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"Say Marcus, you didn't tell those Team MUGEN guys about that white Impreza Wagon you lost to some time ago??"
-"No. That driver is way too good for them. If I tell them, they'd probably come look for it and just lose."
"I see..."

Fixed it. :P

Awesome chapter as always. The failed overtaking is what Citta is all about. Waiting for your chance to overtake...

...although try telling me that. :sly:


Bayside Blau? Sounds like the colour of a R34 being said in a different accent. 💡
 
*edit - there, Fix'd.

the much-awaited Chapter 8 is now officially up!! sorry for the inconvenience, hope you enjoy reading.., :)
 
Another stunning chapter. Well done! 👍
I'm hoping to have another race report of my own to share by the end of the weekend too! :mischievous:
 
Chapter 9 : Bayside Blau

(Editor's Note : The discussion about differentials and LSD in this chapter is taken from Scaff's GT4 Tuning Guide Part 2. Big thanks to Scaff 👍 , hope you can all relate to the discussion in this chapter.., :))


-"No. That driver is way too good for them. If I tell them, they'd probably come look for it and just lose. It's up to them if they will discover about that 'bread boy'."
"I see..."



The flight was shorter than I expected, it took us about an hour to reach our destination. We arrived at the airport and as soon as the cars were unhooked, we went to our, "settlement". After checking in, he told us to drive our cars in the garage so that they could immediately start working on them.

"Finally, I will have my car de-tuned."
Kyosuke asks me, -"Why would you want your car de-tuned, Tori??"
"Well, my car feels heavy on our last race back there. I don't like it."
-"Is that so... my car felt great AND odd at the same time. Sometimes it doesn't turn in the direction I want it to."
"So, you're going to have your car de-tuned as well, Kyosuke-san??"
-"Maybe, I'm not sure..."

While we were talking, Kairi approached us and asked, "Tori-san, you say you want to have the old feeling of your car back, right?"
-"Yes, Kagiyama-san."
"Uh, Kagiyama-san, I want to have my Evo de-tuned as well."
-"You too, Kyosuke?"
"Yes, please do."
-"I see..."

After that, Kairi went to Yamato and discussed about our cars.

"Yamato, Tori wants to have the car de-tuned. What parts can you remove?"
-"Well, we could reset the air/fuel compression ratios back to what numbers they were, but we can't undo those polished intake ports."
"How about Kyosuke's car?"
-"Oh that's easy. Except for the reduced weight, all the tuning parts can be removed. But he may want to keep the suspension and the gear ratios in the car."
"I'll go talk to the two now."

"Tori-san, Yamato said that they could return the settings of your car back to what they were, but he can't undo the polished ports."
-"Arigato, Kagiyama-san."
"About on your car, Kyosuke... Yamato suggested that you should keep the suspension and gear ratios in your car. You may choose to remove the intercooler and muffler."
-"There is one part that makes my car not go in the direction I want it to. Could you find out what part is that??"
"That must be the 1.5-way LSD. Very well then, we shall get started."

As Kairi went back to Yamato to give instructions, I asked Kyosuke:

"Kyosuke-san, what is LSD??"
-"LSD? That is an acronym that stands for 'Limited-Slip Differential'."
"What does this 'LSD' exactly do??"
-"Hmmm, it appears you lack technical knowledge of your car. Allow me to give you a, *uhurrm*, 'simple lecture'."

"Before you understand LSD, you must first understand what a differential is and what it does. All cars have a differential gear working on the drive wheels serving a number of different functions. They transfer the engine's power from the drivetrain to the wheels, thus acting as the final part of the ‘gearing’ before the power reaches the wheels. That is the primary function of the differential. Its other function is however to allow the driven wheels to rotate at different speeds. This is needed because as a car turns, the wheels nearest to the corner apex will travel a shorter distance than the outside wheels. That is why your car is able to turn smoothly while stepping on the gas."
-"Oh I see, I get it now."
"Shall I continue??"
-"Please do, Kyosuke-san."
"Well then, this is all fine when the car is operating below its limits. However a standard or "open" differential, as fitted to the majority of road cars, will distribute the power between the driven wheels evenly, unless one of the wheels begins to slip. Now, an open differential will always send the torque down the path of least resistance. So, should one of the tyres slip and therefore offer little resistance, the open differential will send all the power to it."

"Imagine this: you come out of a tight corner on a track, or touge as you prefer, you apply the power slightly too quickly, then one of your driven wheels begins to slip. To make matters worse, the open differential sends all the available power to the wheel that is already slipping. The end result would be that of spinning all the power away in a cloud of tyre smoke. That thing would certainly get on your nerves in a tight race, don't you say??"
-"It sure will, Kyosuke-san."
"Haha yeah... well then, moving on..."

"That is where the Limited Slip Differential, or LSD, comes into play. it will allow a wheel to take up to a certain percentage of the available power, but no more than that percentage. So, in the situation that I mentioned earlier, the drive wheel that is not spinning is allowed to 'steal' a certain percentage of the power, but the rest would be sent down the other wheel which is spinning." The LSD does have its own share of downsides, though. Should the limit be set incorrectly, the wheels may not be able to rotate at different enough speeds so the car becomes reluctant or harder to turn."

"This is why some people consider the LSD to be one of the trickiest parts to tune, because if you mess up with the settings, you could OR will destroy the car's balance."
-"I see, I get it all now. Arigato, Kyosuke-san."
"Wow, I can't believe someone actually understood what I said, haha!!"

As soon as Kyosuke finished "lecturing" me, he saw something pass by on the garage entrance of the hotel. He ran to see what it was. I followed him, and when we were at the garage entrance...

BaysideBlau.jpg


The driver got out of the blue car. He approached us and greeted, "Fine day, isn't it??"
Kyosuke was silent for a short moment, then he replied, "It sure is."
The man was looking for something behind us, then he asked Kyosuke again, "Is that yours??" pointing at Kyosuke's black Evo.
-"Yes, that's my car."
"No doubt, you guys are Team MUGEN, am I right??"
-"How did you know??"
"News spread from across Italy about a racing team called MUGEN that dominated a race event some days ago. People say that the team consists of two cars, one of which is a black Lancer Evolution V. I had no doubt when I saw yours."

Just as the man was speaking, Kairi came. "Excuse me sir, may I help you??" he asked the man.
"Ah, you must be the team leader. You know Marcus, right?? I think he has mentioned you about another group of racers here in the Meditteranean coast of Southern Italy."
-"Yes, we know him and yes, he has."
"Well then, I am a part of that group of racers he was talking about. Our team, Bayside Blau, wants to challenge you, Team MUGEN, in a race."
-"We accept your challenge."
"As expected. The race will be held tomorrow, here in these streets. There will be two races, one in clockwise and another in anti-clockwise direction. Are you fine with that?"
-"Yes, we are."
"Well then, we will continue the discussion about the race tomorrow. I still have to get back to my team. Have a good day." Then he left.

As the blue car left, Kairi said, "Will you look at that, we didn't have to search for our opponents, they came right to us."
Kyosuke remarked, "Hey, we must be getting famous now, haha!!"


*later that day*

Yamato and the mechanics were done with the cars, so he called me & Kyosuke to come check them out.
"Kyosuke, we replaced the intercooler and exhaust with the stock parts, as you requested. We also removed the LSD, so your car should have its nimble handling back."
-"Thank you Yamato," Then he went to his car.
"As for you Tori, your car should have its old feel back, since you asked for it. One thing though, the polished intake ports are still there."
-"Yes, I know. Kagiyama-san already told me about it. Arigato."

Kyosuke called Yamato's attention with a loud voice, "Hey, I'm going out for a drive. Don't mind if I do??"
-"Sure, go ahead, Kyosuke. Tell me if the car still has problems."
"Okay..." then Kyosuke took off.

As Kyosuke left, Yamato said, "Say Tori, you and your car remind me of those days when Kairi was still active in motorsports racing."
-"I do??"
"Yeah. I bet you've been watching his races. You know that yellow car he drove to victory in most races? That car is the exact same model as yours."
-"Really??"
"Yes, that car is a Spoon Civic Type R, the same name and model as yours. I remember him saying to me how fun and challenging that car is when he drives it."
-"What happened to that car, Yamato-san?"
"Well, he--"

As Yamato was speaking, Kairi came and asked Yamato, "Did Kyosuke go for a test run?"
-"Uh yah, he did. He just went a few minutes ago."
"Is that so... how about Tori's car??"
-"It should be fine now. We've done our job, now all that's left is for Tori here to test it out."
"Yes, I will go now to take my Civic out for a drive," I said.

"...You had to interrupt our conversation, eh?? Exactly at the right time, I was about to tell Tori 'that'."
Kairi just returned a smile.


*the next day*

Our opponent team, or Bayside Blau, came a bit earlier than expected.

"So, are you ready?? We are. My partner here will be racing first."
-"So, this is Team MUGEN? Nice to meet you. Who's going first on your side?"
Kairi turned to me, "Tori-san?"
I nodded, then turned to my opponent, "I'm Tori Akawa. I will be your opponent for this race."
-"Hmm, quite a young fellow. I'm Harald Konig."

As we rolled out, I see a lot of people on the sides of the road going to watch our race. Race 5, begin!

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Ah, so Bayside Blau is a blue Quattro and R5. :D

Great chapter. Educational too with the LSD lecture. :P

Civic vs Quattro
Evo vs R5

Can't wait for chapter 10. :D
 
=drifting24/7=, yet again another good chapter, and paused at just the right time, between the build-up & the beginning of the race, to leave your readers hungry for more. 👍

It's a shame our quality posts badge went away :(, I've a feeling this thread alone would've earned you one! :)

*EDIT* And.... Happy Birthday too!
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=drifting24/7=, yet again another good chapter, and paused at just the right time, between the build-up & the beginning of the race, to leave your readers hungry for more. 👍

the next time i do this, i plan to cut it in the middle of the race, but right now, don't have much time, also got to arrange things on TTL.., :D

It's a shame our quality posts badge went away :(, I've a feeling this thread alone would've earned you one! :)

yeah, i noticed that too.., aw, really? you think so?? :embarrassed::sly:

*EDIT* And.... Happy Birthday too!
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thankies, i appreciate it.., :)
 
Chapter 10 : FOUR


As we rolled out, I see a lot of people on the sides of the road going to watch our race. Race 5, begin!

[POV Shift]

"So, a Spoon Civic is my opponent... the driver must be very skilled using that kind of car..."
"I see now why they are called Bayside Blau. The name fits them perfectly."

TheChase.jpg


"...thinking of that, he is not to be underestimated. This will turn out to be a great race."
"Hairpins already? Good thing I have the old feeling of my car back, it tackles corners with ease..."

TrickyHairpin.jpg


"Whoa, a jump!"

Jump.jpg


"...For a car that has low torque and FWD, i'm surprised he's keeping up on this very steep uphill."
"If I even lift off the gas by a second here, I'll fall behind."

SteepUphill.jpg


"Let's see how well you'll do in the next section: the four hairpins!"

Atthetop.jpg


HairpinI.jpg


"There's space wide enough for another car to pass. If he would open it up again on the next lap..."

HairpinII.jpg


"I can't shake him off. Is this guy really a foreigner racing here for the first time??

HairpinIII.jpg


"Hey, this course also has curbs like last time. I'll try "that" on the next hairpin."

TheKerb.jpg


"Yosh, Ikkuzo!"

HairpinIV.jpg


"?? He's getting closer. Is he going to try overtake me?"

GettingClose-1.jpg


"A big enough gap. I'll take my chances!!"
"Of all places... I'm warning you, don't do it."

FirstAttempt.jpg


"I got him!!"
"Ah well, he did it."

Success.jpg


"What the??"
"Didn't say I warned ya..."

Ornot.jpg


"I opened up too much space! Darn it!"
"All that effort was put to waste. You did it at the wrong place at the wrong time."

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"I'll try again. Maybe this time I'll pass him."

2ndAttempt.jpg


"WHAT THE?? You can't be serious!! You'll lose control with that height when you land!"
"WHOA!!"

2ndAttemptII.jpg


"This guy's persistent. That's it! I'm not letting you pass me!!"
"He's determined, he suddenly got aggresive. Looks like I have to choose carefully where I'll pull off a pass next time."

NotGivingUp.jpg



(meanwhile, at Team MUGEN)


"Yamato, did Tori-san got pleased with the old setup of his Civic?"
-"Yes, he should be doing fine, although I wouldn't say."
"Why not?"
-"Look at his opponent: the legendary Audi Quattro."
"Quattro... that means 'FOUR' in Spanish."
-"Yes. Because of its sophisticated Quattro AWD system, AWD became permanently active in the automotive industry and in motorsports. Just look at the numerous rally championships that car has competed in and won back then. Truly a magnificent machine in its time."
"I would say the same. But I believe Tori can still win. His car is, after all, a Spoon Civic."
-"Haha!! So you say."


*back on the race*


"(looks at rear view mirror) Is it just me or is he getting closer and closer every second??"
"Perfect! Time to pull of that manuever."

3rdAttempt.jpg


"Good, i have the inside!"
"Not good, he has the inside!"

Igotyounow.jpg


"I got the lead!"
"Don't think this is over now. I still got my ace-in-the-hole."

TooktheLead-3.jpg


"Gotta maintain my focus and posi--"

MaintainingtheLead-2.jpg


"NANI?? Where'd he go?? He disappeared from my rear view mirror!"

DisappearingLine.jpg


"I have you now!"
"Damn!"

DisappearingLineII.jpg


"C'mon, turn you stupid car!"
"He ran too wide, now's my chance!"

Wenttoowide-1.jpg


(a staredown between the two)

SidebySide-1.jpg


"The finish line!"
"The finish line!"

TheFinishLine.jpg


"...not good..."

Gaining.jpg


"Man, that was close! But I still won!"

Win-1.jpg


[POV Shift]

"Yet again, another impressive win. Congratulations, Tori-san."
-"Thank you, Kagiyama-san."
"That was great, Tori!"
-"Thanks, Kyosuke."
"Well, guess I'm up next."
-"Be careful, Kyosuke-san. Those racers can suddenly disappear from your rear end and then take the inside line. If he hadn't ran too wide, I would have lost."
"Hmmm, Kagiyama-san, isn't that the--"
-"Yes, the disappearing line."
"I thought so."


"Those Team MUGEN guys are good. Especially that Civic driver."
-"Make sure you do your best, Louis."


The man whom we met yesterday approached us,"It's time for the second race. (looks at Kyosuke) I presume you're the next to race on your side??"
-"Yes. I'm Kyosuke Maiyuki."
"Louis Pierre. Well then, let's begin the race."


The galleries were packed even more as the second race was starting. Perhaps the people got more excited as they heard our engine noises from just a few moments ago. Race 6, begin!!"



Next on Red-Line - Chapter 11 : The Disappearing Line

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"The finish line!"
"The finish line!"
:D

Nice! 👍
That would make an awesome animation.. no wait, is that already done?
 
Good chapter Mr.drifting san. Tried to make it close on that occasion which was good to see and back to your storytelling best. ;)

Now, get back to your kennel and write up another episode ASAP batuboy!! :D:D:D:D
 
I dunno.., :rolleyes: thanks for reading.., :)

*edit - hey, you're a Finn! you should go check out THIS THREAD .., 👍

Yea I've seen that, lots of nice cars there. :)

If GT4 had a storyline, I'd wish it was something like this.
Somehow reminds me of the first Fast and the Furious movie, or other car movies with actual plot in them. :sly:
That's really good storytelling, keep it up! 👍


Not trying to hijack this thread, but if you want check out my animations on YouTube (link on my profile page), they involve.. hmm.. cars. :)
 
Very close finish there! :D:tup:

Also, is it me or does this picture:

DisappearingLine.jpg


make you wonder why there isn't a blue Spoon Civic? It would look awesome. :D

Can't wait for chapter 11.
 
Very close finish there! :D:tup:

Also, is it me or does this picture:

DisappearingLine.jpg


make you wonder why there isn't a blue Spoon Civic? It would look awesome. :D

Can't wait for chapter 11.

hmm, not really.., i agree, a blue Spoon Civic would look awesome but, nah, i prefer yellow.., i like it that way better.., 👍
 
Just wanted to let you guys know i'm still reading this (and other race reports). I dont' comment often but great work! :) +rep! :cheers:
 
FANBOY. :P

I want more. More is always good. Too much of a good thing is a good thing all the same. :D

:lol::lol::lol:

Just wanted to let you guys know i'm still reading this (and other race reports). I dont' comment often but great work! :) +rep! :cheers:

thanks for the great comments so far.., i'll begin working on Chapter 11 as soon as i finish the L4 vs V8 lineup over on my garage.., :D
 
sorry dude, haven't been able to make the next chapter, my sister's been using the flash drive and, dang Armored Core: Last Raven, taking up a lot of my time.., but good news, i now have the pictures! maybe tomorrow or the day after, the next chapter will be out.., 👍
 
sorry dude, haven't been able to make the next chapter, my sister's been using the flash drive and, dang Armored Core: Last Raven, taking up a lot of my time.., but good news, i now have the pictures! maybe tomorrow or the day after, the next chapter will be out.., 👍

It best live up to it's reputation!

But I'm banking on it doing that 👍
 
Red-Line - Chapter 11 : The Disappearing Line

The galleries were packed even more as the second race was starting. Perhaps the people got more excited as they heard our engine noises from just a few moments ago. Race 6, begin!!"


[POV Shift]

"Let's see what these MUGEN guys are made of."
"I'm on the tail end of the start again... When am I gonna get to be in front??"

Start06.jpg


"A Lancer Evolution, that car's fast... Maybe he will provide a good challenge."

InPursuit.jpg


"Uphills are my specialty, but I'll stick to this guy's rear end for now."

TheUphillHairpins.jpg


"He's keeping a fixed distance between us. I'm impressed."

SteadyPace.jpg


"All right, time to close the gap."

ClosingIn.jpg


"I'm not pulling away, guess I'll have to do better."

Surprised.jpg


"After this comes the very steep downhill section. Think you can keep up with my Renault?"
"Man, these sudden elevation changes are making me sick... I think I'm about to throw up."

TheTop.jpg


"An opening! I have you now!!"
"Oh no!"

Overtaking-1.jpg


"Time to pull away..."
"I'm not giving up that easily!"

TooktheLead-4.jpg


"He's right on my tail. For such a small car, he sure can put up a fight."

Slipstream.jpg


"This race just got more exciting..."

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(loud shunt)
"Gaah!! Nani?!?"
"Take this!!"

Shunt.jpg


"What the hell was that for?!"
"Hah! Now's my chance!"

Temper.jpg


"You damn cheater! Now I'm pissed!"

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"That's it! I thought this was going to be a great race but you ruined my mood!!"

HeavyBraking-1.jpg


"You're gonna get it big-time pal!'

Sidebyside-2.jpg


"I'm definitely going to pass this guy...!"

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"WHAT?! He's now right on my tail again?!"

Dogfight.jpg


"I get the feeling this has now turned into a dogfight, and he's the mad dog that's going after me."

Notgivingway.jpg


"C'mon, turn...!"

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"Maybe bumping him back there was a bad idea."

TooktheShot.jpg


"Huh?! Where'd he go?"

DisappearI.jpg


"Could he be...?(looks at side)"

DisappearII.jpg


"I have you now!"

DisappearIII.jpg


"You persistent bastard!"
"I'm not letting you pass!"

Notgivingup-1.jpg


"There's not much road left. If I could just maintain my lead, I'll win."

ToughOpponent.jpg


"These final hairpins are my last chance."

LastChance.jpg


"You went too wide..."
"I opened up too much space!"

Mistake.jpg


"Cheaters don't deserve to win, but I do."

PullingAway-2.jpg


"I lost...*chuckles* Guess that's what people get when they play dirty."

Victory.jpg



[POV Shift]

"That was a great race, Kyosuke-san."
-"Thanks Tori, I have to admit, he left a scratch on my car."
"Nani?"

The guy in the Renault, or Luis, approached us and while scratching his head and looking down, he said to Kyosuke, "Uh, I'd like to apologize for what happened earlier. I did that because I got pressured, you are a great racer."
Kyosuke was quiet for a second, then he replied, "That's okay. I was hoping for a good race, but then you had to ruin it, haha! No hard feelings, you're a great driver too, I had a hard time everytime I was trying to pass you."

Kyosuke and Luis shook hands, then Harald approached Kairi, "You folks are awesome. If you'd like to, you can go for time attacks, the course is still up until tomorrow. You can set a record."
Kairi replied "Thanks for the offer, we'll have a run later on."

Kairi went to us, "Kyosuke, that must have been a tough race"
-"Yes, Kagiyama-san. Although I didn't have a good run back there, that guy kind of shunted me."
"If you'd like, you can run a time attack on the course tomorrow after the races. I know you love a clear track."
-"Yes, I'll do a run. Arigato, Kagiyama-san."

As we were heading back to our cars, I got the feeling that someone was watching us. I turned around, then I saw...

TheBreadVanII.jpg


Kyosuke noticed that I turned around. He patted me on the shoulder, I then turned to him. He asked me, "Hey Tori, did you see something?"
I said, uttering, ".....Uh...."

I turned back to the direction of the car that I saw...

Hesgone.jpg


"It's nothing."
-"Well if it's nothing, let's get back to the hotel right now. I'm starving."

I began to think that there's something unusual about that car. "Wonder who that is," I asked myself.


Next on Red-Line - Chapter 12 : Don't go past the Redline


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*edit - special thanks to VTiRoj for helping me correct the error on this chapter.., :)
 
Scratch my paint and the local polizia would have been dragging his leaden butt out from the Med. :)
 
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