Glad you're standing down from the claim that Obama childishly took credit for other people's work.
I did? That was purely unintentional.
Personally I have no significant concerns with the speech as given.
Also I don't feel this speech especially emboldens the enemy, presuming you mean Al-Qaeda. I mean they hate us. Period. No matter what I/you/we/Obama/Cameron/Merkel/etc say or do they are going to continue right on hating us. And they will kill members of our respective militaries, governments and citizens as the mood and opportunity strikes them. Just the way it is, such a group doesn't need emboldening as they've already claimed justification by their Creator. God has granted me the right, in fact commanded me to kill as many of 'you' as possible. A belief doesn't get much more bold than that.
I like this argument and I use it a lot. There is no pissing them off any more than they already are, so why should we worry about anything? I see this as not so much a matter of ticking anyone off as it is a matter of making their efforts look impossible and hopeless versus making us look weak and vulnerable to repeated attack. I think these terrorists are the kind to be emboldened by weakness.
We haven't responded to 9/11 well as a nation. The last 10 years have been rather depressing from that point of view as we have turned on ourselves, fight amongst ourselves, and flail about redefining our principles so that they can incorporate safety from those who would use them against us. Would-be terrorists have had much cause to think that America is weak, and easily toppled by their continued efforts. Not only do they hate us, but they have much reason to believe that they are effective.
Here we had a rare opportunity to take a victory in the war against Al Qaeda and use it to discourage our enemies. We had the opportunity to tell them exactly what Hillary Clinton and George Bush said... that you can't wait us out, that you can't run or hide, that we're not as fickle as we might seem - that we will eventually find you wherever you are and justice will be done. It is an opportunity for us to look like we're actually competent, like Al Qaeda's goals are futile.
Instead Obama made no such overtures. He took the opportunity to remind the world how badly we have responded to 9/11, and how vulnerable we are. He couldn't put aside party politics and had to take digs at... essentially America... and our inability to get the job done.
When you're running for office, feel free to criticize the previous president and make the government look as bad as you want. When you're president and delivering a victory speech during a war, you might want to put your game face on and stop trying to take personal credit at the cost of making the country look less unified and less competent.