The R Effect Writing chapter 2

[yellomello]

1/3/11 Kyoto-Gion

Ryo sat outside of his apartment in Kyoto Looking at his stunning NSX Type R tuned by RKM


Kyoto - Gion by yellomello88

"Is'nt Kyoto beautiful at night Ryo"
"Yes it does Ko"
"Stop staring at your stupid car!"
"Ok"
"I'm going to make sushi for tea"
"Yes Sushi"
"Wait I forgot the recipe"

"I can't believe that I picked this up for $70000"
"Wasn't the engine shot "
"Yea that is why I sent it to RKM"
"Ok I see"
"Then I installed Eneki RT05's with lime green wheels"
"Look at it now"



Kyoto - Gion_1 by yellomello88

"I'm off now for sushi"
"Ok see ya"



Kyoto - Gion_2 by yellomello88

TO BE CONTINUED

Please tell me constructive critism and to see whether If I shall continue this

 

[White & Nerdy]

Use quotes
Help the reader figure out who's talking when
Other ideas as I figure them out

 

[yellomello]

thanks

 

[White & Nerdy]

Your welcome

 

[Zach]

You make sushi, not cook sushi.

 

[bimmer3002]

no green letters. i can't read them. but, do continue

 

[Machate-man]

You make sushi, not cook sushi.

This:tup:
World's Best Advice
(Why do most FanFics Start in Japan?)

 

[bimmer3002]

cuz there's a 27:1 ratio (a rough estimate) of japanese tracks to tracks from anywhere else in the world?

 

[Zhu8]

This:tup:
World's Best Advice
(Why do most FanFics Start in Japan?)

Because there are so many tracks in Japan compared to other countries.

 

[Zhu8]

What are the chances of the first race being in SSR7?

 

[DK]

^ Probably between 80-100%. It's kinda mandatory for GT5 stories.

 

[Machate-man]

^ Probably between 80-100%. It's kinda mandatory for GT5 stories.

Well, It's a great venue for high-speed battles to be photographed:tup:

 

[VTiRoj]

Gion, Kyoto. Home of many, many RKM demo cars.

Anyway, nice start, cant wait to see some racing in this. 👍

 

[blknazn]

this is cool. id like to keep reading more. i love these gt stories haha keep it up mate

 

[Zhu8]

Gion, Kyoto. Home of many, many RKM demo cars.

Did I mention that I put the Suspension settings from your R34 Black edition onto the hero car for my FanFic for the next race? Although My Character lives near Shoren-in.

 

[Zhu8]

^ Probably between 80-100%. It's kinda mandatory for GT5 stories.

Well we have My FanFic, Your FanFic, Roj's FanFic, and SuperGTRacer's FanFic, all starting on SSR7. And the first Picture of machete-man's FanFic is from SSR7.

 

[VTiRoj]

Did I mention that I put the Suspension settings from your R34 Black edition onto the hero car for my FanFic for the next race? Although My Character lives near Shoren-in.

I don't think you did. Or you did and I didn't see. Move to Gion then!

 

[yellomello]

Thanks every body for your help I will need yor help with staging the first race It will be staged on SSR5 or SSR7

 

[yellomello]

I would like cars Equivelent or more power to the nsx 400-500 hp

 

[Machate-man]

I am good for helping you, but we need dates, times, # of people
Also, I would preffer SSR7
This looks promising:tup:

 

[yellomello]

Would this Saturday be fine I was hoping GMT 5 o'clock

 

[yellomello]

On SSR7 With 12 people

 

[Machate-man]

I think that I'm good for that day, but that (I think in PST time) would be 9PM PST Friday

 

[yellomello]

Wait I had a change of thought the first race is legal then he gets challenged on the way home