The Poem Corner

[RACECAR]

My Twelth, "Luck's Touch"

"life's ever so present yet evident events has happened everywhere I was see. I've seen the best and the worst, usually the bad first, never ever left to be. a string of unexpected things has occured, maybe its a event coming or so I've heard. maybe the end is near, so is the fear, of possibly no existence here. maybe its a matter of time before that light begins to fade into the never, and when that time does come, it will all be gone forever. this must a message to everyone we must be more aware of the danger to rush, or else we'll cease to be, cursed by Luck's Touch."

 

[THE ED3]

what? no comment on how great I am? I see how it is...

 

[RACECAR]

what? no comment on how great I am? I see how it is...

kind of late but your stuff is cool.👍

 

[THE ED3]

ha. I was kidding.

 

[Lee]

Nice pieces from both of you. 👍

 

[Lee]

Change

Times have pasted over us,
Tasks that still need finishing,
I don't want to make a fuss,
But its natual for me to be changing.

I'm moving on in the world,
No longer stuck in a dead end,
My body is no longer curled,
Instead it is released, good I befriend.

But you are still the same,
Wrecking your life with drugs and drink,
No, I am not looking for fame,
But I just want you to think.

So what if I still drink?
So what if I still do drugs?
My blood ran down the sink,
After I was attacked by thugs.

But where were you?
Finding out your new-self?
The relationship is over, its true,
But I'm not a used toy on the shelf.

I have feelings too,
But the habits make them numb,
Now your life is in front of you,
Why do you still come to rattle my ear drum?!

Good Bye.

 

[RACECAR]

Nice pieces from both of you. 👍

you too:tup:

 

[Lee]

Thanks.

 

[THE ED3]

I am so going to bump this thread with a new poem...

wait, I just did bump it... Oh well maybe I'll write someting later.

 

[RACECAR]

My Thirteeth, "Rhythm & Beat"

"life has its own rhythm that we all flow to, that attraction that we all glow to, thats what it often shows you, sometimes like a person it knows you, even when you're sleep, thats what life will do. we all have a beat that we're in-sync to, our ways of life often reflect this too, this holds proof to everyone including me and you, so its should understood for you view. everyone's flow is different, some are very visible, others are transparent.respect is your mission and rewards are you treat for appreciating life's Rhythm and Beat."

 

[Lee]

Good piece RACECAR. 👍

 

[Lee]

Society

1,2,
Kick of the shoe,
3,4,
Fall to the floor,

5,6,
Need a "fix",
7,8,
Hear comes your fate,

9,10,
Blood drips from a pen,
11,12,
Into hell you delve,

13,14,
Never been too keen,
15,16,
But ever so mean,

17,18,
To be believed it must be seen,
19,20,
Shocks a plenty.

**** Society.

 

[Sting]

Nice rhyme Bee, my kinda style. lol

 

[RACECAR]

Good piece RACECAR. 👍

Thanks. you too friend 👍

 

[RACECAR]

My Fourteenth, "Chill and Flow"

"the tendency of society to pick on others that see different then it sees. so much fighting and less talking, so much hate can lead to so much stalking. words are nothing compared to action, but violence seems to be a twisted satisfaction that damages and corrupts our minds, into thinking its the best thing to do at the time. we need to ignore what mean things are said, because at the end of the day, the words are dead. laugh off the insults and you'll feel no pain, for what others are doing is just a useless game. Thats a calming way your life can go, by simply learning to Chill and Flow."

 

[SRV2LOW4ME]

Was cleaning out my room tonight, and found a bunch of my old drawing books that I use to mess around in when I was all out of it. Found this on one of the pages and thought i'd share it.

I called it, "Chasing Trees On E"...

Speeding wreckless on fake emotions,
Mind opiated, filled with notions,
Life has become nothing but two lanes,
Hatred and selfishness runs in humanities viens,
End it, end it all, don't put it in park,
Turn off your lights, embrass the dark,
And as you push the pedal down low,
Just like the speed, your thoughts grow,
Do you like your life? Happy at all today?
Drive all you want, theres no golden ray,
No exit ramp, just a highway of disease,
Kiss it good bye, its time to chase trees...

Sorry if it doesn't flow that great, or make much sense. I guess if ya knew my past, you'd understand why, but I hope yas like it. If I find anything else, i'll try to post it later.

 

[RACECAR]

Was cleaning out my room tonight, and found a bunch of my old drawing books that I use to mess around in when I was all out of it. Found this on one of the pages and thought i'd share it.

I called it, "Chasing Trees On E"...

Speeding wreckless on fake emotions,
Mind opiated, filled with notions,
Life has become nothing but two lanes,
Hatred and selfishness runs in humanities viens,
End it, end it all, don't put it in park,
Turn off your lights, embrass the dark,
And as you push the pedal down low,
Just like the speed, your thoughts grow,
Do you like your life? Happy at all today?
Drive all you want, theres no golden ray,
No exit ramp, just a highway of disease,
Kiss it good bye, its time to chase trees...

Sorry if it doesn't flow that great, or make much sense. I guess if ya knew my past, you'd understand why, but I hope yas like it. If I find anything else, i'll try to post it later.

I can kind of feel that. it has that vibe to it(as strange as I sound ). its very understandable:tup: .

 

[SRV2LOW4ME]

Thanks Racecar, there was a cool picture along with it, maybe later i'll scan it and add it too the message.
Kinda scary to read through my art books from that time period, I ask myself what we were thinking with every turn of the page.

 

[CRADLE of SIN]

Well I sure wont be sharing anything else with you guys... its been a fun trip.

Bee can now be the sole ruler of this thread. 👍

 

[Lee]

Cheers Justin but RACECAR and SRV2LOW4ME are knocking in some top pieces too 👍

You should continue to post some poems Justin, I like them. 👍

 

[RACECAR]

My Fifteenth, "Rise to Power"

"you can be born normal like everyone, but your destiny can change unlike anyone. your dreams and ambition can lead you so far, you'll be at the top like a star. The people of the high ranks see the makings of one of them in you, a new chapter in your view,and you receive power too, to make your wildest dreams come true. a long road it is, it will take a while,but your destiny won't be in denial. time passes by, longer then a mere second, minute, or hour, but should you keep along the path of greatness, you will have completed your Rise to Power".

EDIT:this is my 600th post.

 

[Lee]

(Continuing from RACECAR's fantastic previous poem - Just hope he don't mind!)

To Your Head

So your at the top,
Things are looking fine,
The bubble don't look ready to pop,
Power tastes sweet and devine.

Cameras flash in your face,
Picutres over every magazine,
You will never be put in your place,
Your now many people's dream.

You sit in the corner of the nightclub,
Surrounded by fans and friends,
Sometimes you feel you need a sub,
To see the night out till it ends.

Knocking back the shots one by one,
Someone takes you to the back,
Offers you some fun,
In the name of crack.

You think your status will hide it all,
Sex drugs and rock 'n' roll right?
It makes you feel suttle,
And sets you off on your night.

The next morning and shock horror!
Your name over all the press,
You take a look at yourself in the mirror,
And tell yourself you'll confess.

But its too late,
They couldn't care less,
It was fate,
Even in your little red dress.

It went all to your head,
The glitz, the glamour,
But now your empire is dead,
Its all became another drama...

 

[SRV2LOW4ME]

Bee - Nice work. Kind of reminds me of a lot of celeb's out there right now.

 

[RACECAR]

(Continuing from RACECAR's fantastic previous poem - Just hope he don't mind!)

To Your Head

So your at the top,
Things are looking fine,
The bubble don't look ready to pop,
Power tastes sweet and devine.

Cameras flash in your face,
Picutres over every magazine,
You will never be put in your place,
Your now many people's dream.

You sit in the corner of the nightclub,
Surrounded by fans and friends,
Sometimes you feel you need a sub,
To see the night out till it ends.

Knocking back the shots one by one,
Someone takes you to the back,
Offers you some fun,
In the name of crack.

You think your status will hide it all,
Sex drugs and rock 'n' roll right?
It makes you feel suttle,
And sets you off on your night.

The next morning and shock horror!
Your name over all the press,
You take a look at yourself in the mirror,
And tell yourself you'll confess.

But its too late,
They couldn't care less,
It was fate,
Even in your little red dress.

It went all to your head,
The glitz, the glamour,
But now your empire is dead,
Its all became another drama...

wasn't the exact power I had in mind,then again,I wasn't specific myself so nice job.👍

 

[Lee]

wasn't the exact power I had in mind,then again,I wasn't specific myself so nice job.👍

Yeah sorry about that, its just I felt I've done a number of political poems so I felt like trying a different version of power, in this one, power is from the way someone lives their life, their "perfect image" to some extent.

 

[Tawnyah]

I wrote this myself last year... What do you think?

The Greatest Thing

"Running barefoot in the fields
Telling secrets during meals
Laughing together when nothing is funny
Caring for each other when the nose gets runny
Walking for miles just to spend time together
Swearing to be there forever and ever
Never betraying or telling a lie
Laying down, watching the clouds in the sky
Understanding the other when nothing is said
Seeing each other everyday when in a hospital bed
Crying together when something went wrong
In silent moments just burst into song
Giggling together when loved oned walk by
Giving a hug when the other can't help but sigh
Studying together for an upcoming test
Talking all night even when both need a rest
Friendship really is the greatest thing
Life has ever thought to bring"

 

[Lee]

That poem is damn nice!! 👍 Made me feel all warm an fuzzy inside.

And welcome to the forums! 👍

 

[RACECAR]

I wrote this myself last year... What do you think?

The Greatest Thing

"Running barefoot in the fields
Telling secrets during meals
Laughing together when nothing is funny
Caring for each other when the nose gets runny
Walking for miles just to spend time together
Swearing to be there forever and ever
Never betraying or telling a lie
Laying down, watching the clouds in the sky
Understanding the other when nothing is said
Seeing each other everyday when in a hospital bed
Crying together when something went wrong
In silent moments just burst into song
Giggling together when loved oned walk by
Giving a hug when the other can't help but sigh
Studying together for an upcoming test
Talking all night even when both need a rest
Friendship really is the greatest thing
Life has ever thought to bring"

1. very nice poem there:tup:
2.Welcome to GTP

 

[RACECAR]

My Sixteenth, "No good for me"

"My life's been hell no matter what I do, at the end of the day, I'm always screwed. I'm at another place that I don't like, and I can hardly sleep in the cold at night. My mom thinks I don't give a damn about anything, makes me feel so low so much my existence is what I'm questioning. My dad just thinks I'm stupid no excuse to that, if you saw the anger and hate in his eyes, then you'd know its a fact. I'm no better then his brother, and he's just as mean as his mother. am I really that bad?, I never know whats going on so it makes me so damn mad. Am I that bad a embarassment to this family?, if he has to mock me when I make mistakes,then he must hate me this badly.I don't belong here maybe, perhaps that is my true destiny, if he has compete disgust for me, then this family just no good for me"

 

[RACECAR]

My Seventeenth, "The cold touch"

"its all a lie my life is, the will to live on is being short lived, as now I'll just try,to throw away this lie, to cast away the life, I just want to die. I 'm waitin, just to be faded, out this twisted place that for so long I have hated. its just a waste, some a think a big haste, for me to lust for death to have just a taste. maybe its better than life for there's no one to fuss, there is no one to hate me so much, the only place without worry to feel the rush, this a must for me because I need to feel The cold touch."