good in these courses and that means no scholarships to help pay for college and possibly even trouble getting accepted. I just wish there was a way to decide your path earlier on. If that was the case I'd be ahead in my classes with good grades and I wouldn't dread my classes and sleep half the time.
Another thing about my school is the people; they are almost all the same person. Everyone is annoying and cocky and disrespectful and rude. They listen to the same music, like the same things, and are ridiculously cliche. There are exceptions of course, but the majority is terrible. I fear taking out my headphones in the hall because of hearing the things people say to each other.
My dad has been hounding me about everything, checking the online grading system multiple times a day, asking me the same things multiple times a day, and it's just really getting to me. I don't like anything during this time of the school year.
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Anyway, anyone mind reading my English essay? This is just the rough draft, please tell me how it sounds if at all possible. Thanks
This is the essay:
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Only thing near is Western Tech, it's a magnet school across the county, so it's a 45 minute drive to and from school, and because it's out of district, there's no bus. Not to mention, it also requires special admission involving a test and interview and even then, there's such limited admission. It really isn't a viable option for me at the moment.I mean votech, your school doesn't have something where they can send you to a vocational school?
Pretty well-written essay with a nice variety of word choice there. I would suggest you look closer and try to combine sentences where you can, because as it stands it can be choppy at certain points. I used to have the same problem, but it's easily solved with compound sentences. Also, if my mind serves me right, I think Dolphus Raymond drinks Coca-Cola from a whiskey bottle, not the opposite like you stated. Otherwise, nice essay. 👍
That's sucks. I had assumed all school had it so you could just fill a paper out and then just send you to tech.
A sandwich shop?
That's kinda stupid, the kids who want actual hands on experience for certain jobs then can't get any experience or see what it's like at least. Unless you go to trade school, but then you have to pay.
Was it a 2.2? If so, how did you contain that mighty beast.Tech today was awesome. I actually got to work on a car today, me and about 5 others had to replace a thermostat in a Camry. Then after we finished 1 1/2 hours later, we all got donuts. Win.